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Posted: 7 years ago
#91

Originally posted by: abhiya23


Ha bhai super cop madam ke aane tak pata nahi kya kya ho jayega 😆

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Sif show mein... Show mein to dumbness ki hadh paar kar rakhi hai iss laki ne...😆
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Posted: 7 years ago
#92

Originally posted by: HibaHusain

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Sif show mein... Show mein to dumbness ki hadh paar kar rakhi hai iss laki ne...😆


No way mere show ladki weak ho sakti hai but dumbo never 😆
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Posted: 7 years ago
#93
Part 17

The blackmailer has shocked the group to the core Shrishti decides to tell the truth to Preeta but is stopped by Karan.
Karan : Shrishti please, we are not kids and do you want your sister to get embarrassed in front of everybody
Shrishti : you are not getting my point, I don't want to lose my sister's trust, we have to face the reality
Karan : I know but we have to hide this from everybody or else our reputation will be tarnished in front of people, you don't know who is Ayesha's father Sameer goes to headquarters to meet Dev when he hears him discussing about the case

Sonia : whats her name again?
Dev ; I think it was Ayesha Sharma, she was the daughter of Chief Minister
Sameer gets scared hearing Ayesha's name
Sonia : she had a party last night on beach resort and after that she went missing
Dev : okay do one thing lets put her poster around the city
Sonia : Okay, did you get any news from Preeta and Vicky
Dev : yea they are almost done with their work (sees Sameer from the glass)
Sameer : Hi bro
Dev : why are you standing there, come inside
Sameer : Hi Sonia, what case were you discussing about
Sonia : nothing that Minister's daughter is missing since last night
Dev : Sameer, are you alright why are you sweating
Sonia gets call from somebody and goes out
Sameer : Bro this is not fair I thought we would do my marZoyage shopping together but you are busy
Dev : Sameer, I told you to start looking around and I will join you soon, I promise once Preeta and Vicky will be back we will handle this case to them Sameer (shocked) : what? you will give them this case
Dev : I mean ACP sir wants all four of us to do this handle this one and till then we will find out some clues about Ayesha
Sameer : Okay bro I remembered something I will see you later bye (leaves hurriedly)
Shrishti panics when Sameer informs about Preeta handling the case of Ayesha
Karan : Before Preeta comes back lets find that body soon
Headquarters
Dev : what happened Sonia? whose call was it
Sonia : there is bad news, one of Ayesha's friend saw Ayesha last time somebody taking her body from the road and she got unconscious after that
Dev : Body?
Sonia : she is dead
Dev : Oh my god then where is her friend
Sonia : her friend is in trauma she is not able to say anything right now so she is not helpful link for us
Dev : Sonia, ACP sir wants result in one week we have to find her dead body but first thing get the list of people attended the party
Shrishti is walking around the house terrified when a hand falls on her shoulder
Preeta : oh my god, today somebody is so scared (says smilingly)
Shrishti : Sis (surprisingly) you? you were gonna come next week right
Preeta : well I thought my sister loves surprises but i think I was wrong
Shrishti : No its not like that actually
Preeta : Shrishti are you okay, you don't seem you are happy, is there any problem
Shrishti : No actually I am just stressed with work

Preeta ; how many times I have told you not to take so much stress, silly girl
Shrishti (with attitude) ; why should I not, my sisters takes risk everyday of saving million people
Preeta : stop buttering and lets have dinner first
After Shrishti leaves Preeta sense change in her behavior.
Karan : what? Preeta is back why so early
Shrishti : I don't know but I cannot hide this for too many days
Preeta (goes to Shrishti's room) : what you cannot hide Shrishti
Shrishti and Karan hears Preeta's voice and gets nervous
Shrishti : sis..(Stammers)
Preeta : tell me what are you talking about and why is the house so messy
Shrishti ; actually I didn't get time to clean the house and then I gave all servants holiday after you left
Preeta : and who are you talking to
Shrishti : Nobody (cuts the call)
Preeta : Now I get it, you were talking to your would be fianc
Shrishti (nods) ; yea
Preeta : I can't believe you will be engaged soon, Sameer's dad said that the auspicious day for your engagement is next week
Shrishti : Next week? so early when will I do shopping
Preeta : It looks like your work has overtaken your mind, you forgot your friend is designer and she will get all clothes for you
Zoya gets call from Rishab and puts it on speaker in her room
Rishab ; its been so many days I haven't heard your voice and you didn't bother to pick my calls up
Zoya : I was busy from couple days
Rishab : you sound tense, is everything okay
Zoya : yea actually you know Shrishti's engagement is coming next week so I am helping her to get clothes
Rishab : Zoya, my family is not letting me meet you but I cannot stay without you, there is only way now
Zoya : what?
Rishab : Lets run away
Zoya gets furious on him for running away from his responsibility.
Rishab ; Please Zoya, I am waiting for you our families will not understand us we have tried enough
Zoya hesitates to agree with his idea but he threatens her to come with him.
Rishab : If you don't come to meet me right now then I will think you never loved me
Zoya : please don't do anything (panics) I am coming
Rishab ; I am waiting for you behind the airport

