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Posted: 17 years ago
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great
continue soon
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Posted: 17 years ago
hey cont soon........waiting 😊
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Posted: 17 years ago
hi

great work. keep it up

loved it

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Posted: 17 years ago
Episode no.43

Anajli: -kya hua rahul..tum aise…
Rahul: -yahan par abhi koi tha lekin pata nahi kahan chala gaya……
Anjali: -tumhe pakka yakeen hain ki wo yahin par…
Rahul: -haan anajli maine uski parchayi abhi dekhi thi par pata nahi…..
Anajali: -ek kaam karte hain wahan dekhte hain…
Rahul:-lekin.......
Anajli:-dekho wahan par lagta hain ki koi hain shayad wahin insaan ho....
Rahul: -chalo.
Anajli: -chalo aaon…
(rahul turns)
Rahul: -(in mind) pata nahi kyun mujhe lag raha hain ki koi hume dekh raha tha….
(they leave and Angad shadow comes of the person)
Anjali: -uff yeh jugle bhi na….
Rahul: -daraavna…
Anjali: -romantic hain….
Rahul: -anjali tumhe is waqt bhi,………
Anajli: -toh kya hua……
Rahul: -tumse main nahinjeet paunga…
Anajli: -lekin tumne toh mujhe hi jeet liya hain….
Rahul: -acha.
Anajli: -bilkul…..
Rahul: -anajliiiiiwo dekho koi toh zaroor hain..
(they look)
Rahul: -ek kaam karo tum us per ke paas dekho main us per ke pass dekhta hoon…
Anajli: -tum darna mat theek hain…main wahin rahungi…..
Rahul: -acha….tum …..
Anjali: -haan.kuch nahi hoga tumhe aur haan wahan se kahin hilna mat…meri nazar rum par hi hain….do kadam ka hi toh faasla hain.
Rahul: -theek keh rahi ho tum amin toh dar hi jaunga…lekin tum Hiten na…
Anajli: -han main hoon na..
(both rotate towards the tree…….)

Break

Kavya: -angad maine suna hain ki jungle mein adivasi hote hain.
Angad: -toh…..
Kavya: -nahi wo maine dekha hain ki.
Anagd: -ki kya???????????
Kavya: -rehne do.
Anagd: -saaf saaf kaho jo bhi kehna hain..
Kavya: -maine suna hain ki jungle mein jo rehte hain unhe.
Angad: -unhe kya?????
Kavya: -wo nahi phal khaate hai aur naahi jaanwar.
Anagd: -to phir…wo khaate kay hain.
Kavya: -tum.
Anagd: -kya??
Kavya: -haan.wo tumhe khaate hain aur mujhe aur har insaan ko.
Anagd: -kya bakwas kar rahe ho…..
Kavya: -main bakwas nahi kar raha hoon……
Angad: -lekin aisa kaise ho sakta hain.
Kavya: -aisa bilkul ho sakta hain…tumne un species ke bare mein toh suna hoga an jo ki insaano ka sevan karte hain.
Anagd: -hhhhaannnnn.
Kavya: -bas yeh wahi hain…..
(Angad sound of something comes as if someone is there in the bushes)
Kavya: -ahhhhhh
Angad: -wo ….
Kavya: -awaz.tumne suni.
Anagd: -tumne bhi suni…
Kavya: -haan.....
Angad:-kya tha wo?????
Kavya: -kahin wo…….
Angad: -wo kya???
Kavya: -kahin wo wahi aadivaasi toh nahi hain na..
Angad: -kya??????
Kavya: -mujhe bahut dar lag rah hain.
Angad: -tum mujhe bhi dara rahe ho.
Kavya: -arey jo khud dara hua ho wo kya kisiko darayega……
(Angad noise of somebody running towards them comes)
Kavya: -anagd bhaago.
Anagd: -bhaagggggg………
(without looking ahead they fall into mud)
Anagd: -ahhhhhhh
Kavya: -angadd…….
(they turn around and are shocked)

