pyaar kar l-kt FF ImPoRtAnT mSg PG 48!PLZ READ!! - Page 23

SORRYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYY FOR NOT COMMENTING FOR SUCH A LONG TIME.....BUT THIS PART WAS EQUALLY GREAT....WAITING IMPATIENTLY TO READ MORE.....UPDATE SOOONNNNNN!!!! ITS GREAT TO READ ABOUT THE OTHER TWO LOVE BIRDS THAT YOU HAVE ADDED.......SO ROCK ON WITH THE NEXT UPDATE AS I WAIT TO READ IT.....LOVE YOU PRINCESS!!!!!

PALCHIN

awwwwwwwwww my plachin!!u finally replied!!did u c the update with u mentioned in it?im sooo flippin glad u finnallly commented!

omg!palchin u have to join our chat club called paagaal khaana!its too fun!

i have a questions about siggys...can u plz help me zinu?i know ive been asking alot from u latley,but i wanna make fbaulous isggys like urs...!

Originally posted by: mysterygurl1427

savin

sorry for not commenting for a while babe....please forgive me...i love u!!!!

Well it was because i was at my cousin Mitu's house for two days and so i never got the time to comment back....but i knew that i had a reserved spot for u!!!!! Sorry once again my honey bee!!!! Heard that Mitu gave me a nickname Baba ram dev?? lolz...it is so funny...

K enough of that...

I love Dev and Kajal......they are awesome!!!!! i loved how kt and Laksh were in those poses that you showed of abhishek and aish....they were simply awesome....i was actually able to to imagine the Kt and Laksh do that in my head and believe it looked so cute.

I love all of the Romantic parts that Kt and laksh had, simply love the way they are written out......i hope to see some romance from the new couple Kaajal and dev.....

Im still wondering who the attacker is though? Im thinkin if it is Rocky since there is a little shady part of him that Kt senses or could it be manthan?? God Maryam....u really fryin my brain right now!!!! I love the outfit that Kt had....u always have cute outfits to show....and that makes a great visual of the story....loving the parts...not one has been boring....and i hope it stays like that!!!! Please please please update soon......i must know who the dumb attacker is!!!! it is killing me!!!! Update soon.....and pm me first so i can beat zinu!!! 😈 😆

Love u always my cutesie honey beee.....😳

Originally posted by: mysterygurl1427

sorry for not commenting for a while babe....please forgive me...i love u!!!!

Well it was because i was at my cousin Mitu's house for two days and so i never got the time to comment back....but i knew that i had a reserved spot for u!!!!! Sorry once again my honey bee!!!! Heard that Mitu gave me a nickname Baba ram dev?? lolz...it is so funny...

K enough of that...

I love Dev and Kajal......they are awesome!!!!! i loved how kt and Laksh were in those poses that you showed of abhishek and aish....they were simply awesome....i was actually able to to imagine the Kt and Laksh do that in my head and believe it looked so cute.

I love all of the Romantic parts that Kt and laksh had, simply love the way they are written out......i hope to see some romance from the new couple Kaajal and dev.....

Im still wondering who the attacker is though? Im thinkin if it is Rocky since there is a little shady part of him that Kt senses or could it be manthan?? God Maryam....u really fryin my brain right now!!!! I love the outfit that Kt had....u always have cute outfits to show....and that makes a great visual of the story....loving the parts...not one has been boring....and i hope it stays like that!!!! Please please please update soon......i must know who the dumb attacker is!!!! it is killing me!!!! Update soon.....and pm me first so i can beat zinu!!! 😈 😆

Love u always my cutesie honey beee.....😳

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Aawww shiv!I always LUVVVVV ur comments!because ur the only one who says the parts u like. You c,when ppl say it was fine,or it was ok it tells me I didn't do good,but when theyres a long comment like urs,I feel good of myself…!and I always get disappointed when none tareefs the scene I thought the most about(like this time the cute romatnic scene…and when commented about the pic,u told me tht u liked the pics! I thought none liked themmm…!ur the one who gives me …..was tht word…..u no..honsla/hosla….to do my work…u give me the reassurance to continue….thnk u for being such an awesome friend! of course everyones comments r sooo awesome!!i dont wnt to ignore all those ppl who coment my ff either.....so remember everyone!its ur comments tht make ppl continue..no comments..no continuing...

