pyaar kar l-kt FF ImPoRtAnT mSg PG 48!PLZ READ!! - Page 19

FANTASTIC
loved it, finally kt is back at home
laksh is just too cute
update soon

I know you guys put in a lot of effort for these ff.. and believe me.. they are GREAT!! just AMAZING.. please dont stop because not too many ppl are reading or commenting.. because we all who do.. ABSOLUATELY love it.. i hope you get more comments.. but if not i really hope you all continue to update.. :)

there is some absolutely amazing talent in you guys.. to write and be so descriptive.. i look forward to the updates and love reading them...

it makes me sad when ppl stop updating.. it feels incompplete for the story.. leaves me wondering what direction it woul dhave taken and where it would have ended.. so please dont stop updating..

great as usal😳
you are very good👏
can't wait for the next part👏
Plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz continue soon😛

Originally posted by: Zinu29

Maryam & Shivi, you two obviously missed out on the part with SRK & Saif on 'Kal Ho Na Ho'. 🤣
Anyways, Lakshya & KT parts were too cute. Great updates as usual.
A request, please try not to 'bold' the next time. I already have glasses dude, and I don't wanna get more strain on it, to increase my number. 😆 😕
But overall, loved it! Waiting for more. :)

what part with srk and saif?

Originally posted by: princess4120

I know you guys put in a lot of effort for these ff.. and believe me.. they are GREAT!! just AMAZING.. please dont stop because not too many ppl are reading or commenting.. because we all who do.. ABSOLUATELY love it.. i hope you get more comments.. but if not i really hope you all continue to update.. :)

there is some absolutely amazing talent in you guys.. to write and be so descriptive.. i look forward to the updates and love reading them...

it makes me sad when ppl stop updating.. it feels incompplete for the story.. leaves me wondering what direction it woul dhave taken and where it would have ended.. so please dont stop updating..

thnx for the understanding

Originally posted by: Zinu29

I hear ya, sweetums. I got the same problem, but try finding more people and all. Hardly anyone here comments, so I moved mine to the FanFictions section. But I'm always there for you. 🤗 :)

awwwww,luv u zinuuu

hi

it took almost 2 hours but i did it....i read all your 13 parts all at once...phew...i was gluded to my laptop the whole time..my neck is so stiff right now from sitting upright on my bed....ok first things first...hey girly, you owe me a neck message..lols.

anyways, you guys are so talented....i only read palchin's ff on laksh-kt and now yours....its amazing though....both are different and great in their own way.

A few things i like about your fan fic is the fact that along with romance, you added mystery...which is a great factor because it keeps the reader wanting to read further.

Also, i loved the fact that you showed pics of dresses that kt wore...visual aid was great b/c i can actually imagine kt in those salwar kameez in my head...while i was reading all the parts, it was like a mini movie rolling in my head....now where is my popcorn and drink?

its a really awesome fan fic....the pace is great and the flow is very nice as well....i think it totally rocks...keep in writing...will be waiting for the next part.

good luck on your exams.

sona

Originally posted by: sonia054u

hi

it took almost 2 hours but i did it....i read all your 13 parts all at once...phew...i was gluded to my laptop the whole time..my neck is so stiff right now from sitting upright on my bed....ok first things first...hey girly, you owe me a neck message..lols.

anyways, you guys are so talented....i only read palchin's ff on laksh-kt and now yours....its amazing though....both are different and great in their own way.

A few things i like about your fan fic is the fact that along with romance, you added mystery...which is a great factor because it keeps the reader wanting to read further.

Also, i loved the fact that you showed pics of dresses that kt wore...visual aid was great b/c i can actually imagine kt in those salwar kameez in my head...while i was reading all the parts, it was like a mini movie rolling in my head....now where is my popcorn and drink?

its a really awesome fan fic....the pace is great and the flow is very nice as well....i think it totally rocks...keep in writing...will be waiting for the next part.

good luck on your exams.

sona

thank u!thnk uu sooo soooooooooooo mcuh!

Kt woke up and saw her perfume bottles on the dresser, her get well gifts on the side of her bed, her clothes in her closet.kt realized she must've fallen asleep in the car and Laksh probably carried her here…
Her head hurt and she felt like she was about to throw up..kt looked at the time and saw she was asleep quite a while now….kt felt her stomach churn and twist into tight knots…kt carefully got up went out her room and quietly slipped down to the kitchen to get some Advil….then kt went back to her room ,changed into her night clothes and smothered herself with the blanket and fell asleep. When kt woke up and went to the bathroom brushed her teeth and etc.she got read in this suit:

