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Posted: 17 years ago
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My first try to a ff so here goes nothing:

Its 7:00am and the alarm clock goess off on the side of the bed.a hand reaches out from the covers to press the snooze button. The person takes the covers off her face and it is none other than our kt.
Kt just lays there for a sec ,stretching.then it hits her! her first day to her new college!
Kt:oh no!mera pehla din college ka!! im going to be late! She jumps out of her bed and rushes to her bathroom to brush her teeth and take a shower.when she got out of the shower she glanced over at the clock: 7:15.
Kt:man classes 8:00 baje shuru hoti hain!kahin derr to na hojaye!oh god!
She rushes to her closet and takes out a nice simple balck salwar kameez.and puts it on. Then she puts some kaajal on ,some perfume ,a bit of lip gloss and rushes downstairs.down there her mom,dad and sister kaajjal(surveen) are sitting dow for breakfast.as kt rushes down stairs her mom yells at her to eat breakfast!
Mom:beta nashta to karti ja!
Kt: nahi ma,mein late ho jaongi.
Mom:plz beta ek nawala(piece)kalo
Kt:ok mom.. Then her mom sticks a paratha in her mouth
Kt:ok bas mom,I gotta go!luv u!
Kajal(kj):arre wait up for me man!don't forget your dropping me off too!
Kt:ok jaldi kar!
They both get in their car and drive off.
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Laksh's house

Its 7:30 and someone is banging on a door!
Guy:dude wake up! Its 7:35!wake up!!wake up!
Were shown a neat room,neat and simple and then were showed a bed..a person is laying down with the sheet on his face.
We hear the guy again:man hurry up!!wake up!
Now the guy in bed takes the sheets off and its our lakshu!! His hair all messed and still half asleep!
Laksh:7:35!?!impossible!maine to alarm tho lagaya tha kal raat---then his eyes fall to the alram clock which the plug is off.
Laksh:oh no!! he runs to the bathroom and gets ready!and then runs out the room
Laksh to the guy who was banging the door: dev bhaiyya!apne mujhe pehle kyun nahi uthaya!im late for college now!
Dev:maine nahi uthaya?!laksh..mai aur mom dono yaha kitni dafa tume uthane keliye aye the par----

Laksh cuts him off:ok ok!sorry!im late now!bye! And laksh goes off on his totally hot motorcycle.
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Kt and kaajjal walking in the college,looking around. They both saw how people knew there wat around ,went to other random people and talked to them. Kajal and kt was both thinking that one day they'll fit in the college they way everyone else is adjusted. kaajjal:kt..tumhari pehli class kounsi hai?
Kt:meri pehli class English hai,tumhari kounsi hai?
Kaj:chemistry! Iska matlab humari classes katti(together)nahi hai?!
Kt:its ok hum break main milenge ok?bye now go to class
Kaj:ok bye
And they both go there separate.while kt was looking for her homeroom she bumped into a guy which made knocked her papers down!
Kt:ow!..dekhe nahi chal sakte ?
Guy:excuse me!galti tumhari hai!
Kt:mere galti?! You were the one who was walkin carelessly?
Guy:kya kaha tumne?meri galti? tameez se baat karo apne seniors se

