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Part 4


Preeta is talking nonstop till 15 mins thinking rishabh listening.

Preeta : aur pata hai aap na..

She sees rishabh slept .

Preeta :ye lo ..ye to so gaye ..pata nahin kab soye mera dhyaan hi nahin gaya ..

Preeta sees rishabh sitting with closed eyes so cutely hugging his pillow .

Preeta :ye thak gaye hain bahut lagta hai..!

She peacefully lays him down on bed but he is still hugging the pillow and not leaving it .

Preeta : lagta hai is pillow se inhein bohot pyaar hai..chhod hi nahin rahe !

She sleeps on same bed other side of him as she too was so tired.

At morning..,

Rishabh and preeta sleeping peacefully on two different sides of bed.

Sun light comes on preeta face and she opens her eyes and looks at rishabh sleeping peacefully. She tries to get up .. but her hand is holded by rishabh ..

Preeta : Ab jaun kaise ..

Haath Hataya to inki neend khul jayegi..

Bechare kitte thake hue hain.meine kal inhein kuchh jyada hi jaga diya 1 baje tak.

She peacefully tries to take her hand out of his hand but he pulls her hand more tightly to his heart while sleeping .

She feels uncomfortable a bit.. and her hairs fly.

She thinks to not disturb him in sleep .

She looks at watch .

Abhi sirf 6 baje hain thodi der baad ye uth jayenge ..

She sits on bed without taking her hand back ..

Preeta adores rishabh .

Preeta :aap kitne achchhe hain. I dont know meri kismat mein kya likha hai but ye janti hun ki mein bohot lucky hun ki meri shaadi aap jaise insaan se hui.

Mein kal raat ko kitti sad thi but apne jhat se mujhe happy kar diya .

Thank u so much rishabh ji !

Her eyes too closed now.

At 9 ,


Rishabh opens his eyes.. and sees preeta sitting on bed near him and he looks at he wrapped her hand on his chest while sleeping.

Rishabh : preeta ji .. meine socha nahin tha ki daadi ki baat sach hogi kabhi aur chamatakar se aap meri life mein wapas aa jayenge !

Mujhe ishq se rehna tha door

Jahan ishq ki jo hai mashoor

He adores her..

Par ye dil hai ki bilkul maana nahin

Her hairs coming on her face . He slowly tries to put her hairs back her ears.

Mujhe kheech ke dekho fir le aya wahin

Preeta opens her eyes and sees rishabh

Jahan ishq hai

Bas ishq hai

Bas ishq..hai..

She moves away from him suddenly taking off her hand from him in shock.

Preeta and rishabh both says together : sorry wo..

Then they gets more nervous and confused about what to say .

Preeta :wo aap neend mein mera haath pakad ke do gaye the to meine apko disturb karna theek nahin samjha .. meri bhi aankh lag gayi.

Rishabh says in between

thank u !

Preeta : kya kaha ?

Rishabh : thank u !

Preeta smiles in confusion and goes away from there in hurry and bumbs to karan outside the door.

Ouchh..! Both say together.

Karan : preeta arora tumhari ye takrane wali aadat kab jayegi ..

Preeta :galti tumne ki aur suna mujhe rahe ho .

Tumhe.. tumhe na mauka chahiye mujhse ladne ka .

Rishabh :aap dono kya fir bachchon ki tarah lad rahe ho..

Karan tu mere paas aa.. preeta ji aap jaiye . Ise mein sambhalta hun..

Preeta : haan..! Meine bhi subah subah kiska muh dekh liya ..

she goes away .

Kritika sees preeta going angrily.

Kritika : good morning bhabhi !

Preeta gets shocked..!

Bhabhi ?

Kritika : haan .. bhaabhi hui na ab to aap meri .

Aap ko pata hai mein to suuru se chahti thi apne bhaiya ke liye apko aur shayad wo bhi

Preeta gets confused.

Wo bhi matlab ?

Kritika : wo ..matlab bhai ko bhi aap shuru se achchhi lagti thi na .. wo bhi aap jaisi ek achchhi ladki se shaadi karna chahte the na .. unhein kya pata tha sherlin dayan niklegi..!

