FF- Is Pyar Ko Kya Naam Dun*Updatd Pg122* - Page 83

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Posted: 17 years ago
@ di : thanku di... nice to see u here... 😳

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Posted: 17 years ago
@ tamana : thanku bachchaaaaaaa 😳 haan haan wo to hai hi angel 😉 😆

@ ruhi : thanku bachcha....haan practice makes a man perfect.. 😉

@ roku : oye... pehle mujhe laga kaun hai?? teri id badal gayi naa.. par ohir di suna to.. laga tu hi hogi 😉 😆 thanku bachchaaaaaaa 😃

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Posted: 17 years ago
Note : I know am too late... but there is some reason... I'll be updating soon... Thanx for the patience... Just 1-2 days more 😊
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Posted: 17 years ago
😲 1-2 more days...just kidding 😛 ...will be waiting 😃
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Posted: 17 years ago
haiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii main tho kisi aur jagaa hi pahunch gayee Bachcha 😍 😍 😍 read 2 parts together so commenting on both......the way Sumit brought her back is too cute for words 😳 😳 & him buying the house just to cherish their moments is just out-of-this-world 👏 👏 kaash real-life main aise ladke hote!! ☺️
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Posted: 17 years ago


They reach home,

Kumkum sees that Sumit is quite tired.

Kk : Kaafi thak gaye ho naa.. 😳

Su : Hmm… tum bhi thak gayi hogi… jaake fresh ho jao…. Main bhi ho jaata hun. 😳

They go to their rooms.

Sumit goes to his room, takes out his jacket and throws on the bed. His dadi's photo was kept nearby. He goes and picks it up,

Su : Dadi aap hamesha isiliye pareshaan rehti thi naa.. ki main aapke jaane ke baad kaise rahunga.. kaun rakhega mera khyaal. Lijiye maine aapki tension door kar di… Kumkum ko meri zindagi mein laakar.. ab to aap bohut khush hongi naa.. 😊 😳

He smiles and keeps the photo back on the table.

Then he sits on the bed and lies down. His legs were still hanging from the bed and his hands stretched out, straight. He smiles and remembers the beautiful moments which he spent with Kumkum i.e. when she was drunk and kissed him, when she held him in the trolley and of course the most special night of his life. 😳 😉 Thinking this, he closed his eyes.

Kumkum comes in and sees him lying.

Kk : Lagta hai so gaye..

She was about to go but stops and turns towards him. She keeps luking at him , then goes and sits near him. 😳

Kk : Kabhi nahi socha tha ki tum ….. (pauses) Itni badi galti ki aur tumne mujhe maaf kar diya…. (pauses)… (slowly) koi sazaa nahi di… 😭

Now her eyes are filled with tears.. she slowly holds his hand and brings it near her. Her tears fall on his hand… 😭

Kk : Agar tum nahi milte… to… to shaayad jeeti… par… ek adhoorepan ke saath…

Then she wipes tears from his hand.. (which had fallen from her eyes).. then gets up to go, but Sumit holds her hand. 😳

Kumkum turns… Sumit was luking at her and then.. gets up slowly and makes her sit near him. 😊

Kumkum tries wiping her tears, but he stops her and he himself does so. 😉

Su : maine tumse kaha tha naa… jo hua use bhool jao…. Galti sabse hoti hai… aur uski sazaa bhi paa chuki ho tum… phir…. 😳

Kumkum keeps luking at him..

Su : Kumkum main tumhe hamesha khush dekhne chahta hun… aur tumhe aise udaas dekh ke main kabhi khush nahi reh paonga.. yeh tum jaanti ho naa… 😳 😳

Then he slowly goes nearer and kisses her cheek softly…. 😳 Kumkum closes her eyes.

Still remaining close to her.. he speaks….

Su : Bohut badi sazaa de chuki ho tum mujhe… ab nahi…. Main tumhare saath har ek pal jeena chahta hun.. har pal…. Us Kumkum ke saath… jise main jaanta hun ki wo mujhse bohut pyaar karti hai… Tumhe itna pyaar dena chahta hun… ki din bhi kam pad jaaye…😳 😳 😊

Kumkum's heartbeat increases as he was quite close to her….

He slowly kisses another cheek…. Holding her face in his hands… 😳 😳 😉

Su : I love u….

Kumkum hugs him tightly…. 😳 😃 They were getting intimate… 😉 when they hear a voice….

"Ehem ehem…. Maine kuch nahi dekha.." 😉

Sumit Kumkum move apart and see Prachi and Soumy standing with their eyes closed….. 😛

Su : P.. Prachi…. So… Soumy.. aao naa….