after she got ready she saw she had a little time before skool started so she caught up with her book called….the twentieth wife (v. good book!) while she was reading Archita ,Pari ,Bhoomi and Sanchi came in and saw kt on the bed….
They quietly crept in and got on the sides of kt and yelled:HI KT!!!
Kt got startled and dropped her book…
Kt-you guys!!now look what you made me done! I lost my page!
Pari-plzz kt ye sab boring reading chod do aur humhe kuch nahi( new)khabar sunao
Kt-nahi khabar?jaise…?
Archita-oh don't know…maybe the fact that laksh bhaiyya kitne pyaar se apko apne bahon main uthaake kal laare rahe the..
Kt blushed crimson red…
Sanchi-kt..muje pata hai kai tum laksh ko chati ho…tumhari ankhon main saaf dakhai deta hai,
Bhoomi-aur mujhe bhi laksh bhaiyya ki ankhon main apka pyaar bilkul saaf nazar aati hai
Kt pretended to not know anything
Kt-point….?
All-get married already!
Kt's heart fluttered at the thought being married to Laksh …but didn't want to admit it in front of them…
Kt-umm…haila!
Bhoom-kya hua?
Kt-time to dekho ,mujhe derr ho rahi hai!bye guys!
Sanchi giggled-sharmagayi!!
And all of them giggled and watched kt from above(u no like how ekalvvya was from upstairs,tht rail…?)for a while hoping there was going to be a l-kt encounter but were disappointed and left to their bussiness…
Kt rushed down the stairs and into the kitchen. She stopped in her tracks the moment she entered the kitchen everyone was looking at her…
Ganga-ao beta,ab kaise tabeet hai tumahri?
Kt-ji aunty,teek hai
Baa-chalo acha hai kai tum jaldi sai teek ho gayi….
Kt-arre haan…aunty..vo meri ma aa gayi hai,aur kal sai main ussi ki paas main rehne vali hoon…
Manthan-finally ye gavar humare ghar se nikal jaye gi,aur ktini der hum taras kha ke usse apne ghar main jaga denge?
Karan- manthan!
Kt-main chalti hoon..
And rushes out the door and is still running until when she almost trips but is caught ,she looks up and sees a stranger that she never seen be4,a tall,good looking guy,with a pretty good body structure and nice face and a look in his eyes that kt couldn't quite place……kt straightened up and thanked the guy
Kt-oh um..thanx
Guy-no problem you should be more careful next time…
Kt gave him a faint smile and realized that he was standing in front of the virani house…and was wondering what he was doing there..before she could ask laksh came
Laksh-arre kt..maine tumha kahan kahan nahin dhoonda,kahan thi tum?
Kt-vo main..
Laksh-acha chodo yeh ranbir hai,he needs a ride to univ. today….aur ranbir…yeh kt hai…
Rocky -kt?
Kt-Krishna tulsi…kt for short…
Rocky--kt..kt..kool…
Kt-…umm..yea….laksh..aaj main…main pehle apne apartment jaana hai,vo….apna samaan rakne ke liye..to laksh tum rrocky ko univ. chod do…aur main baad main aati hoon…
Laksh-rocky..tum gaadi main beto main abhi aya..
Rocky-ok
Laksh-kt,kya hua?
Kt-kuch nahi…kyun?
Lak-kuch to hai…varna tum itna ajeeb bartav na karti
Kt-haan hai….ya nahi hai…
Kt-mera matlab,laksh I really don't know…I just don't feel comftrable…with rocky….I don't know
Laksh-rocky?why?did he say something?
Kt-no he didn't..its ok laksh..I think its just me…you know with all the medication..and stuff….
Laksh-to chale?
Kt-yea I guess….
Kt and laksh walked torwards the car and saw that rocky was waiting outside the car for them.
Rocky-hey guys,I was waiting for u…chale?
Laksh-yea lets go
Kt was about to open the back door (of the car) when rocky stopped her hand
Rocky-kt,tum aage betho,main yahaan bet tha hoon
Kt got her hand away from rocky
Kt-ok..
throughout the car ride,laksh noticed kt seemed to be nervous…
When they got there rocky got out of the car..and headed towards his class…when kt was about to get out Laksh put his hand on her shoulder and stopped her…
Kt got bak in…
Laksh-kt,main jaanta hoon kai tum nervous ho,par kuch aur baat bhi hai,tum itni udaas kyun lag rahi ho?
Kt-pata nahin,kuch darr sa mere mann main hai ,jab tak mujhe ye pata nahi chalega kai kisna mere uppar hamla kiya hai,aur vo jail main hai,tab tak mujhe bahar jaane ko darr lagta hai.
Lak-main tumhe ghar chor doon phir?
Kt-no I think I can manage
Lak-you sure…
Kt nodded her head and put a stray piece of her behind her ear, her hair was too silky to stay behind her ear.
Kt kept putting I behind her ear and was about to go out when she turned around and was surprised to see Laksh so close, he came closer and kt felt her face grow hot. Kt had a feeling he was going to kiss her. kt's heart started beating faster and she felt breathless.…Laksh got closer and put her hair behind her ear and was about to kis kt on the lips but kt turned her head and he missed.
Kt giggled and got out of the car..and ran to class, Laksh hit the back of his head as he saw kt rush to class.
The day went on and so did the classes…in every class she had a warm welcome by students and teachers.
Kt had 3 classes with Laksh, English, math and history . So far kt saw Laksh in English and math and every time she saw him she felt her heart beat faster, especially when he was sitting by her in math and helped her with her class work that she didn't get.

