FF- Love Me! Hate Me! Part 5 pg 12

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Hey guys finally bac with something new n totally different 😃... have a read n lemme no wat u think! 😳

Love me! Hate me!

Ever wondered what happens when life throws two complete strangers into one anothers life?

well, lets see what happens.

London today one of the world's leading business and financial centres, well known for many of its landmarks... its diversity and pace... never a minute to waste in this busy world... and that's exactly how this story starts of...


On the busy roads of London, a girls hurries along trying to keep up with the fast pace of this dynamic city. She keeps looking at her watch and mumbling to herself. Just then her phone rings annoyed she ruffles threw her bag. Her hair fall onto her face as she does so, gently she brushes her hair back to reveal her simple yet stunning beauty.

Girl: isse abhi hi phone karna tha? woh bhi jab main late ho rahi hoon?

she looks at the ringing mobile then quickly glances over at her watch.
Girl: I don't have time for this!

She rejects the call and briskly moves on.

In another part of London, there is also someone else in a hurry. He runs down the street as fast as he can.

Guy: main hi kyun hamesha late hota hoon? meri baari bhi hi waqt bhaagta rehta hai.

He continues running as fast as he can. On the other hand the girl reaches a tall beautiful building and stops.

Girl: kya yehi woh address tha? ek baar phir se check kar lehti hoon.

She reaches into her bag to find the address when the guy unexpectedly runs into her. She loses her balance, the guy tries his best to stop her from falling but is too late. Angrily she looks up and is amazed to see such a gorgeous stranger looking straight back at her. His hair all combed perfectly into place, holding his hand out to her as if he would hold onto her hand forever. Her heart flutters. The guy gives her a funny look as she stares lost at him. He waves his hand in front of her face. She snaps out of her dreamland. She thinks to herself what is she doing looking at this rude guy that just knocked her over. Her anger returns.

Girl: Don't you have any manners???
Guy: look i'm really sorry, actually I was in such a hurry that...

She cuts in...
Girl: you were in a hurry so it makes it all alright does it?

She furiously looks at him still sitting on the floor. She mutters to herself.
Girl: buddhu kahin ka

The guy looks at her unsure of what he heard.

Guy: erm... I'm guessing ur indian?
Girl: haan! and i'm guessing tum batameez ho!
Guy: dekho kaha na ghalati se hua, sorry bhi kaha
Girl: Sorry se kya hota hai, plz just leave me alone
Guy: let me alteast help you up

He comes forwards to try and help her up but she repels him.

Girl: mujhe tumhari madat ki koi zarurat nahi hai
Guy: (angrily) fine!

He hastily walks off into the building the girl was stood outside off. The girl picks herself of the floor and wipes her clothes muttering angrily, hastily retrieves all her items and shoves them into her bag.

Girl: samajhta kya hai apne aap ko, bada aaya meri madat karne. hmph! upper se mujhe aur late kar diya.

She rushes inside the building and heads towards the lifts. She sees the lift doors closing and yells out.

Girl: Excuse me! Plz hold the lift!

However the guy is in the lift he chuckles to himself as he lets the doors shuts.

Guy: ab dekhta hai hoon iss highness ka kya hota hai!

He whistles to himself pleased with himself. The girl frustrated reaches the lifts. She waits for a second put then looks around for the stairs.

Girl: I don't have time for this.

Shes find the stairs and painfully make her way up them to the 3rd floor.

Girl: agar aaj yeh apartment mere haath se nikal gaya uss buddhu ki wajah se chudungi nahi main usse!

Breathless and totally exhausted she reaches the 3rd floor. She looks at the paper in her hand that has the address on it.

Girl: erm... no. 46 hai

She makes her way down the corridor looking at the numbers on the doors.

Girl: 44... 45.... yeh raha 46

Just then she stops in her tracks as she sees someone standing outside No.46

Girl: (to herself) yehi landlord hoga

She calls out to him.

Girl: Excuse me!

The person turns around and to her surprise its the same guy.

Girl: TUM!!!
Guy: uffo... tum? ab kya chahiye tumhe? agar tum chahti ho main paper pe likhe doon tumhe sorry toh aisa hone wala nahi hai. Plz get over it!

She looks at him shocked.

Girl: How dare u speak to me like that?
Guy: jaise tumne mujhse baat ki waise hi main tumse karunga.

He crosses his arms lookin pretty fed up of her and looks the other way. She comes and stands in front of him.

Girl: batameezi ki bhi koi hadh hoti hai! tum mere apartment ke bahar kya kar rahe ho?

He looks at her sharply.
Guy: kya matlab tumhari apartment? Tum landlord ho kya?
Girl: Nahi...

He cuts in...
Guy: phir mutt kaho yeh tumhari apartment hai. Yeh meri future apartment hai.
Girl: nahi hai
Guy: hai hai hai

She looks at him screwing her face up, unable to tolerate him anymore
Girl: uff! Your so childish!
Guy: Tumse kam hoon!

They continue arguing and arguing for a good 5mins before they are interrupted.
Stranger: ahem, Hi! I guess your both here to see the apartment right?

The girl steps in not letting the guy talk. The guy just rolls his eyes letting her do what she wants.

Girl: yes, thats right.
Landlord: Nice to meet you both.

He shakes both their hands.
Landlord: just follow me.

He smiles and unlocks the door. The girl pushes past the guy and follows the landlord.

Guy: (to himself) Apartment toh mujhe hi milna hai, chahe jitni bhi jaldbaazi karle yeh.

They both look around the apartment and are amazed. It is just awesome catering for their every need to a high standard. Even the landlord can see that they are both astounded by the beauty of it all.

