Preetan & Abhigya FF : Shades of relationship part 25 (Pg 12) - Page 2

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Part 2

Small area of Mumbai


The police firing continues with some goons hidden inside the old building . One of them main officer is Purab khanna who uses his sharp skills and become ruthless. Constabel

"All set with everything, with my orders fire but make sure nobody gets harm inside Purab talks on walkie

After long brawl Purab is finally able to catch the goons and saves the people.

Commissioner Chauhan appreciates his bravery of saving his team and people inside.

Purab : thank you Sir

Chauhan : see you in headquarters jai hind

"Jai hind Purab leaves after saluting


BSS college



Bulbul and Shrishti who are in last year goes to BSS college.

Navya : hey Shrishti, I am so excited we are almost graduating, whats the next plan

"Photography baby, I want to make my own documentary you see in future I will become big and marry a rich guy Shrishti shares her dream of becoming wealthy

Navya : you are so ambitious I am sure one day you might end up getting what you want

"I am Shrishti Arora, always get everything I eye on by hook or crook takes pictures around for her portfolio submission.


Bulbul who is in fashion designing league is interview by Mumbai's top most fashion company on recruitment. She does not hope for high salary but only to learn something.

"Bulbul, help me choose the dress for the youth festival, only two weeks left before even Sona tells her to choose dress for participants

Bulbul : I told Amy to put all of them in back room and make sure you check with the designer alright

Sona : okay thanks (leaves)



Cricket field



On other side people are cheering in cricket stadium for last wicket. The batsman hits the last six up high will ball out of boundary. The crowd raises the flag for one more victory in BPL and name of the star "Karan Luthra. He removes his helmet holding his bat up high and cheering with the whole team. Outside Karan is surrounded around high security where his fans cheer for his success.


Karan goes to Gurudwara to bow down his head like after every match. Preeta at the same time goes to pray there after getting new job. Both bows down praying for their families and career. They tie thread in the corner accidentally touching hands. Karan feels a strange sensation with her touch never like before with anybody. He could not see her face properly due to the wall with loops. Before he could reach Preeta, she leaves from there after praying.

Preeta runs to the bus quickly, in rush her scarf blows on Karans' face.

Bodyguard : Rishab sir have called you in the office shall we go

Karan : yea (lakes the scarf from his mouth) and sees around)

Bodyguard : we are getting late sir

Karan : yea come on (keeps scarf in his car)


Luthra office


A young dashing guy with blue blazer runs through the files.

Karan : bhai

The guy turns around in chair known "Rishab Luthra elder son of Luthra family


Rishab : welcome my brother and congratulations for another victory

Karan : thank you bhai but this is not fair you missed my another match

Rishab : don't worry you just get selected in international then say that your brother will not come there

Karan : love you bhai, come lets celebrate

Rishab : not right now in evening only you and me okay now go enjoy your freedom

Karan : don't forget your promise (hugs and leaves happily)

Rishab : drama king my little brother



Phoenix company


Pragya starts her work as intern under event manager for country's most popular rockstar Abhi Mehra. She sees the crowd outside the building to welcome their celebrity. A young charming with black leather jacket and sunglasses comes down from stopper. He gives flying kisses to all this fan as token of love. Preeta is not able to see his face properly due to crowd and goes back inside.


"Abhi, Abhi the crowd roars with his name everywhere


Abhi Mehra, another high profile celebrity of country after Luthras. He has been winning million hearts with his voice. However he have huge conflict with Star Karan Luthra in terms of professionalism.


Bodyguard : Sir, the staff is waiting for you

The event manager Sophia (Navina Bole) introduces him to the whole staff of the office except Pragya who left for the day

"Nice to meet you all Abhi gives attitude smile


Sophia : there is one more who just joined our company but she left early today

Abhi : okay but make sure when I am rehearsing nobody should disturb me

Sophia : don't worry sir nobody will (assures him)

Abhi goes to his studio for practice


In evening


Luthra house gets in full swing for celebration of Karan's one more victory

Rishab : no today only we both brothers will have our own time sorry everybody

Rakhi : and your brother is my son too what about that

Karan : mom you spend time with dad enjoy that freedom

"Mom's spoiled brats, instigating my wife Mahesh scolds them

Dadi ; okay now stop it, always fighting for no reason let my kids enjoy you both go

"love you dadi boys give hers flying kiss

Dadi : love you too



Mehra house


Abhi goes to his house to meet his Dadi after long time.

"Dadi where are you Abhi calls her but she does not respond

He finds her sitting in temple room as usual praying for him

Dadi : can't you keep quiet for few minutes every time I pray and you roar

Abhi : come on dadi tell me what do you get with doing this prayer everyday we have everything now

Dadi : exactly you have this because of god and your hard work also

Abhi : just tell me what you want? I will bring it in your feet

"What I want is not to put on feet but make that sit on your head Dadi tells him

Abhi : marriage? no way ask me other things but this I can't give you

Dadi : why not? I have never criticized your choice and you still dont' want to

Abhi : I want to enjoy my freedom and girl I want is still didn't came in front of me

Dadi : what type of girl you want?

