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Posted: 6 years ago
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Part 3

Rishabh Karan thinks to tell truth to all and starts going.

Rakhi :Ye mein kya sun rahi hun ? Tujhe shaadi nahin karni ? Shaadi kya gudda guddi ka khel hai tum logon ke liye jo aaj haan to kal naa??

Karan :mom aap galat samjh rahe ho ..

Rakhi :Bas karan !bohot hua tum sab ka . Rishabh karan to aisa hi hai but tujhe kya hua hai .. kahan gaye mere sanskaar ? Kya yahi sikhaya hai meine tujhe ki pehle waade karo shaadi ke fir mukar jao ?bol..?

He dont say anything

Rishabh meine kaha jawaab de !!

Rishabh :haan nahin karna chahta mein ye shaadi ! Kyunki is shaadi se koi khush nahin rahega maa ..

Rakhi :tujhe aisa kisne kaha ?

Rishabh :kya kisi ne mujhse poochha ek baar bhi ki mein kya chahta hun ? Shaadi karna bhi chahta hun ? Kya mein sherlin se pyaar karta hun ?

Rakhi :mujhe kuchh nahin sunna .. tumne sherlin ko shaadi ka waada kiya tha bhool gaye tumhari engagement ho chuki hai uske saath . Kya meine yahi seekh di hai tujhe ek ladki ko beech mandap mein thukra dena sirf isliye kyunki ab tera man nahin hai shaadi karne ke liye !

Rishabh :mom samajhne ki koshish karo ..

Rakhi :bas ab agar tune shaadi nahin ki to mera mara muh dekhega.. samjha !

Bol karega shaadi ya nahin ?

Rishabh is broken.he angrily goes from there in hall to marry sherlin.

Karan :mom aap..

Rakhi :karan tujhe meri kasam hai ab tune shaadi rokne ki koshish ki na to dekh lena..

Karan is sad too much .

Scene shifts to mandap

Pandit ji ranting mantras .

Sherlin :rishabh mein jeet gayi aur tum raam jaise seedho ho isliye haar gaye .

Tumhare paas saari qualities hain ek perfect man ki but mujhe kya .. mujhe to mere punnu baby se matlab hai . Agar tum meri prithvi se shaadi na rokte to mein tumhari life barbaad karne tumhare peechhe kabhi na padti .

But bachchu just wait and watch niw .. tumhari life battar na bana di na to mera naam bhi sherlin nahin aur tumse tumhari preeta ko humesha ke liye alag nahin kiya to kya fayda tumse shaadi karne ka . Main maksad hai mera tum dono ko alag karna barbaad kar dena ki tum kisi layak na raho .. ohh wo kehte hain na.. "na ghar ke .. na ghaat ke " she smiles evily and looks at rishabh .


Rishabh is so sad upset and broken inside ..

Kehte hain jodiyan upar wala banata hai but ye apne kya kiya mere saath bhagwaan ?

Sirf meri hi nahin sherlin ki bhi life destroy ho jayegi mujhse shaadi kar ke .. kyunki mein usse pyaar nahin karta aur shayad use wo khushi wo hak nahin de paunga kabhi jo wo deserve karti hai .

Kehte hain logo ke bhagya ek dusre ke saath jude hote hain. Mere bhagya mein sherlin hi thi to mujhe pyaar preeta se kyun hua.. ??

Pyaar sirf ek baar hota hai aur wo meine preeta ji se kiya hai .. par na jane kismat ko kya manzoor hai . Shaadi ke baad shayad preeta ji is ghar mein bhi naa apayein .. na mein preeta ji se apni dosti nibha paunga aur na apna rishta sherlin se ,kahaan fas gaya mein !

Rishabh closes his eyes

He remembers preeta and his moments . Their holding hands together,kitchen moment when their hand touched unknowingly ,how both helped each other in fire and putted hankey over each other mouth to help each other in breathing.

Shayad mera pyaar ka yahi mukaam tha . He has tears in his eyes ..

Pandit ji ranting mantras and rishabh all lost in preeta and his moments .

Mahesh:kritika dekh rishabh lost hai .. pata hai wo kya soch raha hai ?