Break

Kavya: -bakri……..
Angad: -bakri…….
Kavya: -acha toh who bakri tha.
Anagd: -(in anger)wo bakri tha…..
Kavya: -bach gaye…….
Anagd: -tum uss bakri se toh bach gaye par tumhe mujhse kaun bachayega..
Kavya: -matlab?
Anagd: -abhi batata hon.
(he starts hitting him)
Kavya: -arey anagd meri baat toh sun.
Anagd: -teri baat sunne ka hi toh yeh sila mila hain…
Kavya: -lekin.
Anagd: -I don't believe this .hum bakri se dar kar bhag rahe the…….
Kavya: -par hume thodi na maaloom tha ki wo bakri hain anhi toh hum dekh akr bhaagte.
Anagd: -tum chup rahoge..ek toh waise hi tumhare wajah se kichar mein girkar aisi haalat ho gayi hain….apni hi shakal se dar lag raha hain.ab log hume dekhkar bhaagenge.
Kavya: -wo toh waise bhi tumhe dekh kar bhaagte hain.,……
Anagd: -kya???????
Kavya: -kuch nahin.ek baar unhe dhund lete hain phir apne aap ko bhi saaf kar lenge……….
Angad: -hmm
Kavya: -ab chalo bhi.,……….
Angad: -hey bhagwan kaash aapne mujhe ek khoon maaf kiya hota toh main isika khoon kar deta……
(angad and kavya and rahul and anajli are at the same place and not seeing each other.)
Angad: -tum us per ke paas dekho aur main wahan dekhta hoon…..
Kavya: -nahi……main us per ke pass dekhta hoon aur tum wahan par jo per hain wahan dekho.
Anagd: -lagta ahin tujhe din min sitaare dekhne hain.
Kavya: -kyun.
Anaggd: -(holds his neck) maine bhi toh yahin kaha than a.
Kavya: -acha toh phir jaon na….
(they disperse.......anagd goes to rahuls per and kavya towards anajli's one)
Anajli: -arey koi hain lagta hain.rahul hoga.
Rahul: -acah toh mujhe darane ke liye aayi hain..
Anajli: -par main bhi nahi darumgi..
Kavya: -kaun ain kahin aadivaasi toh nahi…ek kaam karta hoon pakad leta hoon…..
Anagd:-koi toh hain.zaroor kavya hoga.toh main nahi chodunga isey.........
(kavay holds anajli's hand)
Anajli:-ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh
Kavya:-aaaaaaaaaaaaahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh
Rahul:-yeh kaun chillaayya..
(rahul turns and sees anagd in mud)
Rahul: -aaaaaaaaaahhhhhhhhhhhhhh
Angad: -aaaaaaaaaaaaahhhhhhhhhhhh
(all are running and end up running around Angad common tree…………..)
Anjali: -bachaaon……..
Rahul: -anajali………
Kavya: -adivvaasii…..bachaon.
Anagd: -arey yeh toh rahul hain……
(everybody is shouting and hiten along with armaan , kasturi and suajl also come to the same place….)


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Posted: 17 years ago
sorry house was on renovation isiliye late ho gaya...update karne mein........
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Posted: 17 years ago
no problom vanita 😛
nice one cont now 👏 👏 😛
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Posted: 17 years ago
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great
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Posted: 17 years ago
I just read the 1st part of ur story very interesting...I really like it n really appreacite ur hard work...but there is little bit confusion...there is so many characters...anyway keep writin love 2 read more
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Posted: 17 years ago
Great, keep it up. Magar suspense to abhi hai ki woh koun hai jo Anjali aur Rahul ko mila raha hai.Jaldi likho.
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Posted: 17 years ago
welcome charmed ones to my fanfic specially for u ppl.and there are many characters bt i am sure as u go with the flow u will see evrything so easy and the importance for aall these characters in the show...........ariund kksu.......hope u like the story.and by the way read it fast so tht u can go with the curent storyline.have a nice day and enjoy reading.....tc............... 😃

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