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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: Muskanika

This was cute and sweet . Samishti's confession was a sweetie pie

Preeta jealous awwa... Preeran fight as usual great. Now they are neighbours and they are aware about it also .
Mystery of sarla the great's reason is yet to be explored
Congrats for making me add your story to my favourites list . This means my senior has also entered my favourites list . Yippee .
Waiting for the next part impatiently
Keep smiling😃

Thank you junior! 😛
Mystery Abhi solve Nahi hogi... 😆
Aise bahut se cute scenes honge! This Nasik trip would be a memorable one for them! 😃
Tum bhi mere favorite list mein ho...😳
Will try to update soon...😛
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: HibaHusain

Thank you junior! 😛
Mystery Abhi solve Nahi hogi... 😆
Aise bahut se cute scenes honge! This Nasik trip would be a memorable one for them! 😃
Tum bhi mere favorite list mein ho...😳
Will try to update soon...😛

Awww that's so sweet
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Posted: 7 years ago

Part 7

Nasik

Preeta takes her bath and wakes Shrishti who unwillingly gets up...

Preeta: Shrishti...Ab jaa aur nahale... Kaam par nahi jaana kya?

Shrishti: Di...

Unwillingly goes to take bath...

Preeta goes to the balcony and dries her hair with towel... Karan comes there with coffee in his hand and gets lost seeing the purity and beauty of Preeta...

Aate Jaate, Hanste Gaate
Socha Tha Maine Man Mein Kai Baar
Woh Pehli Nazar, Halka Sa Asar
Karta Hai Kyun Is Dil Ko Bekaraar
Ruk Ke Chalna, Chalke Rukna
Na Jaane Tumhe Hai Kiska Intezaar

Tera Woh Yakin Kahin Main To Nahin
Lagta Hai Yehi Kyon Mujhko Baar Baar
Yehi Sach Hai, Shayad Maine Pyar Kiya (New Version)

Karan (in his mind): Na jaane isko dekhkar dil mein aisi... itni acchi feelings kyon aati hain?

Preeta without noticing Karan goes inside whereas Karan keeps staring lost in his thoughts... Sameer comes there and is shocked to see him that way...

Sameer: Bhai... Kin khayalon mein khoye huye ho?

Karan: Preeta ke... (says unknowingly)

Sameer: Kya Preeta ke? Bhai!

Karan comes to his senses: Haan?

Sameer: Aap Preeta ke khayalon mein khoye huye ho?

Karan: Kya? Yeh tu kya keh raha hai? Kuch bhi!

Sameer: Par bhai abhi aapne hi to bola...

Karan: Tu... Tu bhi na kuch bhi sunta hai... Lagta hai tere kaan baj rahe hain...(Tries to defend himself and leaves)

Sameer (in his mind): Bhai... Ab to realise karo apni feelings ko... Pata nahi aapko kab samajh aayega?

Preeta comes inside and is shocked to find Shrishti sleeping again...

Preeta: Shrishti!

Shrishti gets scared and gets up...

Shrishti: Haan di!

Preeta: Tu abhi tak so rahi hai!

Shrishti: Arey! Main to bas... Vo... Main bahar se fresh hawa lekar aayi...

Goes in the balcony and closes her eyes and feels the nature not noticing Sameer who kneels down for picking his watch... Sameer gets up and gets lost in her beauty...

Aate Jaate, Hanste Gaate
Socha Tha Maine Man Mein Kai Baar
Woh Pehli Nazar, Halka Sa Asar
Karta Hai Kyun Is Dil Ko Bekaraar
Ruk Ke Chalna, Chalke Rukna
Na Jaane Tumhe Hai Kiska Intezaar

Tera Woh Yakin Kahin Main To Nahin
Lagta Hai Yehi Kyon Mujhko Baar Baar
Yehi Sach Hai, Shayad Maine Pyar Kiya (New Version)

Karan sees him secretly... Shrishti opens her eyes and his shocked to see Sameer...

Shrishti: Sameer... Tum?

He does not say anything and shows her a perfect sign telling her how much he was admiring her! Shrishti blushes and goes inside... Sameer smiles when Karan comes from behind... Sameer gets scared...

Karan: To ab bata... Kya chal raha hai?

Sameer: Kya chal raha hai... Arey haan... Hawa chal rahi hai... Aur kya bhai?

