Preeran SS:Humdard (SHIFTED TO WATTPAD- Link Provided on Pg 1 & 33) - Page 21

Part 8

Preeta is on the floor crying badly when she receives a call from an unknown number. She picks it up...

Preeta: Hello

Speaker: Karan se milne ke liye bohot bechain ho rahi hogi na tum!

Preeta recognizes his voice and stands up...

Preeta: Tum! Tumhari dushmani mujhse hai na to mujh par nikalo! Karan ko iss sab ke beech mein laane ki kya zaroorat thi?

Speaker: Arey! Yeh hi to mera ikka hai! Isey kaise bakshta! Maine tumhe address message kardiya hai! Agar iski khair chahti ho to bina police ko bataye yahan chup-chap aa jao... Samjhi!

Preeta: Main aa rahi hun! Karan ko kuch mat karna please!

She cuts the call and runs to the address...

Preeta reaches the address when some goons take her inside... She struggles to free... Some goons bring Karan...

Preeta: Karan tum theek to ho na!

Karan: Preeta tum yahan kyon aayin?

Preeta was about to speak when the man comes out clapping...

Man: Aa gayin tum! Lagta hai tumhari aur iss cricketer ki baat kaafi aage tak badh chuki hai!

Preeta: Kya chahiye tumhe Deepak? Karan ko yahan kyon laaye ho?

Deepak: Tum chahiye ho mujhe! Tumhari vajah se meri itni insult hui hai poore Nasik mein! Aur vaise bhi tumse khoobsurat to poore Nasik mein koi nahi! Aaj tumhe main apna bana kar poori duniya ko dikha dunga ki Deepak se panga lene ka anjaam kya hota hai! Tum par sirf mera haq hai!

Karan gets angry listening everything and struggles to free...

Deepak holds Preeta making Karan beat all the goons as well as him!

Karan: Teri himmat kaise hui Preeta ko choone ki!

He beats him regularly and badly but stops when Preeta insists him...

Rom rom tera naam pukaare
Ek hue din reain hamare
Hum se hum hi chiin gaye hai
Jab se dekhe hai nainn deewane
Sajda ..

Deepak tries to flee when he gets caught by the police!

Preeta: Tumhe kya laga? Tum apne gundon se mujhpar itne dino se nazar rakhvaoge, phir Karan ko kidnap karvaoge, mujhse kahoge ki main police ko kuch na bataun aur main maan jaungi! Jaanti thi agar police ko main phone lagaungi toh tumhare jasoos aadmi tumhe phone karke bata denge aur phir tum Karan ko kuch kardoge! Isiliye...

Flashback

Preeta texts Shrishti to inform the police and bring them to the address she messaged her with Payal's phone so that Deepak doesn't come to know!

Flashback ends

Deepak: Preeta! Tum meri ho! Main tumhe paa kar rahunga!

Policeman: Payega to tab na jab bahar aayega! Aur jab tak tu bahar aayega shaadi ki umar beet chuki hogi! Chal!

Police takes Deepak and his goons... Preeta sees Karan who smiles at her! Preeta's eyes falls on Karan's arm which was bleeding...

Preeta: Oh god! Karan tumhare kitna khoon beh raha hai!

She tears her dupatta and wraps it around Karan's arm so that it doesn't bleed... Karan gets lost in her!

Preeta: Dard to nahi ho raha?

Karan nods saying no: Thank you!

Preeta smiles and both reach home safely!

Karan tells the whole incident to Sameer when he again wonders for the moment when Karan would realize his love for Preeta!

Shrishti gets tensed knowing everything from Preeta and hugs her emotionally! Just when they break the hug Shrishti gets into her action mode!

Shrishti: Aaj main uss Deepak ko nahi chodungi! Uski itni himmat ki meri, Shrishti Arora ki behen ke saath badtameezi kare! Aaj to uski haddiyaan tootkar rahengi!

She starts walking when Preeta holds her...

Preeta: Arey Pagal! Ab jab vo jail se bahar aayega uski haddiyaan itni kamzor ho gayin hongi ki halka sa chuogi to toot jayengi!

Both laugh!

Preeta: Aur vaise bhi ab Karan bhi theek hai!

Shrishti gets into her teasing mode!