Zoya leaves hurriedly quietly and rushes to airport with her bag. Shrishti is not able to sleep in her room and goes out in balcony.
Preeta : Shrishti, you didn't sleep yet?
Shrishti: I am not able to sleep thats why I came out to get fresh air
Preeta : I am noticing that you have changed after I came back, look you are grown up now thats why I am not scolding you but tell me if there is any big problem before it gets too late
Shrishti feels guilty on hiding the truth from her sister. Sakshi finds Zoya missing from her room.
Vicky ; what happened mom?
Sakshi : Vicky, look at this letter

Mom
I know I am doing wrong but please forgive me. I cannot leave without Rishab, After reading this letter you will hate me forever. I never wanted to hurt you like this but please understand my helplessness.

Vicky : Mom don't panic I will find her, I know that guy must have influence her (leaves)
Sakshi goes to Singhania house to tell about the couple's deed.
Gauri : Ms Gujral mind your language, you cannot insult us in our own house
Sakshi : Years ago your husband humiliated my husband for the mistake he did not do and today your son is repeating history for influencing my daughter Gauri : As if your daughter is 5 years old kid, she has ran away by her own
Sakshi : If I wanted I would have revealed to the world that this family snatches the livelihood from innocent family, for my husband's loyalty you gave me very good return gift of throwing him out

Hearing Sakshi's words Rishab's dad gets heart attack and is rushed to emergency room. Rishab takes Zoya to a place on his bike

Zoya : Mr Singhania at least tell me where are we going
Rishab : well we are going to place called surprise
Zoya : don't joke and tell me where are we going
Rishab : we are going to stay at my friends' farm house and head to Pune tomorrow morning
Next day Vicky start searching for Zoya and Rishab.
Vicky : I don't believe this Preeta, I mean Zoya being my sister and sensible could take such a big step, how could she
Preeta : Calm down we will find her
Vicky : and ACP sir is also angry on us, he wants us to get result of Ayesha's case soon
Preeta : don't worry I told Sonia she will handle that case, did you try Zoya's phone
Vicky : I tried but her phone is switched off
Preeta tells Shrishti to locate Zoya and Rishab's last location.
Karan : guys I still cannot imagine Zoya can take such a big step
Shrishti : I feel bad for Sakshi aunty, after so many years she got her son back and now this problem
Anjali : did you trace the location
Shrishti (calls Preeta) : the location is 15 km from Bombay
Preeta : Okay you keep tracing their location, I am sure they might turn their phone on soon

Naina tells Kabir her next plan to trap the group.
Kabir : why right now
Naina : because right now the situation is very tense and Zoya also did some benefit to us.


Sonia gets the list of the members in the party and finds the name of Zoya, Anjali, Adi, Sameer, Shrishti and Karan.
Dev : hey did they found anything about Zoya
Sonia : No not yet, but dev look this list has Karan, Sameer's name in Ayesha's party.