"Just like mom, the one who can give me competition but still have pure heart, who can love you more than me, her eyes should have that spark to give back tit for tat Abhi reveals his choice to her

Dadi : oh god looks like some unique choice, I will pray soon you come in front of her


Arora house

The girls come back from their college and work in evening


Preeta : wow what a smell mom

"I am making your all favorite curry now tell me how was your day Sarla ask her

Preeta : it was amazing, Preeta did you get your job

"Yes didi, salary won't be much but there is lot to learn since the clinic is just new setup Preeta puts her bag in room

Dadi : where are my other two birds

Bulbul : I am here dadi (hugs here) how is my rockstar today

Dadi ; fantastic you tell me how was your day, your exams are coming soon

Bulbul : chill dadi your granddaughters are smart enough they will top only

Shrishti comes there too hearing their conversation but leaves to her room

Sarla : okay you all freshen up dinner is ready


Shrishti goes to terrace as she does not sit with everybody for dinner.

Sarla : I don't know whats her problem, she always does this

Dadi : calm down, Preeta, Pragya one of you go to terrace and make her eat

Bulbul : can I go please

Preeta : no you don't or else she will again shout like morning

Pragya : I will go (takes the plate and leaves)


On terrace Shrishti looks at her old camera and portfolio. She gets in tears seeing their dad's picture with them.

"Hey princess time for dinner Pragya comes upstairs

Shrishti : I am not hungry di please

Pragya ; this is not done, dadi says one should not sleep empty stomach come today I will feed you with my hands (feeds her)

Shrishti eats herself

Pragya : what were you looking?

Shrishti : nothing di, just old pictures I took, soon after college we will go into new world

Pragya : do you know what you want to do?

"Photography di but for that I need a good camera this one is not going to work and you know right now I don't have money Shrishti shares her feelings

Pragya : don't worry Preeta and my job has started we will buy you a new one

Shrishti : no di I cannot take money from you, its your hard work I want to do it by my own

Pragya : do one thing till you graduate why don't you get a part time job somewhere in company who hire

Shrishti : I am trying that di but luck is not on my side right now

Pragya : as far as I know my sister is not from the one who waits on luck right

Shrishti : thats true

"Here is the solution for all problems Preeta hands her the newspaper

Shrishti : di what is this

Preeta : your solution, keep looking for jobs and I am damn sure you will find one

"Thank you, my lovely sisters Shrishti hugs them happily

Bulbul feels bad for missing their hug and goes back to room



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Posted: 7 years ago
#12
interesting concept
Just read both chapters
Loved the introduction of every character
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Aww... Lovely chapter but tell me where should I drop my feedback here or on tellyupdates
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Originally posted by: Muskanika

Aww... Lovely chapter but tell me where should I drop my feedback here or on tellyupdates


Its upto you 😉
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Karan preeta thread scene...touching each other unknowingly wasromantic.even the scarf scene was romantic.waiting 4 preeran meeting.rishab Karan scene was lovely.Here too Navina is there.Is she Rishab's luv interest here too?Abhi's introduction was superb.Abhi dadi scene was nice.Waiting 4 Abhigya luv story to start..sad that shrishti is behaving like this.now I am wondering where shrishti will get apart time job.will it be under Kundras?Sisters' hug was nice.but I felt bad4 bulbul.i am waiting to seeall the 4 sisters together

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Originally posted by: jasminerahul

Karan preeta thread scene...touching each other unknowingly wasromantic.even the scarf scene was romantic.waiting 4 preeran meeting.rishab Karan scene was lovely.Here too Navina is there.Is she Rishab's luv interest here too?Abhi's introduction was superb.Abhi dadi scene was nice.Waiting 4 Abhigya luv story to start..sad that shrishti is behaving like this.now I am wondering where shrishti will get apart time job.will it be under Kundras?Sisters' hug was nice.but I felt bad4 bulbul.i am waiting to seeall the 4 sisters together


She will not be rishab's love interest. There will be love triangles here and Shrishti won't work with Luthras like Preeta 😊. Bulbul and Shrishti's journey will be bumpy till it becomes completely inseparable in future
Edited by abhiya23 - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Amazing update!
Why are Shrishti and Bulbul not close to each other?
Why doesn't Shrishti like Bulbul?
Preeran in Gurudwara were amazing!
The thread touching scene was love!
Karan taking Preeta's scarf!
So Shrishti wants to become a photographer!
Waiting for the next update...
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Part 3






Rishab and Karan goes to celebrate the victory of his success.