Kritika :nahin papa.... Waise bhi bhai ye shaadi nahin karna chahte the ..

Mahesh: ye preeta ke baare mein soch raha hai .. aur un palon ko yaad kar ke ro raha hai . Yehi to true love hai..

Shaadi parivaar ke liye kar raha hai par uska dil aur dhadkan to kisi aur ke paas hai . Kritika tu sun rahi hai na.. ye ..

He turns back .. kritika not there..

Iska matlab isne kuchh nahin suna.. chhodo jisko pata chalna chahiye tha use to kuchh pata nahin chala ab bhagwan ko hi pata wo kya chahta hai !

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Posted: 6 years ago
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Part 4

In hall,

Rishabh and sherlin stands for phere . Rishabh starts taking rounds with a broken heart .

Raam raam jai raaja raam plays..

He remembers preeta and him colliding on holi

Raam raam jai seeta raam ...

He remembers how he catched her from falling

He is lost in their moments and taking rounds..

Raam raam jai raaja raam ..

He remembers her dupatta blowing on his head as a sign of destiny.

Raam raam jai seeta raam .

Their hands touching to each other unknowingly .

He has tears in his eyes .. his phere about to complete .

Raam raam jai raja raam..

He remembers his and preeta hands touching unknowingly in kitchen .

Raam raam jai seeta raam..

He remembers her taking him away by holding his hand and moving forward of him ..

And his phere completed. Now its sherlin turn to take rounds forward .

She takes all rounds one by one

And then pandit ji said :aaj se aap dono pati patni hue. Apne badon ka aashirvaad le lo!

All are upset with this marriage leaving rakhi kareena sherlin and prithvi .

Prithvi :to finally ab ye raam.. uff rishabh ki shaadi ho hi gayi .. ab ye meri seetaji yani preetaa.. ji.. se door rahega humesha ..

Mera badla poora hua..ab isko iski seeta ji kabhi nahin milengi!

He smiles evily.

Rishabh and sherlin takes aashirvad from all elders.

Rishabh comes to take aashirwad from his father mahesh.

Mahesh :beta aakhir tune kar hi li shaadi. Mabarak ho.

He hugs rishabh emotionally.

Tune khud apne haathon se apni zindagi barbaad kar li..

Then they go to take others aashirwad

Preeta dadi is sad.. ye kya ho gaya .. itna achha bhi nahin hona chahiye kisi ko iski tarah ki wo kabhi apne liye kuchh kar hi na paye.

Shrishti :mm sahi kaha apne dadi .Sameer listens and is sad..

Scene shifts to rishabh home .

Grahpravesh happen and all other rasams too ..

Its time for ring ceremony now and rishabh ends up finding the ring in rasam as a result he won.

Raakhi and kareena sad that aaj tak is parivaar mein bahuon ki chali hai to sherlin ko jeetna chahiye tha taaki uski chale .

Karan ,sameer and shrishti are angry .

Rishabh dadi :dulhan jeetti hai to uski chalti hai .. wo naya dulha laa sakti hai apne liye par yahan to dulha jeeta to kahin ye apne liye nahin beewi na le aaye... she laughs..

All r shocked.. she understands ohh ye maine kya bol diya.. kuchh jyada hogaya sorry..!

Kareena and rakhi smiles.. :aap bhi naa..!

Scene shifts to karan room

Karan:Bhai humesha us preeta preeta ki maala japta raha .. uspe sabse zyada bharosa kiya but usne kya kiya dhoka!

jhoot bola ki wo report layegi.... I hate u preeta arora.

Sameer comes :bhai aap..

Karan :dekh sammy mujhe koi baat nahin karni tu jaa yahan se..

He bangs the door on his face.

And cries sitting on floor.

Jisko apna samjha usi ne dhoka diya ..

Sameer: bhai ko itta upset kabhi nahin dekha ..

Rishabh at sherlin room

Rishabh comes inside .. and see sherlin in ghunghat sitting on bed and smiling .

He starts going out of room then stops and thinks at karan words .