part 16 <-messed up on PMs its part 16 nor 17 hehehe
Kt danced on a lot of fast songs with laksh and enjoyed every minute of it..kt was having a blast..forgetting all her worries..she was enjoying her time…after the song just chill…kt went on a table and sat down and took her heels off…laksh came to her and told her to get up and dance more
Kt-nahi laksh,im tired,ill join u in a sec…
Laksh-nahi kt!come!
Kt-laksh!I already got my shoes off!
Laksh-fine!
Guy-laksh! hey man sup!
Laksh-hey ! Kt ill be talking to my friends if u need me!
Kt-ok
Kt was sitting on a seat massaging her feet and sighed deeply…she realized her throat was dry..she soo needed a drink! Her feet ached too much to get it, she was about to tell kajjal to go get it but hse was too busy dancing with dev, shiv was to busy fighting with a guy and the others were no where in sight..
Kt-*sigh* guess I got to get it my self..
Guy-not necessarily …..
Kt looked up and saw rocky smiling down on her….
Rocky-I saw you sitting down and I thought id get u a drink
Kt saw the drinks in his hand and replied politely-thnx but I don't drink alcohol
Rocky- I thought so…that's why I got you some sprite..
Kt couldn't refuse this time…so she took it with a smile…
Kt-thnx.. that's nice of you…
Rocky-no prob…so how do u like the party?
Kt took a sip of her soda and replied-really fun
Rocky-that's good…so u coming to the picnic tomorrow?
Kt-picnic? What picnic?
Rocky- o this girl's parents are renting a shelter by the lake, so there's going to be barbecue, jet skiing in the lake, volleyball…stuff like that…
Kt-I don't think I can come..
Rocky-come one kt !you have to come, it'll be a lot of fun…
Kt-I don't know…
Rocky- u really should come!
Kt-ok ill see… said kt taking a last sip of her sprite…she was putting her heels back on and then she heard the slow song of hum tum come on…
Rocky-its such an awesome song isn't it
Kt-yes it is..
Rocky-would u like to dance with me-extending his hand out waiting for Kt's reply
Kt didn't want to dance with rocky…he was a nice guy an all but she didn't no why her mind rejected him…
Kt's nervous eyes scanned the place for Laksh but she couldn't find him, she hope Laksh would come so she could tell rocky some lie about having to go by laksh, but he wasn't there!
Rocky-kt?
Kt-oh,uh huh? Yea..sure…y not?
They both went to the dance floor ..it was a slow dance so kt had to put her ands on his neck and he had to put his hands on her waist..
Rocky slid his arms to kt's waist and danced with her…kt noticed him trying to close the gap she made possible by still dancing with him but moving far away…
Kt gasped when rockys hand went under her waist and rested on her ….bottom..
Kt pulled out from him and yelled to him-hey!wat the heck man!what do u think you were doing?
Rocky-wat?
Kt let out a disgusted cry-you know wat! U gross perv! And she was about to slap him but she stopped herself then she saw a wicked grin on his face and she rememberd how calmly he dared put his hand on her butt,and then to rest his hand there!
Kt raised her hand and slapped that grin off of his face…
Rocky put his hand to wear he was slapped and was shocked..
Rocky thinking-how dare she!she dares put her ahnd on rocky…!
Rock out loud-how dare you put ur hands on me! Babez you should be happy I touched you, people would die for me to touch them..
Kt-do I look like I am one of them? DO I?
Rocky-you slapped me! And I will not let that go! What goes around comes around and he raised his hand to slap kt and kt flinched expecting to be slapped
Just as he was about to slap her his hand was stopped, in mid-air, he looked on his side and saw a furious laksh..
Laksh-ey! What do u think your doing? Your going to slap a girl? Your going to slap MY girl?
Rocky-your girl,is she? Shes the one who slapped me first, whoever slaps rocky will pay and he lunged at kt.
Laksh pushed rocky to the side- u dare touch my girl, forget slap, I will beat u so hard that you'll be in the hospital sipping food out of a straw!
