Rishabh-Preeta ff //Unkahee Mohabbat (part 20 updated on page 7) - Page 5

Part 17

Preeta is cooking food in kitchen .

Preeta is banging the utensils while washing them fastly in confusion thinking of what happened some time before just.

"Kya ho gaya hai mujhe ? Im married now. Rishabh ji mere pati hain. Theek hi to kaha na unhone rishta jud chuka hai ab humara!"

Rishabh comes in kitchen ,preeta gets more confused and starts washing utensils fastly.

Rishabh comes behind preeta .. "Preeta ji wo"

She moves a back in confusion and both collides and they slip on the floor together holding each other hands.

Auchh!

Rishabh :preeta ji aap ye kaise dho rahi thi bartan?

Preeta in confusion ..

Kaise matlab?

Rishabh : neeche dekhiye .. sab paani paani hai .

Preeta..smiles a bit in confusion .

Sorry...Meri waja se aap !

Rishabh :its ok but isse pehle koi aye ..we have to clean it .

Preeta :mm

Rishabh :kahan lost hain aap.. mera haath pakadiye.

Preeta :han ..kyun ?

Rishabh was like what is wrong with her today?why is she so lost ??

Rishabh holds preeta hand himself and holds a stool near them to stand together.

She too holds him from shoulder and both stand together.

Rishabh tries to go but preeta is lost in his eyes. She was looking at how much depth he has in his eyes telling his honesty..care for her and how much good person he is .

Kya hua ...?

Preeta :wo apki ankhein ..

Rishabh :meri ankhein ?

Preeta stops realising what she is about say ..

Preeta :kuchh nahin.. apki ankhein bohot laal ho gayi hain..lagta hai aap theek se soye nahin kal and dark circles bhi hone lage hain..

She says it in confusion fastly to avoid him.

Rishabh :what .. ?

Preeta takes her hand away from him.. and starts going..

Rishabh holds her hand back .

She gets shocked and confused.

song plays..

Mein laakh sambhal ke jaani

Rishabh : rukiye paani mein fisal jayengi aap

Tu nadiya aur mein pani

she adores him and her hairs start flying a bit.

Ek tujhmein hi behne ka rasta mil gaya

Pehle mein clean kar dun.

He goes out of kitchen .

Sau baar samajh ke jaani

Preeta thinks whats happening to her.

Tera kissa meri kahani

He comes and holds her hand .. and makes her side..

Jo jud jaye to mukammal vasta

She keeps adoring him.

Fir se mujhe ik dafa

He starts cleaning the floor with cloth .

Hai bas tujhe dekhna .

She keeps adoring him.

He looks back at her smiling at him.

Rishabh :kya hua apko ?

Preeta smiles : kuchh nahin.. wo aap saaf karte hue bohot cute lag rahe the..

Rishabh smiles.. :aap bhi na ..!

Preeta : koi itna achchha kaise ho sakt hai .. yahin agar karan hota to mujhe datta dumbo bolta kehta mujhe kuchh kaam karna nahin ata ..sara pani faila diya

She keeps adoring rishabh ji.

Sona sona itna bhi kaise tu sona!

Tere ishq mein jogi hona

Meinu jogi hona..

Meinu jogi hona.. meinu jogi hona.

Just then rakhi comes..

Rakhi : Ye ..ye mein kya dekh rahi hun puttar ji? Meri bahu samne khadi hai aur tu pocha laga raha hai .ab tu ye kaam bhi karega ?

Preeta :wo mummy ji mein..

Rishabh :wo preeta ji ko pairo mein lag gayi wo fisal gayi thi pani mein ..to mein just unki help kar raha hun.

Rakhi gets worries.

Rakhi :preeta puttar tu theek to hai ?

Preeta looks at rishabh signalling her by winking his eyes smilingly (to tell her its ok to say a bit lie )

Preeta :ji mummy ji mein theek hun ...

Rakhi takes her .. chal beta rest kar le room mein ja ke ..

She looks back at rishabh cleaning the floor and smiles.

Rakhi :chal beta.

Preeta goes with her.

oh preeta jealous seeing karan mahira together.why was karan flirting with mahira?was it to show preeta?preeta bumping into rishab n the whole scene was romantic. omg even karan is jealous seeing rishta.good that mahira doubts that karan sacrificed his love.the last rishta conversation especially rishab's dialogues were lovely

rishta eye lock was romantic. rishab wiping her tears was lovely.realizing that his hand is on her n taking it off apologizing to her was lovely.water scene was cute

the kitchen scene was very romantic n cute .rishab helping preeta in cleaning n preeta getting impressed was lovely

Part 18

Preeta is in her room . Her hairs flying and she is looking at the window.

Cool wind is blowing.

Preeta :mujhe kya ho raha hai.. laga tha jab karan se door ho jaungi to mano jeena bhool jaungi but mein abhi bhi kahin na kahin happy feel kar rahi hun.. kyun ??