Shrishti: Oho! Not bad di! Karan sir ki bahot care kar rahe ho aap!

Preeta: Kya? Aisa kuch bhi nahi hai! Vo to bas... Uske chot lagi hai to... As a friend uski chinta ho rahi hai! (Stammers)

Shrishti: Vo to dhik raha hai di yeh friendly hai ya...

Runs from the room laughing while Preeta gets into thinking! She thinks of her moments with Karan and then he being close to Payal and she being jealous! She then thinks of her care for him when he got hurt!

Preeta: Kya main sach mein Karan se? I mean seriously! I love him! I love him! I love Karan! Yay!

She starts jumping on bed happily!

Chaahe Tum Kuch Naa Kaho

Maine Sun Liya

Ke Saathi Pyaar Kaa

Mujhe Chun Liya

Chun Liyaaa

Maine Sun Liyaa

Pehla Nasha

Pehla Khummar

Naya Pyaar Hai

Naya Intezaar

Karloo Mein Kya Apna Haal

Aye Dil-e-Bekaraar

Mere Dil-e-Bekaraar

Tu Hi Bata

Pehla Nasha

Pehla Khummar

Suddenly she notices Shrishti standing at the door seeing her with a smile!

Preeta: Shrishti tu... Main to bas...

Shrishti: Di... Kitne late realize hua aapko yaar! Main aur Sameer to kabka samajh gaye the ki aap dono ek doosre ke liye bane ho!

Preeta blushes: But Shrishti yeh sirf meri feeling hain! I don't know if he loves me! Aur vaise bhi humare status mein bohat fark hai! Kaha vo the SUPER CRICKETER THE KARAN LUTHRA aur kaha main ek mamuli si physiotherapist!

Shrishti: Oh meri di! Aapka status bhi bohat high hai! Karan sir jin ladkiyon ko date karte the unse bhi zyaada! I am sure Karan sir bhi aapse pyaar karte hain! Yaqeen maano maine unke aankhon mein aapke liye pyaar dekha hai! Aur ab toh unhone bekaar ke relationship mein rehna bhi chod diya hai as he is serious for love this time! Lekin haan aap abhi unse confess mat karna!

Preeta: Kyon?

Shrishti: Di aap Shrishti Arora ki badi behen ho! Aap kisi ladke ko kaise propose kar sakti ho? Karan sir ko hi aapko propose karna hoga!

Preeta: But Shrishti...

Shrishti: No ifs no buts!

She goes on the bed and sleeps! Preeta gets confused and then goes to sleep with a smile on her lips after a long time!

Mumbai

Sarla watches Preeta and Shrishti's photo and thinks whether to tell the secret to them or not!

Flashback

Rakhi calls Sarla informing about Karan's call telling her about Preeta's decision!

Flashback ends

Dadi: Kya soch rahi hai?

Sarla: Beeji... Main soch rahi hun ki Preeta aur Shrishti ko sach bataun ya nahi!

Dadi: Meri baat maan dono ko sach bata de! Hum sab saath milkar iss mushki waqt ko bhi par kar lenge!

Sarla: Theek hai beeji! Main kal hi unhe phone karti hoon!

Both get happy!

Next morning

Mumbai

Rishab: Bahut kaam hai! Kal Riya se ladai bhi ho gayi! Pata nahi aaj ghar par kaam ke liye aayegi bhi ya nahi! (says arranging the files)

Riya listens everything at the door...

Riya: Main apni duty se kabhi nahi bhaagti!

Rishab gets shocked hearing her voice! He does not believe her to be there initially but finally finds her standing behind him!

Rishab: Tum... Vo bhi in kapdo mein!

Riya: Haan main... Kya hua? Aap hi ne to bulaya tha na! Aur ab mere kapdo mein kya problem hai na maine short dress pehni hai na suit! But aise kapde pehne hain jo sincerity ko darshaate hain!

Rishab: Thanks for that but mujhe ummeed nahi thi ki tum aaogi!

Riya: Bada maqsad poora karne ke liye choti choti baton ko andekha karna padta hai!

Rishab: What? (gets confused)

Riya: I mean... Agar kaam mein succeed hona hai to choti choti ladaiyon ko to bhoolna hi hoga na! (Stammers)

She runs inside at the table to work!

Rishab smiles: Shayad yeh utni bhi buri nahi hai!

