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Posted: 17 years ago
veryy cute part mathi 😊 ..ths s ekdum perfect hindi
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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: ankuhujulover

veryy cute part mathi 😊 ..ths s ekdum perfect hindi

thanks for ur comments...😳😳😳

actuaaly jj edited this part before i posted it thats why hindi is perfect 😉😆😆

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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: janu_kumkumjuhi

Very very very sweet & emotional, jab kisi baat ka ehsas hota hai to us ehsas ko ekrar me badl dena chahiye, magar great, lajavab part, aakhir Sumit ko pata to chala ki woh Kumkum se pyar karta hai, great story. 👏

thanks for ur comments 😳😳😳

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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: preethi

sweet part mathi.
now su knows ladki is kk 😳
waiting for more 😳

thanks for ur comments 😳😳😳

i hope the coming parts will be more exciting for u all 😳😳 keep reading

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Posted: 17 years ago
PART 24:
su "mera dil kuch keh raha hai...aur mera mann kuch aur....ab main kis ki
baat manoo....mujhe kuch samajh nahi aa raha hai..." 😕😕
su is confused and remembers all things happened from the beginning......
su remembers the words of rishi "kk ko kisi ne kidnap kar liya tha"
su "kk ko kidnap karne ke peeche koi raaz zaroor hai...koi iss shadi ko
rokna chahta tha....mujhe pehle uska pata lagana hai...aur payal... naam ko maine zaroor kahin suna hai....par kahan yeh mujhe yaad nahi....." 😕

su starts thinking about the kidnap and payal and tries to remember the name but he can't.....

the next morning.....
su is sleeping and kk comes out of the bath with her hair wet....
as she tries to put her hair back some droplets of water fall on su's face waking him up....😳😳
su wakes up and sees kk .....he keeps on staring at her...drumbstruck by her beauty...😳😳😳
kk shies and moves from the place...😳😳su comes to his senses, smiles to himself and goes to freshen up...

kk is ready to leave and su is trying to put on his shirt but gets severe pain in his hand so he cant....
kk sees it and comes near su...
kk:kya hua...su...
su(without looking at her):kuch nahi bas...thoda sa dard ho raha hai....
su again tries to put on his shirt.....
kk:laayiye ..main madat karti hoon....
su:hmm...nahi...main kar sakta hoon..
kk:its ok....main karti hoon...
kk takes the shirt and helps su wear it....
as kk is buttoning his shirt su keeps on looking at her very cutely....😳😳
when kk looks up to see him su turns and acts as if he is looking at something....

after su gets ready both sukk leave the cottage and takes a taxi
su kk gets in to a taxi and leaves.......
su looks at kk when kk is not looking at him and kk looks at su when su
is not looking at her.....

su:driver.....can u stop here itself....
the taxi driver stops the taxi near a big shopping mall.....
su:kk....aao....
kk gets down ....
su gives the taxi fare...
su: kk .....aao..andar jaate hai....
kk:su....yeh....
su:kya hua??yahan aane ke baad maine tumhe kahin bhi nahi le gaya...isliye
kal main tumhe baahar le gaya..par achanak yeh sab ho gaya...
isliye kam se kam hum shopping karke jaayen ....theek hai...
kk smiles and nods her head....
kk:haa...suniye....aap ka dard kam hai na....nahi to hum abhi ghar chalte hain
baad main shopping karenge...
su(smiles):kk....ab main thik hoon....aao....
both enter the shopping mall.....
kk and su start shopping.....
as su is seeing a wall hanging in shop kk's eyes falls on
the sunglasses which trisha was mentioning so she leaves to get it..
without informing su......

after some time su realises that kk is not there and gets panicked
he starts searching her in all places .....
su:kk....kk...kk.....
su cant find her and so he gets very tensed ...........
suddenly he hears someone calling by his name and turns back...
its kk.....su's face brightens up and he goes near kk....
kk:su...kya hua.???
su now holding kk's face in his hands .....😭
su:tum kya samajhti ho apne aap ko???main kitna darr gaya tha???
tum kahan chali gayi bina bataey???
he hugs her tightly....
kk cant understand why su is talking like this....
kk:su.....
su(with tear filled eyes):main tumhe phir ek baar khona nahi chahta hoon....😭 kk listens to su surprisingly....
kk:su..main to yahaan hi thi....trisha ke liye sunglasses kareed rahi thi....
su:haan...woh...to theek hai..par tumhe batana tha na....main dar gaya...
su:tumhe kahin kuch ho gaya to main ghar walon ko kya kahoonga....maine dadaji aur dadima se wada kiya tha tumhara khayal rakhne ka....
sumit moves away fom her and turns the other side and wipes his tears .....
su:chalo....ghar chalte hain...
kk not able to understand why su is behaving like follows su…

sukk reaches home....
as su enters he hears a voice....
voice:su...........
a girl comes running towards su and hugs him......

kk gets shocked on seeing it....
su looks at kk and manages to come out of the girls hand....
su:kk......yeh...nivi hai.....meri friend......
nivi:kya su.....sirf friend nahi ....girl friend kaho na..... 😡
su gives a fake smile ..
su:haan....girl friend......
kk looks at su and nivi………😕😕
Edited by mathimurali - 17 years ago
rmj1990 thumbnail
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Posted: 17 years ago
what the??omg not another misunderstanding!
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Posted: 17 years ago
well i hope this misundersatnding gets solved soon.plz continue soon.this nivi always creates problem.
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Posted: 17 years ago
mathi no misunderstang pls.
cont soon
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Posted: 17 years ago
continue.. i love to hear 4rm u soon
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Posted: 17 years ago
Yaar, do pal to undono ko chen se bitanedo, ye Nivi naam ki balaa kahan se tapak padi aur meri Kumkum ke man ko hila diya, yaar plz, milvado dono ko aur ye sari galatfemiya mitao. Meri Kumkum ko dukhi hota huva mujse nahi dekha jaata. But brilliant, amazing, mindblowing. Keep Writing, don't stop.

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