Dev : Strange when I asked them Sameer about he denied about knowing Ayesha
Sonia : I feel they are hiding something from us, we have to find out, I am sure they have connection with this murder
Dev : you are thinking too much, I am sure if it was like that they would have told us

Preeta tells Vicky she would find Zoya and he should go back as Sakshi would be worried.
Vicky : But Preeta,
Preeta : i am tell you. your mom needs you right now trust me I will find Zoya and bring her back now go back
Vicky : take care of yourself, and call me if you have any problem
Preeta : don't worry I will take care
After Vicky leaves Preeta goes for hunting of Zoya and Rishab. Meanwhile the group is pacing around with the tensed mood. Sonia comes to their room and ask them about their visit to the party the other day.
Sonia : I am asking all of you again, you all went to Ayesha's party.
Karan : you are mistaken we did not go to her party
Sonia : then why is your name in her guest list and I met people who said there was a fight in the party
All stands numbed when Sonia forces them to reveal the truth. Preeta reaches the hotel where Zoya and Rishab spent other night.
Preeta : Excuse me can you tell me if a young couple stayed here last night (Asks manager and shows the picture)
Manager : Yes I remember this two came late at night yesterday, and the guy said he is the best friend of the owner of this hotel
Preeta : when did they leave from here
Manager : I think two hours ago
Preeta : Two hours, is there any bus or train station from here
Manager : yes there is a bus station close like 10 -15 minutes
Preeta : okay, thank you so much

Without any choice left she decides to put the picture in the surrounding area of Zoya and Rishab but thinks of not spoiling their families image. She takes help from the nearby police to help find Zoya.

Rishab takes Zoya at temple to marry her which she agrees happily. While dressing up she remembers her mother's conversation of dressing up her. during her wedding but knows she cannot be happy with anybody other than Rishab. The cop finds Zoya and Rishab at the temple and informs Preeta. The priest's wife in temple brings Zoya.

While the ceremony is starting Zoya begins to feel guilty of betraying her brother and her mom's trust. Zoya reminisces her mom's words of not crossing her limit before marriage and gets up in the middle.
Rishab : Zoya, whats wrong?
Zoya : we are not doing right, have you ever thought how much humiliation our families will face, we cannot be happy without our family's blessing Rishab : Please Zoya, you know until we stay there we cannot be together,
Zoya : if our love is true then nobody will be able to separate us and if we are destined to not to be together then .(Starts leaving down when she spots Preeta in front of her)
Rishab is equally astounded to see Preeta.
Zoya : sis (stammers)
A slap voice echoed on Zoya's face by her mother.


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Posted: 7 years ago
#94
Interesting update
So it was Naina & Kabir's plan😡
I think now they will reveal everything to Sonia
Zoya & Rishab realized their mistake but it was too late
Waiting for next
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Posted: 7 years ago
#95
Read both parts now and they were super amazing
Ur writing skills uff they are so perfect
Update soon will be waiting
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Thanks for the double treat . Amazing chapter . Kabir -naina aghh what are they goingto do now . Sonia is going in right direction and I feel that the group should reveal everything to her before it is too late . I find zoya the only sensible person in this situation . Circumstances forced her to do what she hated . Oh no ! Her mom slapped her . Rishabh and zoya's family have a dark past related to zoya's dad .Rishabh's dad ...save him.This time karan is also not right . In fact karan is dumb in this ff and preeta is brave . Aapki ff mein dono ke characters change ho gaye🥱 . Please don't mind haan . I am enjoying it a lot . This ff of yours is not only yours but also my favourite . No changes required because your ff has a natural feel not that artificial drama and I like it .
update soon . I want a double treat tomorrow also . What to do . You right so well that you force me to be demanding
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Posted: 7 years ago
#97

Originally posted by: Muskanika

Thanks for the double treat . Amazing chapter . Kabir -naina aghh what are they goingto do now . Sonia is going in right direction and I feel that the group should reveal everything to her before it is too late . I find zoya the only sensible person in this situation . Circumstances forced her to do what she hated . Oh no ! Her mom slapped her . Rishabh and zoya's family have a dark past related to zoya's dad .Rishabh's dad ...save him.This time karan is also not right . In fact karan is dumb in this ff and preeta is brave . Aapki ff mein dono ke characters change ho gaye🥱 . Please don't mind haan . I am enjoying it a lot . This ff of yours is not only yours but also my favourite . No changes required because your ff has a natural feel not that artificial drama and I like it .

update soon . I want a double treat tomorrow also . What to do . You right so well that you force me to be demanding
Keep smiling


