FF-Hadsa THE END pg-63 *24.8.08* - Page 50

Sonu bahut cute part tha 👏 👏 ....& agar tu phir se sorry bolegi tho all of us will feel really bad 😭 😭 jab bhi time mile u write, no restrictions yaar....ur FF is worth waiting for even a year, thore din tho kuchh bhi nahin 😉

short part but a very nice part.......ab please i hope it has nothing 2 do with Angali...........hope so!!!!!!

It was short and sweet sonu...take ur time.. 😳

hey sonu read part very nice keep i tup...yuo short but its ok..had fun watching all parts. 😊

hey
just read yr ff n its awesome..
cont.sooon

I know u r busy.........but please do not forget that u do have to continue writeing this ff.........waiting
..........waiting......

Originally posted by: Irika

it was a short part can you update today later a longer part ???

Well..irika i am gonna upd8 it now..thanks😊

Originally posted by: preethi

sonu chota tha bt no prbl agakya hoga 😆 👏

thanks didi..aage?..wahi jo manzoor-e-khuda hoga😆

Originally posted by: nature

its ok sonali 😳.. u dont need 2 ask forgiveness for such small issues dear 😳..

and it ws cute 😳..

Thanks di..😳

Originally posted by: verni

It's okk bachcha.... I know tu itna bhi time de rahi hai that's more than enough... 😳 😳

Luv u bachchaaaa the part was gud and sweet 😊 👏

Thanks di...aapki bahut yaad aa rahi hai...jaldi aana didoo😭

Originally posted by: Shafoo

yaaa it is short but amazingg plzzzzzzzz contuied todayy plzz preety plzzzzzz

Thanks dear...m writing baba😆

Originally posted by: kashishk

sonali it's short but the part was brillant, and u tell that u r our sister so in this relation there aren't the word "sorry"
continue soon
all the best

kashish

Thanks a lot kanu..thanks for making me comfy😳

Originally posted by: Rah_HuJu

Sonu bahut cute part tha 👏 👏 ....& agar tu phir se sorry bolegi tho all of us will feel really bad 😭 😭 jab bhi time mile u write, no restrictions yaar....ur FF is worth waiting for even a year, thore din tho kuchh bhi nahin 😉

Rahi di...thanks n haan..its not worth that much..haan i can think its an average piece though bt not that good..so plz dont make me feel embarrassed..😳

Originally posted by: Pearl29

short part but a very nice part.......ab please i hope it has nothing 2 do with Angali...........hope so!!!!!!

so..here we hav another anjali hater..(apart frm me of course.😆)..thanks m writing..😳

Originally posted by: *Resham*

It was short and sweet sonu...take ur time.. 😳

Thankd didi..😊

Originally posted by: seemahujufan

hey sonu read part very nice keep i tup...yuo short but its ok..had fun watching all parts. 😊

Thanks ruhi di..will wait 4 u..😳

Originally posted by: roku_huseinfan

very nice part sonu.... 👏

thanks chotuu😛

Originally posted by: janu_2006

hey
just read yr ff n its awesome..
cont.sooon

hey thanks janu..m glad to see u here..😛

Originally posted by: mykrishna

good part

thanks dear..😛

Originally posted by: Fan of Juhi

great part

thanks dear..😛

Originally posted by: Pearl29

I know u r busy.........but please do not forget that u do have to continue writeing this ff.........waiting
..........waiting......

chalo..reminder ko ek reminder mila.m writing di..😳

Sumit opens the trial room's door and to his utter shock...she's not alone there..!!!😕

A man is trying to keep his mouth shut, tearing her top and almost punching her on her belly..Sumit catches his hand and bashes him till he runs away..