Flashback :bhai ye dekh msg. Sach yahi hai ..preeta ko sherlin ki preganancy report mil gayi thi aur usne kaha wo aa rahi hai. Mein pagalon ki tarah uska intezaar karta raha ki preeta ab ayegi..ab ayegi par wo nahin ayi .

Rishabh is broken.

Karan :wo dhokebaaz hai .. gaddar hai ..sherlin ke saath mil gayi

Rishabh :sirf kyunki wo nahin ayi isliye tune man liya ki usne tujhe dhoka diya.. ?

Karan :bhai .. bhai tu kis mitti ka bana hai ..usko koi parwa nahin hai humari.. bik gayi wo sherlin ke haathon..

Rishabh :karan...! Ye kya bol raha hai ? (He shouts at him )

Sirf isliye kyunki wo yahan nahin ayi isliye tune unke saath itta ganda bartaav kiya ?

Unhein dhakke.maar ke ghar se bahar nikala .

Flashback :karan pulls preeta hand and drags her from stairs to out of house.. in btw rishabh stops her and hold her hand ..

Rishabh :Chhod preeta ji ka haath.. mein kaha karan chhod preeta ji ka haath !

He dragged her and rishabh preeta hand hold broken . He throws her out of the house.

Flashback ends.

Karan :bhai mera bas chalta to mein us preeta ka gala daboch leta ..

Rishabh shouts and about to slap karan :karann!!

He controls himself .

Karan :tujhe us preeta pe itna wishwas hai jitna tu mujhpe bhi nahin karta tha kabhi !just because wo nahin chahti tu shaadi kare.. tu ye baat sunte hi palat gaya and shaadi ke liye mana kar diya .. woow.. !!

But bhai wo ladki hum dono ke pyaar ke layak nahin.. dhokebaaz hai wo .. dhokebaaz samjha tu ..

Flashback ends..

Rishabh enters in room back and thinks to face sherlin.

He avoids her and says: mujhe gutan ho rahi hai..if u dont mind ..mein window khol lun room ki ?

Sherlin nods for yes in ghunghat

Rishabh opens the window .

And stands there.

Sherlin feels odd

Rishabh looks at sky sadly .

Rishabh:aaj mausam bohot shaant lag raha hai

Sherlin feels angry . She thinks :mujhe yahan chhod ke .. ab kya ye mausam ki baatein karega mere se.. how boring!!

Rishabh :mausam jitna shaant dikh raha hai utna shaant hai nahin.. tufaan ane wala hai !

Sherlin :tufaan to yahan tumhare paas jo ghunghat mein betha hai rishabh..

Ye tufaan tumhe aur preeta ko ab kabhi ek nahin hone dega..aur tumhe barbaad kar chhodega.. !

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Posted: 6 years ago
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Part 5

Its next day.

Rishabh is sitting on chair .

Sherlin comes from washroom and goes to hall as rakhi called her.

Rishabh :kaisi life hai ye .. kya yehi meri destiny hai .. ?

Mere saath hi aisa kyun hota hai bhagwaan. Bhagwan bhi kya kar sakta hai jab meine khud apne pairon pe kulhadi maar li. Kabhi apne dil ki baat nahin batayi ..

Tears fall from his eyes..

He hits his hand on table and hurts himself .

Rishahh tu ek no ka gadha hai idiot ..

Bohot shauk hai na tujhe mahaan banne ka .. sabki suni but apne dil ki nahin suni..

Apne liye kab jeeyega tu rishabh..kab ...

He is heartbroken..

Dil ka dariya beh hi gaya

Ishq ibadat ban hi gaya

Rishabh opens the window.. wind blowing.. he looks at sky and then closes his eyes..

Khud ko mujhe tu sonp de

(He remembers how he and preeta happily hold each other hands and laugh..)

Meri zaroorat tu ban gaya

(When she put hands on his ears .. and he gets lost in her eyes..)

Baat dil ki nazron ne ki

(He remembers her looking into his eyes full of care and trust)

Sach keh raha teri kasam

(When he told her :mujhe koi gam nahin hota agar mein apke saath us aag mein jal bhi jaata to and she was shocked and lost in him thinking how anyone can do so for someone..)