"Bhai today I am very happy, you know in my success you have biggest hand" Karan gets drunk

Rishab : don't batter me so much okay, what are elder brothers for, to take care of younger ones

Karan : but you learn to relax for a while now, I can handle by myself now

Rishab : I know how much you can, if you want to do something then work little hard and get selected in international

Karan : anything for you bhai just wait and watch how I get selected like this

Rishab laughs at his antics

Karan : bhai now its your time to get married but remember don't stop pampering me when your wife comes

Rishab : you are my kiddo how will I forget that, but you say will you not get married

Karan : no bhai, I don't believe those things you know that, this marriage love suits you not me

(gets unconscious slowly)

Rishab : now I wonder why your excitement reduced, whole time you banter (covers him with duvet and puts alarm)

Khanna house

Purab returns to his home after long duty from headquarters. He sees cake set on table with candles and dark everywhere.

Purab : hey princess where are you hiding, I know you love this game come out now

"Happy birthday to you, happy birthday" delightful voice echoes in whole house

A girl wearing blue dress and curly hair comes there holding cake in hands.

Ruhi : happy birthday to world's best brother, now blow this candles quickly

Purab : you are crazy, I am not kid

Ruhi : come on bhai you don't need age and for your information my brother is still young okay

Purab cuts the cake and feeds her.

"Happy now" Purab asks her

Ruhi ; surprise is not over yet come on (takes him to dining room)

Purab : oh my god so much food, who made it

"Its my brother's birthday, of course I will make it, so I gave all servants day off to relax, even they needs some peace bhai, whole day they work" Ruhi shows her affection to all workers which makes Purab most proud of his sister

Ruhi : how is it? tell me quickly is it spicy, less chilly or burned

Purab pretends to feel burned in mouth.

Ruhi : what happened bhai? drink this

Purab coughs

Ruhi : are you okay? I am so sorry, let me call Dulari she will make something quickly

"Wait wait, where are you going" Purab stops her and appreciates the cooking

Ruhi : bhai you are so mean (starts crying) I was getting worried and you are making fun of me

Purab : my little sister got emotional (wipes her tears) who else is there beside you in my life

Ruhi : bhai I swear dont ever do that (hugs him emotionally)

Purab : now can we finish our food, I am starving please come

Both feeds each other happily. Ruhi gives him guitar to play

Purab : I am not in mood please

Ruhi : please for me, today is your special day

Purab starts with soft tune

Tere bin (besides you)

Sanu sohnia (my love)

Koi hor nahio labhna (i shan't find another)

Jo dave (who'll give)

Ruh nu sakun (peace to my soul)

Chukke jo nakhra mera (and indulge me)

Tere bin (besides you)

Sanu sohnia (my love)

Koi hor nahio labhna (i shan't find another)

Jo dave (who'll give)

Ruh nu sakun (peace to my soul)

Chukke jo nakhra mera (and indulge me)

Ruhi ; bhai I didn't give you this guitar so you recall those old emotions

Purab : some feelings are too deep to bury (holds her face)

Phone ringts

"Yes, sir I am coming" Purab talks on phone

Ruhi ; where are you going? see the time

Purab : time can wait but our duties cannot, good night princess (leaves)

Dulari ; whats wrong didi?

"I don't know when that day will come when bhai will have peace in life" Ruhi gets worried

Next day at Arora house

The girls get ready for their work and college. Shrishti and Bulbul catches the same bus everyday for their college. Pragya rushes on road for getting late to her work when she collides with the car coming with speed.

"Oouch, idiot can't you see" Pragya falls on road

Driver comes out shouting at her for being carelessly running on road

Pragya : its your fault, are you blind can't you see this is small street still driving rashly, inform your boss this is not his high society street (bangs on the window)

Abhi removes his headphones coming out of the car with attitude. Initially he is lost in Pragya's simplicity and gracious look

Apne Roothein, Paraaye Roothein

Yaar Roothein Naa..

Khwaab Tootein, Waade Tootein

Dil Yeh Toote Naa..

Ho..Apne Roothein, Paraaye Roothein

Yaar Roothein Naa..

Khwaab Tootein, Waade Tootein

Dil Yeh Toote Naa..

Roothe To Khuda Bhi Roothe

Saath Chhoote Naa..

Roothe To Khuda Bhi Roothe

Saath Chhoote Naa..

O Allah Waariyan

O Main To Haariyan

Pragya : hello I am talking with you

Driver : Sir see how this girl is arguing with me, she was running like crazy

"Here is your money, get your treatment done" Abhi hands her money and goes inside

Pragya : I am not a beggar, keep this with you (hands his money back picking up her files)

Both curses each other for being spoiled brats and not meet again.

Phoenix company

Sophia : hey Pragya yesterday you didn't meet Abhi sir you left early

Preeta : who?

"Abhi the rockstar you don't know, they have signed contract with us for next album launch" Sophia informs her

Pragya ; oh where is he?

