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Posted: 17 years ago
great update, aww it's his Mom? 😕
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Posted: 17 years ago
*phew* finally caught up wid all da parts 😆

i am *SPEECHLESS*
beautiful parts......n part 37 *sigh* 😳 i was AWWing throughout da whole part 😳 😆

gal ur on a roll......so damn gud!!
cant wait 4 more

so sorry 4 da late comments.....i ve bn terribly bz wid my mock xamz!! n still am....jus took out some tym so dat i cud read dis 😛
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Posted: 17 years ago
both parts 37 & 38 are 2 gud !!

sorry 4 da delay.actually i check my PMs once a while thts why i alwayz reply late.

da song waz da apt 1 4 tht scenario.
absolutely mindblowing.keep it up! 👏
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Posted: 17 years ago
hey aahana..
awesome part.
i love it when they are lukin at each other all through the night..
its so cute 😊
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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: adventure_gurl

great update, aww it's his Mom? 😕



thx dear ya its his mom
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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: Himu

*phew* finally caught up wid all da parts 😆

i am *SPEECHLESS*
beautiful parts......n part 37 *sigh* 😳 i was AWWing throughout da whole part 😳 😆

gal ur on a roll......so damn gud!!
cant wait 4 more

so sorry 4 da late comments.....i ve bn terribly bz wid my mock xamz!! n still am....jus took out some tym so dat i cud read dis 😛



hey himuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuu😆😆😆

missed ya gal but anywayz exams are more imp but still u took the time 4 my ff thx dear thts so sweet 😃

thx 4 the sweet compliments dear 😳

trust me i m more glad thn u tht u picked up 😆😆

n ya all the best 4 ur exams 👍🏼
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Posted: 17 years ago


thx mona 😃
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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: cool_time

both parts 37 & 38 are 2 gud !!

sorry 4 da delay.actually i check my PMs once a while thts why i alwayz reply late.

da song waz da apt 1 4 tht scenario.
absolutely mindblowing.keep it up! 👏



thx a lot dear 😃

glad u liked it 😳
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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: stylishgal

hey aahana..
awesome part.
i love it when they are lukin at each other all through the night..
its so cute 😊



thx simi😊
thx i m ahppy u liked tht touch man i m such a sucker 4 all these mushy stuff myself 😆
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Posted: 17 years ago

Part 39:

Mandira was lying on the stretcher, bleeding profusely. Her neck was hurt badly. She was lying there unconscious. Karan was petrified virtually n as the ambulance besides him drove off speedily he stood there blank; n later when it was way out of sight n even it's loud siren was unheard karan just fell to the ground, shweta who all this while was just watching him ran to hold him.

SH came n shook k when he regained consciousness, s asked what had happened.

SH: I don't know much myself beta, bas Gloria se itna pata chala ki mandira storeroom ki seedhiyon se gir gayi.

G: sir I m sorry I don't know but I was cleaning the kitchen n didn't know madam had waked up or else….. (She began sobbing)

All reached their own hospital Hope Medical Care having hopes for their own miracle.

Mandira was critical & severely injured, doctors where unsure about her.

All this while karan was just shattered n scared deep down within his heart as SH took care of all needed while shweta too helped as much as possible.

Sitting with his head down, tears in his eyes n a fear in his heart to loose the only family he has in the form of his mother he was quiet in a lonely corner of the hospital outside the OT awaiting his mother's verdict n praying to god to atleast not take away her from him or else he would not only loose the purpose, strength & cause of his life but his very life as well.

Movie: Taare Zameen Par

I loved the emotional touch of this song, it really touches your heart n makes you cry somewhere.



Main Kabhi Batlata Nahin
Par Andhere Se Darta Hoon Main Maa
Yun to Main, Dikhlata Nahin
Teri Parwaah Karta Hoon Main Maa
Tujhe Sab Hain Pata, Hain Na Maa
Tujhe Sab Hain Pata, Meri Maa

Bheed Mein Yun Na Chodo Mujhe
Ghar Laut Ke Bhi Aa Naa Paoon Maa
Bhej Na Itna Door Mujhko Tu
Yaad Bhi Tujhko Aa Naa Paoon Maa
Kya Itna Bura Hoon Main Maa
Kya Itna Bura Meri Maa

