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Posted: 7 years ago
#31
sad to see Durga like this.loving armaan durga bonding.hope Armaan finds the best partner for Durga. wish its rishab. loved shrishti bandaging bulbul's wound.bulbul is waiting to enter sgrishti's heart.but she doesn't know that she already has place in shrishti's heart n thats why she cares for her .good that dadi is impressed with preeta.pragya says that something is missing in abhi's song due to lack of love.let's see how abhi will sing after he falls for pragya.abhigya thinking of each other n smiling was romantic. darkness scene was romantic. waiting for the continuation of that scene.like you wrote though a simple scene rain added a romantic feel to preeran scene.preeran guest house nok jhok was cute.
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Part 6

Arora house


Karan drops Preeta outside her house

"Thanks she says smiling

Karan : I dont' take people's sorry and thank you, it was my duty

Preeta : won't you come inside

Karan ; few minutes ago you were feeling embarrassed with me to come here

Preeta : nothing like that, you know we belong to middle class family and people look for gossip

Karan ; only free people do that, one should not change their conscience, maybe next time

Preeta : okay bye (leaves)

Karan watches her going inside. She turns around at the door waving him. He leaves



Phoneix company


Abhi tries to find the electricity box in the office when Pragya was holding his hand.

Abhi : please keep the candle little front so I can see

Pragya : sorry I am scared of dark

"Okay don't worry I won' leave you Abhi assures her calmly

Both finds the electricity box in the corner.

Thunderstorm lights

Abhi : I think due to weather all wires got circuit, you were right its not safe to hold concert here

Pragya : now what will we do? we can't even go out in this condition

Abhi : I guess we should wait till storm calms down lets sit

Both finds comfort in the cabin resting at sofa.

"I should make her feel better Abhi says

Pragya looks outside the window watching every drops of rain

Abhi : what are you looking?

Pragya : this rain, did you ever feel those drops? (puts her hand outside)

Abhi : no why is it too special

"Try it once in life they have their own feelings, sometimes when you are too much stressed feel those drops on face, you are singer right maybe this rain will inspire you Pragya tells her inner feelings

Abhi ; there is so much to learn from you, actually I never got time in life, mom dad passed away I started working in early age so dadi can relax

Pragya : even my dad died, as a elder daughter I have to help mom, and take care of three sister you know how hard that would be

Abhi : thats too much, you have three sisters?

Pragya : oh yes all three are different poles, north south and west

Abhi ; and you are east?

Pragya (laughs) : I don't know maybe but they are my world

Abhi : ever since I got mature all I got fans around me, nobody I can trust as friend

Pragya : one should trust themselves first only they give change to others, I am tired

Abhi : why don't you take some rest on sofa? I will let you know when rain stops

Pragya ; you won't sleep?

Abhi ; I don't sleep much you know

"I will sleep on floor, I am used to it but you won't be able to Pragya tells him

Abhi : I have high status right now but I also come from same background as you

" My mom says when you can't sleep just close your eyes and think of something you never did try this trick Pragya rests on sofa closing her eyes feeling safe

Abhi keeps looking at her and recall her inspiring words dozing off on floor.


"Rainy weather, people often consider to be romantic for love and every emotion but some feelings are hard to define. Two strangers share heart then loved ones. Female voice


Khanna house


Ruhi comes back home when she sees lock is already opened. She does not see Purab's car outside and doubts about thief.

"Who is it, come out quickly Ruhi takes the gun out pointing

"I would have but please put that gun down I am ready to surrender a male voice comes

Ruhi : fine I won't shoot now come out

The person puts hands on her eyes

"Who is it, oh my god Sameer Ruhi realizes and turns around

Sameer (her childhood friend) : hello

"Oh my god you scared hell out of me, hmm you were testing a cop's sister Ruhi hugs him excitedly

Sameer : of course I wanted to see if you are really a cop's sister

Ruhi : and you dared to barged in a police's house like thief (plays with gun funnily)

Sameer : what will you do? send me to jail ?

Ruhi : I wish I could arrest you in my prison for lifetime

Sameer : now will you stay like this or give me some food I am starving yaar

Ruhi : Chaaya get the food, I will just come

Sameer : wow amazing I just loved it

"You didn't tell me about your arrival from Pune when did you come ask him

Sameer ; this morning forget mine how is your famous fashion magazine company running

Ruhi ; just great you know I got big contract from Paris league they are coming for fashion show soon but I need a photographer

Sameer ; come on, who can deny working with your company

Ruhi : I gave so many ads and did interviews but still didn't get a good candidate

Sameer ; what type of person you want?

Ruhi : the one who can capture live moment who have passion, that strive to achieve something and work for ambition not money

Sameer : thats very hard to find my dear, but don't delay much, okay I will take leave I have to go home bye buddy take care

Ruhi : bye (thinks of something)


"Sameer and Ruhi's relation was like deep water more one goes more they find themselves deep. Ruhi loved Sameer more than anything but it is said na nothing excessive is good for health. Voiceover hints about something


Abhi drops Pragya home after roads are clear as well as weather improves.

Pragya : thank you for everything, take care

Abhi (Stops her) : Pragya, thanks for being such a nice friend

Pragya ; good night Sir (leaves)

She leaves her small piece of earring on the door while going out.