They open their eyes….

Kumkum was embarassed , Sumit, too felt awkward… 😳

Pr : Relax… Isme itna pareshaan kyun ho? Kya Sumit…. Ek hug hi to kar rahe the…. Usme kya?... wo to hum movies mein kitni baar karte hain.. haan uske baad kya hota wo to… 😆 😉

Su : tumne hume sirf hug karte dekha? 😛

So : haan…. kuch aur bhi kiya kya? 😆 😉

Su (relaxed) : Nahi to… 😉

Kumkum, too, was relaxed, but blushed too, due to the moments which had passed sometime before. 😳 😳

So : Aur tu…. Jab doston ki zarurat thi….tab kaise… har baat batata tha… aur ab jab baat ban gayi… tab bhool gaya… 😡 😡

Pr : Haan… Humne hi tum mein confidence paida kiya tha ki Kumkum tumse pyaar karti hai… tumhari himmat nahi tootne di… ab jab Kumkum ne haan kar di.. tab hume hi bhoola diya? 😡 😡

Kumkum is surprised to listen this…

Su : nahi aisa nahi hai…. Wo sab itna achanak hua ki….. 😊 😳

So : Rehne do rehne do…. Bahane mat banao… waise Kumkum ab yeh hume bhi bata do.. ki tum apne pyaar ka izhaar kyun nahi kar rahi thi? 😛

Kk (confused) : Wo… main.. 😕

Su : Arey kuch bhi nahi tha… bas aise hi darr rahi thi… 😳

Kumkum luks at him….

Kk : Nahi Sumit… ab sach nahi chupaongi…ab kisi ko khone ka darr nahi rakhna dil mein…. 😊

She tells them everything…

Pr (holds her hands) : U r so brave Kumkum… tune jo kiyam karna aasan nahi…. Haan galti ki… par uski sazaa bhi le li… M proud to be ur friend… 😊 😃

They hug.

Kk : achcha aao… tum log baitho… main saaman unpack kar lun jaake….

Pr : Ermm ek minute…. Kyun unpack kar rahi ho?
😕

Kk : Kyun? Matlab… 😕

Pr : Matlab.. shaadi ke baad… waise bhi tum is room mein aane waali ho…. To rehne do packed… infact baaki sab bhi pack kar lo… 😉 😉

Kumkum blushes.. 😳

Kk : Prachi… 😳

Pr : Kya Prachi… shaadi to karoge naa? 😆

Su : Of course yaar… 😆

So : Par uske liye koi muhurat bhi hona chahiye… 😛

Pr : Duffer… hamari shaadi kya bina muhurat ke ho rahi hai? 😆 😆

So : Ohh haan muhurat hai… tum log hamare saath shaadi karlo.. us din do muhurat hain… do ghante ke gap mein… 7 baje hamari shaadi…. 9 baje tumhari.. 😛 😃

Su : paagal hai kya…. Teri shaadi 4 din mein hai… 😕

Pr : To?.... tum log bhi tabhi karlo… saari taiyaari ho jaayengi.. 😛 😃

Kk : Arey par… kaise hoga..aur… 😕

So : Wo tum mat socho.. saari rasmein hamare saath ho jaayengi… umm… kal mehndi… parson… haldi… phir shaadi… 😃

Su : Par itna sab hoga… 😕

Pr : Wo main ghar pe bata dungi sab ho jaayega…. Waise bhi ghar waale Kumkum se bohut pyaar karte hain…… aur tumse bhi… koi problem nahi hogi…. Shopping chalo aaj hi kar lete hain…pura din hai… 😉 😃 😃

Su : Dekho…. Aise…. I mean… 😕

" Don't worry , I'll do everything…." 😊

All four turn and see ….
😳
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Posted: 17 years ago
@ rahi : kahan yaar.. real life mein aise ladke hote.. to kya baat hoti... I mean imagine nahi karna padta... dimaag pe itna zor nahi daalna padta 😉 😳 thanks bachchaaaaaaaaa 😊

Note : Bachcha log , I had planned something else... but due to some reason.. m writing something different.. hope u all like it. 😊
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Posted: 17 years ago
ya khoun hii 😆 😆
shaadi 4 din may 😳 😳
very good bacha 👏 👏 abb zaldi hona agla part cannt wait u know na 😉 😆
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Posted: 17 years ago
hey.. ankita here... fanfic is awesome.. i was so engrossed ki sab ek saath par daala.. 😆 .... good jobbb... eagerly waiting for the next update verniii... 😛
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Posted: 17 years ago
wowowowowwowowowowoow it is sooo cooll part i love it plzz contuied

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