FF- Is Pyar Ko Kya Naam Dun*Updatd Pg122* - Page 81

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Posted: 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
Verni tera javab nahi..........i was thinking of all the possibilities but u made it so different......just loved the way Su has forgiven KK & that 2 on the airport......i can just imagine it ........so beautifully written...........ab please jaldi likhna with a lot of romance..........
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Posted: 17 years ago



Sumit and Kumkum keep hugging…. And crying.. 😳 😳 then slowly Kumkum opens her eyes and peeps through his shoulder, she luks that people are luking at them. 😳 She tries moving away. But Sumit keeps holding her and didn't leave her, still his eyes closed.. 😳 😳

Kk (slowly) : Sumit.. sab… sab isi taraf dekh rahe hain… 😳

Su (eyes still closed) : Dekhne do… 😉

He hugs her even more tightly… Kumkum feels embarrassed , as everyone luked at them and smiled… she went red… 😳 😳 😉

Kk : Su.. Sumit… hum airport pe hain…. Ghar chalein..??? 😳

Sumit slowly moves away, but still keeps luking at her, Kumkum was embarrassed so she luked down…. Wiping her tears…. 😳 😊 Then Sumit is disturbed by someone, someone was pulling his pant…. He luked down…. 😛

It was a small girl, Sumit and Kumkum sat down near her…

Girl (to Sumit) : Can I have ur autograph plzzz? 😛

Sumit smiled and signed.. then the girl offered the book to Kumkum.

Girl : And urs too? 😊

Kumkum : Mine? But…. Am not an actor… (luking at Sumit). 😕

Girl : So what?... U r his wife… and quite beautiful also….. 😉 😳

Kumkum : Thanku.. but.. 😊

Sumit : De do Kumkum… uski doosri baat to sahi hi hai.. 😳 😉

Kumkum smiles and signs. Then the girl kisses Kumkum's cheeks and goes… 😛

Kumkum was smiling and Sumit was very happy to see her smiling… 😃

They get up and Sumit says,

Su : Ek kaam karte hain, pehle yeh ticket cancel karate hain.. becoz hamari flight shaam ki hai…. Aur phir ghar chalte hain… aur… mujhe tumhe kahin le jaana hai… chalo…. 😳 😊

Kk : Kahan? 😕

Su : Bas chalo… 😉

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Sumit was waiting for Kumkum…

Su : Ohho.. Kumkum jaldi karo.. tumhe kahin le jaana hai… aur phir.. shaam ki flight.. 😛

He was moving to and fro like a pendulum. 😆 Then Kumkum opens the door and comes out… she was wearing a beautiful white saree… luking an angel… he kept luking at her… 😳 😳 😛

Kk : Sumit.. Chalein?

Su (snaps out) : hunh.. haan… 😛

They are about to move, when Sumit holds her hand… Kumkum stops and turns. 😉

Sumit goes close to her , closer and closer… Kumkum's heartbeat increased.. 😉 😉

Su (luking at her and smiles) : Koi baat nahi… jo kehna hai baad mein kahunga… 😉

Then he takes her hand and they move..

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Kumkum is blindfolded and Sumit is taking her somewhere,

Kk : Sumit… kahan le jaa rahe ho? Batao to… 😕

Su : Abhi pata chal jaayega…. 😉

Then he makes her stand somewhere…

Kk : Sumit…. Sumit…

But no one replied… Kumkum removed the fold…. And she sees….. 😕

She is in a church… She keeps luking around… it was beautifully decorated.. 😛 😛 😃

Then someone holds her from back.. she turns.. it was Sumit….

Kk : Sumit… ye… 😳

Su : aaj jo kehna hai… yahin…. Inke saamne..(pointing towards statue of Lord Jesus) 😳 😳

Kk (luking into his eyes) : Kya?