Sophia : he should be here anytime soon, so make sure everything is ready, his rehearsal room should be proper okay

Pragya : yes ma'am

Somebody informs them about Abhi's arrival. The fans on gate takes his autographs.

Sophia : hello Sir, Pragya is everything ready

Pragya widens her eyes seeing the same person she messed up in the morning.

Pragya : god he is the same one, I invited trouble on my head but it was his fault why should I be scared of him (hide under file)

Sophia : Sir, she is Pragya (removes file from her face quickly)

Abhi take his glasses off giving her attitude.

Sophia ; Sir? what happened

Abhi : nothing send my coffee inside the studio and make sure nobody disturbs me when I am rehearsing alright

Sophia : okay Sir don't worry I will send one

Abhi : Wait you won't, Ms Arora, make coffee for me and bring inside

Pragya : sir I am event manager here

Sophia : Pragya (signals her)

"Who is the boss here" Abhi ask approaching towards her

Pragya : you Sir

"Good then coffee in 10 minutes" leaves smirking

Pragya vents her anger out on files

Luthra house

Dadi makes ruckus in the house for not going to doctor at any cost.

Rishab : Dadi, please for my sake, if you don't like doctor we will change it okay

Dadi : only for you I am doing this but I don't even need a doctor

"Mummyji, you are behaving like a kid, we are worried about your health" Rakhi brings juice

Karan ; good morning girlfriend how are you doing (touches her feet)

Dadi : you are going for practice?

Karan : yes or else Rishab will be after me again, love you take care

Dadi : bye

Bulbul goes to buy watch in the store when a robber enters escaping from police. He creates a situation framing Bulbul by putting watch in her purse while she is leaving. He informs shopkeeper about the robbery and distracts cops

"Hey girl wait" shopkeeper stops her

Bulbul : yes? do you need anything

Shopkeeper : you took the watch and leaving without payment this is robbery

Bulbul : excuse me I have not done anything, check my bag (shows her stuff)

Shopkeeper finds the watch in the bag shocking her to the core

Bulbul : i swear I have done nothing, please believe me

Shopkeeper calls the cops getting her arrested. The thief runs away taking the chance. Bulbul starts panicking about whole incidence.

Police station

"Leave me I said" Bulbul shouts

Constable ; hey keep your voice down, here only our boss can shout like that

"Who is your boss, tell me the name, without investigating I am brought here" Bulbul creates ruckus in police station

Constable : take her and lock inside the cell, now Sir will decide what should be done, and madam you are not aware our Sir never spare criminals be it anybody

Bulbul : leave me I said

Constable lady throws her inside the cell.

"Bappa, please help me, Pragya di" Bulbul prays recalling her sister

Small firm

Preeta goes through the reports of the patients and gives them proper treatment.

Maya : hey Preeta how is everything?

"Very good, I am fine" Preeta smiles

Maya : great, okay listen you know in nearby orphanage the manager in charge has requested to get routine check up

Preeta : okay so you want me to go there

Maya : of course, and don't worry about here I will manage and rest of the staff also

Preeta : okay here is the X ray report of patient no 5 (gives her file)

Maya : thank you and best of luck

"Thanks" Preeta leaves for the nearby orphanage

She gets emotional seeing the children playing around together.

Shobha : yes? oh wait you are Preeta right

Preeta : Maya ma'am sent me for routine check up for all children

Shobha : you sit here, I will send all children one by one for check up

Preeta : sure

The children have lot of fun with Preeta while doing check ups. Shobha informs her about person who build their orphanage. His grandson is making visit

Preeta : who is it?

Shobha : you might have Rishab Luthra, such a nice person down to earth, he comes every week

Preeta : so good to hear there are still such people who think about others

College

Navya informs Shrishti about Bulbul's arrest she saw on the road.

Shrishti : what? but how

Navya tells her everything she got to know from the shopkeeper.

Shrishti : now what should I do?

"Call your sisters they will help" suggests her

Shrishti : no they have just started new job, it will affect their work, I will do something

Navya ; see I know a lawyer who can help us but for that we need money

Shrishti : how much?

"I don't know it depends maybe 5000 or 10,000" reveals

Shrishti ; how will I arrange so much money?

"I can help you with 3000 but not more than that you know my dad, rest you have to manage" Navya consoles her

Shrishti looks at the camera which is much dear to her more than anything.

Precap : Karan -Preeta-Rishab first meeting in different circumstances. Purab and Bulbul meet turns out disastrous.
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Interesting update👏
Loved Karan & Rishab's moment😊
Ruhi & Purab moment was nice😊
Abhi & Pragya meet was disastrous😆
Bulbool is in lockup , let's see how Shristi rescues her
Waiting for next
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Lovely update
It was quite interesting
Everyone together
Loved it
Update soon

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