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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: Niraj19

#NirLaUnite...๐Ÿคฃ


Sarla jasi koi Aur ... ๐Ÿ˜‰
Koi aur hi sahi... Sarla to hai na...๐Ÿ˜†
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: Niraj19

Ban bhi sakti hai...๐Ÿคฃ


Had se Zyada kuch achcha nahi hota .. Pyaar bh nahi ...๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†


Sarla ka rona-dhona bhi nahi...๐Ÿ˜†
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Posted: 7 years ago

Koi aur hi sahi... Sarla to hai na...๐Ÿ˜†

Ab usse handle karna difficult hai .. ๐Ÿ˜†
Aur hamare breakup bhi hogaya .. ๐Ÿ˜›

So koi aur tike hai ๐Ÿ˜Š
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Posted: 7 years ago

Sarla ka rona-dhona bhi nahi...๐Ÿ˜†

Haan ... Specially her emotional talks ... ๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†
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Part 6

Karan: Lekin Preeta tum jaanti ho na ki Sarla aunty ke aisa karne ke peeche koi vajah rahi hogi... To vapas chalo... Yahan par rehne se problem hal to nahi ho jayegi aur na hi Sarla aunty ke aisa karne ki vajah pata chalegi...

Preeta: Main jaanti hu Karan... Lekin main tabh tak vapas nahi jaaungi jab tak maa humein unke aisa karne ki vajah nahi batatin... Aur vaise bhi mujhe iss sab se ek break chahiye... Yahan rehkar kuch din aaram milega...

Karan: Theek hai Preeta... Lekin jab tak tum dono yahan ho hum bhi yahin rahenge...

Preeta: Lekin...

Karan: Lekin vekin kuch nahi... Humne bhi sabse vada kiya hai ki tum dono ko liye bagair hum ghar vapas nahi lautenge...

Preeta: Theek hai baba... Lekin tum log rahoge kahan?

Karan: Uski chinta tum mat karo... THE KARAN LUTHRA ne sab kuch pehle hi arrange kar liya hai...

Preeta smiles listening his childish talks after a short but a long time for her...

Preeta: Theek hai... Lekin ab main chalti hun... Mujhe Kaya ko treat karna hai... Ab tak uske reports aa gaye honge aur mere dusre patients bhi wait kar rahe honge... Bye!

Karan: Bye Preeta!

Shrishti and Sameer: Bye di!

Preeta leaves... Karan thinks to leave Shrishti and Sameer alone and goes outside making an excuse of seeing the hospital...

Karan: Hi... I am THE KARAN LUTHRA... Naam to suna hi hoga...

Payal: Hi...

Both shake hand

Preeta comes out after treating all her patients and giving Kaya painkiller... She gets jealous seeing them together...

Preeta (in mind): Yeh ladka kabhi nahi sudhrega... Yahan bhi shuru ho gaya... Flirt ek no. ka... Par mujhe kyon itna fark padh raha hai...

Sajdaaa...

She comes out of her senses ignoring her thoughts when she sees them hugging which ignites fire in her... She goes to them...

Preeta: Karan, Chalo...

Karan: Kahan chalo?

Preeta: Kahan chalo matlab... Vo Shrishti aur Sameer ke paas... Chalo...

She smiles at Payal who smiles too...

Karan: Lekin?

She holds Karan's hand and takes him... Making Karan and Payal both confused...

Sameer: Shrishti, tum mujhse... I mean... Seriously woh...

Shrishti kisses Sameer on the cheeks making him quiet...

Maine puchha ye dil se
Main kyun hoon jahaan mein
Ek dhadkan boli tere liye..

Maine yaadein taraashi
Aur khwaab bana di
Nayi duniya basa di, tere liye..
Tere liye.. tere liye..
Tere liye.. tere liye..

Jo main kehta hoon
Jo sunta hoon
Jo sehta hoon, tere liye..
Main girta hoon
Sambhalta hoon
Phir chalta hoon, tere liye..

Shrishti: Tumhari ye woh woh karne ki aadat kab jayegi haan? Haan, karti hu main tumse pyaar... Bahut zyada pyaar... Lekin tum bhi to kuch bolo... Har baar main hi kyon?

Sameer: I... I...

Shrishti: Yaar Sameer! Ladkiyon se zyada sharma rahe ho tum! Yaar thoda to straight forward bano!

Sameer: Accha straight forward!

He goes on knees in front of everyone...