Tere bin ab na lenge ik bhi dum

(When he got married with sherlin without wish )
Tujhe kitna chahne lage hum

He cries and rests his head at window.

Tere sath ho jayenge khatam

(He closes his eyes and remember how he adore preeta and helps her choosing earings)
Tujhe kitna chahne lage hum

Scene shifts to preeta

Kitti badi idiot gadhi hun mein jo rishabh ji ko kuchh sach na bata payi ..unhone mere liye kya uchh nahin kiya..par mein unki life barbaad hone se nahin rok payi ..!

She is in tears.. karan.. wo mera best frd mujhe na jan saka na samajh saka apni preeta ko .

Bhagwan ye kya kiya apne.. achchhe logo ke saath humesha achchha hota hai dadi kehti hain.. to fir rishabh ji jaise achchhe insaan ke saath itni nainsafi kyun ?

Mujhe rishabh ji ko sab sach batana hi hoga. Wo jarur samjhenge .. to kya hua karan ne meri baat nahin mani to .. mein haar nahin manungi aur rishabh ji ka sab sach janna unka hak hai !

Edited by jaanulovejaanam - 6 years ago
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Posted: 6 years ago
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sad that Rakhi blackmailed rishab to marry sherlin emotionally.rishab remembering preeta while taking phera with sherlyn was touchy.I was expecting bride swap n rishta wedding .but sad that rishlyn got married.loved Rishab scolding karan n telling not to call preeta a cheater.

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Part 6

At preeta house ,

She is getting ready .

Preeta : tumhe kya laga ki mein haar man jaungi karan ? Nahin.. mein humari dosti ke khatir tumhe fir sab sach bataungi ..

Tum samajhte kyun nahin karan I need you .. sherlin ko expose karna hai kisi bhi halat mein!

She goes in hurry.

Scene changes at rishabh house ,

Rishabh comes from washroom after having bath in towel .

He see his shirt on bed and wear it ... he looks in his almira for his jeans .. yahan pe meri jeans nahin hai ..

mom bhi na .. mera samaan idhar udhar kardeti hain humesha ..!

Preeta comes in rishabh room in hurry to tell him truth..He turns back and collides with her and both looses their balance and preeta falls over rishabh on floor.

His hairs are wet. He shrinks it and preeta gets its drop of water on her face and she moves her face bit away ..closing her eyes..

Rishabh adores her closing her eyes... and he is shocked too ..

Both say together :Sorry !!!

Just then sherlin comes and see preeta over rishabh on floor and rishabh in towel .

She shouts :aakhir dikha hi di na tumne apni aukaad preeta arora..!

They get shocked and see sherlin behind them.

They try to stand up but unable to .. somehow preeta stands and give her hand to rishabh to help him in standing.

Rishabh holds preeta hand to stand . Sherlin in anger seperates their hands .

Sherlin : ye tumhare rishabh ji nahin mere pati hain ab samjhi tum . She holds his hand

Rishabh in anger moves away his hand from hers.

Rishabh :bas karo sherlin.

He stand on his own .

Sherlin :mein bas karun aur ye .. dekha mein kaise bahon mein bahein dalke aap dono ek dusre pe gire hue the ...

Rishabh shouts sherlinn!! Be in ur limits! He was about to slap her and preeta holds his hand .

Preeta :rehne dijiye rishabh ji .. ye nahin samjhegi kuchh kyunki iske dimaag mein jo itni gandagi bhari hui hai .

Sherlin shouts :preeta get out !

All listens their voice and comes there

Preeta was about to go.. and she see full family there.

Sherlin sees in mirror full family behind.

She starts crying and try to act innocent .

Rakhi :puttar kya hua. Ye shor kaisa tha ?

Sherlin :maa wo rishabh aur preeta ..

Rakhi and others get confused..

Rakhi :kya hua bol beta..?

Sherlin :mein yahan room mein ayi aur aap jante hain mein kya dekha .. ?

meine dekha ki rishabh aur preeta ek dusre ki bahon mein bahein dale hue zameen pe..the

Mein apko keh rahi hun ye ladki preeta ye nahin chahti thi meri aur rishabh ji ki shaadi ho .. aur ab ye mere pati pe dore daal rahi hai!!

