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Posted: 18 years ago
#81
it is very cute.. i really like it😊
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Part 22...
damini n tanya help archita n kt with the eating area arrangements for the babaji....
D: hmmmm....bohot hi aachi khusbu aarahi hai kt....
kt smiles
T: aakhir beti kiski hai...tulsi maa ki...ofcourse tulsi maa subh kuch sikhangi....
lakshya cums there from behind...
L: lekin honewali biwi kiski hai chachi....( kt, archita, damini , tanya look bak...they see lakshya raising his eyebrows at him) woh toh aap bhul gaye....( he cums towards kt)...yeh hai nah sabh kuch galat karti thi.... meinai usko sikaya how its done....aur yeh dekho....no one gives me any credit.....( makes a kute frowning face)....yeh kaise baat huwi..
Damini pinches his cheeks playfully....
D: okk baba....tumhari vajase issneh aacha khana bana ya....ok khush
archita n tanya gigle...
KT: kya....isseneh kuch nahi kiya....yeh toh muhje disturb karetah tha.... ( she goes towards lakshya pushes him playfully)... muhje khana bananeh mein concentrate bhi nahi kareneh deta tha.....isse liya muhje kitna time laga yeh sabh bana neh mein.... varna mein toh....
lakshya interrupts...
L: kya...mein disturb kiya.... remember tum toh woh curry mein salt bhul gayi thi...woh kisne bola...aur woh.... other dish koh mix kisse neh kiya...
they start arguing ....
A: OMG....KT ....LAKSHYA.....
they dunt listen to archita they continue arguing....
A: (YELLS) AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!
that catches their attention...
A: donno...plz bhagwan keh liya shut up....argument karnah hai...toh joah upa room mein jakar karo....
kt blushes...n lakshya gives a kute smirk...
D: arre baba... sagayi hogayi toh bhi tum jagar teh rehetai ho...pata nahi shaddi keh baad kya karo geh....
T: damini...lets go....unko...aakeh leh mein unka issue solve karneh detai hai....
damini laughs....
damini: archita chalo...
A: (not wanting to goo) nahi chachil...i m sorta part of this...
damini n tanya leave
kt n lakshya raise thier eyeborws in confusion....
L: archita plz....( n directs her to the door)...
A: (get angry) AOKK fine....kt katam hojayeh nah tab batah nah kya huwa....ok...
L: abh tu jati hai keh chachi koh bulaoo..
A: fine byes...

n archita leaves...
end of part 22
plz comment
rani
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Posted: 18 years ago
#83
wow wow wow rani very very very lovely and romantic parts plz plz plz continue soon.....thx a lot....
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love
unnati
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Wow! Lovely fanfic! Continuee Soon! I love your fanfics!

Well Done 👏 👏 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
#85
Very sweet 👏 Continue soon. I love ur fanfic
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Posted: 18 years ago
#86
i love ur fanfic
how does the story come to you?