Allah Waariya bg



Chicago


Durga wakes up with heavy head when somebody gives her tablet and water.

Armaan ; freshen up and have some breakfast with medicine

Durga (still in same mode) : bhai sorry last night I got little high

Armaan ; be ready we are going out, I am waiting for you outside

Nandita and Uday have argument in early morning due to Durga's behavior

"Explain your daughter, the name I earned with so much effort she is disgracing like sand Uday breaks glass and blames her for being bad mother

Nandita ; is she my alone daughter, why didn't you show any responsibility on her

Uday : don't spoil my mood in early morning, I have very important meeting

Nandita : you and your work, at least think you have family also

Uday ; I also have to run business along with your nonsense, you couldn't give me a son, instead gave me a burden she herself is doing nothing only enjoying my money


Durga hears their conversation putting hands on her ears with fear. She has seen her parents fighting ever since she has become mature to understand. Only one person who hold her hand in darkest storm was her brother Armaan. Both of them come out and see her leaning against wall.


Uday : and you? if you cannot raise my name at least don't try to disgrace it, yesterday again you were at police station

"Dad I am so,,,sorry she stammers with fear

Uday ; sorry my foot, if again you do anything like that mind it you won't step out from this house

Armaan stops him midway from hitting her. She hides behind him like child

"Don't worry nothing has happened, she won't repeat the mistake again Armaan makes eye contact with him sternly

Uday leaves

Nandita : when will you stop your mistakes Durga, every time I have to hear because of you, please think about our reputation before doing anything like this (leaves furiously)

"Bhai that Durga cries

Armaan : its okay (consoles her) lets go we are going out na come


Kritika and Armaan decides to cheer up Durga by taking to shopping mall.

Kritika : why don't you try this dress? you will look gorgeous

Armaan : please your choice is very bad my sister is very classy and this is too simple

Kritika ; excuse me, beauty is judged by inner side okay

Armaan ; whoever said that might be this universes' fool

Kritka (runs after him) ; you called me stupid

Armaan ; I didn't even take your name, you know yourself good

Durga leaves outside silently without reaction. The duo gets tensed with her behavior

Armaan ; I don't know what to do, I tried everything

Kritika ; you have not maybe thats why she has become corpse

Armaan : what do you mean?

Kritika ; I am still saying send her to india, you see how she is changed living there


"In old days daughters were considered as burden to people, as they turn 18 get them married and relieve with responsibility. But there were some people who wanted their daughters to become famous and strong. That day I also realized it was not timing or culture but people's greedy nature who drove them away from relations. Even today when I see Durga I ask same question is she the same one who got scared even with talking to people Voice over says


Mumbai


Later at night Shrishti and Bulbul starts preparation of their exams.

Preeta ; hey girls time for milk come on gulp it quickly

Shrishti ; di please you know I don't like

"You want to top right ? then you need this badly come on Preeta gives her glass

Bulbul : thank you didi, you know soon there is recruitment for jobs

Pragya ; thats great whats the plan?

Bulbul : fashion designing didi, I will work in that company and get experience

Preeta : Shrishti show your camera, I also want to try taking picture

Shrishti (Gets nervous) : di I am tired we will take picture later please

Preeta : but you tell me where is it I will take it by myself

Pragya signals her to not force

Dadi : you both graduated and got jobs let my other two birds learn to fly come on

Preeta : just few more minutes

Dadi ; no more, you can talk after exams, there is whole life to talk

Pragya : good night girls best of luck

"Dont' forget about my pictures Preeta tells her sister

Pragya : come on all the time pictures and selfies let them study


Luthra house


Rishab ; mom did you talk with Kritika when is she coming back?

Rakhi : I talked with her this morning her seminar is almost done so she will come in few days

Dadi : Rakhi girl is getting mature, lets start finding grooms for her

Rishab : whats so hurry? let her stand up on her own feet and then think

Dadi : when did I say get her married right now? it takes time to find good boys

Karan : let her enjoy life first then think about marriage and she is still young

Dadi ; where is my other daughter?

"Did you adopt your phsyio Karan asks her

Dadi : consider it like that you will also say same thing if you meet her

Preeta : I am here dadi (comes there)


Karan recognizes the voice and turns around to see her standing.

Preeta ; you?

"You? he stands up

Rishab : you both know each other

Karan ; doctor madam tell bhai how do we know each other (Teases her)

Rishab : what are you whispering to her

Karan tells him everything

Preeta : he is the bhai you were talking about

Karan : of course he is my jaan, Rishab so you are dadi's phsyio, you made her so used of you she is not giving us attention

Preeta : oh please she is elder you all should pay attention to her

Rishab : Karan aren't you getting late for practice go

Karan : okay, bye Ms doctor take care of dadi properly (leaves teasing her)

Rishab : don't mind he is just a kid, but his heart is very clean

Preeta : I know thats why I didn't mind his jokes before either and he helped me yesterday too

Dadi : Preeta will you only do chatting come to me please

Preeta : coming dadi


Rishab sees her treating dadi like her own family more than a doctor


Jogi hona bg


He comes inside

Preeta : Rishabji you also see and tell your brother how much dadi have improved

Dadi : you don't need to prove anybody

Rishab : not bad, you know dadi made every doctor run away using all tricks I guess she ran out of ideas

Preeta : she didn't need to use on me


Bulbul goes to cafe nearby her college when she sits on table not knowing somebody already took it.