Jab us karele ko meri parwa nahin to mein kyun karun uski koi parwah

Haan mein usse pyaar karti hun par pyaar mein vishwaas aur dosti sabse jaruri hain..wo mujhe kabhi samajh hi nahin paya shayad..

Ye shadi bohot badi zimmedari hai.. kaise nibhaungi mein is rishte ko ?

Rishabh comes in room just then and listens she is talking to herself.

Preeta : cheejein jitti simple dikhti hain utni hai nahin..

Rishabh confused and is thinking what simple?

Preeta :yahan mein itti imperfect hun .. aur rishabh ji itte perfect .koi mel nahin hai hum dono ka!

Rishabh is a bit hurt.

Rishabh calls her from back

" Preeta ji kisne kaha apse ki aap imperfect hain? "

Preeta :aap..?

Rishabh :boliye..

Preeta :kisi ko kehne ki kya jaroorat hai ..I know I am imperfect.

She turns away sadly back to window side

Rishabh comes in front of her on window side and hold her shoulders comforting her.

Preeta : kisne kaha apse ki aap perfect nahin..

Meri nazron se dekhiye to.. (he stops realising what he was about to say ..)

Preeta : to ?

He takes his hand back from her shoulders.

Rishabh : to pata chalega ki ..ki ap mein koi kami nahin..

Aur waise bhi koi perfect nahin hota .. just dil achchha hona chahiye !😍

Preeta is emotional and lost in his eyes..

Rishabh : preeta ji ..meine jab apko first time dekh tha na tab hi samajh gaya tha ki apke dil mein koi chhal kapat nahin..

He keeps speaking .. and she gets lost in him.. adoring him

Mere dil mein teri dhadkanein thi..

Tujhko na ayi nazar..

Rishabh is busy qppreciating her and she is adoring him.. and smiling..without any reason.

Tera ishq mujh mein saans le raha tha

Tujhko hui na khabar

Rishabh turns to her and sees preeta lost.. in her thoughts..

Preeta ji ?

Tere ilawa jaan gaye sab

He moves his hand up and down infront of her

Tujhpe mein ..kinna mardi

Rishabh comes near preeta and whispers in her ears

"Preeta ji "...

She comes out of her world and gets shocked..

Rishabh :aap kahan kho gayi thi ?

Preeta :wo..mein..wo..

Rishabh :wo kya ?

Preeta :mein..

Just then rishabh phone rings..

Rishabh : ohh...important call hai...

Mein aya abhi !

He goes to talk.

preeta is still lost ...in her world of unknown love..

Tujhse kaise pata na chala

Ki mein tenu pyaar kardi

Part 19

Preeta looks at outside .. its so good weather .

She closes her eyes..

Preeta : god mujhe jo chahiye tha wo mujhe nahin mila .. but jiski jarurat thi.. wo de diya apne mujhe !

She looks at the sky from window..

Preeta :aaj mausam kitta achchha hai ..

Scene changes outside home .

Preeta goes there and starts walking . Her hairs flying.

Rishabh too comes there.

Rishabh : aap yahan par hain..aur mein poore ghar mein dhoondh raha tha ...

She turns toward him and shuts his mouth with her hands.

Chup.

Preeta : aap na.. apni ankhein band kijiye .

Rishabh confused.... and speaks..mm

Preeta takes off her hand from his mouth .

Preeta : Wo..sorry

Rishabh :its ok..

Preeta is silent.

Rishabh :apne ankhein band karne ko kyun kaha

Preeta :kariye na .. pls mere liye !

Rishabh :ok baba

He closes his eyes..

Rishabh : Karli.. ab ?

Preeta : ab gehri saans lijiye.

Rishabh shocked : whatt?

Preeta was about to speak.. : aap..

Rishabh :preeta ji ankehin band krne ki kya jarurat hai gehri saans lene ke liye.. aap..

She shuts his mouth to stop him from speaking .

Preeta :apko chup rehna nahin ata ..na

Both feels that moment and gets lost in that moment .

Preeta hairs start flying..

Tum mere ho is pal mere ho

Kal shayad wo alam na rahe

Preeta adores rishabh

Kuchh aisa ho tum tum na raho

Rishabh eyes are closed and he just want this moment to stop.

Kuchh aisa ho hum hum na rahe

Ye raste alag ho jaye

Both r shown together.

Chalte chalte hum kho jayein..

Preeta gets in her senses back.. by drop of water on her eyes..

She moves back .

Baarish..

Rishabh opens her eyes..

Baarish ho rahi hai thodi thodi..

Rishabh looks at sky..

Preeta turns her back and looks at diff side to avoid getting confused more..

Rishabh :apne mujhe gehri saans lene ko kyun kaha?

She smiles..

Preeta : aap bhi na.. kuchh nahin samajhte !

Rishabh confused.

Rishabh :aap samjhaiye to sahi.. kyun nahin samjhunga.. he comes towards her and slips as the floor is wet and preeta to turns back .. both collides and get so close to each other unknowingpy while supporting each other

Both says together :aap thik hain?

Then both smiles together and adores each other a bit.

Preeta :rishabh ji aap na bohot serious types hain

Rishabh :kyun serious aap nahin hain..?

