Ehsaas - a fanfic - Page 33

Originally posted by: princessunara

wow awsome yaar...👏 bt da problem s i dnt knw any words dat wud do justice 2 dis amazing twist f da story..
gosh i simply loved da ending and this kiss simply took my breath away😳👏
no1 could have found better wrds 2 give a more fitting ending..

The decision to kiss for the first time is the most crucial in any love story. It changes the relationship of two people much more strongly than even the final surrender; because this kiss already has within it that surrender

keep t up gal👏👏👏

thx sunara 😃

it really doesnt matter if u dont have the words the thing tht matters is tht u have it in ur heart n r back every week to encourage me further for my next part is all i need n get n tht really is a lot 😳😃

Part 37:

Oblivious to the world KS were caught in the most romantic, most intimate moment of their life, their first one causing it to be the most special experience they ever came across ever so far.

Nothing else existed for the moment, they knew nothing expect that there could not be anything else that they want or desire.

It seemed time had frozen just to witness the union of the eternal soul mates; destiny had after all made them for each other.

Moments passed by n they quietly stood there in an embrace & then looking into her deep olive eyes he slowly moved his lips over her cheeks n over her eye kissed softly later he kissed her forehead n again coming down he kissed her again moving towards her lips n again planted a gentle kiss over her lips while her eyes were closed all this while.

Slowly she opened her eyes n looked at karan like she had never looked before she had moistness in them yet there was happiness n a sort of serenity & fulfillment she had never experienced before.

They had never felt this complete or happy. Karan just tightly hugged her with all his might n closed his eyes. She too was lost in him.

I LOVE YOU SHWET, I LOVE YOU: whispered karan in her ears while passionately hugging her.

I don't know shwet main kaise raha itne din tere bina, sab itna khali aur akela tha koi aisa waqt nahi tha jaha main tumhe miss nahi karta tha, tumhare bina kabhi hona hoga aisa khayal tak kabhi nahi aaya tha aur tumhare bina ye din aa gaye.

S couldn't hold back any longer n said main jaanti hu karan main bhi tumhare bina reh kar khudse bhaag rahi thi itne din tum mere saamne the par pass nahi ye baat mujhe andar hi andar bahut taqlif deti thi.

Hum kabhi itne pass hokar hi itne door honge aisa nahi soocha tha aur jab mujhe laga koi aur tumhare pass aa raha hai mujhe achha nahi laga

Us raat hum Jo kar baithe woh bas hamara pyar tha main tumhe rok nahi saki kyunki main tumhe nahi rokna chahti thi

Tumhare sparsh ne jaise hamare jazbaaton KO jubaan de di aur main khudko us main behne se rokna nahi chahti thi

Tum ne mujhe Ehsaas karwaya ki main sunder hu, par shayad meri sooch is sach se bhag rahi thi. Tumhe pata hai na aaj tak pyar ko kabhi sach nahi samjha toh main pyar main hu yeh maanna mushkil tha, main galat hu yeh kabool nahi kar pa rahi thi. Par Main tumhe khoona nahi chahti karan aur jab mujhe laga ki koi tumhe mujhse door kar raha hai aur isliye main itni gussa aur naaraaz thi I m sorry

K: pagli ye main nahi samjaaonga toh kaun samjhega main jaanta tha ki tum naaraaz ho kyunki tum yeh soch rahi ho ki koi aur tumhari jagah le raha hai par kya aisa ho sakta hai?

Jawab apne dil se pooch to tumhe maloom hoga ki sach kya hai.

Tumhare alawa Na koi hai Na ho sakta hai, Na hoga.

S smiling with a tear in her eyes hugged him tightly n confessed: I LOVE YOU KARAN, I LOVE YOU VERY MUCH

K: I LOVE YOU TOO.

The 2 smiled again whole heartedly n kissed again.


Highlights of the next Part: KS in a new world.

thanx darling..a short bt a lovely part.. 👏
hw i wish i'd 1 day meet sm1 js lyk karan nnnn........ 😍 ☺️
anywa da way u potray romantic scenes r js awwwww 😍

awesome update!
PraThAm~GaURi- what epsiode of Kyunki is that scene from?

OMG...
that was an awesome awesome part..
it was soooooooooooo amazing..
i LOVED it..
plzz continue ASAP 😊

Originally posted by: PraThAm~GaURi

thanku dearrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrr................

thx dear 😃

Originally posted by: princessunara

thanx darling..a short bt a lovely part.. 👏
hw i wish i'd 1 day meet sm1 js lyk karan nnnn........ 😍 ☺️
anywa da way u potray romantic scenes r js awwwww 😍

thx sweety 😃

tell me abt it i m dreamin of him so much myself 😆

that' where i get this imagination from 😆

ya well i m a sucker for romantic stuff 😳☺️ so completely into it

Originally posted by: adventure_gurl

awesome update!
PraThAm~GaURi- what epsiode of Kyunki is that scene from?

thx dear 😊

Originally posted by: stylishgal

OMG...
that was an awesome awesome part..
it was soooooooooooo amazing..
i LOVED it..
plzz continue ASAP 😊

thx simi 😊

Part 38:

After they finally understood n accepted love KS embraced it truly & now understood why love is what people say as 'THE NEED OF LIFE & THE MEANING OF THE WORLD'

They went home happier then ever on that wonderful night.

Tonight again sleep was deprived to them but the reason was far more different n pleasant today. They were all smiles in their beds n were just reliving those beautiful moments again.

Tossing & turning around in their beds was making them restless so both got up. S went towards her balcony n opened he window to see the gorgeous full moon light dancing away in the night while k came out to the living room n opened the curtains of the window to only find s standing in her window just opposite to him in a lovely pink gown.

At first s didn't know but later she suddenly saw k standing n then gently blushed while smiling, he was just looking at her. Both sat their quietly just looking at each other the whole night.


As the sky began getting red with the new day's sun they realized the time n got busy to get ready for college.

K entered s' house after 2 weeks, n was pleasantly surprised to see SH there. As soon as he came she gave him a warm hug n congratulated him for the victory.

Later the two went to college as usual n had their normal day but as they returned a sight sent a chilling sensation down karan's spine.

An ambulance was standing outside their homes; shweta seemed extremely worried as well. They wondered what had happened.

They made their way thru the crowd which had gathered outside, just as karan was about to ask what has happened he saw two ppl running fast carrying a stretcher, his heartbeat raised, hands went numb, it was almost as if he had been hit by hundreds of swords together.


Highlights of the next Part: Karan decides he will make his own destiny.