Preeta : chhod ye sab! Ab sherlin ka chapter close humari life se. Ab wo kabhi nahin ayegi.











Edited by jaanulovejaanam - 6 years ago
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Part 13


Rishabh is in his room

Rishabh remembers of the flashback

Karan : Bhai tujhe preeta se shaadi karni hi hogi otherwise sherlin sab barbaat kar degi .

Rishabh : preeta ji ka kya .. haan ? Kya wo mujhse shaadi karna chahti hain..

Karan :use chhod uski tension na le .. use mein samjha lunga .

Rishabh :its not a joke.. He holds his sholder.

puri zindagi hoti hai shaadi..puri life hoti hai..

Preeta comes there .

Rishabh is shocked seeing her .

Preeta :mein ready hun rishabh ji .

Rishabh goes towards preeta .

Sherlin bohot khatarnaak hai .. preeta ji .. mein apko risk mein nahin daal sakta .. jab wo mere saath itta kuchh kar sakti hai to apko bhi nuksaan pohocha sakti hai wo .

Preeta :hume ye karna hoga.. parivaar ke liye.. karan ne mujhse prhli baar kuchh manga ..hai.is dodti ke khatir pls.

Karan :bhai sherlin is exposed .. divorce ho chuka hai .. ab wo chaah ke bhi kuchh nahin kar sakti raha property ka sawaal to wo ab aadhi preeta ke naam hojayegi shaadi ke baad.

He remembers then they they got married with all rituals and declared as husband wife.

Scene shifts to karan room .

Karan remembers flashback.

He enters rishabh room and saw him adoring preeta photo with love and tears dropped from his eyes on her pic.

Karan :kuchh to hai jo bhai mujhse chhupa raha hai .. pata lagana padega

He remembers other flashback .

Karan :bhai preeta ki shaadi ho rahi hai jabardasti

Rishabh :i know..but jabardasti nahin uski marzi se.

Karan : to kya tujhe koi farak nahin padta

Rishabh looks at him confusingly and tries to hide his love for her

Rishabh :mujhe kyun farak padega but haan uski life destroy ho jayrgi jo ki mein nahin dekh sakta..

Karan moves around rishabh ..

Karan :bhai mujhe to dar hai ye prithvi gunda na nikle.. pata nahin shaadi ke baad kya karega wo preeta ke saath...

Rishabh :kya karega matlab?

Karan :apko nahin pata he can do anything ..

Rishabh :mein preetaji ko kuchh nahin hone de sakta ..

Unki life barbaad ho jayegi ..aise..

Kuchh karna padega hume ..kisi bhi kimat pe shaadi rokni padegi hume ye ..

Preeta ji bohot achchhi hain.. i know unki goi galti nahin..but still mein unka saath nahin de paya jab wo ghar pe aaakar ro ro ke bol rahi thi ki unhone kuchh nahin kiya.

Karan :tu preeta se pyaar karne laga hai !

Rishabh :what .. mein aur pyaar..?

Karan :teri baatein kuchh aur aur teri ankhein kuchh aur bol rahi hain.

Rishabh : aisa kuchh nahin hai tu kuchh jyada soch raha hai .. he pats her head slowly .

Flashback ends.

Karan also remembers rishabh saying wo nahin sochta preeta ji ke baare mein kab ayenge kya bolengi etc..

Karan : ek bhai apne bhai ko pehchanne mein kabhi galti nahin kar sakta .

Yr pyaar hinhai jab chot ek ko aur dard doosre ko hota hai .

He remembers rishabh caring for preeta wound and scolding her of not taking care of her.

Shayad tujhse jyada pyaar peeeta ko koi aur nahin kar sakta ..

Agar kisi ne preeta ko humesha samajhne ki koshish ki hai to wo sirf tu tha..

Tears drop from his eyes.

Preeta loves me I know.. but kismat humare saath nahin hai ..

Scene shifts to preeta

Preeta :karan I love you .

