FF-Hadsa THE END pg-63 *24.8.08* - Page 21

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-Amby- thumbnail
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Posted: 17 years ago
mein phir se late 😭
lovely part
anjali go away
su loves kk but he doesnt realize it
continue soon
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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: preethi

sonu good part πŸ˜›
abb su ka dost pyaar may badag na πŸ˜›



ThankQ Preeti di...hmm..dekho..😳

Originally posted by: verni

fabulous..... πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘

Actually Anjali ke point of view se..... use bura lagega hi... 😳 😳 😳 par jodiyan to upar se banti hain... haan ab hum bhi banate hain.... πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰

Aur Sukk ki jodi koi tod hi nahi saktaaaa 😳 😳

Cont soon. 😊



ThanQ di...Hmm..ab aage padhna...kisi ke saath kuch galat nahin karungi main..πŸ˜‰

Originally posted by: luvhussain

hey keep going great work



ThankQ ..😳

Originally posted by: Pearl29

I can't tell u how happy i am to read this part.......excellent, mindblowing.........now i'm waiting for Sukk to realise their love for each other.............continue soon with a long long part...



Oh!..ThanQ for the appreciation..😳Yes..time will come soon..😳

Originally posted by: seemahujufan

hey excellent part !!sonali!!! loved su-kk and i too wish su-kk jaldi se ek doosre he ho jaye πŸ˜‰



ThanQ..Seema di..jaldi hi wo waqt bhi aayega..πŸ˜‰
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Posted: 17 years ago
Sumit goes to Kumkum's room, where she's studying her book and marking the important things down, sitting on the bed..

Su-Main aa jaoon kumkum?..

Kk-Haan Sumit..poochne ki baat nahin hai..aao na..

He sits on the bed...looking at the ground..

Su-I am sorry...and thankyou...

Kk-nahin nahin...main samajh gayi..kuch tension hogi...aur waise bhi..tum jo mere liye kar rahe ho...uske baad shukriya toh mujhe kehna chahiye na..

Sumit smiles...

Su-Kaafi samajhdaar ho gayi ho tum...accha tabiyat toh theek hai na ab?...

Kk-bilkul fit and fine hun...

Su-ye lo...notes...aur kuch poochna ho toh mujhe bula lena..hmm?..

Kk-thanks...

Sumit leaves after the short talk...As he reaches the door, he finds himself being called by Kumkum..

Sumit-Haan...

Kk-Apne tension share karoge?...

Sumit-Nahin kk..aise koi khaas tension nahin hai...pareshaan mat ho tum..

Kk-Chupana chahte ho?..

Sumit-Tension hoti hai toh sab se pehle tumhe hi batata hun na?...chalo..u carry on ur studies...phir main bhi toh tumhaare answers cheat karunga na exams mein...

Kumkum chuckles at his joke...

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Another month passes by...and kumkum is in the 3rd month of her pregnancy...

The entire month was quite hectic...Sumit, had kept himself busy in taking care of Kumkum and catching up with studies...Kumkum was also having a tough time...Being the first trimester, often, she was unwell and having emotional breakdowns...Sumit had been a backup support for her..

One day,

Sumit enters Kumkum's room and finds her crying...

Su-Kk?...Kya hua?..tum ro kyun rahi ho KK?...dekho..tabiyat kharaab hai kya?..kk?..

Kumkum, herself doesn't know the reason for the outburst...As sumit comes near her, she immediately hugs him very tightly...

He caresses her in his arms...

Su-Kk?...kya hua?..tabiyat kharab lag rahi hai?..Kk?...Tani ko bula doon main?..hmm..KK?..

Kumkum moves away, realising what she was doing....Sumit notices her embarassement..

Su-Arrey..koi bat nahin...tu tension kyun le rahi hai..ho jata hai kabhie kabhie...pareshaan mat ho...ek kaam kar...let ja aaram se..hmm?...mere khayaal se thak bhi gayi hai...abhi aaram kar aur ro mat...

He puts her to sleep and then, leaves....

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As a result of the hectic schedule, Sumit didn't get enough time to meet Anjali more than once or twice a week...Anjali's doubts regarding their relationship had confirmed...

Next day...

There's a college festival taking place where Sumit is to host the function...Proff. Vera had made sure not to involve Kumkum in any sort of activity, so that she doesn't get stressed..It
the D'Day...and Sumit is a bit nervous...He's rehearsing, before Anjali...

Anjali-Sumit..ye line phir se bolo...tumne ek word theek nahin bola..

Sumit gets irritated...

Sumit-Anjali..well, Kumkum ne reherse karaya hai..use last minute changes ke baare mein sab pata hai..Pls usko bula do..it'll help me a lot..where's she?..

Anjali is hurt but she doesn't retaliate..Instead, she leaves a message for Kk through some girl..

Kumkum comes running slowly ...

Su-Ye ladki paagal ho gayi hai..

Instead, he runs to her and stops her...

Su-BHAAGO MAT...aaram se chalo Kk...kya kar rahi ho...

Kk-Sorry ..sorry...chalo..reherse kar rahe ho na...

Su-chalo..tum baitho and I'll start...

He makes her sit on a stair-step and starts rehersing...Anjali is quite hurt by their actions...and leaves...

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As Sumit reaches the stage, everyone wishes him luck...He hugs Anjali and gives a small peck on cheeks..

Su-Kk kahaan hai?..

He finds Kumkum coming with a bottle of water...

Kk-ye lo..pani..aur best of luck..

Sumit hugs her too...

Su-kuch khaya?.....dhoop tez hai...tu baith jaana aur thakan ho toh building ke andar chali jaana..ok?..