Purab ; excuse me ma'am I am already siting on this table (does not see her face)

Bulbul : sorry sorry (turns around)

Purab : you? you should be sorry

Bulbul ; I take my sorry back because you don't deserve it

Purab ; what do you mean? I just told you one simple thing I took this table before you

Bulbul ; I have not forgotten that insult, I very well know people like you

Purab : listen I am cop at least be respectful

Waiter ; yes ma'am he is very honest cop, and he came to this table first

Bulbul ; does it say your name

Purab : oh god why are you so irritating? this is public place every body is here to enjoy

Bulbul : I am not here to spoil their mood you are doing that noble deed

Purab : waiter take his money and you drink that coffee

Bulbul : thanks for the table bye and don't cross path with me again, Waiter get me a hot chocolate please

Purab turns around to see her and leaves irritatedly.


Precap : Durga comes to india when some thugs goes behind her. Bulbul and Shrishti starts preparing to go at trekking camp. Abhi's first concert goes little haywire due to his rival whom Pragya is unaware. Preeta's friendship blossom with Luthra brothers





PS : Guys I am trying to give equal importance to every character and family in this story since its very big one.


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Posted: 6 years ago
#33
Interesting update👏
Loved Preeta's moment with Luthras😊
Abhi & Pragya are now friends😊
Feeling sad for Durga😭
Will Ruhi turn obsessive for Sameer😲
Rabul are too much😆
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Posted: 6 years ago
#34
preeran scene was simple but nice.ruhi sameer scene was cute.will sameer find shrishti for ruhi's company as ruhi needs a dedicated person for her company.I forgot who plays ruhi.please tell me again.sad to see durga's parents fighting over Durga.sad to see them blaming her.the only relief is armaan supports her.armaan krithika nok jhok is cute.hope they both make Durga normal.abhigya scene was so sweet.pragya's dialogue about rain was beautiful. rabul fight was interesting.voice over has hidden meaning in it.waiting for more
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Part 7

Chicago


Durga is sitting on riverfront thinking about her childhood incidence.

Armaan (sits next to her) : you know when you were not born I always told mom why I don't have a sister then you came

Durga looks at him

Armaan : I promised to myself that I will always keep you close to me more than real sister

Durga : bhai can I ask you something?

He looks at her surprisingly

"Why dont' you get married she asks

Armaan ; not until my sister's hands are adorned with Mehndi

Durga : you know I am not made for all those things bhai

Armaan ; I have not asked anything but today if I ask will you do that for me

Durga : what bhai?

"Go to india for few months he asks her

Durga gets scared of going very far when she herself have not gone out of city alone

Armaan ; what are you thinking?

Durga ; you know I cannot go alone and if dad finds out, I am scared

Armaan ; thats why I want you to go there and leave this fear here

"i can't I won't go anywhere she resists in fear

Armaan ; listen to me, if you consider me your brother then for me take this step

"Bhai, don't say that you are my only hope in life I lost mom dad's love years go, if this makes you happy I will go she gets teary eyes

Both shares very emotional hug


Armaan gets the ticket for Durga after two days to Air india flight for Mumbai.

Kritika ; i could have come with you but I have seminar for one more week

Armaan : don't worry my Durga will manage right my sister

She smiles with blank

Armaan : when you come back I want to see another Durga the one who learned to smile


"Armaan probably didn't knew that this trip will change not only Durga but his life also would be be changed forever. Real test will come now for both brother sister relation Voiceover hints on Armaan Durga's changing dynamics in future


Mumbai at night


Arora house


Lights goes out due to bad weather.

Pragya : not again, Preeta can you get the candle from kitchen

Preeta : yes di, Shrishti Bulbul can you go check the electricity box

"Di here is the candle Preeta gives her

Pragya : god when will this weather end? its making me irritated

Bulbul : don't worry sis we get to see rain once in a while every year

Pragya fixes the lights

Bulbul ; I was saying lets go eat corn please

Preeta : you are crazy we will get sick

"Pragya di, I don't know in which auspicious moment she went to get her doctor degree Bulbul teases her

Preeta ; I will beat you with this stick if you say anything about my profession

Pragya : so possessive

Dadi : what are my chirping birds doing?

Pragya ; dadi seen na they are making fun of my work (pouts)

Dadi : nobody will bother my child

Pragya : wow dadi and when she used to take money for chocolate from my purse

Bulbul hides her laugh

Preeta (finds the stick) : wait I will show you, always making fun of me

Bulbul collides with Shrishti while running around dropping glass of water on her clothes.

Bulbul : i am so sorry, let me clean

Shrishti (gets angry) ; forget it, I will clean up

Bulbul feels bad seeing her anger again

Preeta : di, I think we should go out too

"Very soon your brain worked good she taunts

Preeta : di please

Pragya : now go get ready, Bulbul dear come we will eat corn on cob

Bulbul signals her to call Shrishti.

Pragya ; you both go I will call her (goes to her room inside) hey my little princess

Shrishti ; yes didi?

