FF- Love Me! Hate Me! Part 5 pg 12 - Page 3

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Posted: 17 years ago
#21

Originally posted by: fizzwizz

wow henna what can i say u left me speechless with this totally new concept. it's something which i haven't seen yet in any fanfic till now hatts off to u & u have written it with such an ease that it looks like a prfessional writer has written it seriouslt too good a standing ovation for you from my sid*superb* keep it up



speechless? 😆😆 itna toh abhi abhi u made me read ^^^ aur saying speechless...😆

hehe... lagta hai II ka bhoot still on her head... too much TV aint good for u! 😆

thnkuuu sissieee... sweet n truthful comments as always 😳

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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: animerocks

oh okay.. no problem.. i'll just read itt.. 😊



Thanx for understanding 😊
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: amrit23

👏 awwwwesum henna
loved every bit of it 😃 continue soon soon
this london ishtyle quite interesting 😉 😆



Deeehhkooooo kaunnnn aayaaaaaaaaaa 😃 (<< had an even bigger goofier smile then this on my face 😆)

quite interesting?... totally interesting bol... aadi tareef mutt kar 😆

yep London's Kewl 😊

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Posted: 17 years ago
#25

Originally posted by: verni

henna.....shut up.....yeh toh bolna hi tha.right????? 😆

well yes of course am proud of u bachcha..... 😃 😃 .....wl be waiting for next part 😊



shut up khud ko bol toh diya tha 😕... phir se shut up? 😳

ok... shut up k liye as always..... thnku ☺️

*shutting up*

ek min.... verni shut up hoke how can i post the next part? 😕

(ur probably thinking 'shut up' phir se na? 😆)
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Posted: 17 years ago
#26
The guy and girl are left alone once again and there is an uncomfortable silence between them.

The guy decides to break the ice between them. He puts his hand out.

Guy: Hi, I'm Sumit Wadhwa. Naam toh suna hi hoga.

He smiles his dashing warm smile, but the girl turns and walks off.

Sumit: great! naam toh bata jaati. Pata nahi kahan ki malika hai yeh. Mere hi galle padni thi.

He looks at his hand and sighs

Sumit: haath ganda bhi nahi tha ke milaya nahi.

He watches her as she walks around the apartment. The guy gazes around the apartment once again he is still stood at the door. On the right is the lounge, TV and extremely comfy looking sofa's. The guys thinks one could just ease into the sofa and fall asleep within seconds. He looks to the left there lies the kitchen, small but having everything of necessity.

The girl is stood there looking at what they already have and don't have in the kitchen. Straight ahead to the right lies the door to the bedroom and straight ahead on the left lies the door to the washroom. The guys looks around a little confused. Again he looks around.

Sumit: Lounge... bedroom... washroom.... kitchen...

He is surprised...

Sumit: yahne ki sirf ek hi kamrah???

He sees that the girl is still busy in kitchen. He takes his chance and runs towards the bedroom. The girl turns to see why he is running. On seeing where he is heading she chases after him. The guy races into the bedroom and throws himself onto the bed. The girl reaches the room and stops in the doorway. She looks furiously at him.

Sumit: Excuse me! mere kamreh mein aane se pehle knock toh kar lehti.
Girl: kya matlab TUMHARA kamrah?
Sumit: main yahan pehle aaya mutlab mera kamrah hua.
Girl: Ji nahi
Sumit: Ji haan
Girl: bade batameez ladke ho tum
Sumit: Dekho, abhi sharafat se pesh aa raha hoon. Mujhe gussa mutt dilao...

He turns and sits up on the edge of the bed facing the girl. The girl rolls her eyes.

Girl: You are just impossible.
Sumit: Tumse kam impossible hoon, agar tumhe lagta hai kyunki tum ladki ho main tumhe bedroom deh dunga tum ghalat ho... 110% ghalat!!!
Girl: Fine, if u want to play it like that... kitchen mera hai.
Sumit: So wat? Bedroom mera hai
Girl: Lounge mera!

Sumit slaps his head realising that they had already established that the bedroom was his and that he should have demanded something else...

Sumit: Bathroom mera!
Girl: Fine!
Sumit: Fine!
Girl: Meri territory mein aane ki ghalati mutt karna
Sumit: same to you.

Sumit gets off the bed and goes to the room door.
Sumit: Tata.

He waves to her as he shuts the door. The girl stamps her foot angrily glaring at the closed door and turns away.

If one was to say how these two strangers were getting on, one would say they weren't doing too bad. Without knowing it both had divided up the apartment 50-50.

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Posted: 17 years ago
#27
Read it and immediately logged in from university 😆 😆 ..

Couldnt resist myself from commenting 😳 ...

Awesome part henna 👏 👏 ..just loved it 😉 ..

Wanna hug u for this 😉 ...

Okk control reshu 😆 😆 ...

Keep on writing like u always do in your style 😛 ..

With u and love u 😉 ..

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Posted: 17 years ago
#28
fabulous...superb..mindblowing..tooo goooodd part henna 👏 👏 👏ab to ho gayi na poori tareef 😆
acha ab write the next part soon..w8ing 4 it eagerly 😉
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Posted: 17 years ago
#29
superb part heena 👏 👏 👏 .
i will not ask u stop at all 😆 😆 .cont is one word from my mouth 😆 .
humm i would be su territary 😆
great going
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Posted: 17 years ago
#30
hmm bachcha........superb.........gud apartment ka bantwara ho gaya..........ab tum girl ke naam kya 10-15 parts baad bataogi?? 😃

very gud 👏

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