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Kt and her friends at lunch:
Houdah (she's Arab too btw)
Houdah-hey kt man!!! how r u! missed u man! ok dude, u have no idea, I got loads of gossip to tell you
Shiv- me first! Omg did you know that kelly dumped Jordan!?
Then noor came in and sat down,and declared-BS!I heard Jordan's the one who dumped kelly for Amanda!
Kt-eeewww for Amanda!?
Houd-yea man!I swear everyones like so shocked!
Kt-tht really suks,but kelly and Jordan make such a cute couple!
Shiv and houdah and the same time-like you and laksh?
Shiv and houdah both look at each other and start laughing…
Kt-stop! You guys it isn't funny!
Shiv-ok ok…we wont laugh …
Shiv looked at noor,then houdah and they all started laughing..
Kt-fine!ill go sit at another table!
Shiv-kt come on yaar!don't be like that
Kt got her lunch tray and sat at another table with her book she was reading..
Kt sat at the table and ate her sandwhich,then put the tray on the side and paid more attetnion to her book.
She was reading the twentieth wife,which was about how jahangir couldn't stay away from nu jahan even htoguh she was married,and all the imperial harem tried to turn him against her…
When she was reading someone sat down right next to her…kt thought itd be a guy who had nothing useful to do than bug her…so she kept on reading and silently prayed in her mind that whoever her was would go away…
Guy-hi
Kt in low voice-hi
Guy-ye tum kya par rahi ho?
Kt looks up and sees the guy she saw earlier this morning-rocky
Kt-oh rocky,tum?hi..
Rocky-haan main, kyun kya ye seat kisi aur ke liye reserved hai?
Kt-oh no,I didn't mean that….
Rocky-its ok….so wat are you reading…
Kt held the book up and showed him
Rocky held out his hand as if to get the book-may I?
Kt-yea sure…-and she gave him the book…..
Rocky-hmmm…the twentieth wife…wats it about?
Kt-it says on the back
Rocky read it and gave the book back to kt-seems intresting…so you like to read?
Kt realized he was trying to start a conversation…and kt never really talked to guys, even talking to laksh was a first for her..
Kt-um yea.. I do..
She looked at her watch and said-oh!im going to be late for history class…bye
Rocky watched as she gathered her things and gracefully went to class…..

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In history class kt goes in and sits down within minutes Laksh comes and sits besides kt. Kt was looking the other way and doesn't realized Laksh is sitting by her.
Laksh tapped her left shoulder kt spun her head around to the left and then to the right and surprisingly saw laksh sitting there turning the other way.
Kt knew it was laksh who tapped her hsoulder so she gave him a little slap on the head,
Laksh turned around and saw kt facing the other way..
Laksh saw if the teacher came yet or not…she wasn't here so laksh started to annoy kt…
Kt got annoyed and very slightly tapped laksh on the face
Laksh grinning asks her to do it once more,kt laughs and shakes her head (you no when u shake you head when ur thinking kabhi nahi suthre ga or something like that)
After a minute more of annoying kt the teacher came in and Laksh stopped immediately.
Kt had an evil grin on her face and when her teacher wasn't looking she poked Laksh on the arm with a pencil.
Kt put her hands bak on her desk as if she didn't do anything wrong, while Laksh was trying so hard not to scream. And kt was trying so hard not to giggle
Teacher-now class today we are going to be learning about the destruction/ the occupation in Palestine, known today as Israel. There has been 60 years of violence between the two…(became 60 years on may 15,2008) We are going to watch a movie about it and I want you guys to write down notes every now and then for important facts or details….
Before we start can someone tell me why is there a war between the Palestinians and the Israelis?
Boy 1: for oil?
Teach-not quite….anyone else? Yes Noor?
Noor-because of religious claims to the land, the Israeli's claim the land of the Palestinians to be theirs and that it was rightfully theirs from the beginning and it said so in their book.
Teacher-yes noor,that is correct. But the thing is that it probably never said it in the jewish book because none knows the real jewish book(I forgot wat its called)it was changed and changed by its people through out time…now here's why its important to Palestinian, first of all it was their land in the beginning ,no arguing about that. Their religious views of it is-they religiously believe that their prophet (Peace Be Upon Him) was ascended from masjid al-aqsa ,in Jerusalem to the seven heavens. (I know it sounds crazy but stilll….don't judge! I believe it…)aside from the occupation the Jews have tried to destroy masjid al -aqsa and put in the worlds mind that the dome of the rock is called masjid al aqsa so when they tear it down ,none would know the difference, did you guys know that most of the people in the world don't know the the dome of the rock and masjid al aqsa are two different things, sure the dome of the rock is prettier but al aqsa has more Islamic significance. Now get ready to take notes….
In the movie never before interviews were seen on how bad the situation is there, the story of a beautiful American girl (23) ,she went there to make a difference to show people what it really is, and died under a bulldozer trying to save a Palestinian home from being wrecked….also in the video the story of a sister who paid a soldier all the money she had to spare her brother, in return they shot him in the head 5 times, the story of family run out of their house forcefully, tragically and on of the daughters a 6 years old try to commit suicide, a little girl telling the camera that her clothes smell like gas, the shower, food everything smells like gas, that a bomb came and ruined her home her toys, the necklace and earrings she never got to ear and the sunglasses her dad got her which she never go to wear-said by her "let the Israeli's come and smell my clothes! Let them try to live like this! They can never live like this! Look,look,!lookat my clothes they smell like gas!" (of course she said it in Arabic but there were subtitles)