Karan: Accha! Hawa chal rahi hai haan...

He starts tickling him and both hug each other... Thereafter, they go inside...

Shrishti goes and takes her bath and both Preeta and Shrishti go ouside... Karan too comes outside saying he is going to the hospital with an excuse of meeting Kaya and also convincing Preeta to come with him... Shrishti leaves in an auto and Sameer follows Shrishti with another one...

Sameer: Accha... To yeh yahan kaam karti hai! Ek kaam karta hu... Aaj to yeh pahuch gayi hai,busy bhi ho sakti hai... Ise kal ek surprise deta hun...

He leaves from there and thinks to visit few temples of Nasik for which the city is famous...

In the hospital

Preeta treats all her patients very well and Karan gets happy seeing Preeta talking so nicely with them... She then treats Kaya who being in pain starts crying... Preeta consoles her very well and treats her... Karan gets impressed by this gesture of hers while someone keeps an eye on both of them... He then goes out...

After sometime Preeta comes out and is shocked to see Karan with payal holding her hands and making her walk... She then notices Payal walking on one leg and understands her having a sprain... Payal not able to walk falls a little on Karan... Preeta burns in jealousy... Karan sees her...

Karan: Preeta! Accha hua tum yahin mil gayin! Hum tumhare paas hi aa rahe the! Dhekho na! Lagta hai inke par mein sprain aa gaya hai!

Preeta: Haan.. Aayi!

Preeta goes and treats Payal and soon leaves ignoring Karan... Karan gets confused...

Karan (in his mind): Ab iss ladki ko kya ho gaya yaar? Aise angry looks de rahi thi jaise aankhon se hi kha jayegi...

He then starts leaving making Payal leave his hand... He then realizes something!

Karan (in his mind): Kahin Preeta jealous to nahi ho rahi thi!

He gets happy for unknown reasons...

Karan (in his mind): Par main itna khush kyon ho raha hun?Arey! Kyonki Preeta irritate hogi! Poori duniya gawah hai THE KARAN LUTHRA ko MISS PREETA ARORA ko irritate karne mein bahut maza aata hai! Ab dekhna Preeta Arora main tumhe kitna irritate karta hoon...(smirks)

Sameer (in a temple): Bhagwan ji! Badi mushkil se mujhe apna pyaar mila hai... Ab mujhe isse door mat kijiyega! Maa- Baap ka pyaar to mujhe nahi mila lekin yeh pyaar... Yeh pyaar mujhe apni zindagi mein chahiye bhagwan ji! Plz...

Luthra Office

Riya is in her cabin talking to someone on phone... Someone knocks on the door...

Riya: Accha... Main aapse baad mein baat karti hun koi aaya hai! Bye! (cuts the phone) Come in... (sees Salil) Yes...

Salil (on the door): Ma'am aapko Rishab sir bula rahe hain...

Riya: Ok... Aap chaliye main aati hun...

Salil leaves

Riya: Rishab... Ab yeh mujhe kyon bula raha hai?

Riya goes to his cabin: Yes sir...

Rishab: Riya... Aapko mere ghar par aana padega kuch personal kaam hai... Yahan sabhi staff ke saamne yeh kaam nahi ho sakta... It has to be kept private...

Riya: Ok sir...

Rishab: Aur haan...

Riya: Ji sir...

Rishab: Yeh kapde pehen kar mat aaiyega... Koi suit pehen kar aaiyega... Theek hai... Bye!

Riya: Kya matlab hai aapka aise kapde mat peheniyega? (asks calmly)

Rishab: I mean ghar par sab bade honge to...

Riya: To... MR. RISHAB LUTHRA aap mere sir hain mere father ya husband nahi jo aap mujhe guide karein ki mujhe kahan kya pehenna chahiye... Samjhe! (shouts)

Rishab: Listen MISS RIYA KHANDELWAL... Aap bhi na hi meri mom hain aur na hi biwi jo mujhse aise baat karein! Main aapse tameez se baat kar raha hun aur aap...

Riya: Haan... Keh dijiye! Main to world war kar rahi hun! Bombs ki barsaat shuru kardi hai maine aap par! Ulta chor kotwal ko daate!

Rishab: What? Kaun chor... Kaun kotwal? (gets confused)

Riya: Aap chor... Main kotwal! (says with attitude)

Rishab: Really! Forget it! (tries to finish the matter)

Riya: Try... But I guarantee you aap MISS RIYA KHANDELWAL aur uski baton ko nahi bhool payenge!