Pragya ; get ready we are going to eat corn on cob speciality of this weather

Shrishti ; di you can go I am not in mood

Pragya : come on at least spend some time your sisters too and then study

Shrishti : please di I really dont want to go

Dadi tells them not to force her and go alone.

Bulbul ; how will we go without her

"You don't have to worry I can take care of myself okay Shrishti argues

Sarla : this is not way to talk, she is your sister

"Of course in this house I am only wrong and you are right after all this is your house Shrishti leaves angrily

Preeta : Shrishti wait, di please stop her

Dadi : let her go

Pragya : but dadi she went in anger

Dadi : she needs some time alone she will be back you all go I will talk to her

The sisters feel bad and cancels their plan


Shrishti walks on road thinking about her bitter childhood. She was treated separately than bulbul by Sarla from childhood days. Her mind and heart go through battle of emotions.


"It is said the more poison goes inside body more the effect it does. The poison was running in Shrishti's mind from childhood was killing her more voiceover says


Suddenly it starts to rain. The rain drops soothes her pain of many years. She feels every drop of rain


Behta Hai Mann Kahi, Kahan Jaante Nahi

Behta Hai Mann Kahi, Kahan Jaante Nahi

Koyi Rok Le Yehi

Bhage Rey Mann Kahi Aage Re Mann Chala

Jaane Kidhar Jaanu Naa

Bhage Rey Mann Kahi Aage Re Mann Chala

Jaane Kidhar Jaanu Naa


Shrishti eats spicy paani puri


Behta Hai Mann Kahi, Kahan Jaante Nahi

Koyi Rok Le Yehi

Bhage Rey Mann Kahi Aage Re Mann Chala

Jaane Kidhar Jaanu Naa

Bhage Rey Mann Kahi Aage Re Mann Chala

Jaane Kidhar Jaanu Naa


Sameer who is passing from there sees her dancing with some kids. He is mesmerized with her beauty at first glance.


Later Shrishti comes back home when she sees Dadi waiting for her.

Shrishti : you didn't sleep yet?

"No I want to talk with you, go change first you will get cold Dadi goes to kitchen

Everybody else sleep in their room. Shrishti goes to hall

"Now drink this milk quickly you won't get cold Dadi tells her to sit and dries her hair with towel

Shrishti : what happened dadi? today all this suddenly

"You tell me whats up with you? I am scared with your temper now, why did you talk with your sister like this Dadi asks her

"I don't know what happens to me but even if I don't want to I vent my anger on her, thats why I tell her to stay away from me, I cannot handle my anger Shrishti puts hand on her lap

Dadi : you have to learn to control your anger or one day you will land up in big trouble

"I am very stressed dadi with everything, I dont' know what to do my heart and mind are fighting everyday' Shrishti gets tearful

Dadi : remember this word of your dadi, leave few things on god and if your heart is true it will never let you go wrong way don't hold your past very tightly let it go and move on, everything will be fine go and sleep good night

Shrishti ; good night dadi (leaves)

"Wahiguru please don't let my girls ever get astray help them and my Shrishti show her ray of hope Dadi prays


Phoenix company


Pragya makes all arrangement for Abhi's concert in evening

Sophia ; Pragya why don't you go at venue and check everything

Pragya : yes ma'am I will go and check (leaves for venue)

Abhi comes to studio asking for Pragya

Sophia ; Sir she went to venue to make arrangement for your concert

Abhi : okay but remember there should be no mistake in this concert


Clinic


Maya : Hey Preeta I have some exciting news of you

Preeta : what is it?

Maya ; this morning I got a call from sports academy they need a physio for team, their physio is not available

Preeta ; really? but I have no experience about on sports team

Maya : oh come on you are a doctor, you just have to treat if anybody gets injured

Preeta gets nervous and excited too at the same time. She goes to the field to meet coach and the team members

Rishab : Preetaji you here?

Preeta : actually Maya sent me here, she said one team needs a physio

Rishab : oh yea Karan's cricket team needs a phsyio their is not available

Preeta : okay

Coach : you are here? come I will introduce you to team members

Rishab : best of luck

Preeta ; thank you



Concert venue


Pragya : hurry up we don't have much time concert is in few hours (stands up on ladder)

Abhi comes there and is taken aback with her dedication for work. He sees her feet is about to slip from ladder. In process both ends up falling on each other. Pragya falls on his top sharing eye lock


Reh Bhi Na Paaye Yaar

Seh Bhi Na Paaye Yaar

Behti Hi Jaaye Dastaan

Reh Bhi Na Paaye Yaar

Seh Bhi Na Paaye Yaar

Behti Hi Jaaye Dastaan

Umra Bhar Ka Intezaar

Ik Pal Bhi Na Karaar

Ungli Pe Nachaaye Dastaan


Abhi tugs her hair behind ear. Her scarf gets stuck on his chain.


Ho..Apne Roothein, Paraaye Roothein

Yaar Roothein Naa..

Khwaab Tootein, Waade Tootein

Dil Yeh Toote Naa..

Roothe To Khuda Bhi Roothe

Saath Chhoote Naa..

Roothe To Khuda Bhi Roothe

Saath Chhoote Naa..

O Allah Waariyan

O Main To Haariyan

O Tooti Yaariyan Mila De Oye.