Rishabh moves forward in anger and slaps her

Ye thappad preeta ji ke baare mein galat bolne ke liye!

Rakhi too gets angry and slaps rishabh tightly return

Preeta puts her hands on her mouth in shock .

Rishabh is broken ..mom

Rakhi :mat kek mujhe apni mom.. kya meine tujhe yahi sanskar diye hain ki shaadi ke baad apni biwi pe haath utha aur chilla us pe ?

Rishabh :mein preeta ji ki insult hote nahin dekh sakta mom .

Sherlin :wow preeta ji .. itni maine ho gayi ab ki mera saath dene ki bataye aap ek parayi aurat ka saath de rahe hain ?

Rishabh is angry : sherlinn.. mat bhoolo preeta ji mere bohot kareeb hain ..unki bejjati yani meri bejjati .. agar tumne aur kuchh kaha to mein bhool jaunga tum kaun ho !!

Preeta has tears in her eyes and is emotional .

She starts going away from there.. .

Rishabh : preeta ji rukiye !

He too starts going behind her. Rakhi holds his hand to stop him.

Rakhi : Tu kahin nahin jayega samjha !

Rishabh :mom aaj nahin !... mein jaunga..

He goes ..in anger.

Preeta is going and rishabh holds her hand from back !

She turns .

Preeta :rishabh ji mujhe jaane dijiye !

Rishabh : mein apko kahin nahin jaane dunga! .. ye haath mein chhodne ke liye nahin pakda hai apka ! Aapko pata hai preeta ji... apke aane se pehle mein ghut ghut kar jee raha tha .. aap aayi to apne mujhe samjhaya ki khud ke liye jeena kya hota hai !

Tears fall from his eyes.

Preeta wipes his tears .

Preeta :rishabh ji aap aise kamzor nahin pad sakte ! Aap jante hain na ki mein apko rote hue nahin dekh sakti !

Rishabh looks at her emotionally .

Rishabh :preeta ji is duniya mein sabse zyada agar mujhe aaj tak kisi ne samjha hai to wo sirf aap hain . He shows finger at her and smiles in tears..

Preeta :mujhe to samajh nahin aata rishabh ji ..ki aap kis mitti ke bane hain.. itna kuchh hogaya ..apko karan ne sab bata diya hai usne mujhe kaha aur fir bhi aap mujhpe itna bharosa kar rahe hain ..

Aapko pata hai meri life mein jab bhi andhera ho jata hai koi roshni ki kiran nazar nahin aati.. tab qo roshni bankar aap meri life mein aate hain.. !

Mera sirf ek hi best frd tha ab tak aur wo tha karan .. par shyad wo mujhe kabhi jaan hi nahin saka apna hokar bhi aur ek aap the jisne ajnabi hokar bhi mujhe jaan liya mere bina kuchh kahe !

Aaj mein garv ke saath keh sakti hun ki "I am lucky to have you as my bestie ! "

Rishabh smiles and is too emotional ..

Rishabh :bestie ? Sachchi !

Preeta holds rishabh hand tightly :muchchi..

They both smiles and laugh a bit..

Rishabh gets sad suddenly.

Preeta :ab kya hua ?

Rishabh :mein apke dosti ke gift ke layak nahin preeta ji .. sherlin ko humari dosti se problem hai najane mein ye rishta kaise nibhaunga..

He puts his head down.

Preeta looks at him emotionally and touches his chin and makes him look at her.

Preeta : meri aankhon mein dekhiye, inko aappe poora trust hai ki aap har rishta imaandari se nibhayenge .

Rishabh and gets lost in each other eyes emotionally and intensely for some time and thinks how lucky they are to have each other in all their difficult times.

Song plays ...

Saans lene se bhi jyada tum zaroori ho gaye

Jee rahe the hum adhoore ..tum se poore ho gaye

Meri dhadkan..teri dhadkan ..

Dono dilo ki ik hai tarpan..

Edited by jaanulovejaanam - 6 years ago
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Part 7


A voice comes from outside and preeta rishabh eyelock breaks.

Preeta : rishabh ji mein chalti hun ab .