Landlord: I'm guessing you both like the apartment.
Guy: yes of course, Its just amazing.
Landlord: Great! Then I'm sure you both are willing to take it off my hands?
Guy: both?

The landlord turns to the guy.

Landlord: yes, you and your wife.

The landlord smiles pleasantly at his assumption. The girl just looks at the landlord shocked.

Girl: We're not married!
Landlord: Oh, I beg ur pardon. You and your partner then.

Both the guy and girl look at each other embarrassed.

Guy: (softly) erm, actually we don't know each other.

Landlord: (feeling embarassed) I do apologize. This does create a little problem though. I can only rent out this apartment to only one of you.

On seeing the rivalry between the guy and the girl he greedily raises the rent.

Landlord: I'm sure you both know that the rent is 400 pounds

Both the guy and girl speak at once.

Guy and girl: it was only 250 in the ad
Landlord: yes, I meant to clarify that with you beforehand. The newspaper actually made an error in printing my advert.

Totally not beliving his story the guy and girl think about the situation.

Girl: (thinks) iss bhudde ko abhi hi greedy hona tha. Bohut paise maang raha hai, lehkin nahi diye toh dost log bhi aur kitne din apne ghar rakhenge?
Guy: (thinks angrily) iski toh... ab kya karun? itne paise har mahine kahan se laonga?

The landlord interrupts their thought.
Landlord: ahem, I have a suggestion if you both are willing to listen.

The guy looks helplessly at the girl and sighs.

Guy: please, do tell us...
Landlord: well, how about you both compromise on the rent and pay 50-50. That way you both get the apartment.

On hearing these words both the girl and guy react in the same way.

Guy n Girl: No way! Never!
Landlord: very well then, unfortunately I'm gonna have to ask you both to leave then.
Girl: (desperately) No no... please wait a minate.

The landlord looks on as the girl goes up to the guy.
Girl: dehko, abhi hum dono ko kahin rehne ke liye jugah ki zarurat hai

The guy looks away not interested.

Girl: tum sun rahe ho na meri baat?
Guy: ab itni izzat se kyun baat kar rahi ho?
Girl: uff! tum uss jugreh ko side pe rakho kuch dair ke liye please!

The guy realises he is being a little unreasonable and listens to her knowing that what she is saying makes sense. Finally both agree. The landlord is glad that they accept and being his greedily self asks for the rent in advance straight away. Annoyed with him both hand other the money waiting to see the back of him. The Landlord hands over the keys to the apartment and wishes them well. Eventually the landlord leaves.



(btw coz this FF is set in London... everything about it is gonna be Henna I mean... London Ishtyle) 😆

ps: no one dare rush me into getting the characters married 😡 ☺️
Edited by Henna042 - 17 years ago

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xox.iloveyou thumbnail
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Posted: 17 years ago
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LOl. i wont rush u henna. i'll wait. ur gonna get them married righhtt..? LOl. 😳 😆

anyways.. i luv it soo far.. so interesting.. pls continue soon..

took me a while to read it though. just one advice can u put it more in english it's kindna hard fr me toread it. i can but it just annoys me.. u can add it but just put more of english..

just love it thoughh 👏 awesome job!!
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Ohh I wont I wont 😆 ...

Bet..ff padhkar pata chala London style mein hi hone wala hai 😆 ...

Good to c ur cmback 😳 ...

keep going 😛 ...
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Posted: 17 years ago
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lovely ff woh bhi london ishtyle
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Posted: 17 years ago
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well this is really great attempt and i am with you.the story seems interesting and i am happy the story is in london.go on. 👏 👏
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Posted: 17 years ago
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well.....so here comes... a story i was looking for.....a story abt 2 ppl.......not lovers.....not janam janam ke saathi.........not husband wife..... 😉 😉 .just 2 ppl.......interesting.....henna.....i would love u to keep up with this individuality 😃

lovely 👏
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Posted: 17 years ago
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humm great to see u back in action.
intresting story abt london(i mean abt u 😆 ).
ok cont i wont make u to rush 😛
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Yayyyy*dances wid Hennie my lil devil*
😃 😃 😃

Finaly u posted ur new ff...choo happy..yayyyy

and must say its a very nice concept 👏 👏 ...U have ritten it beautifully 👏 👏 ...Subkuch diff hai...and its rocking 👏 👏 👏

Loveddd it *bigg bear huggie fr hennie* 😳 😳 😳
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: animerocks

LOl. i wont rush u henna. i'll wait. ur gonna get them married righhtt..? LOl. 😳 😆

anyways.. i luv it soo far.. so interesting.. pls continue soon..

took me a while to read it though. just one advice can u put it more in english it's kindna hard fr me toread it. i can but it just annoys me.. u can add it but just put more of english..

just love it thoughh 👏 awesome job!!



Hey ridz,

thnx for the honest comments...😃

n as far as the Eng/hindi goes... well i dont wanna make the whole FF totally gora-fyed.... coz d main characters are indian 😳

n if sukk don't speak hindi... they don't really look like sukk to me☺️ so would be harder for me to imagine... n the FF probs won't be as good ☺️

n the main reason for writing half n half is jus coz some things sound better in english n others in hindi.... hence the mix between the two...😳 Majority is in english tho...☺️

Jus my preference...😳
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: resham_tam

Ohh I wont I wont 😆 ...

Bet..ff padhkar pata chala London style mein hi hone wala hai 😆 ...

Good to c ur cmback 😳 ...

keep going 😛 ...



thnks for the warm welcome bac Reshu...🤗

feels good to be bac here 😊

aur haan now i hav it in black n white ur not gonna bug me for their shaadi 😆

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