Rocky-u bloody--
One of his friends held him back and reasoned with him-jaane de…vaise bhi larne se kuch nahi milega..just enjoy the party EVERYONE GET BACK TO PARTYING…DJ CRANK UP THE TUNES
Crowd-whooo!!!
Do puts on saiyyan re form salaam-e-ishq and ppl started moving their feet to the tunes..
Kt and Laksh go on a side and sit down on some couches…
Laksh-kt what happened there?
Kt-nothing.. Avoiding Laksh's eyes
Laksh softly-come on, tell me
Still avoiding his eyes she blurted -its too embarrassing…
Laksh-embarrassing?
Kt bit her tongue and she felt blood rush to her ears…that's not what she meant to say
Laksh lifted her chin and looked into her eyes…
Kt thought-how does he know this? He knows I cant stop my self if I look into his eyes…
Kt took a deep breath and told him what happened with rocky
Kt-I didn't think hed do this,I mean I was thinking nothings wrong with one dance…guess I was wrong…when we started dancing..he started moving closer, started touching me…he slipped his hands-her voice getting lower-from my waist, down …to….kt covered her face..
Laksh came to sit by her and hugged her..-its ok..
Kt hugged laksh in along hug and after she broke off from the hug she said-I needed tht!
And the both laughed..
Laksh-you sure u all rite?
Kt-yea im fine now!
Laksh-you want to go home now?
Kt-no im good,im just going to hang out with my friends..
Laksh-ok babez,ill see you when I see you!
Kt went to her friends and the moment she stpped into the ring of friends they all surrounded her
All-omg!kt u all right!dude tell what happened? U shouldn't have..what were you thinking…
Kt-guys guys guys!one at a time!
Shiv-me first!tumhar dimaag to kaam kar raha tha,na?
Kt-kyun maine kya kiya?
Shiv-kya kiya? Do u even no who rocky is?
Kt-no….
Shiv- manthan ka ek dost hai,jaisa manthan,vaise vo
Kt-but I met him at laksh's..
Shiv-laksh's?wat was he doing there?
Kt-carpooling with us…
Shiv-well I guess rocky was there in morning and laksh was just being nice…!
Kt-point!
Noor-ok so..I didn't hear wat laksh said…watd he say noor said day dreamingly..
Houdah pinched noor on the arms
Noor-aye!you jahsha! Yd u do tht?
Houdah-two reasons….one I wanted to
Noor stuck her tongue at houdah
Houd-and two stop daydreaming about laksh,hes Kt's man!
Kt couldn't help but giggle..
Noor-well sorry! --tuning to kt-- sorry kt! im not going to steal ur man or anything but he's soo hott turning around to see laksh standing in the far corner of the room talking…
Kt-as long as u don't get too close,im good-kt joked
Houdah-and plz close ur mouth,ur drooling
Noor-ooo!shut up!im going to kill u!
Shiv and kt laughed as they saw hoduah and noor urn all around the place.
Mehboob mere-from fiza came on the speakers and shiv jumped for joy
Shiv-come on kt!u must dance to this!this is my jam!
Kt-fine!come on!
Shiv and kt danced full heartedly to the song with each other and enjoyed it,getting to the end of the song…kt felt nauscious..as if she was about to puke…the loud music was blaring in her ears..she covered her mouth and ran to the ladies room.
In their she ran to a stall and threw up…and breathed a lil and threw up again..the sour liquid burned her throat as it rose again…
Kt felt horrid. She went out of the stall and rinsed her mouth and wiped it with a napkin..
Kt-o god!I feel soo sick!what happened?one minute I was fine the next minute…this never happened to me be4..
Kt walked out of the restroom and the loud music hurt her head more ,the blaring music deafened her ears and made her stomach churn..
Kt-ill just get some fresh air…
Kt went out and staggered along the place..she couldn't understand what was happeneing..she couldn't think straight.
Kt-wats going on?wats happeneing? I cant even think straight…think?what am I thinking?I cant ….I don't know…kt sat down and passed out on the sidewalk…
