'Forbidden Love' (L-KT/SG) Chap.7 - Pg.17 - Page 6

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Chapter 2

The Sun rises,

Everyone seems to be roaming around in the Hallways. Tensed.

The bell rings,

La: (thinking) Mom hongi shayad.

He begins to step forward to open the door, when Gayatri cuts his way!

She opens the door, and notices Ganga standing outside with her Luggage.

Ganga begins to step inside.

Ga: ruk jao Ganga!

Ganga [G] stops.

Ga: tum nahi aa sakti Shaanti Niketan mein..

La: Mom aap aayie andar.

Ga: LAKSH!

La: Bas Daadi, aapko Mom se problem hai, hume koi farq nahi padta.. aap kuch bhi kar lijiye, aap nahi rok sakti meri Mom ko aane se yaha!

Gayatri Shocked.

Ga: kisi ne tameez nahi sikhayi tumko? pata nahi jab do bade baat kar rahe hote hai, to bacho ko beech mein nahi aana chahiye! Yeh..Yeh, sikhaya hai tumko iss ganga ne?

La: Jo bade karte hai, woh hi bacho hi follow karte hai.. kyun daadi?, abhi bhi to aap baaz nahi aayengi..! har choti si choti baat par jhagda sujhta hai aapko, ab mai aur bardaash nahi karunga!

La: andar aayie Mom.

Ganga steps inside.

Ga: Ganga..!

G: BAS!!

She yells,

G: bahot ho gaya! aapko kaisa lagega agar aa apne bacho se door rahe toh? kya beetegi aap par? ek aurat hoke bhi aap doosri aurat ka dard nahi samajhti, to kya haq hai aapko aurat kehlaane kaa?

La: Mom chodiye.. inki to aadat hai.

Ga: Laksh!

La: kyun daadi? bura laga?

Gayatri looks away angrily.

La: chaliye Mom.

He takes Ganga away carrying her Luggage.

***

Inside Ganga's Room..!

Lakshya, Ganga, Saahil, Nakul and Kt are there!

Lakshya closes the door, and locks it from inside!

he walks to where everyone stands.

Na: yaha kyun bulaya hai Lalsh..?

La: woh darasal.. kuch baat karni thi..!

Kt: kiske baare mein?

La: Mom! woh--

G: bol beta, kya baat hai?

La: mai--

Sa: bol kya hua Lakshya?

La: mujhe kaatil ke baare mein pata hai..!

Everyone shocked..!

G: kaun? kab? kaise?

La: woh Viraani nahi hai.. Trupti ne jhoot likha tha,

Sa: hmph.. marte marte bhi hume fasaane ki koshish karke gayi.

G: kaun hai, aur tujhe kaise pata?

La: Mom, aap sab ko ek waada karna hoga, ki yeh baat kisi ko pata nahi chalni chahiye, nahi to sahq hum par bhi aa sakta hai.

Everyone agrees.

Na: bol Laksh, kaun hai woh?

La: Rishabh..!

*echo: Rishabh..!

*echo: Rishabh..!

Kt: par woh apni hi patni ko kyun maarega?

Lakshya looks at Kt..

La: kyunki usse paiso ki laalach thi..!

Kt: mai nahi maanti.

La: Kyun? tumhe abhi taq yeh kyun nahi samajh aaya ki woh jhoota hai..! phasaana chahta hai humko.

Kt: woh aisa kaam kyun karega..?

La: Kt tum samajh kyun nahi rahi ho?

He says frustrated.

G: Kt, beta.. mai tumhe baad mein samjhaati hoon.

She says to switch the topic.

La: ek problem hai Mom..!

G: kya matlab?

La: Rishabh ko pata hai ki mai jaanta hoon, usne murder kiya hai! aur woh mujhe bhi phasaa sakta hai.

G: usko kaise pata?

L: mai uske kamre se guzar raha tha.. jab maine usse kisi se baat karte suna. Woh ACP Ragini thi. Aur woh keh raha tha ki, agar ACP ne uska saath nahi diya kisi Virani ko pakadwane mein, aur paisa vasool karane mein, to woh uska bhi katal kardega jaise Trupti ka kiya tha..!

La: par problem yeh hai ki ..woh kisi pe bhi ilzaam laga sakta hai, aur jhoota proof banake usko jail ke andar kar sakta hai.. ACP Ragini bhi mili hui hai uske saath..! aur shaq mujh par bhi aa sakta hai, kyunki woh jaanta hai ki, sirf mujhe pata hai uske sach baare mein.

Na: ab kya karenge? Virani's mein se kisi ko bhi doshi tehraya jaa sakta hai..! khaas kar Lakshya ko.

Sa: toh phir Mohini bhi..?

La: kaise?

Sa: woh humesha toh ACP ke saath rehti hai.. to kya usko bhi pata hai iske baare mein?

La: ho sakta hai.. kya pata? it's Possible. Par mujhe yeh samajh nahi aa raha hai ki.. hum usse Range haathon kaise pakdenge? Police bhi to uske saath hai,

G: saari Police ki force to nahi hai. Hum sabse badiya Police hire karenge. Kuch na kuch to karna padega. Ek kaam karo. Laksh, beta tum, akele mein Tulsi Maa ko yeh sab batado, hmm?

La: okay!

He says nodding.

Kt: mai bhi chalu tumhare saath?

Laksh Nods as a "Yes!"

He unlocks the door, and leaves with Kt..!

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Posted: 17 years ago
#53
ahahhaha loved how lakshya told off gayu ..great part kits! 👏
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Posted: 17 years ago
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nice part yup loved it when lakshya sopke to gayatri dadi can't wait for more lakshya kt scenes👏

Plzzzzzzzzzzzzzz continue soon!!😳
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Only 2 Comments in One Day? 😲🥺
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Posted: 17 years ago
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nice to c laksh standing up fr ganga.....continue soon 👏 👏
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Posted: 17 years ago
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👏 Great Keep it up!!

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Posted: 17 years ago
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oooo...nice twist!!! very nice..loved the part of Ganga and Gayatri.... 👏 👏 👏
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Posted: 17 years ago
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continue soon yaar nd hope 2 c a ganga sahil fan(sorry cat help it just LUV thm 2gether😳 😊)
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Posted: 17 years ago
#60
Thanks Guys for Commenting! 😊
Will continue Soon..! 😛 😃 [Today!]

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