Both gets uncomfortable and stands up.

Abhi : sorry you were going to fall

Pragya : thanks (adjusts her duppatta) you here? did you need anything

Abhi ; no actually I just came to check if everything is ready

Pragya : don't worry there will be no problem


Bulbul is looking something in store for Pragya's birthday. She looks at very beautiful show piece with quote " Best sister. Before she could pick up Purab chooses same one

Bulbul ; dont even think about it

Purab ; excuse me I saw it first so this is mine leave this

Bulbul ; being a cop you are arguing with a citizen so rude

Purab : hello excuse me, I help people in need not your personal servant

Bulbul ; I dont care who you are leave this show piece right now and you owe me an apology for that day

Purab : what nonsense

Both fights for that same gift for their respective sisters.


Precap ; Abhi's concert goes haywire leading to big drama on venue. Durga arrives to India. Preeta becomes physio of Karan's team. Shrishti and Sameer's meeting


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Posted: 6 years ago
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Loved Durga & Arman's bonding , the voiceover was scary😊
Loved the Aroras sisters bonding 😊
Why Sarla differentiated between Shristi & Bulbul😲
Now Preeta is physio in Karan's team😊
Abhi & Pragya's moment was nice😊
Sameer is getting attracted to Shristi😊
Purab & Bulbul moment was hilarious 😆
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Part 8

Chicago


Armaan and Durga gets ready to go at airport. He refused to tell anything to his uncle and aunt about her departure

Armaan ; you don't worry I will handle them

"Bhai I am very scared you also come with me she says nervously

"You know the meaning of Durga, she was that goddess who defeat demon alone, nobody was powerful like her, she was also a women your journey starts from today, next time when I see you I want to see that powerful Durga who have learned to fight by her own Armaan tells her to tie rakhi on his wrist before leaving

Durga ; bhai when will I see you again

"Whenever destiny wants, now go your flight is announced take care bye Armaan gives her ticket and boarding pass

Durga starts walking to the gate with heavy heart not knowing what change will come in her life soon.


"Best of luck my sister I am sure you will find your real destination one day Armaan turns around to see her

Kritika ; did she leave?

Armaan : yea come I will drop you at hostel


Mumbai


Cricket Ground


Preeta walks to the ground when she sees all the players doing warm up

Preeta : Maya ma'am gave address to this place but who should i meet

Rohan : excuse me do you need anything

Preeta : actually i am a physio, my boss told me one of the sports team needs a temporary physio

Rohan : oh yea coach's office is when you go left from here

Preeta ; thank you (leaves)


She meets coach Mathur who is very strict and disciplined for this cricket team.

Mathur : yes

Preeta : sir I am Preeta Arora, temporary physiotherapist, Maya ma'am talked with you

Mathur : oh yes come sit then I will introduce you to the team after

Preeta : thanks

Mathur : since you are temporary right now I won't go through so much detail for rules, as part of profession you are not allowed to keep any sort of personal relation, this could affect our profession and other things

Preeta : don't worry sir I understand

Coach ; all you have to do is treat if any of the member gets injured and help them remain fit, specially captain

Preeta understands his every words carefully

Coach ; anything you want to ask

Preeta : no sir I am fine

Coach ; come I will introduce you to the team members


The team members meet Preeta and greets her very warmly

Preeta : coach who is the captain here?

Coach : there he is, Karan

"Yes Coach he sees Preeta standing

Coach : she is Preeta our new temporary physio of team

"Ah not bad, nice to meet you Ms doctor Karan shakes hand with her

Preeta gives sarcastic smile to him

Coach : everybody back to practice come on we have to work hard for this season


Preeta makes everybody do some exercise before practice. Everybody treats her very nicely and decently.


Concert


Abhi arrives at the venue for his concert. The media and fan surrounds him for autographs. He is humble for his fan and greets everybody

Manager : sir you get ready concert will be starting soon

Abhi is quite impressed with all the arrangement Pragya did. He looks around for her in the whole venue.


"Abhi, Abhi fan cheer for him in stadium.


Some of his rivals comes inside and goes to music room. They cut the strings of his guitar and messes up with electricity.


"Best of luck sir Pragya comes to him

Abhi is lost in her beauty again seeing her dressed up with gorgeous red anarkali.

Abhi : thanks, get the guitar (tells guard)


Abhi makes rocking entry on the stage like always seeing his fan cheering for him.

"You all are ready he shouts

"Yes, we want Abhi Abhi crowd roars


Abhi tries to play his guitar but the finds the string is broken. He tries hard to continue with the concert but suddenly the lights get into short circuit scaring people in venue. The guards take Abhi safely from there and evacuates the whole stadium.


The security brings Abhi out safely and takes him in the car saving from chaos.

Pragya ; oh god how did this happen


Phoenix company


Rithwik (Abhi's manager) : I don't believe this, how type of irresponsibility is this, it never happened in any concert before

Sophia : Sir trust me, we don't know how did this all happened

Rithwik : who was in charge of looking for arrangement

"Me, sir Pragya comes forward

Rithwik : oh, do you even know if something had happened to Abhi sir

Pragya : I am really sorry Sir, but trust me I arranged for security, it could be one of the rivals of him

Rithwik : I know that might be his rivals, but you didn't put enough efforts, how could somebody get in the room and broke strings

Abhi : thats it no more discussion everybody out, back to work and you come with me

Pragya nods and follows him to music room.

