FF-Hadsa THE END pg-63 *24.8.08* - Page 20

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Posted: 17 years ago
Next morning...

Anjali coudn't sleep the entire night, thinking about Kumkum and Sumit and the unspoken relationship they shared..
She calls Sumit...Sumit picks up the call.. 😳

Su-kahiye maillika-e-alam...itni subah subah gulam ki yaad kaise aayi?.. 😳

Anjali-kuch nahin ....bas aise hi...tum kaise ho...kal shaam toh time hi nahin mila ho.. 😕

Su-haan yaar...wo actually kal na Kumkum ke paion mein kuch zyaada hi swelling thi...us par bhi zyaada chalne phirne se bleeding hone lagi par.. 😳

Anjali-Sumit...at least hum phone par toh Kumkum ke alawa kuch baat kar sakte hain...

Su-What's wrong Anjali..I was telling you just because..I thought uski pareshaani samjhogi .. 😳

Anjali-Samajh toh rahi hun...kya chal raha hai.. 😕

Su-kya matlab hai tumhaara?.. 😕

Anjali-Wahi jo tum samajh rahe ho sumit..kabhie kabhie main darr jati hun ki Kumkum ke liye tumhaari concern kisi din mujhe hi na bhula de.. 😕

Su-Anjali...kaisi baatein kar rahi ho tum...wo bechaari ladki...Anjali..kabhie khud ko uski jagah rakh kar .. 😳

He's interrupted by a knock..

Su-kaun hai?...andar aa jao..

Its Kumkum, sweating profusely, covering her mouth with her palm...Her eyes are moist...

Su-Kk?..Kya hua?..tum aise...?..kumkum?..hey?.. 😳

He forgets all about anjali and her call... 😳

Su-tum?..tum theek ho?..ye itna paseena?..kk?.. 😳

Kk-u...upar paani nahin..may..may i use the bathroom..?..vomit... 😭

Su-u r feeling nauseated...chalo..aao..main help karta hun...dupatta idhar do mujhe... 😳

He takes the dupatta and shows her the way...Kumkum throws up for the next 15-20 minutes...and Sumit keeps pacifying her.. 😳
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Sumit-kumkum?...aise..itni itni baaton par rone lagogi toh kaise kaam chalega..hmm?...abhi bhi uneasy lag raha hai?...aao..paas mein aao...back massage se aaram milega tumhe.. 😳

Kumkum weakly lies down on his bed as he makes her do so...

Su-thoda sa kurta upar karo...main moov laga deta hun....

Anjali is in tears, listening to their conversation...She ends the call... 😭

Kk-Su..sumit..(weakly)...tum..tum bahar jao..i'll...I'll clean up the mess...phir aati hun... 😳

Su-kk?..pagal ho kya?...chaol. let jao..main kar sakta hun itna..waise bhi theek hai sab..come on...aao.. 😳
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Sumit enters his room from the drawing room...where he had been preparing for the next leacture while Kumkum was asleep.. 😳

Su-Kk?..(softly)...

He holds her hand...

Su-kk?..aaj class nahin attend karni hai..toh tum rehne do... 😳

She opens her eyes...

Kk-hmm?..kya hua?... 😳

Su-pharmacy ki class hai na....tumhe thakaan ho rahi hai..tum rehne do...hmm?..main attend kar ke notes de doonga tumhe...

Kk-par..

Su-par-war ki zarurat nahin hai..maine kahaa na..aaram karo...main pas bata raha tha...so jao..main udha deta hun... 😳

He covers her up with a thick sheet and leaves.....
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Sumit has reached the college when he finds Anjali standing with a few friends..

Sumit-Hi.. 😊

Aanjali-(coldly)...Hi...

Sumit-ek minute..

Anjali and Sumit move to a corner...

Anjali-Waqt mil gaya...kumkum ki massage ke baad..?..?.. 😕

Sumit-oh..phone par thi tum?..wo.actually use backpain rehta hi hai..aur itni vomiting ke baad uski kamar mein..

Anjali-(in tears)...Sumit..kyun kar rahe ho mere saath aisa.... 😭

Sumit-maine kya kiya Anjali?... 😕

Anjali-tum khud nahin jaante?.. 😕

Sumit-nahin...

Anjali-kyun Kumkum ko hamare rishtey ke tutne ki wajah bana rahe ho...

Sumit-Wajah main nahin...tum bana rahi ho Anjali...dekho...jo bhi ho...ek baat acchi tarah samajh lo...Kumkum iss waqt apni pregnancy ke ek naazuk daur se guzar rahi hai aur main ek dost ki haisiyat se uska saath de raha hun...bas.. 😳

Anjali-Kya wo dosti ab pyaar se badhkar hai..

Sumit-Haan...hai...aur iss haalat mein main kumkum ko akela nahin chodunga..chahe tum jo samjho ise... 😳

Sumit leaves... 😕
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A frustrated Sumit returns back home at 7...and sits on the sofa, feeling tired and upset...

Kumkum enters and sits besides him...

Sumit(without looking at her)-theeek ho tum ab?...

Kk-Haan...ab theek lag raha hai...Sumit...wo main keh rahi thi ki... 😳

Su-Kk...main thak gaya hun..please..photocopied notes table par hain...le lo aur jao..

Kk-nahin main..sirf ye keh rahi thi ki...tumhaare room ki safai ki maine...aur..wall paper change kar diya hai...dekh lena...main notes baad mein le loongi.. 😳

She leaves, keeping coffee for him on the table and taking hers with herself..

Sumit looks at her...

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ ~~~~~~ Sumit is astonished to see how beautifully Kumkum had decorated his room...Everything was neat and clean, as good as new..!!.. 😳
She had even framed his family's photograph using some recycled paper...and had changed the wallpaper of 2 of the walls, which had been looking damp.. 😳

He feels sorry for her😳......
Edited by sumitwadhwa - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
sonu good part 😛
abb su ka dost pyaar may badag na 😛
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Posted: 17 years ago
hi... 😊
wowwww....excellent part dear... 👏 👏
loved it 😳
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Posted: 17 years ago
fabulous..... 👏 👏 👏

Actually Anjali ke point of view se..... use bura lagega hi... 😳 😳 😳 par jodiyan to upar se banti hain... haan ab hum bhi banate hain.... 😉 😉

Aur Sukk ki jodi koi tod hi nahi saktaaaa 😳 😳

Cont soon. 😊
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Posted: 17 years ago
I can't tell u how happy i am to read this part.......excellent, mindblowing.........now i'm waiting for Sukk to realise their love for each other.............continue soon with a long long part...
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Posted: 17 years ago
hey excellent part !!sonali!!! loved su-kk and i too wish su-kk jaldi se ek doosre he ho jaye 😉
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Posted: 17 years ago
m so sorry sonali... d ff got left in b/w due to my xams isliye cudn't reply itne dino se...

abhi caught it all d way from pg # 12 till here... fabbbbb write-ups sonu... u r a gr8 writer i must say 👏...
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Posted: 17 years ago
I loved this part sonu...keep it up 👏
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Posted: 17 years ago
its amazinggggggg and cool part cant wait for next part
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Posted: 17 years ago
hey ur consept n story is fantastic but do not make any villan some how make anjali dead n her last wish to make summit n kumkum married n then cont.. with how they accept each otehr etc etc. but please do not make villian let halat be responsible as of karan johar's movie

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