She hugs him .

Mujhe prithvi se shaadi nahin karni samjhe tum .

I dont know ki wo sahi insaan hai ya galat .she holds his face from her hands with love.

.mujhe sirf itna pata hai that I love u and i know you also love me ..haina ?

Karan tries to hide his love.

Karan :door hato mujhse.

He moves himself away from her .. taking off her hand from his face.

Preeta in shock.

Karan :kisne kaha tumse I love u ?

Nahin karta mein tumse pyaar suna tumne.. ! Tum jaisi ladki se kabhi kar bhi nahin sakta .

Preeta :kya matlab mujh jaisi..?

Karan :jo ladki apne dost pe vishvas hi na kare wo kya kisi se pyaar karegi?

Meine kaha tha prithvi bura hai tab tumne meri baat kabhi nahin maani .. ab chhod bhi isliye rahi ho kyunki tumhein lagta hai I love u .

Karan : fir bhi mein tumhein tumhari galti sudharne ka ek mauka deta hun ..

If u love me .. then prove kar ke dikhao.. mere bhai se shaadi karlo aur uski zindagi mein wapas khushiyan lauta do ..

Preeta :tum pagal to nahin ho gaye .

Rishabh ji ? Mein kaise ? Aur unki shaadi to sherlin se ho gayi hai..

Karan :divorce bhi ho chuka hai

Preeta :what ?

Karan :jee haan .

Agar tumne mujhe kabhi bhi apna dost mana hai to aaj apni jaan tumhein de raha hun yani mera bhai .. !

Flashback ends and tears drop from her eyes.

Edited by jaanulovejaanam - 6 years ago
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Part 14

Rishabh goes in kitchen. He searches for dough to make chapati .

Preeta comes there .

She sees rishabh searching for something in fridge.

Preeta :aap ? Aap yahan kya kar rahe hain.

Rishabh :wo kuchh nahin.. roti banani hai aata dhoondh raha hun

Preeta :aap rukiye mein dhoondh deti hun .. she holds his hand and makes him side slowly.. she searches for it in fridge .

Rishabh :kya hua ? Mila..?

Preeta :nahin ! ..Koi nahin aap bahar table pe wait kijiye mein aata malke abhi roti bana deti hun 10 min mein .

Rishabh :10 min ?

Preeta :kyun ..? Jaldi hai apko ?

She takes out flour from cupbourd

Rishabh :haan wo mera matlab hai nahin.. mein roti bana lunga..aur aata bhi mal lunga aap mujhe dijiye ye aata ..

He takes it from her hand . Preeta takes it back nahin mein bana lungi.

Rishabh is in hurry and dont want her to do any work for him.

Rishabh tries to take it back in hurry ..

But it slips from their hand and flour spreads on floor with Bang and it gets on them too ..

Both rishabh and preeta face have flour spread on them.. and their clothes too..

Preeta laughs seeing rishabh in this state ..

He also starts laughing seeing her in such state ..

Kaise jeeyunga ..kaise batade mujhko tere bina plays ..


Preeta stops laughing and gets sad :shitt... ab aaj kisi ko roti nahin milegi .. kyunki saara aata gir gaya .

Rishabh : are apki waja se thodi gira .. meri waja se gira..

Rishabh listens some voice outside the kitchen.

Preeta : nahin rishabh ji galti meri hai ..meine..

Rishabh puts his finger on her lips .

Shhh..kitna bolti hain aap!

He looks outside someone coming.

Preeta looks into his eyes and is shocked.

Ishq ka rang safed piya

He holds her hand and makes her stand behind door of kitchen.

Naa chhal na kapat

Na bhed piya

He tries to leave preeta hand but she is lost in him and does not leave..

Sau rang mile to ek varga

Rishabh speaks slowly.. preeta ji.. haath chhodiye! Koi aa raha hai..

She dont leave .. as she was lost in himand confused what is he doing now..

Fir aatish ho ya bhed piya

Rishabh comes close to her and whispers in her ears.