(Turns to leave and drops the glass of water by mistake)

Riya: I am... (is about to apologize) Forget it!

Rishab: It's okay! (says loudly while Riya leaves) Seriously! Aaj kehna padega main life mein pehli baar kisiko pehchan nahi paaya!

Nasik

Karan tries to get close to Payal when Preeta comes out of her cabin...

Karan: Aap theek to hai na? Aaiye main aapki madad kar deta hun...(takes her to the other side with hand in hand)

Preeta sees this and gets jealous... She then goes and asks him to bring medicine for Kaya nearby to keep him away from Payal... She smiles at Payal uncomfortably who too responds to her smile and then leaves... Karan understands her jealousy, gets happy and leaves...

Karan takes the medicine and heads to enter the hospital when some people come from back and cover his face... He tries to fight but in vain and they take him in a car...

On the other side...

Payal comes as fast as possible and tells Preeta about Karan being kidnapped as she saw when she was seeing the view ouside the window... Preeta gets shattered listening everything and starts crying badly on the floor...

Preeta (shouts while crying): KARAN!

Screen pauses on her crying face...

Keep reading...

Edited by HibaHusain - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
Amazing update again 😊
But phir suspense 😭 nainsaafi Bacche ke saath
Hehe jealous Preeta is fun to watch 😆
Riya and Rishab were adorable 😳
Karan kidnapped kya ho raha hai yeh
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Posted: 7 years ago
Thanks for the amazing update 👏
Ab ek aur suspense. Karan ko kisne kidnap kardiya? 😲
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: abhiya23

Amazing update again 😊
But phir suspense 😭 nainsaafi Bacche ke saath
Hehe jealous Preeta is fun to watch 😆
Riya and Rishab were adorable 😳
Karan kidnapped kya ho raha hai yeh

Thank you di!😳
Abhi mere shocks baaki hain...😆
I know...😉 Preeta bahut jealous ho gayi...😆
Hope you liked Riya and Rishab's conversation... Poori shiddat se likha tha maine...😃😆
Next update mein pata chalega...😆
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: Niraj19

Thanks for the amazing update 👏

Ab ek aur suspense. Karan ko kisne kidnap kardiya? 😲

Thank you Niraj Bhai!😛
Next update mein pata chalega...😆
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Posted: 7 years ago
Jealous Preeta ,treat...❤️
Karan's excuse of making preeta jealous🤣buddhu...😆
Riya-Rishabh convo🤣good... Rishabh ko mili takkar di kudi
Wow..
1st suspense reveal kiya nahi and one more suspense karan ko kisne kidnap kiya?*the Muskan glare*
I know late feedback ke liye mujhe sorry bolne ki koi zarurat nahi hai
Afterall I am your junior . Mujhe manners sikhana aapka farz hai😆 . Aur aap toh meri tution teacher bhi hain . Isse yaad aya mai aapko pm kar rahi hoon aur aap mujhe padana .😆
Please update soon and your suspense is just... head ke upar se nikal raha hai
Keep smiling😉
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Posted: 7 years ago
Lovely update... Continue soon😉.
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: Muskanika

Jealous Preeta ,treat...❤️

Karan's excuse of making preeta jealous🤣buddhu...😆
Riya-Rishabh convo🤣good... Rishabh ko mili takkar di kudi
Wow..
1st suspense reveal kiya nahi and one more suspense karan ko kisne kidnap kiya?*the Muskan glare*
I know late feedback ke liye mujhe sorry bolne ki koi zarurat nahi hai
Afterall I am your junior . Mujhe manners sikhana aapka farz hai😆 . Aur aap toh meri tution teacher bhi hain . Isse yaad aya mai aapko pm kar rahi hoon aur aap mujhe padana .😆
Please update soon and your suspense is just... head ke upar se nikal raha hai
Keep smiling😉

Thank you junior!😃
Haan sorry bolna aakhir meri junior ne seekha hi nahi...😆
I thought ye sab gyess karlenge... Therefore, it's not a suspense...😆
But phir bhi next update mein pata chal jayega...😉
Rishab ke liye sahi ladki leke aayi na main...😆😉
Keep reading...😊
Will update soon...😃

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