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at the end of the movie everyone was crying and knew the truth about the occupation…
Laksh was also touched by the movie and looked to his left and saw kt crying…
As they got out of class kt rushed to the bathroom instead of her next class….everyone one else was in their classes…concerned,laksh too went after kt…he waited a while outside the bathroom door and heard kt gag and possibly even puke…Laksh heard her come out of a stall coughing and rinsing her mouth out by a sink and breathe deeply…
Laksh-kt are you ok?
Kt surprised that Laksh was there, turned off the faucet and replied-im fine…im fine Laksh…you go to class…you go….
Kt turned the faucet on again and washed her face, re-did her make up and took a deep breath.
Kt came out and saw laksh waiting for her…
Kt- Laksh? tum ab tak class main gaye nahin?
Laksh- kaise jaata, apni halaat to dekho
Kt-im fine,I really am, its just the movie, the details in it….im just sensitive to those things you know…even though they just old us about the deaths ,the showed so many hurt children…homeless and needy people….im sorry…I just cant look at stuff like that…it makes me…
Laks-its ok ,here let me drop you home….
This time kt didn't argue she just walked with laksh to the car and went home read a little and just laid down..

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Ganga-laksh,tu aaj jaldi kyun aa gaya?sab kuch teek hai beta?
Laksh-yea sab kuch teek hai,bas kt ki tabeeat nahin teek thi tho isliye ghar le aaya,saath main bhi aa gaya,
Ganga-acha par vo to apne ghar jaane vaali thi na?uski ma pareshan na ho jaye..
Laks-maine uski behen ko phone kardia,vo keh rahi hai kai vo kal aa sakti hai
Ganga-acha beta teek hai, hai bhagvan is bachi ki raksha karna…acha beta tu jaa aur dekh is shes alright

did u guys no that The war between Palestine and Israel has been for 60 long years, daily lives for Palestinians, isn't if im going to have a good lunch spot or not, its if im going to be stopped at a check point, will the soldiers say anything? Loads of ppl only know what they see on tv. None really knows the truth unless they really search for it. i got most of the facts from my knoweldge and the movie kt and laksh saw,i actually saw it in islamic studies class,and the lil girl with the interview of her clothes smelling like gas made me cry like heck!Im sorry if it was really boring, but I had to add this Palestinian update,cuz the anniversary was on Thursday, and bush's like im proud it's 60 years,im gona make it 120 years! Its like omg!im reallly sorry if it was a disssapointemnt,i know a lot of ppl dont read ff's to learn more about war..but like i said,this is like kinda dedicated it to the anniversery....u no...again i swear ill try to make the next one sooo much better im soo sorry

This is the dome of the rock


Al aqsa

This part wasnt really what i was expecting at all....but i must say it is the MOST touching of all the parts i read.....it wasnt boring at all....the palestine facts were really interesting as i even didnt know about them.....the pictures were also a great touch....so reading the history class part was really informative and nice....i think you did a great job in incorporating the details....hats off to you for writing such a descriptive and lovely part....waiting to read the next one soon.....way to go....it was totally rocking. 👏