Phir track par bhi aa jayenge 😆 worry not. At one point you will feel all characters dumb 😉 but it happens due to circumstances even Preeta will do some foolishness later. I was not even going to change anything in this story
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Posted: 7 years ago
#98
Part 18

A slap voice echoed on Zoya's face by her mother.
Sakshi : after your dad died, lot of people cursed me that I will not be able to live alone in this whole world and told me that your daughter will dishonor you one day but I never payed heed to anybody because I was so sure that you both have my upbringing
Zoya : mom, I am sorry ( in tears)
Sakshi : Sorry? really Zoya you made me very ashamed today

Gauri scolds Rishab for risking their reputation and hold him responsible for his dad's condition
Sakshi : Zoya, how can you become so weak in your few days love and forgot all your manners, this guy influenced you right
Zoya much to everybody's astonishment tells that it was her idea to run away not Rishab.
Rishab : what are you saying Zoya? why are you lying
Zoya : No I am telling truth, I told him that nobody will accept our love
Rishab : Mom she is lying only so people blame her not me, it her who did not wanted to get married like this
Vicky : stop it both of you, it is your both fault, (is about to slap Zoya but Preeta stops him)
Preeta : stop it Vicky, I will talk to her
Vicky : Preeta, she is not worthy of talking, I cannot believe she could take such a big step
Preeta takes Zoya inside the room followed by Anjali and Shrishti.

Preeta : Zoya, you know i always considered you like my sister and more mature than Shrishti but you proved me wrong

Zoya : sis you know how much i love Rishab, I know I did wrong
Preeta : I know you very well that you are not type of girl who can go overboard risking family, are you the same girl who stopped Shrishti during that engagement from running her away because you cared about me right
Zoya nods in tears.
Shrishti : sis don't you think the families should agree for their love's sake
Preeta : its not about love, its about self respect and values, and not only aunty even for me my principals are more than anything
Later in the day Sonia reveals about the strange behavior of the group.
Preeta : what (shocked)
Sonia ; I am damn sure they have something to do with Ayesha's missing
Preeta : if that is the case then I will make them reveal the truth one way or the other, do one thing for me
Shrishti gets an extortion call in her phone when Karan tells her to put phone on the speaker.
Shrishti : hello ( says with scared voice)
Karan : listen we will do as you want but don't send that video to police
Caller ; you all will pay for your mistake, i will not let you live in peace easily, I will settle each score, you have killed that girl
Karan : we did not hit her intentionally, it was only an accident
"Accidents happen intentionally" a voice comes from back by Preeta who is raging in anger
Shrishti hides little bit behind Karan. The group is shocked to see all four Vicky, Sonia, Dev and Preeta standing.
Dev : Unbelievable, guys and Sameer you both are going to get married soon and start a new life
Preeta grabs Shrishti's hand and slaps her hardly in front of everybody hiding the truth.

Shrishti : sis at least listen to me,
Preeta ; listen what? that you all had fight in the party and then driving rashly on the highway, anybody could have died, and then tried to hide the dead body, this many lies
Adi : we got scared that if anybody gets to know

Preeta : really? and Shrishti you were not like this
Karan : its all my fault, everybody wanted to tell but I insisted not to
Dev : Anjali, being ACP sir's daughter you made this much big crime
Vicky : thank god we got to know the truth before it got too late
Preeta : you all think are smart enough to handle every problem but cops are there for some reason
Sonia : where is Ayesha's body?
Zoya : we don't know, when we took body to Karan's farm house, it disappeared
Preeta : disappeared? I don't believe this, do you guys have any idea in how badly you all will trapped and if anything gets wrong we will not be able to save you
Sonia : Preeta, we have to find Ayesha's body as soon as possible and we can find out who is the blackmailer
One of the informers tells Preeta they found Ayesha's body from the morgue.
Preeta : we found the body
Sonia : thank god but how did it go to the morgue

Preeta spots stain of blood behind the couch where Shrishti was attacked.

