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Posted: 18 years ago
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hello everyone this is the 1st time i am writing a fanfic so if something gets wrong in this so plz forgive me.... I am writing a small part of the fanfic that how tulsi get to know about the rape,.... n after reading this u have to move the story forward... but frnds remember always keep a regularity with the first part...😊

After the holi party gets over, everybody goes to their own rooms..tulsi meets lakshay...

L: dadi! KT kahan hai bohot der se dhoond raha hoon use, apne dekha kya?

T: haan, shayad apne kamre mein hogi, aur tu pehele jakar apna muh to dhokar aa, pura bandar lag raha hai..

L: giggling..... accha dadi main abhi aata hoon.

" then tulsi comes inside the house n on the way she meets pari"

P: are dadi, accha hua aap yehin mil gayi..

T: kyu kya hua? P:- Dadi vo kya hai ki main KT ke liye uske lehenge ke matching duppata laayi hoon... aap usko zara de dena. T: accha theek hai...

" tulsi goes inside the room"

T:- Krishnaa...krishnaa kahan hai tu, lakshay kab se tujhe dhoond raha hai..

"suddenly she turns around and see tht KT is sitting very quite in a sofa... tulsi feels some doubt, she goes near her n asks her"

T: Ae krishna, kya hua? tu itni chupchap kyun baithi hui hai.. sab theek hai naa.. " KT is quite n looking at the ground... her face has turned pale, the tears have dried on her cheeks"...." then tulsi gets desperate n asks the same question frequently"...

T: " she shakes her" TU BATAEGI MUJHE KYA HUA HAI????

KT:" she suddenly shouts" BALATKAR HUA HAI MERA, " then she breaks in2 tears n says"......mera balatkar hua hai baa, i have been raped...

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Posted: 18 years ago
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now frnds move the story forward 😊
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Cool Story!!! Do continue soon, I can't wait to read the next part! What is lakshya and tulsi going to do? I am eagerly waiting for the next part. Can you post the next part please?
Edited by uru_hershey - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Originally posted by: uru_hershey

Cool Story!!! Do continue soon, I can't wait to read the next part! What is lakshya and tulsi going to do? I am eagerly waiting for the next part. Can you post the next part please?

hiiiii i could have wriiten the next part but i wanted all of the other members to take the story forward like i have wriiten one part so the other person will write the next part... thats is how the story will go... if you want so you can take the story forward

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Posted: 18 years ago
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hey its nice but i dunno how to write a fanfic
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Posted: 18 years ago
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wow duyus we have the same name nikky and nice story 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
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hello frnds plz keep on commenting 😊
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Posted: 18 years ago
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awwww.. thats so sad . 😭
please make it happy in the end... 😳

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