ff-Ehsas-prt27.pg22 *shaadi ki tayyari* - Page 15

Originally posted by: preethi

nice 👏 👏 .now expose this suk 😡

thanx verni ...when will u upd8 ur ff?..

bas itne hi comments?..comment guys

Waiting 4 more update & a longer one too........i hope Sumit comes 2 know about Suk..& the truth sooooooon........

waiting for the next update please & long one..........

will b posting soon guys....
😳

Great, bahot accha, nice, dono karib aa rahe hai, bas ekbar pyar ka izhar ho jaaye aur duriya mit jaaye to Sukanya ke sare irade pani me mil jaaye. Lovely. Keep it up. Keep Writing.

sukk reach india safely.. 😛
everyone in the family gives them a warm welcome....
sukk after taking the blessings of elders start talking to them about their journey...
anju is waiting eagerly to know wat happeneed from kk...
kk notices anju trying to talk with her but she ignores her...

anju:kk...

kk ignores anju smiling to hersef... 😃

anju(frustrated):kk........

kk:haan...are anju tum..kaisi ho??

anju:kk mujhe tumse zaroori baat karni hai... 😳

kk:hmmm..anju main bahut thak gayi hoon....baad mein baat karenge....theek hai... 😆

saying this kk goes into her room....
anju(huriedly):kk...meri baat suno...plss....kk...kk...
anju in a tensed mood goes into her room and starts murmuring....
sukanya comes in and sees her...
suk:anju tumhe kya hua???
anju(angrily):kuch nahi..hmm....
anju goes out and sukanya "is ladki ko kya ho gaya??"

su gets a call from office and he leaves for office....
in the evening anju goes to kk's room .....
anju:kk...kk...
kk:anju...aao andar....
anju:kk...plss...baitho na...kya hua??
kk:kya hua?? matlab ?? mujhe kuch samajh nahi aa raha hai.
anju:kk...mazak mat karo ....batao na plss..uncle aunty ne kya kaha??
kk:ohhh...uske bare main mujhe kyun pooch rahi ho...rishi se poochna....
anju:kk...rishi ne kaha tumse poochoon aur tum ...(confused)....plsss kk main pagal ho jaoongi...
kk:theek hai anju..maine to sirf tumse mazak kiya....aunty aur uncle 10 din baad india aa rahe hain....shadi ki baat karne ke liye....
anju is very happy on hearing this and hugs kk...
anju:thanku kk thank u very much..
kk:theek hai.... par is baat ko kisi se bhi mat kehna ......tu khush hai na.....
anju: haan kk main bahut khush hoon.....
anju once again hugs kk and runs out of joy.....on the way she bumps with suk but without saying anything runs from there...
sukanya "sach main ye ladki pagal ho gayi hai....abhi ro rahi thi aur ab khushi lag rahi hai...yeh bhagvan meri beti ka khayal rakhna.."

10 days pass by and su is very busy with his office works ......kk and anju start shopping and sukanya dreams abt her future in wadhwa house........

after 10 days rishi's parents reach india .....

dadaji's room:
kk and anju go in with lot of hesiattion and fear....both r praying to god....
dadaji:are kk ..anju..andar aao beta...
kk:dadaji..aapse ek zaroori baat karni hai....
dadaji:kaho kk...kya baat hai??
kk:dadaji...woh...woh..
dadaji:kk....kaho kya baat hai...
kk:dadaji..aaj rishi ke parents hamare ghar aa rahein hain.....rishi aur anju ki shadi ki baat karne ke liye..
dadaji:kya...??
kk:dadaji...mujhe maaf kar deejiye..maine ye baat pehle aapko nahi batayi par dadaji rishi acha ladka hai aur anju bhi use chahti hai....plss dadaji......
dadaji:kk beta....isme gussa hone ki koi baat nahi hai.agar anju aur rishi ek doosre ko chahte hain...to mujhe ye shadi manzoor hai.....
anju takes dadaji's blessing and dadaji asks anju to ask sukanya to meet him....

sukanya comes to dadaji's room....
suk:papa....aapne mujhe bulaya....
dadaji:haan suk....aao...tumse kuch baat karni hai.....
suk:kaheye papa kya baat hai...
dadaji:anju ki shadi ki baat...
sukanya gets shocked...
suk:uski kya jaldi hai papa...abhi to woh bachi hai....
dadaji:tum maa ho na isliye aisa keh rahi ho...agar anju ko ek achi zindagi mil rahi hai to hamein inkar nahi karna chahiye....
suk(confused):mujhe samajh nahi aa raha hai papa....
dadaji:rishi aur anju ek doosre ko chahte hain....
suk is shell shocked.....
dadaji:aur rishi ke parents aaj hum sab se baat karne ke liye aa rahe hain....
suk can see all her dreams fading off and she is not able to say anything.....
dadaji insists sukanya to accept this marriage and finally suk accepts it...
suk "mere sare sapne toot gaye ...maine socha main is wadhwa house ki maalik banoongi par......ye sab us kk ki wajah se hi hua...rishi ke sath shadi karne se anju khush rahegi par main...mera kya hoga...
zindagi bhar is ghar main ek naukrani bankar rahoongi.....kk main tumhe nahi chodoongi..kabhi nahi chodoongi...jis tarag tum mere sapne ko tod rahi ho usi tarah main tumari barbadi karoongi......"

the next day rishi's parents come to wadhwa house and fix the marriage date for rishi anju's marriage after 2 months.....anju rishi kk su and all r happy except sukanya.....

