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Posted: 18 years ago
#91
great part continue soon 👏 👏 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
#92
wow ur stories are awesome!! 😊
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Posted: 18 years ago
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plz continue soon. This part was really funny, when laksh asks kt to sew his shirts's button. Do continue soon. When are they going to get wed? I can't wait till their suhaag raat. 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 😊
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Posted: 18 years ago
#94
awwww i love this part but the part before that was so emotional

great work

ishuu<33
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Posted: 18 years ago
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pART 24 (CONTINUE)
kt laughs...
kt holds the button n starts to sow it to teh shirt...
kt: kal tumhare liya naye kapdeh lakar aaengay...
L: OOUUUUCCHHHHH..( yells)
kt; ( gets scared)omg... kya huwa...cubah..
lakshya smiles
L: nahi toh....(laughs)chubh tah toh aaisa hi lagtah nah
kt; very smart...(n gives him a "watever" look)
L: OUUUUUCH...isse baar chubah ( touches his chest)
kt:chubah tah toh aaise hi lagta hai...samjeh....!!( she grins bak)...theek hai...lo hogaya....
she tries n gets outta lakshya's grip n starts to leave...
lakshya gets a hold of her sari palo....n pulls the palo towards him...
kt: kya hai...abh chodoh nah....
L: haan...lekin tum kuch pooch rahi thi...
kt: nahi?? ( she wonders)
L: sumthign abt new kapdeh...
kt remembers ...
KT: ohhh rite...haan woh mein kya pooch rahi thi ...keh kal tumhare liya naye kapdeh lakar aaoh
L: ( grins) kyun....yeh aachai nahi hai kya...
kt takes the palo from his hand...
kt: theek hai...agar tumhe aach lagarahe hai...toh no problem...
n turns to leave...
lakshya from behind grabs he by the waist....
L: aare mein toh sirf mazak kar raha tha.... tum har baat koh itna seriously kyun lati ho...
he rests his chin on her shoulder...
kt looks away n smiles...
kt; tum bhi...har baat koh itne seriously kyun....mein bhi toh mazak hi kare rahi thi...
the both smile...
L: suuno...tum aaogi nah mere sath...
Kt: mein... mein kyun...tumhare kapdeh laneh hai toh mera kya kaam...abh chodoh ...varna koi aah jaye gah....
Lakshya holds her even tighter...
L: jitna tum chodoh bologi nah...utnah tighter pakadonga......toh hum kaha thee...tumhe chal nah hoga...
kt; par its soo boring... mein vaha jah kar kya shirts choose karongi...joh sabh ek sarkeh deekh teh hai...( widens her eyes)
L: arre yeh kya baat huwi....shaadi keh baad toh tum ko hi yeh sabh kar nah hai...
kt; kyaa???? (gets lakshya hands off her waist)...
KT: excuse me mr. lakshya virani... meinai apki honewali biwi huan...nokerani nahi,.... theek hai......hmmmm
n she leavees madly...
lakshya stands there smiling...
L: aare dawai toh yaha hi bhol gayi...kt....
he runs after her...
++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++ +++++
downsatirs....
kt goes downstairs...
tu: daai laneh mein kitni dare....abh give it to me...
kt realizes dat she forgot the bottle upstairs...
kt; ooppps baa....woh dawai toh mein bhol....
lakshya interupts from behind
L: bhool janeh wali thi...lekin lakshya neh remind kiya...
tulsi smiels...
tu: hmmm abh paata chala itne dare kyun lagi...
kt looks down blushing..
lakshya scratches his forehead...
Lakshya goes behind tulsi
L: dadi....yeh babaji kah sabh dekhna vagarah hogaya...
ganga cums running...
G: congratulation kt...lakshya... babaji keh mohrat ( time ) 6months keh baad kah nikala hai....
tulsi n kt looks pleased...lakshya gets upset...
L;kya.... isse mein khush honeh ki kya baat hai...
ganga,. tulsi, n kt look at him in dissappoint ment
L: i hv to wait for dat long......6months.... yani adha (half) sall ( year)...
ganga n tulsi smile
ganga playfully piunches his cheek....
g; aww....its ok...huney...

end of part 24..
hope u liked it...
do comment....
rani
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Posted: 18 years ago
#96
sorry guys i wont b updating my ff for quite sum time ... i hv got mid-term exams cuming up...so hv to study for them....sorry for any inconvinience. if get any time ...i'll write it on fri or sat.... but nothing during the week only on weekends...

thnkx
rani
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Posted: 18 years ago
#97
ur ff is great i really really like it 😊 and good luck for ur mid-terms wish u
do well

and for updating ur ff it is okie i'm sure all of us can wait 😃
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Posted: 18 years ago
#98
good luck on ur mid-terms i love ur fanfic1 😛
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Posted: 18 years ago
#99
Wow!!it's awesome....Hope u will continue soon n good luck 4 ur mid term!! 😃 😃
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Posted: 18 years ago

RECAP: lakshya finds out...he'll be marryiing kt in 6mnths....
pART 25
mihir cums...
M: arre tulsi , ganga.... zara babaji keh liya bahar khane kah intazam karo....unko jaana hai...
G: ok papa...
T: hum toh sirf lakshya aur kt koh baata rahe the woh shaadi ki date...
M:( looks at lakshya) congratulation lakshya.. kt...
lakshya smiles...
L: thnkx dadu..
ganga, damini, tanya, kt n archita....help with teh setting up the place for the babaji to eat....
lakshya cums from behind...
kt pretends to ignore him
L: chachi kuch kaam hai....
damini n tanya smile...
D: hamai nahi paata nahi kt kuch kaam ho...
archita...gigles...
lakshya looks at kt... she shly blushes...
G: kt koh kuch madat ki zarorat nahi....tumhe really help karni hai....
L: ofocurse mom... isse liya yaha aaya huan ( winks at k n constantly stares at her)
G: chalo mein tumhe kaam deh ti huan....SAHILLLLLLLLL!( she calls sahil)...
L: wat... no its ok mom.. muhje kuch aur kaam yad aagaya... dad koh maat bulaye....
lakshya quickly runs away.... n kt shly smiles...
Ganga goes to kt...
G: (laughing ) kina pagal hai yeh....(she looks at kt... holds kt by her chin....) ofcourse kyun nah ho...meri bahu joh itni aachi hai
kt jubilantly hugs ganga.... n she hugs her back...
G: pata nahi kt... tumhare bina uski zindagi kaissai hogi.... every breath of his... call ur name.,...u hv brought great joy to him life... n to our family...
kt looks down shyly...
ganga kisses ehr on the forehead.... while lakshya waz peaking from inside n smiling...
tulsi cum in...
T: arre kya ho raha hai saas- bahu mein....
ganga n kt smile///
T: chalo hogaya sabh tayari....
G: ji maa...
A: chachi agar sabh kuch hogaya ho oth mein aur kt jayeh...
G: haan haan jao...
archita n kt leave....
A: ( whisper)... chalo nah'kt
kt: yaa ok..
archita waz walking speed walking while kt lost in thoughts....
suddenly sumthing pulls her....kt yells
it waz lakshya.... he cornered ehr to teh side...



continue sooon
rani

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