Rishabh :aise ..kaise preeta ji.. mein bhi chalta hun apko chhodne ..

Preeta smiles .. :really ? Aise hi ?

Rishabh :aise hi matlab ?

Preeta looks down at rishabh in towel .... and starts smiling ..

Rishabh understand ohh and realises..

He smiles .. shyingly ..

Wo.. wo Preeta ji aap bas wait kariye.. mein bas abhi aya chagr karke .. he starts going .. and stops .. aap kahin jana nahin pls

Preeta waits for him outside the house.

Rishabh comes there.

Rishabh :chalein ?

Preeta :yes

They both sit in rishabh car. Rishabh happiness faded away and he is lost . Preeta realises rishabh is sad..

Preeta thinks : wo haste khelte hue rishabh ji na jane kho gaye hain kahin .. and ye sab tumhari waja se hua hai sherlin ! I will not spare you !

Rishabh is driving but is lost somewhere ..

Preeta :rishabh ji ..

He dont listen

Rishabh ji...

Rishabh comes out of his world..

Rishabh :ji preeta ji !

Preeta :aap lost hain kahin .. ?

Rishabh :sab barbaat hogaya . I ruined my life with my own hands.. mein kabhi bata hi nahin paya apne dil ki baat kisi ko .. !

Preeta :kaunsi baat ?

Rishabh stops ..and realises he cant tell it to preeta now its too late..

Rishabh :preeta ji can i ask u .. something ?

Preeta :ji boliye

Rishabh :kya aap chahti thi ki mein sherlin se shaadi karun ?

Preeta :wo .. nahin .

Kynki wo ladki apko kabhi deserve hi nahin karti ..thi.

Rishabh is sad .. and in tears ..

Preeta thinks : rishabh ji mujhe pata hai apko khush kaise karna hai ..

She plays song .

Mein to tere naal hi rehna ji

Har gam sang tere sehna ji

Jo rab se kaha na jaye wo

Mujhko bas tujhse kehna ji..

Sohna sohna itna bhi kaise tu sona..

Tere ishq mein jogi hona

Meinu jogi hona.. ...

Preeta adores rishabh and sees an unknown smile on rishabh face..

she too smiles seeing him smiling .

Preeta happily says : Chalo ..my mission succeeded !!

Rishabh :kaunsa mission ?

Preeta :missing to return ur smile.

Rishabh stops the music .

Preetaji ye to bas palbhar ki khushi hai

Ab sab badal gaya hai.. humara rishta .. mera rishta sab .. ! He has tears in his eyes .

Preeta :rishabh ji gaadi rokiye ..

Rishabh :kyun .. kya hua ?

Preeta : rokiye na !

Rishabh stops the car ..

Preeta :Rishabh ji mein apse kuchh kahun

Rishabh nods.

Preeta :ap na kuchh jyada hi achchhe hain jiska aur log fayda utha lete hain kabhi kabhi . Apke jaisa meine aaj tak koi nahin dekha.. !

He intensly looks into her eyes emotionally.

Tears drop from his eyes.

She wipes his tears from her hands .

Preeta :doosron ki khushi ke liye jeena achchhi baat hai but is sab mein hum apni khushi ko bhool bethte hain .

Rishabh :u r right but aap bhi to wahi kar rahi hain ..

Preeta :matlab ?

Rishabh :matlab ye ki aap bhi to apne parivaar ki khushi ke liye prithvi se shaadi kar rahi hain

Jahan tak meine apko jaana hai ..samjha hai .. I know aap usse pyaar nahin karti and shayad itna pasand bhi nahin karti !

Preeta is sad..

Rishabh holds preeta hand ..

Rishabh :meri zindagi meine barbaad kardi but aap meri dost hain .. mein apki life barbaad hote nahin dekh sakta .

Preeta looks into his eyes with tears.

Rishabh :pls mana kar dijiye is shaadi ke liye !

Preeta :rishabh ji .. prithvi se mera rishta ho chuka hai .. ab yahi meri kismat hai .. pls samajhne ki koshish kijiye ..

Rishabh gets frustrated .. and angry ..