sukk's room:
su sitting on the sofa and kk sitting in front of the mirror removing her jewels.
su:sab kitne khush hain na...
kk smiles...
su:anju aur rishi ko sath dekhkar mujhe bahut khushi hui.....really they r made for each other....
kk :jeee....
kk tries to remove her necklace but it gets stuck in her hair.....
su sees it and goes near her.......... 😃
su holds kk's hand...... 😆
kk sees su standing behind her in the mirror...she slowly takes her hand.... 😉
su bends down and tries to remove the necklace ....su sees the necklace thread being badly entangled
with kk's hair...he removes her hair carefully and comes closer and cuts the thread with his teeth..... 😳
kk closes her eyes and su sees it.....kk feels su's breath close to her ears ..... 😳 😳
su removes the necklace and sees kk still closing her eyes....he smiles to himself and leaves ....... 😳 😆
sukanya watches all this and thinks to herself "main su kk ko kareeb nahi aane doongi...kk ko is ghar se bahar jaana hi hoga....ab mujhe kuch karna hai..."

the next day su informs the family members that he has to go abroad again for business purpose again....
dadima asks su to take kk also with him.......
suk: aap kya keh rahi hain maa...agar kk bhi chali gayi to yahaan shadi ka kaam kaun karega....
kk:buaji theek keh rahi hain dadaima....main nahi jaoongi...
su feels bad but understands and feels happy that kk is very responsible ..........
su leaves for abroad (UK)..........

after 2 months........
the phone rings...
sukanya picks it..
suk:hello....
the other end:hello...can i speak to Mr.su wadhwa pls....
suk:su...who...who...speaking....
the other end:i am nivi...su's girl friend.....
suk(manages to talk in english):woh...he...not home...tel.wat...
nivi:aap suk bua hai na.....
suk(surprised):haan..tumhe kaise pata....??
nivi:su ne aap ke bare main sab kuch bata diya....
suk:ohhh....tum su ke itna kareeb ki dowst ho??....
nivi:haan..bahut...main uski best friend hoon...
sukanya:sirf friend...........
nivi:haan....friend......uske liye ...par mere liye woh....
she stops realising wat she is talking..suk can understand that something is dere and notes down her number......she informs nivi to pass the message to su .
suk "mujhe kyun aisa lag raha hai ki ye nivi mere kaam aayegi " she thinks and leaves….

Su's room-UK:
Su to himself " itne din itna busy ho gaya ki ghar pe phone bhi nahi kiya maine….
ab mujhe ehsaas ho gaya ki main kk ke bina nahi reh paaoongi……ek ek din itna mushkil tha kk ke bina ….ab mujhse aur intezaar nahi hota hai…ghar lautte
hi mujhe kk se apne pyar ka izhar karna hai……"

thinking this su calls WD house…..
kk picks the phone…..
kk:hello....
su:hello....kk....kaisi ho tum.....
kk:su... aap ...main theek hoon....aap kaise hain...aap ka tabiyat to theek hai na....aap waqt par khana khaa rahe hain na.....aur aap ka haath kaisa hai....dard to nahi hai na....su.....
su:kk....zaara dheerey se...itne saare sawal poochogi to main javab dene ke pehle hi sawal bhool jaoonga....
kk smiles ...
su:kk..main theek hoon aur meri tabiyat bhi perfect hai....
kk:itne din aapne phone kyun nahi kiya....
su:sorry kk...yahan itna kaam tha ki mujhe phone karne ko bhi waqt nahi mila...par main papa se roz baat karke sab ke haal chaal pooch raha hoon.....
kk:woh to theek hai...par aap ko apni biwi se baat karne kaa bhi waqt nahin milta..aap kabhi nahin sochte ki mujhe aapki kitni yaad..(she's in tears now)....
kk realises wat she is talking and changes the topic....
su smiles to himself.....
kk:woh...su...main mummyji ko phone deti hoon....
su:kk...nahi ...mujhe tumse baat karni hai....
kk:haan boliye....
su:woh...woh..main..
su is searching for words...
su: tum kaisi ho.....
kk:su....pehle bhi maine kaha na ...main theek hoon....
su:haan......(su says to himself "par main theek nahi hoon tumare bina")
kk:su...aap kahan kho gaye.....
su:haan kk bolo ...main to bas yahi kehne wala hai ki main 2 din baad wapas aa raha hoon...
kk is very happy on hearing this.......
kk:ohhh...theek hai su ....sambhalke main ye khabar sab ko keh doongi....and best of journey
kk keeps the phone and tells this good news to everyone ......
suk standing in a corner "su wapas aa raha hai....mujhe jaldi hi kuch
karna hoga......"

sukanya makes a call to nivi's number and asks abt nivi ...
the servant informs her that nivi has gone to india to attend her friend rishi's marriage...
suk is happy on hearing this......
suk " nivi india aa rahi hai...mujhe jaldi hi use milkar apna plan suru karna hai......"

suk manages to get the information abt nivi's address from rishi and goes to meet her .....

in the hotel room:
suk:kya main andar aa sakti hoon....
nivi:yes...
nivi looks at suk ........
nivi:aap......
suk:main sukanya hoon....su ki bua....
nivi:ohhh....buaji andar aayiye......maine aapki ko photo ko dekha hai...par pehchan nahi payi....sorry....
suk:koi baat nahi.....
nivi:aap yahan....
suk:haan...main rishi ka kehne par yahan aayi...tum yahan theek se reh rahi ho na....koi prob nahi na...
nivi: nahi ......aap kya piyenge.....main coffee order karti hoon....
nivi and suk had coffee and started talking abt rishi and anju's marriage preaprations and slowly sukanya started talking abt su.....

Keep it up, track is gone on high pitch, interesting point, great. Keep writing. Magar meri ek baat mano Sukanya ka asli chehra Sumit Kumkum ke samne lado, plz.

What a great writeup.......keep up the nice work....waiting for the time when Sumit comes to know about Suk....

ehsaas hi ehsaas. do keep writing fast, waiting for more