" Sir I am she is not to complete

Abhi : you remember what I said on first day, I can bear loss but not insult, today anybody's life could have been risked

Pragya looks down

Abhi : you should not look down if you didn't do any mistake, anyway let bygones bygones

Pragya : Sir you promised me you won't let my company get in loss if something happens wrong by me

Abhi ; of course I remember but when I know you are not at fault there is no point of arguing on this

Pragya : you really think na it was just an accident once again sorry, because of me your whole concert got ruined

Abhi : don't worry this happens frequently, come on give me your usual smile

Pragya smiles at him and starts to leave


Reh Bhi Na Paaye Yaar

Seh Bhi Na Paaye Yaar

Behti Hi Jaaye Dastaan

Reh Bhi Na Paaye Yaar

Seh Bhi Na Paaye Yaar

Behti Hi Jaaye Dastaan

Umra Bhar Ka Intezaar

Ik Pal Bhi Na Karaar

Ungli Pe Nachaaye Dastaan

Ho..Apne Roothein, Paraaye Roothein

Yaar Roothein Naa..

Khwaab Tootein, Waade Tootein

Dil Yeh Toote Naa..

Roothe To Khuda Bhi Roothe

Saath Chhoote Naa..

Roothe To Khuda Bhi Roothe

Saath Chhoote Naa..

O Allah Waariyan

O Main To Haariyan


She turns to see him telling her to keep smiling and waves. Pragya leaves from the music room. Sophia hears their conversation getting jealous of attention Pragya got.


"Tick tock tock, (laughs) more than time, person biggest enemy is their nature. jealousy and greed the more grow more it gets poisonous to themselves as well as others Voiceover says



Airport


Durga's flight lands in Mumbai during noon. Her heart starts pounding faster with every moment. She never stepped out of her own city and landed in a country she never saw. She checks out and takes her luggage looking for the cab. Armaan gave her address of the hotel and made booking of stay over.


One of the goon sees her realizing she came with lot of money. He takes her purse and starts running. Bulbul who was present runs after the goon

"Thief, thief Bulbul goes after him and reaches unknown place.

Bulbul : where did he go (looks at note fallen from his pocket)

She goes back to airport to Durga who got very scared

Bulbul : sorry I could not find your purse, but I promise you will get it soon, police will help you get purse soon


Durga nods and goes with her



Headquarters


Purab ; constable whats' new going on

Constable : sir there is hidden information about some gang of dacoits hiding in dadar station and they have guns

Purab ; do one thing surround that whole area with tight security and make sure nobody gets to know, there will be panic

Constable : yes sir

"Is somebody there Bulbul comes shouting and brings Durga with her

Purab (rubs his head) : not again, god which mistake you are punishing me for

Bulbul ; there is no point of arguing with god, you are bound with duty to help people

Purab : yes madam how can I help you today

"What kind of protection you have, in broad day light there has been robbery, one thief ran away with her purse from airport Bulbul says

Purab : okay you know where he went

Bulbul : you are cop you should find out, I found this from his pocket (gives him a note)

"Dadar station he reads

Purab : come with me (drags her out in car)

"Leave my hand she starts shouting

Durga gets surprised with their fighting.

"Constable you reach Dadar station soon Purab informs on wireless


The trio reaches dadar station which is very crowded with passengers. The goon identifies Bulbul and Durga

"He is the one Bulbul shouts to Purab

Huge chaos occur in whole station with police trying to nab the goons hidden in that place. One of the dacoit follows Durga who starts running on road. She unknowingly reaches Luthra office and asks help from guard.

Guard : who are you? we cannot let you go inside like this

"Please let me go, some goons are behind me please I beg of you Durga tells him

Guard lets her go. She hides in Rishab's cabin under table when Karan enters

Guard : Rishab sir is in important meeting

"Okay then I will wait for him in cabin Karan says

Guard : sir there is a girl hiding in the office she was saying a goon was behind her

Karan : where?

Guard : in Rishab Sir's cabin

Karan enters the cabin and goes near the table to talk with her. In moment of fear she ends up slapping him on cheeks. Karan holds his cheek like receiving 400 mm volts. She bends her knees together in fear. Karan leaves from cabin to call his brother. Durga sees from window the goon leaving from the place and runs away from there dropping her earring on table.


Karan : what a girl yaar? she slapped me bhai the Karan luthra

Rishab ; security where did she go?

Guard : sir she left while ago, seeing her it seemed she was very scared, I never saw her before here

Rishab sees the earring on his table feeling very strange seeing it.