"Koi aa raha hai.. "

She leaves her hand and gets scared from his voice..!

Rishabh : aap yahi par chhupi rehna aur bahar mat ana .. baaki mein sambhaal lunga.

Preeta is confused..

Rishabh goes in front of kitchen try acting of clearing flour.

Suddenly, Kareena comes inside.

Kareena : ye.. ye kya haal bana kar rakha hai kitchen ka..?

Rishabh turns to her .

Rishabh : Sorry wo .. galti se gir gaya ye.

Preeta is sad and confused..seeing all from back.

Kareena : wo preeta kahan hai ? Tu kyun bana raha hai roti.

Rishabh : wo nahane gayi thi to mein banane agaya roti.

Kareena :ruk.. mein abhi jaake us madam ki akal thikane lagake aati hun .

He hold kareena hand from going and points at preeta to keep hidden behind door .

Rishabh :aap kahin nahin jaa sakti . Mere saath ye saaf karwayie .. mujhe late ho rahi hai.. office jana hai.

Kareena :mein??

Rishabh :haan aap !

Kareena : ok .. tumhare liye ab ye bhi karna padega.. kaise din aagaye hain..

Preeta smiles seeing kareena state..

Rishabh moves his hand to signal her to go from there ..!

Kareena sees it and turns at back to see whome he is signalling at..

Rishabh turns her back to him... chaachi karo na help..

Kareena : Haan chalo jaldi se sab saaf karein..!

Preeta smiles at rishabh .. and says thank u slowly.. and runs from there.

She clears her cloth by her hands and after clearing the flour she goes upstairs to her room fastly

Now preeta is in her room .

She talks to herself.

"Wo kehte hain na.. bhagwan jo karta hai achchha karta hai .. maybe meri kismat rishabh ji se judi thi karan se nahin isiliye itna sab hone ke bawjud meri shaadi rishabh ji jaise achchhe insaan se hui jo dusron ki galtiyon ka ilzaam bhi apne upar le lete hain.."

She smiles ..and is a bit emotional.

Edited by jaanulovejaanam - 6 years ago
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glad that preeta realized that she is lucky to have a husband like rishab n it was nice to see her remembering how he made her happy when she was sad.rishta scene with song was romantic. rishta saying sorry together was cute .surprised to see preeran nok jhok. krithika preeta scene was nice

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oh so karan realized that rishab loves preeta n convinced rishab to marry preeta to save her from prithlyn.preeta confessing love to karan..karan lying to preeta that he doesnt love her n asking her to marry rishab was emotional

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Posted: 6 years ago
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rishta flour scene was cute.preeta lost in him was surprising.loved preeta realizing that she is made for rishab

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uff!!!!! This is so nice!

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Part 15

After changing her clothes,preeta was going toward stairs.

Just then..she watches Karan going close to mahira and flirting with her proposing her .

Preeta moves back in anger and heartbreak.

She runs back thinking what is happening with her.. why she is getting affected with him

Preeta :usko meri koi fikar nahin..to mujhe kyun ho rahi hai uski itti fikar..

Preeta arora move on..

Auchh.. (she ends up bumping on rishabh and he catches her by holding her tightly from waist)

Her eyes are closed and he was all adoring her .. lost in her completely😍❤

Tere dil mein meri dhadkane thi
Tujhko na aayi nazar

Her hairs were flying and eyes closed as she is scared.


Mera ishq mujh mein saans le raha tha
Tujhko hui na khabar

She opens her eyes slowly and looks into rishabh eyes who is staring at her intensely.

She smiles out of relief that he didnt let her fall.

Tere alaawa jaan gaye sab
Tujhpe main kinna marda aan

Rishabh too smiles back to her and is lost in her.

Tujhe kaise pata na chala
Ki main tennu pyaar karda aan

Her both hands on his chest and unknowingly both are so close to each other.

Just then karan comes and see them.

He gets jealous seeing them and without disturbing them starts going away.

He bumps to mahira.

Mahira is shocked seeing karan jealous of preeta rishabh.

Mahira :karan ..tum

Karan goes away from there in anger without listening to her.