Sameer: Shrishti... I LOVE YOU!

He proposes her infront of everyone...

Sameer: Will you become my life partner?

Koi dard hoon gehra
Koi aks hoon bisra
Main kya hoon bata de tere liye..

Yaadon ka chehra
Koi khwaab sunehra
Main kya hoon bata de tere liye..

Tere liye.. tere liye..
Tere liye.. tere liye..

Shrishti gets overwhelmed by this gesture of Sameer and agrees happily by giving her hand to him! She makes him stand up...

Shrishti: Kya baat hai Sameer! Kuch zyada hi straight forward ho gaye tum!

Both laugh and everybody claps whereas Preeta and Karan too gets happy who were watching them secretly! They enter...

Preeta: To finally! Finally meri behen ko apna prince charming mil hi gaya haan?

Karan: Kyon Shrishti phasa hi liya na tumne mere bhole-bhale bhai ko...

Shrishti: Haww... Di! Karan sir! Aap log humein chupkar dekh rahe the!

Preeta: To... Agar hum tum logon ke saamne hote to pata nahi aur kitne saal tum log apne pyaar ko confess karne mein lete!

Both Karan and Preeta laugh wheras Shrishti and Sameer smile feeling embarrassed!

Luthra Office

Rishab was in his office busy because of her personal assistant leaving when someone knocks at the door!

Rishab: Yes, who is it?

A pretty girl opens the door...

Girl: Hello sir!

Rishab: Yes...

Girl: Sir woh main personal assistant ke interview ke liye aayi thi!

Rishab: Ok... Come sit!

She sits down...

Rishab: So, what is your name?

Girl: Sir my name is Riya Khandelwal... I am here for the job of personal assistant... Rest whatever you want to know can be known from my documents...

She handles her documents to him...

Rishab starts taking her interview and gets pleased with her attitude...

Rishab: Ok... You can start from tomorrow!

Riya: But I would like to start from today!

Rishab: But then what will others say... That your boss made you work from the first day itself!

He laughs a little...

Riya: Sir I work for myself not for others...

Rishab gets highly impressed with this gesture of Riya!

Rishab: Well, I am highly impressed Miss Riya... You may start from now...

He calls Salil and asks him to tell Riya her work...

Rishab: You can go with him...

Riya: Thank you sir!

Rishab: You may call me Rishab!

Riya: Ok... Thank you sir... I mean Rishab...

Both smile at each other...

Na na...

Tu nazm nazm sa mere
Honthon pe thehar ja
Main khwab khwab sa teri
Aankhon mein jaagun re

Tu ishq ishq sa mere
Rooh mein aake bas ja
Jis aur teri shehnaai
Uss ore main bhaagun re

Riya leaves... Rishab smiles within himself seeing her leaving...

Nasik

Preeta and Shrishti reach their home after the tiring day and go inside...

Just as they enter in their house Karan's car arrives with Sameer driving... They both get down...

Karan: So this is the house!

Sameer: Not bad bhai... Itne short notice par humein kafi accha ghar mil gaya...

Karan: Haan vo to hai...

They start bringing their luggage out when Preeta comes at the window to close the curtains not able to see Karan or Sameer due to the car... Karan senses something and turns to see... However, Preeta closes the curtain and leaves...

Sajdaaa...

Preeta starts preparing the food in thoughts of Karan being close to Payal when she realises of there being no tomatoes in the house...

Preeta: Shrishti... Main bazaar jaa rahi hun... Ghar mein tamatar nahi hain...

Shrishti: Main bhi chalti hun di... Aapka itni raat mein akele jaana sahi nahi hai...

Preeta: Theek hai... Chal...

On the other side:

Karan: Sameer yaar bahut bhook lag rahi hai... Chal bahar se kuch kha kar aate hain...

Sameer: Chalo bhai...

All Preeta, Shrishti, Karan and Sameer come out of the house at the same time and are shocked to see each other...

Preeta, Shrishti, Karan and Sameer: Tum?

Preeta: Tum dono yahan kya kar rahe ho?

Karan: Humein to yahi ghar rehne ke liye diya gaya hai...

Sameer: Lekin tum dono yahan kya kar kar rahi ho?

Shrishti: Kya matlab yahan kya kar rahi ho? Yeh humare Papa ka ghar hai... Hum pehle yahi rehte the aura b bhi yahin reh rahe hain...

Karan: Sammy...

