'Forbidden Love' (L-KT/SG) Chap.7 - Pg.17 - Page 4

Originally posted by: kt4lakshya

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Originally posted by: ~NiKkY~

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Originally posted by: Radhakrishna123

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Chapter 1

"Kyun? Aakhir kyun karegi Trupti aisa? Jabki woh jaanti thi ki mai--maine uska katal kiya hai..! Phir bhi usne likha 'Viraani' naaki mera naam? kammal hai.." Rishabh thinks to himself sitting in a dark room,

***

There in Saahil's Room, he talks on the phone with Ganga..

Sa: Ganga..

Ga: Sahil, tum jaante ho, mai uss ghar mein nahi aa sakti ..phir kyun baar baar tum mujhe bula rahe ho? tumne suna nahi Gayatri chachi ne kya kaha tha? uske baad mai kaise aa sakti hoon wapas, bolo.. tum hi batao mujhe Sahil.

Sa: Ganga mujhe koi farak nahi padta Gayatri chachi ya duniya kya kehti hai ..mujhe bas tum chahiye ho.. please wapas aa jao Ganga. Lakshya aur Nakul ko bhi tumhari zaroorat hai. Tumne dekha tha un dono ka haal ..mere liye naa sahi unke liye to aa jao ..please!

Lakshya enters Saahil's door, and interrupts the conversation,

La: Dad! aap Mom se baat kar rahe ho?

Sahil looks up at Lakshya.

Sa: haan beta, le tu hi baat kar.

He hands over the phone to Lakshya.

La: hello Mom? Mom pehle aap naa karre, please, aapko yaha aana hoga, jaldi. mujhe aapse aur dad se milke kuch zaroori baat karni hai, murder ke baare mein. Mom, please, please wapas aa jayiee. Hum sab ko aapki zaroorat hai ..khaas kar ki Nakul Bhaiyaa ko! unka toh rishta bhi Gayatri daadi ne tod diya hai.

Ga: (thinking) Nahi.. mai aisa nahi hone doongi ..Nakul aur Sanchi ka rishta nahi toot sakta..!

La: Mom??

Ga: mai aa rahi hoon beta.. tu kal mera intzaar karna, teri Maa ab aayegi, aur kabhi nahi lautegi.

Lakshya smiles,

La: Bye.

Ga: Bye.

He hangs up.

Sa: kya kaha beta Ganga ne?

La: (smiles) Dad, Mom maan gayi.. aur unhone kaha hai ki--

"Wah!" says a voice in the background.

They both turn and look at Gayatri standing in the door.

Ga: Wah! Wah! Wah! to Ganga ko bulane ka faisla kiya jaa raha hai. Ek baat sunlo Sahil, mai Ganga ko kabhi Trupti ki jagah nahi lene doongi. Samjhe tum?

She leaves angrily.

La: Dad, aap ignore kar dijiye daadi ki baaton ko.. Ganga mom aayengi ..aur zaroora aayeingi.. mai dekhta hoon kaun rokta hai meri Mom ko aane se.

He says with a stiff voice, a bit frustrated & angry.

Sa: mai tumhare saath hoon beta.

***

There Nakul sat sadly thinking of Sanchi crying, and him not knowing why.

A hand is placed on Nakul's shoulder.

He breaks out of his thoughts, and looks beside him.

"Kya hua?" says Kt, concerned.

Na: kuch nahi Kt.

Kt: kuch to baat hai. tum itne udaas kyun ho? Sanchi ke saath kuch hua kya? batao na, kya hua?

Na: Gayatri daadi ne, shayad Sanchi ko keh diya hoga ki woh kabhi iss ghar ki bahu nahi banegi, aur woh rote rote chali gayi.. aur mai kuch nahi kar paya.

La: toh aap gayatri daadi ki kyun dun rahe hai bhaiyaa?

Lakshya says entering the door.

He waks over to Nakul, and sits beside him.

La: Bhaiyaa, aap to jaante hai Gayatri Daadi humesha Trupti ka saath deti aa rahi hai. Aap unki baaton ko nazar andaaz karke Sanchi ko ghar mein leke ayiega.

Na: par Laksh--

La: nahi bhaiyaa. mai nahi chahta aap uspe se guzre jispe mai guzra tha.

Kt looks uncomfortable hearing this.

La: bhaiyaa mai nahi chahta ki Sanchi aur aapka Rishta toote. Aur waise bhi.. Ganga Mom ko bhi Gayatri daadi ne kya kya nahi kaha ..phir bhi Ganga Mom wapas aa rahi hai, humesha ke liye!

Nakul looks at Lakshya.

Na: sach?

Lakshya nods.

Na: theek hai. mai Sanchi ko mana ke launga. Par, kaise?

Lakshya slaps his head.

La: ohoo bhaiyaa. aapko special lessons lene padenge kya Kisna se?

He says sarcastically.

Nakul and Kt laugh.

La: kal bataunga.. abhi bahut neend aa rahi hai. Good Ngiht!

He says getting up.

Na: Good Night!

Lakshya smiles and starts to walk away.

Na: suno Laksh..!

He stops, and turns.

Nakul turns to face him.

He gets up and walks towards Lakshya.

Na: Thanks Laksh.

He says as he hugs him.

Lakshya smiles and hugs him back.

Kt smiles, and leaves the room.

OMGGGGGGG this gayatri is seriously jala-ing my khoon, like omg, wheres her pati?? she needs to bounce NOWW uff, and kt, why is she uncomfortable?? she knows she loves lakshya, she sould just say it..
continue soon!! 👏

hey!!!! i want more, i want more, i want more!!!! 😆

it was amazing, please cont...soon!!!! It was very good..

awesome part can't wait for lakshya and kt scenes!!👏

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kits this is the first FF i am reading and truthfuly you've got my 100% attention yaar, it so much fun and interesting to read!
please continue soon 😛
lkt scenes 😳

wow, glad to c sahil ganga as well 😊 ...do continue soon 👏 👏 👏

Originally posted by: desigrl05

OMGGGGGGG this gayatri is seriously jala-ing my khoon, like omg, wheres her pati?? she needs to bounce NOWW uff, and kt, why is she uncomfortable?? she knows she loves lakshya, she sould just say it..
continue soon!! 👏

Gr8 job...... u put gayatri in some old age home please......she was much in control when JD, her hubby was there......

anyways jahnu..why r u always looking for an extra marital affair😉? KT should love L only as Br-in-law😉......so please respect indian culture.....😆😉...and let zinu write a good FF !!!