PreeRan TS-Ten times Karan was affected- PART 3 UPDATED ON PAGE 5 - Page 5

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Posted: 8 years ago
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The third part started out so sad and I felt terrible for Karan and then i died at the ninth part and went to heaven! It was so beautifully written that it makes me sad that you're done.
So I'm eagerly awaiting more of your stories.
Like this was seriously so good!
All of them tried to get Karan to confess his feelings for Preeta and that reaction felt exactly something Preeta would do!
The entire story was bang on and so beautifully done! I loved it!
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Posted: 8 years ago
#42
Awesome OS
I really liked the way u have explained each n every Incident...the way u have unfolded the situations was👏
First he felt a tiny miny sa jealousy walla feel then he felt bad when he saw deepak n preeta together
N at last the pang of jealousy when he got to know about rishabh's feeling was so beautifully written
Loved it
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Posted: 8 years ago
#43

Originally posted by: falala333

Karan having to help with the proposal had me just😭

But then everything became perfect😳

And the last part just had me smiling😃😳


Loved how you ended it👏


Thankyou for reading. I'm happy you liked the ending😊
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Posted: 8 years ago
#44

Originally posted by: Angrita

Goddd how can somebody write soo goood..

Literally..it was tooo good..i just kept smiling n smiling n imagining them..Oh god...u nailed it girl..just awsome..
The last part the hospital one i was like "OMGGG" i couldn't stop smiling..
Very very well written dear.. please write more..❤️


You're too kind lovely. Thankyouu for reading the story. I'm glad you liked it😊
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Posted: 8 years ago
#45

Originally posted by: Gaurirane366

Loved it ..Awww...:)last part was so good... ❤️


Thankyouu for reading it😊
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: aishwarya12joys

Aww I'm love with this story write more on preeran please


Naaaww, thankyoouuu for reading it lovely😊 will do!!
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Posted: 8 years ago
#47

Originally posted by: vu1998

Eight time.. I felt so bad for poor Karan.. Such a good brother he is.

Both love birds going through same pain at the same level.. Preeta a bit more I guess..
This was one of the best out of ten times.

Ninth time.. OMG!! Their wedding... Rishabh is such a sweetheart.. Kritika and Shrishti.. I know these two are going to play cupid for them.
Preeta's confession was so cute..
Hats off to your imagination and perfect choice of words to describe the feelings..
The characters were in coherency with the serial.. Everything make sense infact were more than sensible.. PERFECT!!

And the tenth time... Junior Karan.. Wow..
Loved it. Specially the dimples and smile like that of Karan.

Hey.. You modified the 25-75 to 27-77.. This was so sweet.. This way they'll be together till eternity..

Thank you for this lovely TS...
Please write more on PreeRan..


The eighth part had to have heightened drama, for the ninth and tenth part to be a happy ending😊
Thankyoouu for reading it😳I'm glad you liked the ending.
Hahaha, I only changed it because I wanted to create a time lapse from the start of the story to the end.😆 But yes, hopefully Karan keeps prolonging the years he says Preeta and he should be together for😉
Will do lovely. Thankyouu
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: SunshineMk

The third part started out so sad and I felt terrible for Karan and then i died at the ninth part and went to heaven! It was so beautifully written that it makes me sad that you're done.

So I'm eagerly awaiting more of your stories.
Like this was seriously so good!
All of them tried to get Karan to confess his feelings for Preeta and that reaction felt exactly something Preeta would do!
The entire story was bang on and so beautifully done! I loved it!


The eighth part had to have heightened drama, for the ninth and tenth part to be a happy ending😊
Thankyoouu for reading it and for your kind words, you're too sweet!! I'm glad you liked the ending. 😳

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Posted: 8 years ago
#49
Loved it you just rock I don't how to explained you how good you write each and very part
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Awww... such a roller coaster it was...!! It was heartbreaking to see karan helping rishabh in proposing preeta and there to he had to even witness the proposal... poor guy... felt really sad for him... and then the wedding day thingy... I thought... ohh shit.. rishabh n preeta getting married and then I read karan couldn't see preeta because of his shehra... and I was like... ohh wait... lemme go back and read it again... with more concentration... yeyyy... karan preeta getting married...!!!
No matter how happy I was, there was something couldn't ignore and that was Rishabh... he is such a sweetheart and I really hope he finds true love in the show.. he deserves to be happy...
The tenth time will be my favourite... undoubtedly... It was too cute..!! Thank you for writing something like this...!! A scene we wouldn't get to see any time soon and even if we get it; it will be in the very end...
Anyways... A great ts and yes lemme use my patent word "masterpiece" ❤️

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