Jab Bhi Kabhi Papa Mujhe
Jo Zor Se Jhoola Jhulate Hain Maa
Meri Nazar Dhoondhe Tujhe
Sochu Yahi Tu AA Ke Thaamegi Maa

Unse Main Yeh Kehta Nahin
Par Main Seham Jaata Hoon Maa
Chehre Pe Aana Deta Nahin
Dil Hi Dil Mein Ghabraata Hoon Maa
Tujhe Sab Hai Pata Hai Naa Maa
Tujhe Sab Hai Pata Meri Maa

Main Kabhi Batlata Nahin
Par Andhere Se Darta Hoon Main Maa
Yun to Main, Dikhlata Nahin
Teri Parwaah Karta Hoon Main Maa
Tujhe Sab Hain Pata, Hain Na Maa
Tujhe Sab Hain Pata, Meri Maa.




Facing the biggest fear of his life in lonely dark night of his own hospital karan felt the most helpless ever in his life, if only, if only I could have been there with maa she would have been safe, was the only thing he felt the only question that repeatedly echoed in his mind at the moment was is this it? I can't loose her, I don't wanna loose her.

He began trembling there itself, his whole body was cold when he felt the touch of a familiar warm hand, holding his hand. Shweta sat beside him looking in his empty eyes that had been drained of life thru the tears he cried.

Karan who for so long had been silent as a lifeless figure suddenly shattered tightly gripping her in his arms placing his head over her shoulder he burst in tears admitting his fear for the 1st time, pouring his heart out, something he so needed or else he would have been severely emotionally n mentally destroyed

K: main maa KO nahi khona chahta shwet, nahi khona chahta woh chup rahe kuch Na bole, kuch bhi kare par agar mere saath Na rahe to main mar jaoonga, mar jaoonga.

S(consoling him): kuch nahi hoga aunty KO karan pls don't worry hum hai Na tum dekh Na.

He cried his heart out to her & decided to call mihir. At first he tried calling his cell but despite his innumerable attempts mihir didn't answer his calls. Later he called his office. A receptionist at Virani group answered from the other side.

R: hello virani industries good morning how may I help you?

K: hello, yes I would like to speak to your boss pls connect me to him.

R: may I know who are you sir? And why have you called up?

K: I m karan kapadia mam, pls I m calling all the way from Australia pls it's really urgent I need to talk to your boss.

R: all right sir. But whom should I connect you to? Can you please tell me that?

K (Was about to say dad): ya sure my da…….

R: hello, hello sir you there?

K: ya I m sorry uh there was a disturbance yes Mr. Mihir Virani.

R: oh sir but mihir sir is busy in a meeting with the board & I can't disturb him now.

K: mam pls it's important to me I beg u tell him it's a call from Australia he will understand.

R: ok sir fine but I can't promise but ill try.

She got to mihir who got all tensed up at the mention of the call & that too in his office. He said ask the caller to wait I shall talk to him later.

He called about 1 an hour later karan was really upset at this.

M: kya zaroorat thi tumhe yaha call karne ki aur yeh kya 70 missed calls kiye hai mere cell par tumne aisa kaunsa paahad toot pada hai jaan sakta hu main. (Mihir stormed at him).

K: Mr. Mihir virani I m so sorry ke aapke itni busy meeting KO maine roka par ha paahad hi toot pada hai yaha par maa ki jaan khatre main hai aur isliye hi maine aapko phone kiya warna aapki awaaz sunne ka mujhe bhi koi shauk nahi hai.

Mihir shocked at this asked the details & said he will arrange for money n doctors if needed but couldn't come.

K: aap main itni sharam nahi Mr. Virani 1 aurat KO aapne paagal kar diya aur woh aaj Marne ki kaagar par hai aur aap aa bhi nahi sakte.

M: main nahi aa sakta karan, gautam ki shaadi hai kal aur yaha agar main apne bete ki shaadi main nahi raha toh log kya kahenge

K: oh ha log main hi bewakoof tha Mr. virani ki aapko call kiya umeed karke sorry I forgot aapke liye log hi important hai thik hai aap wahi rahiye ab main aapko kissi chez ke liye nahi yaad karoonga, apna naseeb khud banaonga aur aap ko bataonga zarror bataonga

Saying this he hung up the phone

Highlights of the next Part: the final football tournament.
Edited by aahana86 - 17 years ago

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