He makes her stand properly and backs off.

Preeta :mein .. mein serious nahin thi but life mujhe serious bana di ..

Rishabh :mm.. same here !

Preeta : life ki problems ke beech ..log kya sochenge .. duniya kya sochegi .. ab kya hoga kal kya hoga.. is sab ke beech hum apni life jeena bhool jate hain..

Rishabh :mm ..

Preeta looks at rishabh .

Preeta :jab mein apse mili thi na starting mein to mujhe aap bohot jyada focused lage.. thode se boring aur bohot jyada serious .

Yaad hai apne mujhe bataya tha ki aap apne bade papa ke jaane ke baad sab sambhalne lage young age mein aur is sab mein khud ki life jeena hi bhool gaye..

Rishabh is sad.

Preeta comes toward him and hold his hand.

Preeta : Abhi bhi der nahin hui hai. Apni life apni sharton pe khul ke jee ke to dekhiye ek baar.

Rishabh : apni sharton pe life jeena to kabhi meine seekha hi nahin.. ghar mein sabse jyada ladla karan tha and u r right mein to serious bachcha tha focus.. he smiles a bit emotionally hiding his sadness.

Rain starts heavily.

Rishabh looks at sky.. uff baarish .. he holds preeta hand .

Chaliye andar.

Preeta :nahin aaj nahin!..aaj ye chance miss kar diya to fir pata nahin kabhi aye na aye !

Rishabh :kaisa chance..? Aap bimaar ho jayengi ..

Preeta takes off his hand and runs forward..

Himmat hai to mere pichhe ayiye .. aur mujhe pakadke apne saath le jayie..😅😍

Rishabh : uff.. ye preeta ji bhi na.. kai baar bilkul bachchon jaise behave karti hain..

Preeta smiles and doing it all intentionally..for rishabh !

preeta realized that without karan too she can be happy was sweet.loved rishab telling preeta that in his eyes she is perfect

loved preeta saying that God didn't give her want she wanted but gave her what she deserved.preeta making rishab close his eyes to feel the breeze was lovely.rishab slipping ...rishta colliding n eye lock was romantic. preeta in rain to cheer up rishab was cute.loved preeta telling rishab to live his life openly

thank u jasmine and all for ur lovely feedback ..keep loving and supporting .

Part 20

Preeta is running forward fastly .Its raining heavily and Rishabh was like what is this bachpana.. uff!🤔

He is also running behind her on road fastly.. to stop her .

Rishabh : Preeta ji ... bas bohot ho gaya ... mein haar manta hun !

preeta smiles and looks back...❤️

Preeta : aise kaise ... rishabh ji? meine to socha tha ki aap harne walo mein se nahin..!

Rishabh : Preeta ji ab bas bhi kijiye .. aa jayie .. aur nahin bhaga ja raha ...

Preeta think aaj agar inko wapas bachcha nahin banaya na to mera naam bhi preeta arora nahin...!

she starts running again..

"himmat hai to pakadke lejaiye apne sath! "

rishabh : ye kya fitoor sawar ho gaya hai inhein aaj ??

he too starts running again behind her ...

rishabh :preeta ji sambhal ke chot lag jayegi ...

preeta : mujhe kuchh nahin hogaaa..

and suddenly truck comes in front of her and someone hand pulls her strongly to his side saving her.

preeta eyes were closed... and she opens her eyes slowly and found herself in arms of rishabh hugging him..

she hugs him tightly in fear closing her eyes ...

rishabh holds her shoulder and moves her back..slowly.

rishabh : apko apni jara bhi parwa nahin...

preeta:im sorry..wo

rishabh scolds her holding her shoulder : kya sorry ?haan... bachchon ki tarah road pe kaun bhagta hai ?kabse awaz laga raha tha rukjaiye bas kijiye par nahin...ap to apni alag hi dhun mein thi...

she was sad.

"kabhi socha hai agar apko kuchh ho jata to mera kya hota ?"

she was shocked hearing this.

preeta :kya matlab ?

rishabh :matlab..matlab kya ?dost hai na hum ? aur ek dost apne dost ko khone se darega nahin kya ? 😭❤️

but apko kiski padi hai... apko sirf apni padi hai .

he turns at different direction angrily folding his hands accross each other .

preeta is emotional and his words touched her heart.

preeta holds his hand and comes in front of him.

"kaha na sorry ! apni dost ko maaf nahin karenge aap? "

rishabh heart melts seeing her sad and head down in guilty.

rishabh: fine! kiya maaf !

preeta :sachchi? (she said in happiness)

rishabh is still a bit angry :haan!

he starts going.. ab chalein ya yahin khade rehna hai poori raat...?

she runs behind him..

haan chaliye.. but aaj ek baat to saaf hogayi mr angry luthra bohot cute lagte hain gusse mein..

rishabh smiles a bit seeing her with full of love in his eyes.. she too looks at him with full of unknown love in her eyes.❤️

preeta :chalein?

rishabh :haan!

they sit in car and starts going home back.