Right.. u r right.. meine bhi wahi kiya .. auron ko samjha khud ko nahin ! Usi ki saza bhugat raha hun ..

Preeta gets shocked to see his pain ..

Rishabh :meine bilkul perfect banne ka try kiya .. but kya hua ..? Sab galat ..

Mein kuchh nahin kar paa raha ab .. im feeling so helpless that u cant even imagine !

Apko pata hai shaadi kitta bada decision hota hai life ka ..

Preeta is emotional .

Rishabh realises he hurted her unknowingly .

Rishabh :im ..sorry ..wo meine apni frustration aap par nikal di ..galti se

Preeta :its ok . Rishabh ji . I can understand but ab kuchh nahin ho sakta .

We know sherlin galat hai .. proof hai mere paas !

But prithvi ji kaise galat hain.. karan ko wo nahin pasand maana and apko bhi nahin par we dont have any proof jo bata sake ki wo achchhe insaan nahin hai . Jitna meine unhein jaana ..hai . Mujhe lagta hai wo ek achchhe insaan hain .

Rishabh :aur agar mein proof ladoon apko ki prithvi galat insaan hai to ? To todengi aap ye shaadi ?

Preeta is confused.

Rishabh :boliye ? Do u trust me ? Agar mein saabit kar dun ki wo ladka apke layak nahin to kya aap meri baat manengi ?

Preeta :haan but aisa kuchh nahin ho sakta kyunki wo ek achchhe insaan hain .

Rishabh is angry ..

Preeta :rishabh ji i know ap mere frd hone ke naate .. bohot care karte hain meri ..and mere baare mein achchha hi chahenge humesha !

Both r emotional .

She plays the song again to divert rishabh mind .

He starts driving again .

He rememberes their moments together.

Ishq ka rang safed piya

(how preeta dupatta gets stuck in his watch ,when they laugh together )

Na chhal na kapat na bhed piya

(When prithvi try to colour preeta but he stops )

Sau rang mile to ik varga

(When he looks at her in mirror trying earings )

Fir aatish ho ya bhed piya ...

(When they dance together last time )


After some time ..

Rishabh :preeta ji apka ghar aagaya hai ..

Preeta starts going but stop.

Rishabh ji .. aap sherlin ko divirce de dijiye .. she dont deserve u .

Rishabh :aap prithvi se rishta tod dijiye agar mujhpe bharosa hai to . Wo ladka aapke layak nahin .

Preeta is in tears .

Rishabh goes ..

Preeta :kya sach mein prithvi ji ek achchhe insaan nahin hai.. ? Kya karan aur rishabh ji sahi sochte hain unke baare mein ?

Edited by jaanulovejaanam - 6 years ago
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Posted: 6 years ago
#17

Part - 8

aap thi saath to jaise jeena aagaya,❤️

aap nahin to jaise mein khudko hi bhool gaya !💔

kitni koshish ki meine ..miss na karun.. na karun 😒

par ye Dil Hai Ki Manta Hi Nahin !!! 😭



Rishabh is in his room working on laptop

Sherlin looks at him .

Sherlin :how boring.. jab dekho kaam kaam kaam... mere liye to koi fursat hi nahin hai .. !

Idea.. inka dhyaan batkati hun

She opens her almira and start acting of trying clothes one by one.

Sherlin :rishabh ji..

Rishabh acts to not listen.

Sherlin comes towards rishabh and closes his laptop .

Rishabh looks at her with fire in his eyes full of anger.

Sherlin gets scared and moves back.

Rishabh opens his laptop and starts working again.

Sherlin :wo mein confused thi aaj reception ke kya pehnu .aap help kar dete to..

Rishabh :jo theek lage wo pehen lo..!

Sherlin :par aap.

She comes towards him selecting few dresses.

Dekhiye aap aur batayie mujhpe kaunsi dress jyada achchhi lagegi party ke liye!

Rishabh looks at her with anger.

Rishabh :I dont know . Tumhe meri choice pasand nahin aane wali . Jaa ke dadi se poochh lo.

Sherlin :its enough..

She puts her hand on his laptop angrily.

Pati aap ho mere.. meine aapki choice poochhi hai .. apki dadi ki nahin..