Sameer: Haan bhai...

Karan: Yeh to aur bhi accha ho gaya...

Sameer: Kaise bhai?

Karan: Ab humein bahar jaakar khane ki zaroorat nahi hai... Yeh Preeta hai na... Yeh humare liye khana bana degi...

Preeta: Kya?

Before Preeta could say anything else Karan rushes in their house...

Karan: Arey wah! Kafi accha ghar hai! Chalo ab khana khaate hain...

Preeta: Kya khaana khaate hain... Ghar par tamatar nahi hai...Khaana nahi bana hai aur na hi ban sakta hai...

Karan: Bas itni si baat... Sameer jaa tamatar lekar aa...

Sameer: Theek hai bhai... (smirks)

He returns in two minutes with tomates...

Preeta: Itne jaldi tum bazaar se hokar bhi aa gaye?

Karan: Baby doll! Tum bhool gayin main kaun hun?

Preeta: Nahi... Kaise bhool sakti hun... THE LOOSER KARAN LUTHRA ko...

Karan: Yaar... Tum toh chup hi raho... Ek to main tum se itne acche se baat kar raha hun... Phir bhi tum mujhse ladh rahi ho...

Preeta: Accha baba sorry... Batao...

Karan: Meri vajah se humein sabhi cheezein ghar mein provide kar di gayi theen... Sabziya bhi... Jinki humein koi zarorat nahi thi...

Preeta: Chalo... Tum kisi toh kaam aaye...

Karan: Yaar...

Preeta: Mein khana bana kar aati hun...

She says ignoring him and leaves... She comes with food after sometime...

Karan: Kitni der laga di tumne yaar... Pet mein chuhe bhi daud-daudkar thak gaye...

Preeta: Aisa hai to mat khao...

Karan: Accha baba sorry...

They eat the food...

Sameer: Kya baat hai Preeta di! Khana toh bahut hi accha bana hai!

Preeta: Thank you Sameer!

Shrishti: Meri di toh hain hi no. 1 chef...

Preeta smiles...

Karan: Kahe ki no. 1 chef... Itna kuch khaas bhi nahi hai khaana...

Preeta: Accha toh mat khao...

She takes his plate...

Karan: Arey yaar tum to serious ho gayin! Main to mazak kar raha tha!

Takes his plate and starts eating...

Sameer and Shrishti eat their food seeing in each other's eyes lovingly which was unnoticed by Karan and Preeta due to their fights...

Karan and Sameer go to their house after eating... Sameer says bye to Shrishti while Karan winks at Preeta before going, making her shocked...

Preeta smiles seeing him going...

Keep reading...๐Ÿ˜‰

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Posted: 7 years ago
see i told u .. even karan says it ๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†

Part 6

Karan: Lekin Preeta tum jaanti ho na ki Sarla aunty ke aisa karne ke peeche koi vajah rahi hogi.

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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: Niraj19

see i told u .. even karan says it ๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†

Part 6

Karan: Lekin Preeta tum jaanti ho na ki Sarla aunty ke aisa karne ke peeche koi vajah rahi hogi.

๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†
Aap to param gyani hain...๐Ÿ˜†
Aap jante hain aapki Sarla nirdosh hai...๐Ÿ˜†
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Posted: 7 years ago

๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†
Aap to param gyani hain...๐Ÿ˜†
Aap jante hain aapki Sarla nirdosh hai...๐Ÿ˜†

haan .. Lako mai ek hai woh .. aur woh kabhi bhi galat nahi hai ...๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜†
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Posted: 7 years ago
Amazing ๐Ÿ‘ again fabulous
Such a refreshing story to read
I was highly bored to read and write my own stories
Jealous preeta ๐Ÿ˜† with Karan flirting with Payal
Both sisters look innocent but are too bold one claims right in public other one is too straightforward
Sameer is such blushing kid ๐Ÿ˜ณ shrishmeer were too cute
Hehe boys gate crashing in the girls house for food
Didn't wanted to give long comment but dena padta hai
Update soon will be waiting ๐Ÿ˜†
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: Niraj19


๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†
Aap to param gyani hain...๐Ÿ˜†
Aap jante hain aapki Sarla nirdosh hai...๐Ÿ˜†


haan .. Lako mai ek hai woh .. aur woh kabhi bhi galat nahi hai ...๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜†
Aapka Sarla ke liye pyaar din ba din badhta jaa raha hai...๐Ÿ˜†

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