Out of the shadows of the dark a mysterious figure came out..it looked greedily at his victim..all helpless,cluelss,now shes going to be headless-the guy thought.
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Dev and kajjal were walking outside and talking..baaton baaton main dev asked a question that took kajjal by surprise…
Dev-kajjal,do you believ in true love?in love at first sight? Do you believe that the moment you meet someone's yees that you want them to be yours…?
Kajjal was speechless she didn't know what to say…….
Kaju-umm lets go inside…kajjal headed torwards the door when she was jerked y te arm and pulled to dev,he held her now by the arms…his eyes dancing full with excitement…
Kajjal-dev..!?
Dev-tumne mere sawal ka jawab nahi diya…
Kajjal was confused…she knew this guy for a day-not even a day,and now hes grabbing her like he owns her..
Kajjal-ummmyes..I do believe in luv I guess.
Dev-yeh mera sawal ka jawab nahi tha..
Kajjal-ye tum kya pooch rahe ho?
Dev-I think I have fallen for u,paa nahi jabse tumse mila hoon,alag hone ka maan nahi kar raha…ji kar raha kai tumhe hamesha saath rahoon …
Kajjal- im sorry I---
Dev-held on to kajjal arms and held her close,so close kajjal could smell the alcohol on his breath.. Never leave me..I can't bear to see you with any other man…
Kajjal thinking-omg!this guy is crazy!
Just then they heard an ear piercing scream of a girl
Gal-come back you coward!omg!HELPP!SOMEONE!!AHHHHHHH!!!!
Kajjal and dev ran upto the girl and saw a girl laying in her lap,unconscious..
kajjal soon realized that the unconscious girl was kt….
Girl-I saw her lying here and this guy..he..he had a knife!and it looked like he was about to hurt her!
Kajjal saw blood dripping from the inside of her shirt….and her heart jumped into her throat!
Kaju-omg!kt kt!wake up baby!come on hun!
Girl-I called 911 they should be getting here…
By the time they got there…everyone was outside to see why was there an ambulance there…
The AMB(mbulence) took kt onto a stretcher and wheeled her in..
After seeing her sister being taken to the hospital she turned around and saw the girl who saved her sister's life..the girl was in her early 20s she had nice styled hair up to her shoulders and her beautiful eyes that were now in concern.
Kaju -thank u for saving my sisters life…
Girl- im glad I was there!
Kaj- wats ur name btw?
Gal-oh im zinu..
Kaju-nice to meet u zinu im kajjal
Laksh came to the scene and learnt wat happened and was furious he left kt by herself..
Kt was taken to the hospital and kept overnight for observation,she hadn't been attacked,yet her stitches came loose..
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Everyone went home with a heavy heart..especially laksh
He locked himself in his room think it was all his fault for taking her to that stupid party..

Kajjal felt that she should've been there for her sister not with some crazy guy

Dev felt sorry for his actions under the influence of alcohol … he really liked that girl!kajjal...!now she probably thinks hes pshyco!

hey guys!sorry for late update! im not sure how u guys will like this update...but doo comment-maryam

THAT IS RIGHT SHIVI! ME BEAT YOU THIS TIME! 😃 *okay, too overwhelmed* 😆

*sigh*

ab kya kahu yaar? I give very small comments, but I'm too lazy to write how awesome all of your parts are. Masha'Allah, loved it! 👏😳

Okay I just missed the last part.. laskdjakld;askfldf LMFAO! My entry is so hilarious! 🤣 i love it. asdkal;fks thank you! 🤗 ;)

wow.. kept me on the edge of my seat.. but i think KT was successful in recording this guy on her camera.. she iwll put him behind bars.. BRAVE GIRL!! you are such an aamazing writer...

please update again sooon.. cant wait to read more.. 👏

wow
it was awesome but at the same time sad
i was hooked to the story throuhout
hope kt is okay
poor laksh thinking its his fault
must say u r a brilliant writer i could imagine every bit of your writing vividly and detailed
you rock!
update soon plz