Su : I want to marry u…. Mumbai jaate hi main tumse shaadi karunga… (he takes out a ring)… Ye tumhare liye…. 😳 😉

Kumkum luks at the ring.. she remembers her parents…

Kk : Sumit…


Su : Nahi Kumkum…. ab koi sawaal nahi…. Yeh ring maine bohut pehle kharidi thi.. aaj de paaya hun… plzz….. Kumkum , aaj main tumse ek waada chahta hun… 😳 😳

Kk : Yehi…. Ki main kabhi tumse jhoot na bolun… ya tumse kuch chupaon nahi… waada…. 😳 😭

Su : Naa.. 😳

Kk : To phir? 😕

Su : Main jaanta hun.. tum mujhse kabhi kuch nahi chupaogi…. Waada yeh…. Ki tum hamesha.. mere saath rahogi… mujhe Chod ke kabhi nahi jaogi… waada?? 😳 😳

Kumkum gets emotional… and hugs him… 😳 😊

Kk : Waada… 😳

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Sumit is luking outside and waiting for someone…. Kumkum comes…

Kk : Sumit…. Chalein? Flight ka time ho raha hai… aur hum to yahin hain… chaliye… tumne payment to kar hi di thi… 😊 😊

Su : Haan… par… achcha ek kaam karo tum airport jao…. Main aata hun… aur… aur haan…. Agar flight ka time ho jaaye.. to tum plane mein chali jaana… main aa jaonga… 😕 😕

Kk : Kya??? Sumit.. yeh kya keh rahe ho? Main akele… tum yahan kya kar rahe ho?.. 😕 😕 😕

Su : Kumkum plz… believe me.. tum chalo main aa raha hun… ek zaruri kaam hai… plzz tum chalo naa.. trust me .. am coming… 😳 😳 😛

Kumkum is heritating, but Sumit sends her and she reaches airport… though she is waiting for Sumit…. 😕 😕

It's time to board the flight, Sumit had not reached… Kumkum is too tense… but she unwillingly goes and sits in the plane.. 😕 😕

It was time to take off… she was very afraid… luking at back…. When…

" Hunh…. Aa gaya…" 😃

She sees Sumit came from infront and sat beside her.. 😛

Kk : Kahan reh gaye the? Main itna darr gayi thi.. 😕

Su : Haan ek zaruri kaam tha… 😉

Kumkum luked at him to tell about the " zaruri kaam" , but he didn't.. 😉 so she turned her face away.. and started luking the other side..

Su : Arey yeh kya?...Naraaz ho gayi kya?? Kumkum.. 😛 😕

She doesn't luk towards him.

Su : Achcha baba suno.. batata hun… 😳 😛

Then she turns towards him,

Sumit gives her some papers. 😊

Kk : Yeh kya hai? 😕

Su (slowly) : Hum jis ghar mein ruke the.. hire karke… maine wo ghar khareed liya.. usi ke owner ka wait kar raha tha.. 😳 😉

Kk (surprised) : Kya?... par khareedne ki kya zarurat thi Sumit..????? 😕 😕

Su : Kya zarurat thi?... Kumkum.. maine apni zibdagi ke sabse khoobsurat pal usi ghar mein bitaye… 😳 balki dekha jaye to.. maine apni zindagi ko usi ghar mein paaya… tumhe paaya hai.. 😳 😳 aur main kivi ko bhi hamare un lamhon ke beech nahi aane de sakta. 😉 Main nahi chahta hamare baad koi aur us ghar mein jaake rahe… 😉 wahan tumhari kashish hai. Tumhare pyaar ki khushboo… wahan sirf mera haq hai… aur kisi ka nahi…. 😉 😳

Kumkum is surprised to listen.. and gets emotional..

Su : aise kya dekh rahi ho? 😛

Kk : Dekh rahi hun.. Kitne possessive ho tum? 😳 😉

Su : Haan wo to hun..

Then Kumkum hugs him…..

Kk : Thanku Sumit.. 😳

Su : Thanku nahi… I luv u… 😛

She smiled and moved away realizing that she is in plane…
😳
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Posted: 17 years ago
@ priya : thanku bachcha..... 😊

See here's the next partt 😉
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Posted: 17 years ago
Mindblowing didi...!! 👏

Now lemme guess...sumit will take KK to her parents rite?..
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Posted: 17 years ago
Great,mindblowing,fantastic. Kya baat hai, agar pyar karnewala ho to ais varna naa ho aisa to nahi bolungi kyonki itna aadarsh pyar karnewala to karodo me se kisi ek ko hi milta hai, isliye chalega. 😉 Par really great, mood on kar diya, dil khush kar diya. Waah. Now continue soon, I can't wait anymore yaar.
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Posted: 17 years ago
soooper doooper fabulous part di.. 😃 😃 😃
dunno wat else to say!! 😳 😳
samajh joa bass!! 😉 😳

continue soon. 😊
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Posted: 17 years ago
mastt part verni 👏 👏...
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Posted: 17 years ago
Good part verni 👏 ...

Su will be the source of uniting her with her parents 😉 ...

Its again a guess 😆

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