Kk-Haan baba..kha lungi...

Su-Anjali..isne subah se kuch khaya nahin hai theek se...please ise khila dena kuch aur tum bhi jaldi se kha lena..aur yahin milna..I want to see your faces...right before my eyes..

Anjali smiles at his sentence...

Su-ok..bye.... 😳
Edited by sumitwadhwa - 17 years ago
-Amby- thumbnail
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Posted: 17 years ago
me first
abhi dono ko pyaar ho raha hai
continue soon
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Posted: 17 years ago
hi.. 😊
good part sonali.. πŸ‘
sumit n kumkum are already in love..it seems.. πŸ˜‰
now they jz hv to realise it.. 😳
continue soon.... n hw r u now??
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Posted: 17 years ago
this is such a cute part sonali 😳 πŸ‘ πŸ‘...
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Posted: 17 years ago
what a cutee part plzzz contuied soon
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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: panjwani

me first
abhi dono ko pyaar ho raha hai
continue soon



Pyaar ya gehri dosti?..πŸ˜‰

Originally posted by: jasmine chhabra

hi.. 😊
good part sonali.. πŸ‘
sumit n kumkum are already in love..it seems.. πŸ˜‰
now they jz hv to realise it.. 😳
continue soon.... n hw r u now??



ThanQ di..Well har cheez ka galat matlab mat nikaala karo..πŸ˜³πŸ˜†πŸ˜‰

Originally posted by: nature

this is such a cute part sonali 😳 πŸ‘ πŸ‘...



ThankQ Nidhi di..

Originally posted by: preethi

sweet cute part tha sonu πŸ‘



ThanQ..😳

Originally posted by: *Resham*

Good part sonu πŸ˜‰



Thanks😳

Originally posted by: Shafoo

what a cutee part plzzz contuied soon



Thanks..😳
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Posted: 17 years ago
The part is really sweettttt 😳 😳

Ya lets see what happens next. 😳

aur ab teri tabiyat kaisi hai bachcha? 😳
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Anjali forgets to ask Kumkum about having anything and Kumkum too forgets everything...They stand at the stadium ground, waiting to watch Sumit... 😳

The function starts and Sumit takes his charge as a host..The function gets on smoothly..Dancers from Argentina perform followed by a catwalk session..As the function is going on, Kumkum begins feeling tired and weak..

The sun is overhead...The funtion is to end in an hour...The scorching heat of the sun and an empty-stomach causes weakness and consecutively, Kumkum faints and falls unconscious..

She falls on the ground with a thud..Everyone's eyes fall on her...Sumit, notices this after a few seconds from the stage and runs to her through the backdoor..
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Su-ye bheed kyun laga rakhi hai chaaron taraf..hey..!! guys please move aside..let her breathe..please..

Proff. Anderson reaches the scene...

Proff.A-Students..whats happening here..what is the matter..

Sumit-Sir..can you please call Proff. Vera here..

Proff-Sumeeet..the ramp walk is about to finish, you need to reach there within 5 minutes..

Sumit-bevakoof...dekh raha hai kis tarah behosh hai kk..phir bhi nahin samajh raha hai..

Proff-(confused)-what did u say..sumeet... am at a loss to understand...

Jatin-sir..he says he'll reach on time..

Sumit gives a hatred-filled look to Anderson and carries Kk in arms to backstage...He makes her lie on a couch, in front of a pedestal fan..Her breath is heavy and she's sweating profusely..

Su-Kk?..kk.?..dekho..aankhein kholne ki koshish karo..kk?..

Anjali brings a glass of water and Sumit sprinkles her face with a few drps and makes her drink some..

She's unable to open her eyes but her lips move...

Sumit suddenly, takes her in arms...

Su-Kk..tum..tum pareshaan mat hona...bas ye dhoop se hua tha...we are going home..theek hai?..bas hum ghar chal rahe hain... 😳

Proff Vera enters..

Proff Vera-what happened?..Proff andrews..

Sumit-sir..kk ko achanak chakkar aa gaye...dhoop se shaayad..sir...

The song for the ramp-walkers is almost over..

Vera-sumit...you leave..hum dekhte hain..

Sumit-Jatin..ye le..

He hands over his house and car keys to him..

Sumit-sir ise ghar bhej dijiye pls..B.P. high rehta hai iska..

Vera-ok.tum jao..main abhi injection dekar ghar bhej deta hun..u leave swiftly..

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Sumit-anjali..ek baar tumne poocha bhi nahin us se kuch khaane ke liye?...TUM JAANTI HO SHE'S PREGNANT..aisi haalat mein agar use kuch ho jaata toh..?..

Anjali-Su..u r over-reacting...keval bhookh se chakkar aa gaye usko toh tum mujhpar..

Sumit-Anjali..tumne meri baat ansuni ki..but..I don't have time for all this..ghar par akeli hogi..aur abhi pathology se uski reports bhi collect karni hain.. 😳

Anjali-Sumit..sumit listen..

But Sumit stops her from saying further and leaves..
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Sumit is quite disturbed after reading her medical reports..On his way, his thoughts are full of Kk only.. 😳

Su-Reports saaf kehti hai ki kk davaiyaan theek se nahin le rahi hai...naa hi sune kai dino se B.P. ki tablets li hain..na hi wo multivitamins aur substitutes le rahi hai..par kk aisa kyun kar rahi hai..

He remembers her saying.."kya main ye baccha abort karva doon..?"

He stops the car as it strucks his mind..

Su-Kahin Kk jaan boojh kar to ye sab...?.... πŸ˜•
Edited by sumitwadhwa - 17 years ago

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