Both start working...

Nasik

Preeta gets confused thinking what to wear!

Preeta: Kya pehnu? Karan ko kya accha lagega?

Shrishti comes after getting ready: Di! Aap abhi tak taiyaar nahi huyin! Hum late ho jayeinge!

Preeta tells her everything and Shrishti helps her choose a dress! Both leave for work when they do not find Karan and Sameer outside!

Preeta (in mind): Aaj Karan pehle hi chala gaya? Lift bhi offer nahi kari?

She enters the hospital only to see Karan flirting with Payal holding her hands telling her she looked beautiful!

She instead of getting angry and separating them gets sad and leaves thinking Karan to be never hers!

Karan gets confused with her behaviour: Isse kya ho gaya? Aaj gussa bhi nahi hui?

Mumbai

Riya sleeps while working... Rishab adores her and then takes the pen from her hand making her wake!

Riya: Sorry main so gayi thi kya?

Rishab: It's okay! You rest vaise bhi aaj bahut kaam kar liya! Aap vapas ghar chale jaiye!

Riya: Theek hai!

She leaves after glancing at Rishab with a smile! Rishab too smiles at her and then leaves!

Riya (in mind): Riya apne maqsad par dhyaan de in sab fizool ki baton mein nahi!

She too leaves!

Nasik

Preeta is treating her patients with a fake smile when Payal comes from back!

Payal: Tujhe pata hai Preeta!

Preeta: Kya? (says with no interest sadly and uncomfortably)

Payal: Meri shaadi ho rahi hai!

Preeta: Kya? (gets shocked)

She thinks of Shrishti's words: Aur ab toh unhone bekaar ke relationship mein rehna bhi chod diya hai as he is serious for love this time!

Preeta (in mind): Kahin Karan aur ye?

Screen pauses on her shocked, tensed and sad face!

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Originally posted by: abhiya23

Finally you updated 👏👏 as usual amazing

Haha Preeta arora toh sherlock homes nickli 😆

I knew it was that idiot Deepak how dare he hit Karan 😡

I am sure his bones will be broken in jail as doctor madam said that

Finally Madam ko akaal aa hi gai that she loves her Karela 😳

Love Rishab-Riya's bonding too cute yaar

But phir mystery

Sarla's sach

Riya ka maksat

Itna nahi tadpate readers ko 😭

BTW forgot to ask which actress you picked for Riya

Originally posted by: HibaHusain

Thank you Ash di!

Show mein Preeta itni dumb hai yahan maine usey samajhdaar bana diya...😆

Mystery dheere dheere solve hogi!😆

Riya has a motive but she isn't a bad girl!😊

Didn't think any such actress for Riya!😊

Suggest one!😛

Originally posted by: abhiya23

Mera toh stock hi khatam go gaya hai

Sanjeeda, Anita hassandani, Helly Shah, Jennifer

Which ever ones you like soch lo. Why don't you do a poll like I did once

Originally posted by: Muskanika

Senior ne senior citizen banne se pehle update kar diya . Yippee!

So it was Deepak

It's ok I know ab toh vo jail mein chakki pees raha hoga

Sab ne uska accha mazak udaya🤣

Preeta madam toh smart no no smarter no no smartest ho gayi 😎 Digest nahi hua ki Preeta itni smart ho sakti hai kyunki Cvs ne usse bahot dumb bana rakha hai . But I am very happy to see the smart Preeta . Great job!👏

Lagta hai Preeta madam par akal ki barsaat ho gayi hai .She realised her love for karan😲Yipee🥳

Hopefully karan bhi samajh jaye because he is smarter than Preeta . But Preeta madam ne toh baazi maar li . Jo bhi ho iss smartness/samajhdaari ki race ke winners hain humare pyare SamIshti -Sameer and Shrishti . Hu hu(hooting)🤪

PreeTi scene😆

I felt bad for Preeta but I am sure karan was just trying to make her jealous . He should now realise and confess his love to Preeta .

Rishabh-Riya are too sweet❤️

What is Riya's mystery and Sarla's secret?

Mystery aur suspense mein toh aapne Ashi di ko bhi beat kar diya! At least vo humein surprises toh deti hain . Senior badi nainsaafi kar rahe ho😭

Please update soon

Keep smiling