Rishabh helps preeta in standing up.

Rishabh : are u ok ?

Preeta : ya

Mahira : karan mujhe aisa kyun lag raha hai ki tumne apne bhai ke liye apne pyaar ki kurbani de di ?

Mujhse shaadi tumne isliye ki taki preeta bhi rishabh se shaadi kar le.

She looks at rishabh so happy with preeta.

Chalo kisi ko to uska pyaar mila .. !

Rishabh :waise preeta ji ap khud se kya badbad kar rahi thi..

Preeta :badbad aur mein..she smiles.. never..!

Rishabh :really ?

Preeta :mm

Rishabh :aapko nahin lagta jabse humari shaadi hui hao tabse aap khoi khoi si rehne lagi hain..?

Preeta : im fine rishabh ji. Aap meri chinta mat kariye .

Rishabh :chinta to hogi ab mujhe ..nachahte hue bhi

Preeta :aisa kyun?

Rishabh : kyunki rishta jo jud chuka hai ab humare beech .

Preeta looks into his eyes which has lots of depth .

Preeta : mein ayi abhi .

She is confused and goes.













Edited by jaanulovejaanam - 6 years ago
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Part 16

Rishabh is in his room thinking of preeta and his fall and catch and smiling unknowingly..

He moves back lost in her thoughts and shrink his hair and collides with preeta .

Sorry! ..Preeta says..

Rishabh : Nahin aap kyun sorry bol rahi hain..mein sorry!

Preeta smiles..

Rishabh sees tears of water drops all over her face .

He takes his towel and starts clearing those drops from her face full of care..

He dont realise preeta feeling awkward and confused with this.

Preeta stares at him and looks into his eyes.

Mere saare vaade vaade

Reh gaye aadhe

Hai kasoor kya, hai kasoor kya haan

He looks into preeta eyes who is lost in him.

Jeet ke bhi haare haare

Khwaab yeh bechare

She also gets lost in him for a moment.

Yeh fitoor kya, yeh fitoor kya

Duniya deewani, ishq na jaane

Both r so close to each other unknowingly..

Duniya deewani, ishq na jaane

Dil to bas dil ko pehchane..

Their eyes are stuck on each other .

Suddenly some sound comes from outside and their eyelock breaks and both gets confused..

Both try to avoid each other in confusion

Preeta :pani

Rishabh :mein deta hun..

Both moves together and end up hitting each other head

Nainon se naina takraye

They look into each other eyes

Na jaane kya dhoonde akhiyaan

Then try to avoid it and go but again collides with each other.

Dhoondhe akhiyan

This happens again and this time rishabh stops preeta holding her.


Kaise tumhein yeh samjhaye

Pehle mein jata hun udhar fir aap jana.

Na jaane kya doondhe akhiyaan

He moves aside and gives her space to walk back

She walk back and stares at him confusedly and is a bit lost in him..

Dhoonde akhiyaan

She drinks lots of water in confusion and feeling awkward

Rishabh comes and hold her hand and stops her from drinking more..

Rishabh :preeta ji aap 3 glass paani ke pee chuki hain.


Heer na jaane, na jaane Ranjha

Jaane yeh kaisi dor

Preeta feels a bit different with his holding her hand.

Jud jaaye to tode na toote

He realises his hand on her hand and moves away .. sorry!

Ishq ki aisi dor

Preeta : its ok !

Log deewane dete hain taane

She tries to fake smile to him in confusion .

Log deewane dete hain taane

Rishabh is confused and looking into her eyes that what is happening to her..?

Dil to bas dil ki hi maane

Preeta :wo mujhe bohot pyaas lagi thi na ..isliye..

Nainon se naina takraye

Rishabh :ok.. relax !

She looks into his eyes which telling to her how much he care for her .

Na jaane kya dhoonde akhiyaan

He finds lots of confusion in her eyes and he too gets confused..

Dhoonde akhiyaan

Edited by jaanulovejaanam - 6 years ago
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Hai!!!!! ye confusion!!

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