Dev : this case is getting complicated day by day, if that blackmailer sends the video to ACP sir or anybody then we will not be able to save these people

Vicky : it happened because of their foolishness
The forensic reports proves that Ayesha died due to the hitting of car.
Preeta : but how is this possible? I mean when they hit Ayesha, Shrishti told me that she was already injured and in her head and hands.
Dev: but why will the forensic report be false, I feel the person who attacked Shrishti and killed ayesha
Sonia stares him for unknowingly telling about Shrishti's attack
Preeta : Shrishti's attack? (says curiously) what are you all hiding from me
Dev tells Preeta about somebody attacking Shrishti at same night she left

Preeta : so much happened and I was kept unaware of everything
Sonia : actually Shrishti didn't wanted to trouble you at work so I
Preeta : fine lets find way to get out of this mess
Naina tells Kabir to be careful as Preeta is handling the case
Kabir : so what?
Naina : Excuse me, you don't know that those three are just puppets, Preeta is holding the main string of this case and she will be get the proof from underground
Kabir : before she can do that we create such a situation that she will not be able to get out of it
Akira brings food for Vicky during lunch
Dev : are you okay (touches her head)
Akira : stop it bro, you know that I like Vicky
Dev : just like? or anything more than that
Akira : Bro I like him as a friend, but I am not sure about love yet
Dev : I can clearly sethose feelings in your eyes Akira, but never mind take your time

Preeta gets the footage of Ayesha's murder and the groups' fight.
Sonia : We cannot see the person properly but the timings are different in both footages, the murder was around 9:45 and this people left the party right after around 10:00
Preeta : yea, ayesha's murder happened right before they left after that fight

Dev : but the suspicion will grow stronger, because it is the only difference of like 10-15 minutes, I feel the killer was in the party
Preeta : yea you are right, despite of much security how can the killer get inside or maybe somebody might have let him come inside
Sonia : but that does not mean Karan and all will be proven completely innocent
Vicky : maybe we should tell ACP sir and Minister to let them go on bail till we find the real culprit
Dev : its not that easy because Ayesha's friend has seen them taking her body from the road so she might give her statement that the person from the group murdered her, she might have not saw anybody throwing the body
Preeta : how is that girl now
Sonia : she is still in trauma, she might saw somebody coming out from Ayesha's room after the murder and she followed that person because she was found unconscious near the same road where killer threw the body
Dev ; you are right, maybe that time this people might have run away in car when Ayesha had followed the murderer who threw Ayesha's body on that road purposely so Karan and all get trapped

Preeta : whatever it is, we only have theory here not any proof till we meet Ayesha's friend
Sonia : do you think she might have seen the killer
Preeta : maybe because this footage of murder is not clear
Dev : if Ayesha's murder happened due to stabbing but does that report say wrong
Sonia : Preeta, I feel that person is keeping eye on us and he might have tampered with report
ACP calls all four of them in his house and the group too.
Anjali : dad (is about to say something)
ACP : just shut up (voices loudly) Anjali, how come you courage to face me after such a big brawl you did
Renuka : do you guys have any idea how badly we are all trapped, you all are children, sibling of police background, how much insult we all have to face

Karan : Aunty we did not killed Ayesha
Preeta : we know that she was stabbed before but not so far from the place you all were driving rashly, law will not believe our words it needs proof of your innocence
ACP : I have talked to CM, thank god he is ready to leave you all in bail after we found that murder footage but that does not mean you all are proved innocent because there is still one clue left
Shrishti : what?
Preeta : Ayesha's friend saw that killer and then she saw all of you on that road taking Ayesha's body in car
All scared with shock

Sameer : what? bro even that blackmailer has that video
Dev : Sameer, be thankful Minister did not get that video yet or you all would have been in jail right now
ACP : Preeta, dev you both start the preparation of Shrishti and Sameer's engagement, Vicky and Sonia will handle this case

Preeta : yes sir


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Posted: 7 years ago
#99
Amazing update👏
Finally everyone is aware of the truth
Lets see how the gang will be saved
Hate Kabir & Naina especially Naina as she is harming her own family in her revenge
Waiting for next
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Posted: 7 years ago
Thanks for the triple treat . The chapter was amazing . Thank god they got to know about the group's mistake . Now they will help them . I am feeling bad for RiYa (rishabh and zoya) . Thankgod acp is supporting them . Hope that minister don't get the video and the group is proved innocent . Samishti's wedding is comming near yippee...This ff has become a crime solving mystery and I love it .
Keep giving us treats
Keep smiling
Love you😊

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