love it
ishuu<33
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Posted: 18 years ago
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RECAP:
Lakshya n kt r in a room alone.... (lakshya jus kicked archita otta da room)
PART 23
Lakshya holds kt by her waist n rest his chin on her shhoulders...
kt waz mad at him for wat she called it "AN INSULT" of the food she cooked....
KT( seriously) choodo muhje.... nahi baat karni tumse...
kt lets goo of lakshya's hand...n almost makes him fall as she moves away from him....
lakshya gets a hold of her hand...n cums closer to her
L: ( flirtishly)kya huwa...naraz tum mujseh ho....???
KT gives lakshya a fake smile
KT: ( sarcastically) nahi lakshya ofcourse not ...tumse koi naraz ho hi nahi sakta.....mein toh voh hamri neighbour hai nah unseh naraz huan....
she gets out of lakshya's grip...look at him agriely n walks away....
lakshya wonders to him self ..." isse kya huwa??"
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MEANWHILE....DOWNSTAIRS...
all teh elders of SN were buzy with the welcoming of the great saint ....( babaji)....
the saint enters.... tulsi finishes up da rangoli....n looks pleased upon the arrival....
bhoomi on the other had teh " WTF" look on her face....
bhoomi goes up to tanya
B: mom... m not interested in....this watever ...babaji or whoever he is... im goin out shoppin with my frnds kk...
Ta: as u wish beta....
manthan who waz also bored to death overhears bhoomi....n decides to go shopping with her...
M: sis i'll cum to....anywayz who want to stay here welcoming sum gawar.... dunt knoe if it sound like manthan talk jus trying!! 😛 ]
Ta: aisa nahi bolteh....ok tum bhi jao...
bhoomi n manthan leave.....
kt cums downstairs....
tulsi calls her over to the side...
KT: kya hai baa?
L: ek kaam kar baa....(da 110yr old one 😉 ) keh kamreh seh zarah unki dawai....aur woh pooja keh liya ek red cloth lakar aah...
kt smiles..." ok baa"/....sh runs upstairs to baa's room....
she looks for the medicine...in the drawers....she opens up teh dresser drawers....n the closet...
lakshya cums from behind....leaning against the wall..
L: kya dhundh rahi ho....
kt gives lakshya an angry look...
KT: tumseh matlab....
n looks away.....still searching....
lakshya goes to baa's night table....he opens the drawer....
takes teh medicine out...
L: kya yeh dhund rahi thi...baa ki dawai...
kt looks at the bottle of pills...
KT: (still angry)...haan... goes toward him n snatches the bottle from his hand....
KT: thank u....
shez about to leave.... jus then lakshay grabs her....
n pulls her towards him...
L: aarre problem kya hai tumhe...
KT: kuch nahi...chodoh.....baa intazar kare rahi hogi mera...
L: lekin itneh ghusseh mein kyun dekh rahi ho muhje...?? maine kya kiya....
KT: tumneh kiya...toh tumhe paata hona chayeh....choodohnah....!!she tries to get away..... but doesnt work...
Lakshya leans towards her..
L: jabh tak nahi batao gi tabh tak nahi choodongah....
tulsi call kt from downstairs...
TU: KRISHNA TULSI......JALDI NEECHAI AAH....
kt: ( yeels bak) haaaaaaaaann baa.....doh minute....
kt; lakshya plzz....seriously....choodoh
L: meh bhi seriously pooch raha huuan.... kya problem hai...
kt gives up!!.
kt; problem yeh hai mr. lakshya virani....( lakshya nods....n gives her a flirty smile)... keh meinai isse ghar mein peheli baar khana banaya....aur aapneh...meri tarif karneh keh bajai... ( she pauses)...paatah hai nah kya kaha...isse liya mein tumse...( she stops)...
L: tum muhje seh..
KT: NARAZ HUAN!!...(looks away)
L: he cums closer to her...he turns her to face him...her raises her chin...
L: tum itni choti baat kyun seriously lati ho...
KT: yeh choti baat hai...
L: okk baba...lekin i waz jus kidding...such poocho toh... mein jooth bol raha tha...
KT: ( gives him a "watever" look)haan haan...yeh bhi koi naya formula hoga..
lakshya looks at kt blankly...
L: kt...really...i love u sooo much tum tohj janti bhi nahi mein tumse kitna pyaare kare tah hua...
he lets goo of her...he goes toward the window...rests his arm on the window frame...
L: paata nahi keh tum kabhi bhi samaj paogi keh nahi...sab seh zada muhje sirf tum par hai vishwas...( he looks up)....pata nahi mein tumhare bagar jii bhi paongah keh nahi...(kt begins to feel really guilty...sh walks towards him)... i try imagining my life without u....janti ho mein kya dekhta huan.... a blank white place...jisse mein nah koi raang hai nah koi oomang...(joy)... ( lakshya's eyes get watery)...
kt turns lakshay to face him.....lakshya tries to make his tears disaappear...( but doesnt work...they jus start to run down his cheeks...
KT: itna pyaare kare teh ho muhjse....
kt llooks at the tear....the minute it waz about to fall from his cheek...she puts her hand fowardn the teardrop falls on her hand....
lakshya tries to take it away from her hand...
she takes the teardrop...n runs it on her head....
Lakshya looks into her eyes with all the love
kt: aaj seh yeh mera....( smiles)...mere sareh sukh tumhareh aur tumhareh sareh dukh mere
lakshya puts her finger on her lips....
L: shhh....kabhi aaisa maat kahenah... hum ek hai....seperate nahi....
KT's eyes get watery... she jumps and hugs him tightly......
KT: I LOVE U...!!!
lakshya waz sooooooooo SHOCKED to hear this....she had never said that before...
L: kya???kuchsoonayeh nahi diya
KT: I LOVE U!!!
L: kya..???
kt smiles n playfully punches him......


end of part 23....
hope u liked it...plz doo comment...
luv ya alwayz..
rani
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Posted: 18 years ago
#88
that was awsome continue soon 👏 👏 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
#89
👏 it was awsome rani.... lovely.... i loved it
love
unnati
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Posted: 18 years ago
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PART 24
DOWNSTAIRS....
Tu: arre yeh krishna tulsi kaha gayi.... KRISHNAA TULSI...
the babaji is tlking to baa abt lakshya-kt wedding....n baa waz really pleased to teh response babaji gave for teh after wedding life....
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UPSTAIRS IN BAA's ROOM
kt: ok lakshya i m soorry...
lakshya holds her tightly...
L: pyaare mein no sorry....
he raises her chin to face his...but kt's eye lids still looking down....
they hear tulsi callin....
KT: ok lakshya muhje jaane doh nah....
L:( shakes his head) naahha....meinai tumhare ek kaam kiya aabh tum mera ek kaam karo...
kt: kya...
Lakshya takes out a button from him pocket....
L: zzara dal kar doh nah...
kt: ok...lekin shirt kaha hai....
L: kt lagtah hai tumhari aankh check karani parahgi....tumhe mein kya towel mein nazar aah raha huan kya....
kt laughs...
kt; ohhh...chalo nikalo...
L: kya??
KT: shirt...
L: kyun ( he holds her even tighter) aisa hi lagaoo...
kt blushes...n gives him a kute smiles...
kt: lemme get the needle n the thread...
L: tumhara bahanah samaj gaya...isse liya sabh tayari kar keh aaja hua...
he takes out the white tread n the needle from his pocket....
kt laughs...
kt holds the button n starts to sow it to teh shirt...
kt: kal tumhare liya naye kapdeh lakar

continue sooon
rani

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