Saat dino mein pher ke
Saat janam ka saath mila hai
Saat pheron ki den se
Saat yugon ke intezar ko
Saat vachan mein sambhal kar
Saat samundar ki gehrai ko
Saat shabdon mein dhal kar
Saatwe Aasman ke indradhanush ko
Dharti ke sej par utaar ke
Kore jeevan mein bhare tumne
Saat Rang Pyar Ke
Part I: Pehla Rang Takraar Ka
Chapter I: Barsaat
The sky wore alternate colors of dark blue, grey and black. The rain, which had started out as a slight drizzle, had taken momentum by the hour and was torrential at the given instant. The streets to the byway leading up to the temple were mostly deserted except for those stray dogs and cats which kept looking for some random overturned cart under which to hide. And a lone dimunitive figure, fighting a losing battle with the rain and the wind with an upturned umbrella. As she tried to set the umbrella right, a strong gust of wind blew her dupatta over. For a few seconds,she helplessly traced the path with her eyes, holding onto the umbrella with all her might.
To her intense mortification, the errant dupatta, rather than perching itself atop a tree, blocked someone's stride by covering their head completely. As she gathered it, sliding it off their face, her eyes met light brown ones. Surprised. "Sorry", she muttered apologetically, as she almost ran toward the temple. Depositing her slippers hurriedly outside the temple door, she picked up a plate, some camphor and flowers from a nearby vendor. The temple gates were closing and she ran in. Handing the priest her plate of offerings, she bent down to touch the feet of Lord Ganesha's statue. The exact moment, another hand performed the same gesture with the result of covering her own. She looked up into the pair of brown eyes the second time that evening. She stayed put, willing the other to withdraw his hand. He just raised his eyebrows faintly with no gesture resembling withdrawal.
"Beta...Mandir ke dwar band karne ka samay ho gaya hai." The priest reminded them gently. The priest's voice jolted them out of their angry - albeit - silent contest. They finished their prayers and incidently held out their right hand for the prasad at the same time. The priest, who was watching the whole episode with growing amusement, just chuckled and with a rather jovial "Ladies first", gave the girl the prasad first. She thanked the priest and ran out of the temple, just turning back before she left the gate to give him a pitying "Tsk Tsk" look. He glared back with a "Just-You-Wait-Till-We-Meet-Again" look.
Barkha Doshi was lucky she reached home that day at all. The inclement weather had made it near possible to get a public conveyance and she had to literally beg an autorikshaw walla to take her home in one of the better areas of the city. She was not a little annoyed, firstly with the rains, then with the haranguing rikshaw driver and most of all with the rather haughty gold - brown eyed stranger she'd met in the temple. But keeping all possible negative emotions away from her at this time, she patiently waited for her aunt to come home. To share with her the happiness which far outweighed any such vexation she felt.
Nakul Virani reached home in a not-so-good mood either. His car had stopped midway, his cell had stopped working and he'd had a nettling experience in his fifth visit to a temple in his lifetime. He'd shared some good news with his father who had urged him to seek out god's blessings and thank him for the good fortune. Not wanting to aggravate his dad by arguing, the inherently agnostic Nakul had pulled over at the nearest temple. And met the yellow dupatta girl. What an irksome way to end a perfectly good day.
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