kt:seniors?agar senior ho tho pagal ki tarah bartav na karo. manthan:wait a second wait a second!tumne mujhe pagal kaha? mujhe?you bloody-----
Some friend calling:mathan!come on man!class keliye derr hojaygi!
Manthan:later loser!and kicks her papers more farther from her!
Kt just sits there hurt and angry.she stars picking up her papers when a hand hands her her file with her papers,she lookes up and saw it was laksh(she didn't no him)
Laksh:ye lo,tumhare paper
Kt:oh,thank you
Laksh:no problem,tum iss college mai nahi ayi ho,na?
Kt nods. Laksh then says:Well welcome to the college im laksh.aur voh mathan tha,use door raho tho behtar hai,hes very rude.
Kt:hi,im Krishna tulsi but you can call me kt,everyone else does.
Laksh:nice to meet u,kt
Kt:ummm…laksh?tumhe pata hai home room kaha hai? She shows him her schedule.
Laksh:haan,mera bhi first class chemistry hai,chalo hum saath chalte hai.
Kt:sure
Kt felt weird being next to laksh.shed never been this close to a guy other than her father…
Laksh glanced at kt and saw her lost in her own thoughts….
Laksh:kt?..kt!*snaps his fingers*
Kt breaks out of her thoughts ………kt:oh sorry..voh…
Laksh smiles:its ok chalo..classroom pahonch gai(reached)
They both take a seat together.the professor comes in:good morning class!
Class:good morning professor!
Prof:we have a new student today,from new york joining us today..
He pointed at kt PROF:miss Krishna tulsi stand up please.
Kt stands up nervously….PROF:so class ,this is our new student I want you all to make her feel welcome,ok guys? You may sit down now(pointing at kt)
While the professor was explaining the lesson,laksh kept thinking about kt…how shes so different then everyone.she wears shalwar kameez and looks so beautiful ,so simple without flaunting her body.he kept replaying the convo with him and kt.he kept thinking about how she didn't jump up at him,and try to flirt with him like other girls usually do.
Kt was lost in laksh's thoughts too…he was so nice!so ..soo ..so welcoming,so unlike other guys who usually make fun of her because of her wearing salwar kameez.she kept thinking about his amazing eyes!!!

And this ends with them thinking of each other

im soooo sooo sooo sorry it wasnt so awesome!or wodnerful!or exciting!but i promise ill try to make it better!u guys if u want an e-mail update Pm me ur e-mail and ill e-mail u guys all at the same time tht i updated......and like i said my first ff..my very first try and everything...so plz tell me how i can improve

Edited by aishu_fan - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
#12
this is kt's salwar suit:
Edited by aishu_fan - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
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aye, friend that was too short!!! 😭 😭 😭
thanks for the pm by the way, this is an awesome ff beggining, i know u can update on the weekends, so hope to see more great updates from u.
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Posted: 17 years ago
#14
hey that was really gud plz continue
Riyaa147 thumbnail
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Posted: 17 years ago
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great start loved ittttt it was very good

Plzzzzzzzzzzz continue soon
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: mysterygurl1427

aye, friend that was too short!!! 😭 😭 😭
thanks for the pm by the way, this is an awesome ff beggining, i know u can update on the weekends, so hope to see more great updates from u.

aww thnk u!thnk u very very much!!too short!?lol i thought it was bit long,i was scared u guys'd think it was too long and boring

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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: bradford3

hey that was really gud plz continue

thnk u!!i will
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: Radhakrishna123

great start loved ittttt it was very good

Plzzzzzzzzzzz continue soon

thnk u very much!!il try to continue soon!

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Posted: 17 years ago
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part 2

after a few more classes with laksh and some without him,it was lunch time.kt found her way to the lunch spot and sat there reading her book.then a girl comes upto her and says:hi!indian,right? kt nodded archita:cool im indian too,by the way im archita.she extended a hand out and shook hands with kt. KT:im krishna tulsi but everyone calls me kt. archita:oh nice name,tumhara pehla din hai college main,na? KT:haan.. archita:dont worry sab log yahan bahout nice hai.sab very friendly hai,except......except those guys over there...she pointed at mathan and his friends. ARCHITA:those r the guys your really want to stay away from. KT:haan,mujeh pata hai,aaj subah main manthan sai takrai(bumped)and told archita the whole story. ARCHITA:wow u stood up to him!? he hates tht.dude be careful vo tumse badla na le! KT:its ok main nahi darne vali. they both laguhed.and so for 10 more mintues they talked about how saif ali khan looked so awesome in his new movie RACE and how they LOVVED katrina's outfits.ARCHITA:omg remember tht one blue outfit katrina wore in the club song?!it wa ssoo cute! KT:it was nice but too slutty for my taste.but i luvvved her white coat in the bank scene! ARCHITA:omg id give even give a coach bag to have tht coat! they both laffed...
ARCHITA:wel nice meeting you kt i have to go now!see you! KT:ok bye