Kumkum sits down, holding herself..breathless...sumit hugs her.."Kumkum..???..Kumkum..???.."😭

She's crying bitterly , hugging him tightly.."wo..wo...NAHIN..!!!"😭

The bitter moments of her past flash across her eyes and she gets hallucinated..shouting like anything..."SUMIT...!!..SUMIT...SUMIT..BACHAAAAOO...DOOR HATO..DOOR..NA..NAHIN MU..MUJHE MAT CHUNA..NAHIN..SUMITTTTTTTTTTTTTTT.....NAHINNNNNN"😭

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Kumkum wakes up in extreme fright.."NAHIIIINNN..."😭

Sumit takes her in arms, caressing her back, trying to soothe her .."Kumkum?...Kumkum relax..."😳

She's s crying hysterically.."Wo..wo aadmi.."😕

Su:Kumkum?...Kumkum..dekh main hun..koi nahin hai yahan..ok?...kumkum..tabiyat kharab hai..pareshan mat ho..😳

She looks around and finds herself at her home..in her own room.."Su..Sumit..tu.tum mujhe chodkar mat jana please.."😭

sumit's unable to see her in such a state and he pulls her closer.."Chup...bilkul chup....ssh..."😭

He caresses her hair ...and soon she falls asleep..

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Kumkum's crying...Sumit is moving his fingers between her hair..."Kumkum..?"😭

She hugs him tightly and so does sumit.."mujhe nahin pata tha.."says sumit

Kk:wo..wo wahi aadmi tha..sumit...wo..wo mere bacche ko..

Sumit makes her quite.."sshh...khabardar iske aage kuch kaha toh...jab tak main hun..tab tak..tujhe aur iss bacche ko kuch nahin ho sakta..ye baat yaad rakhna..😭

He hides her face in his neck and cries.."wo..wo keh raha tha ki..ki wo hum teeno ko..."

Su:Abhi kya kaha maine..(caresses her back)..main hun..hmm?...wo chahe kuch bhi...

She vomits in the sick bag Sumit's holding for her..Sumit rubs her back as she breaks down into fresh tears...Sumit wipes her mouth, hugging her.."Kumkum...sab theek ho jayega..dekh..ye exertion se tabiyat kharab hui hai na teri..abhi kuch mat soch bas.."

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Kumkum is holding Sumit hand, lying pale.."Pls..pls mat jaao..please sumit.."

Su:Kumkum??...main..main yahin hun...theek hai?..main yahin..sofe par so jaaunga..ok?..tu bas sone ki koshish kar abhi..main..bas teri davaiyaan dekh leta hun ek baar ok?..

She nods her head and sumit puts his hand on her eyes.."Bas..ab so jao.."😳

She soon, falls alseep...

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Su:arrey...dr. Vera ne iski blood pressure ki davai change karne ko kaha tha..isne ab tak nahin badli..??..😕

He throws the medicines in the dustbin.."Abhi le aata hun..varna kal subah dikkat hogi.."

He switches off the lights.."Atenolol...aur multivitamins.."

He closes the door softly...and locks it from outside..😕

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While driving back home..he thinks of Anjali, seeing her handkerchief on the dashboard...😳

He takes a turn to her home..and rings the doorbell..No one opens the door..He listens to the sound of a car starting nearby..

Sumit waits for another 5 minutes, he descides to leave..when he receives kumkum's call..😳

Su:Haan..bas pahunch raha hun...teri medicines lene gaya tha na.😳.

She's crying scaredly, talking in a very low volume.."Su..Sumit...koi..koi ghar mein hai..m.main ..mujhe darr..darr.."😕

Sumit too, gets tensed.."Kumkum...bas 10 minutes mein i am reaching you..ok?...tera darwaza bahar se lock kar ke gaya tha main...bas..ghabrana mat..tu baith ja..main pahunch raha hun.."😳

Sumit ends the call and rushes the car at a greater speed than before...

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Another 15 minutes have passed...Kumkum is sweating badly...awaiting her savior, Sumit..when somebody tries to break the room-door..She's scared...."K..Kaun ho tum.."😕

"Mujhe bhool gayi kya..??..Itni jaldi..??.."The voice says..

Kumkum freezes at the site...with all sorts of visions inside her head..as if her brain fluid is drying up..."SUMIT...!!!!!" shouts she..😭

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Sumit bangs his hand at the steering wheel, spotting a large log of wood ahead.."Ye..ab..main gadi yahin chodkar jata hun.."

And he runs to his home..

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Kumkum is perspiring.."Su..sumit.."😭

Another collision takes place at the door..They are surely going to get through the door after the next trial..Kumkum's crying..."SUMIT...!!!!"

And yes, the two people are inside the room..Kumkum is scared out of her wits...

At the same time, she is shocked to see the second person..."Tum..??"😕😕