Rishabh gets angry :sherlin what is wrong with u ?

Samajh nahin ata ya dikhayi najin deta that I am busy

Sherlin :mujhe sab samajh aata hai .. aur sab dikhayi bhi deta hai.. 10 din ho gaye meri shaadi ko .. apne ek bhi rasam dil se nahin nibhai na mujhe gift diya meri pehli rasoi ka . U know what .. u dont even care about me.. she starts acting to cry..

Apko sirf us preeta ki padi hai.. usi ke khalaon mein gum hain .. din raat usi ka khayal ata hai haina?

Rishabh gets damn angry and stands up ..

Bas sherlin be in ur limits.. har cheej mein preeta ji ko lane ki kya jarurat hai?

He goes outside the room banging the door.

Family listens their voice of shouting and is upset.. they see rishabh coming downstairs in anger.

All r shocked but rishabh does not notice and is in his own world .

He goes to kitchen and starts drinking water closing his eyes.

He remembers flashback .

Monisha holds rishabh neck

Monisha: I will kill u rishabh lutra !

Preeta holds her hand tightly and pushes her away from him and comes in front of him to save him.

Preeta :khabardaar agar rishabh ji ko chhua bhi tumne to !

Wo chup chaap kjade hain iska matlab ye nahin hai ki wo galat hain.

Wo chup hain par mein unki dhaal bankar unke saamne khadi hun .

Monisha :preeta hat jao mere samne se.. inhone mere ritvik ki jaan li hai gunegaar hain ye ..

Preeta :tumhara dimaag to theek hai . Jiske khud ke dimaag mein itni mail bhari ho usko sab galat hi lagte hain .. !

Rishabh ji ne kuchh galat nahin kiya .. wo ek aise insaan hain jo dusro ke liye jeete hain.. dusron ke toote hue dil ko jodte hain aur jo dil jodta hai use todna nahin aata! Pyaar aur rishte nibhana inhein achchhe se ata hai samjhi tum!

She points finger at monisha .

Rishabh has tears in his eyes emotionally adoring his preeta and proud of her.

Flashback ends..

Rishabh gets more sad and starts going away from there .

Karan comes on his way

Karan : Bhai kya hua hai tujhe.. ? Kitne dino se dekh raha hun.. dhyaan kahan hai tera?

Jab dekho khoya khoya rehta hai. Kuchh poochho to lost hota hai. Ghar pe late aata hai..kaam mein busy rehta hai humesha.

Rishabh looks at him sadly.

Karan :kahin is sab ki waja wo preeta to nahin ? Kahin tu use bhula na paa raha ho abhi bhi aur miss kar raha..

Rishabh is frustrated in anger.. speaks out his heart .

Rishabh : preeta ji mere liye mayne nahin rakhti.. mein saara din unke baare mein sochta nahin rehta hun.. ki wo ayengi to mein unse ye poochhongo ..apne baare mein wo poochhunga...ye karengi ..wo karengi.. nahin sochta hun mein unke baare mein .. yaar nahin sochna mujhe !

Karan looks at rishabh eyes.. who is not even matching his eyes with him while saying it.

Karan smiles.

Karan :acting achchhi lar leta hai tu ! Preeta ka naam tu bina jee lagaye nahin bol sakta

Rishabh looks at him emotionally sadly.

Rishabh gets a call and he goes.




Edited by jaanulovejaanam - 6 years ago
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Posted: 6 years ago
#18

rishta scene was damn romantic. sherlyn started her emotional drama.liked rishab shouting at her when she insulted preeta. shocking that he slapped sherlyn.but loved him saying that he cannot tolerate preeta getting insulted.rishta conversation n dialogues were very emotional n beautiful. loved the whole scene

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Posted: 6 years ago
#19

the first rishta scene was cute.preeta playing song to cheer up rishab was sweet.best song for them.rishta conversation was emotional. rishta telling each other to leave sherlyn n prithvi was touchy

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Posted: 6 years ago
#20

sherlyn rishab fight.oh. karan rishab conversation was touchy.preeta saving rishab in the fb scene was lovely

Edited by jasminerahul - 6 years ago

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