Station


Bulbul (gets hold of Durga's purse) : finally but where did she go

Purab : she might have ran away, dont worry I will find her and return this purse thank you, being a good citizen helping a stranger

Bulbul : you are welcome (leaves with attitude but give him smile before going)


Precap : Durga Rishab first meeting. Shrishti gives idea to Pragya of making Abhi's concert successful again. Preeta and Karan goes out of town for cricket match


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Posted: 6 years ago
#38
Interesting update 👏
Abhi & Pragya are getting closer 😊
Preeta joined Karan's team 😊
Durga meet Bulbul, Purab & Karan
Purab & Bulbul finally have a normal conversation
Interesting precap
Waiting for next
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Posted: 6 years ago
#39

Liked Armaan encouraging Durga to be courageous like Goddess Durga.Nice meeting of preeran.abhi lost in pragya's beauty was romantic.but sad that bcz of the rival abhi's concert got messed.but glad that abhi is safe.happy that abhi is not misunderstanding pragya.abhi asking her to sile,then she turns back to see him..he asks her to amile n waves with allah waariyan bgm was so sweet.sophia jealous of pragya.will she harm pragya or create bad impression about Pragya in Abhi's mind?Oh no..durga's 1st experience itself wasn't good bcz of d thief.liked bulbul trying to help her n bulbul durga meeting.Liked rabul meeting when Bulbul went to the police station to complain.oh no.poor durga got chased by a goon.She hiding in rishab's cabin was nice.I expected Rishab Durga meeting there.But it was karan who met her there.poor karan got slapped by her due to MU.Glad that Durga escaped.Why did Rishab feel strange seeing her earring?Liked purab appreciating bulbul for helping a stranger like Durga

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Posted: 6 years ago
#40
Part 9

Police station


Durga comes back to police station with help of a taxi driver and get her luggage.

Purab ; we were looking for you, here is your purse (hands her purse)

"Thank you, that girl she says softly

Purab : she left, you are new here? I never saw you before

"Yes I came from Chicago she says

Purab : here is my number if you need help again let me know

Durga takes the card from him

Purab ; you need help to get on hotel

"No I will manage thank you again Durga leaves hurriedly

Purab : strange girl she is


College


Everybody is happy after clearing their exams and get ready for holidays.

Navya : I am so excited, you are coming to trip na for Manali

Shrishti ; but?

Navya : please please, there won't be fun without you

Shrishti : okay fine, I will go, anything else

Navya ; nope (leaves)


Bulbul too puts her name in the trip list to Manali for trekking.


Pragya comes home upset with everything and messing the concert.

Shrishti : di what happened why are you upset?

Pragya : you know the first event got messed, Abhi sir got so much disappointed

Shrishti : did he scold you?

Pragya : he didn't but anybody would be upset na their big concert get postponed

Shrishti : tell me what happened?

Pragya reveals everything to her

"Di you are getting worried for no reason I know nobody expected this, when is next concert Shrishti asks her

Pragya : I don't know maybe next week again, somebody messed his guitar strings sneaking inside the room

Shrishti : listen to me carefully, in next concert, tighten the security specially in that music room nobody should enter without ID and enter through the scanner

Pragya : what an idea

Shrishti : di just relax okay, next time tell the security to make sure if they doubt any rivals don't let them inside concert, the employee room should be separate and have guards on the music room

"Oh my god thank you thank you Pragya hugs her excitedly

Shrishti : okay calm down, di i need something

Pragya : what do you want?

Shrishti : i am going to Manali for trekking camp next week I need some money to buy things

Pragya : anything for my sister, wait I have got something for you

Shrishti : what is it?

Pragya gifts her new camera which she and Preeta contributed together to buy

"Di for me? Shrishti asks emotionally

Pragya : no for our neighbor, is there any other photographer who might need this

Shrishti : but how did you?

"I am not your sister, I very well know that day you sold camera to bail Bulbul, I know this world very well if there was stranger else he would have asked something in return

Shrishti gets little emotional

"You might not show concern but I know you love Bulbul very much deep down so this is for you see we don't have much knowledge of camera is this good na Pragya wipes her tears

Shrishti : thank you di love you (hugs her)

Pragya : now listen to me, I want pictures from Manali okay

Shrishti : promise

Pragya : and one more thing see Bulbul is very naive you have to take care of her and make sure she does not fall in wrong path

Shrishti nods


Chicago


Thakur reads Durga's letter of leaving to live her life and tears it off.

Thakur : your daughter has left not chance for our humiliation

Nandita : where can she go? we should find her please do something

Thakur : no way I won't do anything, she did what she wanted to

Nandita : what are you saying? she is our daughter she has no understanding of this world please

Thakur ; didn't she think that before taking this big step when that girl don't care about our reputation whey should we, if I knew she will do something like this I would have disowned her right away

"Only if you had that right, I should have done this long time ago then your arrogance would be broken by time better late than never, the day she will come back you will see another Durga not your daughter who was coward Armaan smirks to see his plan successful

Nandita : Armaan you are always with her do you know where she went

Armaan : no aunty I don't know but if you want then I will go find her

Nandita : but you don't know where she is

Armaan : you leave that to me, I will somehow find her for that I have to go out of city for few days (fakes to be innocent)

Nandita ; Durga went too far this time, let her come back how dare she

"Sorry aunty but she is out of your cage to fly higher Armaan says

Nandita : god know where she might be

"Aunty I am actually going for trip to india with my friends for few days but don't worry I will find about Durga soon Armaan tells her

Nandita leaves


Kritika : what was the need for that letter thing

Armaan ; you didn't understand Krittika, I wanted to create pressure in their mind you just watch the fun

Kritika : are you really going to india to find your sister

Armaan : you think I am crazy, no way I am going to manali (shows her trekking camp pamphlet)

Kritika : what about me?