archita left,kt looked at her schedule,and then her watch she had about 20 more mintues until her next class.so she decided to read the rest of her book.then manthan and his friends came upto kt and circled her.when kt noticed she got up and tried to move them.but they didnt budge. KT:hatto mere raste se!tumhari problem kya hai? MATHAN:mere problem tum ho!tumne mujse jaise subah baat ki,vaise koi nahi karta,thodi izzat se baat karni hogi,samji! KT:i can talk however i want to.iske baare main tum kya karloge?hmm?kya karloge?darpok!(coward). manthan then got realy mad at her and winked to his friends.MANTHAN:mai tho darr gaya,isse tho jane do,then he moved out of her way.just then his friends vircled her and started pushing her in a cricle( u no like tossing her around from one guy to another) KT:stop plz!! plz no!stop! and starts crying! right then laksh walks in the room and looks at the people crowded around.and sees its mathan's group teasing a girl....omg its kt!

laksh ran to kt's help.laksh tried to push then away so he punched one of them,which stopped them all and kt fell to the floor.manthan went up to laksh and said:wats ur problem man! and he tried to punch laksh but he dodged it.and instead went to his stomach!which got the rest of his group up and atta!so they all started fighting and laksh started fighting back.so far laksh was winning until one of them came behind him and held him still so they can pound on him when kt saw this she couldnt take it.she ran to them and started punching them ,trying to take them off.but no use,she was too weak.KT:please stop!nahi plz! stop it!! manthan started laughing and held her against him and pushed her on the floor which made her head bleed.that made something in laksh pop!he broke through the guy who was holding him and started beating all of them and almost knocked each of them out just when somone cried out:principal aa raha hai!chalo!so laksh left them bloody and everythign and staggered to a seat.he go some napkins and started to dab his bloody forehead. KT:laksh!tum teek tho ho!omg! kitna khoon behra hai!omg laksh im soo sorry!laksh chalo mere hostel main chalo.omg laksh im soo sorry! and kt started sobbing .laksh looked at her like with an awww look. and kt kept sobbing and pushing laksh torwards her hostel room.while they were climbing hte steps kt tried to keep him up by-u no like putting his arm over he shoulder-.when they reached her room laksh felt his head and saw there was more blood.KT:laksh tum yaha beto(pointing to the sofa)main abhi dawa leke atti hoon.laksh sat down and put dawa on laksh like in tht one epi.KT:laksh im soo sorry,ye sab mere vaja se hua.im soo sorry.laksh puts kt's chin up and says:kuch tumhari galti nahi hai,vo sab us manthan ki galti hai. KT:par laksh---- LAKSH cut her off and put a finger on her lips:shhhhh....maine kaha na kuch tumhari galti nahi hai. KT and laksh stare at each other a little and then kt looks down kinda blushing and puts the bandage on his head,his hand and etc. when she was done shes like :laksh tum teek tho ho na?tumhe kuch pain killers laa doon?kuch paani peena? LAKSH: kt im fine,chinta mat karo.acha thanks for the bandage -pointing to his bandage-then hes like owwww cuz his hand hurts. kt rushes to his help

KT:omg laksh!

LAKSH:its ok main chalta hoon

laksh gets up and theres some blood stains on her sofa,so when he got off she let out a audible gasp.

laksh looked back at kt who was looking at her sofa.

LAKSH:oh..sorry...voh mere vaja se......tumhara sofa..

KT:nahi laksh,tumhari vaja sai kuch nahi.aur tum jao apne room main araam kao.chalo jao!and she pushes him out of the room and yells pain killers lene mat bhoolna,and coses the door.

laksh just ruffles his hair and smileS:paagal!




do tell me what u think and dont forget to comment!i hope its not too long
Edited by aishu_fan - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
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double thumbs up to ur writing skills!!! loved the way the story is goin!!! thanks for the pm once again!!!! continue soon, this too was a little short but a little longer then the last part!!! iss baar chod diya tumko maine, agli baar nahin chodongi!!!! (jk friend, by the way my name is shivani) continue soon, and don't be scared, well all need more great writers like u.
Edited by mysterygurl1427 - 17 years ago

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