FF-Hadsa THE END pg-63 *24.8.08* - Page 49

Finally finished reading it 😆 ...

Good part 😉 ..and sonu take ur time yaar 😳

Hi Dear,
I feel like giving u hug 100 times........very very very well written.........Su has started realising his love towards kk..........the emotions r very beautifully explained.......

i know u have become busy & can't write more often but i've become more impatient 2 know what's going 2 happen in the next part.......but don't worry....u write whenever u have time........we will keep waiting 4 u...........

This is one of my favorite ff's here......

Kumkum and Sumit, after a rigorous shopping session of nearly half an hour, decide to return home..As he's in the que 4 billing, he spots a magnificient, white long, loose shirt, with blue embroidery.. 😳

After he has paid, he drags kumkum to the spot..

Kk:Sumit..dheerey..ye tu..bhagaa kyun raha hai?.. 😆

Su:Dekh na...its awesome..!!Tu khareed le..accha lagega tujh par.. 😳

Kk:Main..???

Su:Nahin...ladies top main pehnoonga...stupid le le na. 😆

Kk:Sumit..main moti hun..fir nahin aayega... 😆

Su:bilkul fit aayega..tu itni bhi moti nahin hui hai abhi... 😆

Kk:Nope..

Su:Accha...chal..ek kaam kar..wahaan..ek trial room hai...jaakar change kar...main yahin khada hun... 😳

Kk:Main..??..

Sumit holds his head.."Haan pagal tu..jaa bhi.."

Kk:Ok..jaati hun... 😳

Sumit waits for her while she changes in the trial room.. 😳

Even after 10 minutes, she doesn't open the room door.. 😕 Sumit knocks it ..

Su:Kumkum?..Change kar liya..??.. 😳

But, no noise is coming..Sumit gets tensed..He hears a bang on the door...Straining his ears to the door, he finds kumkum struggling against something... 😕 😕 😕


I know that was short...but that was all i cud manage today...do forgive ur sister 😳

it was a short part can you update today later a longer part ???

sonu chota tha bt no prbl agakya hoga 😆 👏

It's okk bachcha.... I know tu itna bhi time de rahi hai that's more than enough... 😳 😳

Luv u bachchaaaa the part was gud and sweet 😊 👏

yaaa it is short but amazingg plzzzzzzzz contuied todayy plzz preety plzzzzzz

sonali it's short but the part was brillant, and u tell that u r our sister so in this relation there aren't the word "sorry"
continue soon
all the best

kashish