Armaan ; don't be spoil sport you are also going back in few days enjoy your days na

Kritika : when are you going?

Armaan : tomorrow morning, you don't have to drop me off at airport


"Armaan was far away from relations of love, friendship he only fulfilled one duty being a brother. Nobody could understand his twisted mind till today Voiceover says


Mumbai


Shrishti stands on the edge watching fascinating sunset. She is about to lose balance when a strong hands hold her pulling back. Both falls on each other. Shrishti feels very different sensation never like before

Rishab : are you okay?

Shrishti (gets up) : I am fine

"Don't you know suicide is such a bad thing, only cowards do that Rishab scolds her

Shrishti (puts hand on his mouth) : stop I am trying to say something na, I was not doing suicide but taking pictures


The duo get lost in each other's eyes


Koi bole dariya hai (kaisa kaisa hai isq)

Koi maane sehra hai (kaisa kaisa hai isq)

Koi bole dariya hai (kaisa kaisa hai isq)

Koi maane sehra hai (kaisa kaisa hai isq)

Koi sone sa tole re, koi matti sa bole re

Koi bole ke chaandi ka hai chhura

Hota aise yeh mauke pe

Roka jaaye na roke se

Accha hota hai hota hai yeh bura

Kaisa yeh isq hai, ajab sa risk hai


Rishab : sorry I thought you were trying to jump


Shrishti : thank you for saving me, bye (runs away from there)


Ground


Coach : everybody listen up, our next match is held in Pune after few days, Preeta as part of physio you have to come with us

Preeta : sure coach

Coach ; okay everybody we are all set for today then see you tomorrow


Karan : hey ms physio

Preeta : yes do you need something

Karan ; not me but you might need a lift to go at house right

Preeta : no thanks I will get taxi

"Hey bhai whats up' Karan greets his brother

Preeta : hello Rishabji

Rishab : so how is everything going Ms physio

Preeta : really good, you both are going home

Karan : bhai we are going to Pune for next match you are coming na?

Rishab : so sorry but I have important meeting, you just get selected for international

Karan ; that day will also come

Rishab : now come mom will be waiting, Preetaji you need lift, come we will drop you

She hesitates but agrees with no choice and sits on back seat.

Karan : what a weather, Dr madam you seem very busy this days, clinic, house ground

Preeta ; it depends on how Maya ma'am gives me duty everyday

Rishab : don't forget our dadi is still your patient

Preeta : no worries I never forget them, how is she doing now

Rishab ; much better, but you have made very dependent on you

Karan ; bhai I am hungry stop the car on way, I want to eat something sorry Preeta

Preeta : even I am hungry

Rishab : what do you both prefer to eat?

"Paani puri she says

Karan : no way, its unhealthy, suggest something else

Rishab : there is new restaurant, I heard they have very good food

Karan ; yea come on


Mehra house


Abhi comes back home again hearing sound of prayer coming from temple inside.

"Dadi where are you he goes to her

She tells him to be quiet for few minutes and gives him aarti

Dadi : can't you stay quiet for few minutes

Abhi : yaar dadi in this house its only you and me you are busy with god who should I talk

Dadi : thats why I am telling you get a partner and daughter in law for me

Abhi : I would have but only if I find somebody suitable for me

Dadi : being my rockstar you are saying this, do you have lack of girls

Abhi : but you know my choice dadi, you only say there is certain time for everything she will also come soon

Dadi : I am noticing this days you have become very philosopher, whats the matter

Abhi : nothing at all

Dadi : I heard in news something went wrong in the concert you are okay?

Abhi : I am standing fit and fine in front of you of course

Dadi : how did this happen?

Abhi : nothing dadi, there was some problem in the wiring and all were blaming that poor girl

Dadi : which girl?

Abhi : she just works in the company I have contract with, but it was not her fault

Dadi : is she beautiful?

"I don't know I never saw her from that angle but I see something different in her eyes, that I never find in other girls her innocent nature but ego my god way too high Abhi says

Dadi : its not ego thats called self respect and very less girls carry with them

Abhi : thats what makes her different dadi but she is very nice

Dadi ; bring her someday to our house



On road


Shrishti sees an ad in newspaper of Ruhi's company looking for photographer

Navya : what is it?

Shrishti : found it, look at this ad for new job india's top fashion company needs a photographer

Navya : thats great you should try to apply but after we come back okay, come I will drop you


Suddenly a car hits Navya's scooter.

"My scooter she starts shouting

Shrishti : hey driver you have car does it mean you will drive like airplane come out I said

It turns out to be Sameer but hit scooter by mistake and comes out. He recognizes her from other day dancing in rain

Sameer ; I am really sorry

"Sorry? here you broke her headlights who will pay for damage, are you blind Shrishti shouts

Sameer : I said sorry na and I never refused to pay for compensation

Shrishti ; do we look beggar to you? we don't need your favor

Navya : Shrishti stop it na, there is no point of arguing with him

Sameer : learn something from your friend

Shrishti : excuse me you talk with me, and Navya let me handle him

Both keeps arguing with each other. Navya takes Shrishti away to stop their fight.



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