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you left it at a good point..cont. soon 😊
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Chaliye milne jaate hai Kumkum aur Sumit se aur good news bhi suniye......................................

Sumit Kumkum ko apne hatho me lekar ghoomne lagta hai aur Kumkum do minute ke liye surprise ho jaati hai. Kuch der baad Sumit ko situation ka ehsas hota hai aur Kumkum ko niche utarkar bahot hi emberessed hota hai.

Sumit:Kumkum, woh I mean main, woh

Kumkum:Tumhe kehne ki zaroorat nahi hai, khushi tumhare chehre se chhalak rahi hai aur isliye tumne muje uthaya. Main samaj gayi hoon, tumhe aise nazre churane ki zaroorat nahi hai. Muje bilkul boora nahi laga aur main tumhare chehre par muskurahat dekh ke bahot hi khush hoon magar ye to bataao ki khushkhabar kya hai.

Sumit:Woh mera dream project, jiske liye tumne presentation banaya tha woh excellent rahe aur humko woh project mil gaya hai aur woh sirf tumhari wajah se.

Kumkum:Nahi, Sumit us par tumne bhi din raat ek karke kaam kiya tha isliye ye meri nahi balke hamari wajah se hai.

Sumit:Chalo, sabko ye batakar aate hai.

Kumkum aur Sumit bahar jaakar sabko ye news sunate hai.

Dadaji:Beta, tumhari tarrakki me hi hamari khushi hai aur tum dono eksath aise hi aage badhho aisi bhagvaan se prarthna.

Dadima:Dekha, aap logo ne Kumkum ke pair padte hi Sumit ki zindagi me khushiya hi khushiya bhar gayi.

Veenaji:haan, maaji aap bilkul thik keh rahi hai Kumkum is ghar ki laxmi hi hai jisne hamare Sumit ki zindagi me char chand laga diye.

Kumkum:Ye meri nahi Sumit ki tapsya ka phal hai jo usse aaj is mukam pe laye hai.

Sumit:kumkum mehnat to sab karte hai magar mehnat uski safal hoti hai jiske sath tumhare jaisa jeevansathi ho aur tumhari wajah se hi ye muje mila hai, tum sachmuch mere liye lucky ho.

Kul:Are, bharkodar. Sirf baate hi karoge yaa hamari is beti ko apne kaam ke badle me kahin ghoomne bhi le jaaoge.

Sumit:Papa, kal Sunday hai to kal zaroor le jaaoonga. Ab main chalta hoon.

Sumit Kumkum apni roz ki tarah kaam me lag jaate hai. Us din raat ko Kumkum sab gharwalo ko khana khila deti hai. Sb so jaate hai. Yahaan Sumit apne kaam me itna busy rehta hai ki raat ke bara baje tak woh kaam hi karta rehta hai. Yahaan Kumkum Sumit ki raah dekhte dekhte dinnig table par hi so jaati hai. Achanak Sumit ko ehsas hota hai aur woh ghadi me dekhta hai aur chonk jaata hai.

Sumit:(Apne aap se)Are, yaar. Aaj raat ke baara baj gaye aur muje pata bhi nahi chala. Kumkum ko maine ek phone bhi nahi kiya. Ab main nikalta hoon.

Sumit ghar pahonchta hai aur kai dekhe bina direct apne room me jaata hai, yahaan Kumkum dinnig table pe so rahi hoti hai, usse bhi Sumit aa gaya iska ehsas nahi hota. Sumit apne kamre me Kumkum ko nahi dekhta aur pareshan ho jaata hai. Phir bahar aata hai aur Kumkum ki or uska dhyan jaata hai.

Sumit:(Kumkum ke paas jaakar)Kumkum, Kumkum.

Kumkum:Are, Sumit. Tum aa gaye. Woh achanak meri aankh lag gayi thi. Tum kapde badal ke aa jaao main khana lagati hoon.

Aisa kehkar Kumkum kitchen me aati hai aur Sumit uske pichhe aata hai.

Sumit:Kumkum, kab itni der ho gayi pata hi nahi chala. Tumhe meri wajah se intezaar.......

Kumkum:tumhe aisa kehne ki koi zaroorat nahi hai. Main jaanti hoon ki kaam ki wajah se tum late ho. It's OK.

Sumit:Karna pada aapko hamara intezaar isliye hum aap se maafi chahte hai magar aap hamare liye itni taklif kyon uthate hai.

Kumkum:(Hanskar) Yaad karoge to sataayenge, Rooth jaaoge to manaayenge. Rote hoge to hansayenge. Jeevansathi hai hum saaya nahi jo andhera hote hi chale jaayenge.......

Sumit ye sunkar dinning table par jaata hai ki jaate jaate uska hath platform par padi hui nukili chhuri se takraata hai aur uske hath se khoon nikalta hai.

Sumit:Ouch....

Kumkum:kya huva Sumit?

Sumit ko dekhti hai to uske hath me se khoon nikal raha hota hai aur khoon dekhkar uski aankho se aansoo nikal aate hai.

Kumkum:(rote rote) Ye kya laga Sumit.

Sumit:Kuch nahi, bas zara si.

Kumkum Sumit ko jahaan hath me laga hota hai woh khoon apne hotho se chhos leti hai.

Kumkum:Chalo Sumit, doctor ke paas, injection lagva dete hai.

Sumit:Are, Kumkum muje aisi koi badi chot nahi aayi, bas halki si khroch hai

Kumkum:Sumit, mazak mat karo.

Sumit:Mazak nahi kar raha hoon aur vaise bhi tumne isse apne hotho se chhoo liya to ye to vaise bhi thik ho gaya.
Haan ek baat hai muje chot lagi hai to apne hatho se to khilaaogi naa?

Kumkum:Sumit tumhe halki si khroch aa jaaye ye bhi mujse bardast nahi hota.

Sumit:thik hai ab ye aansoo ponchho.

Sumit Kumkum ke aansoo ponchhta hai aur khana khane baithta hai. Kumkum apne hatjo se usse mooh me nivaala dene jaati hai, tab Sumit bhi ek nivaala leta hai.

Kumkum:Ye kis liye, tum to mere hath se khanewale the.

Sumit:Tum to muje khilaogi magar tumne bhi to kuch nahi khaya.

Kumkum:Tumhe kaise pata chala ki maine ab tak khana nahi khaya.

Sumit:Tum meri Kumkum ho aur main apni Kumkum ko acchi tarah se jaanta hoon ki woh mere bina kuch nahi khayegi.

Dono ek doosre ko khilakar so jaate hai..................

To be continued..........................................
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Posted: 18 years ago
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love ur forum it is a lovely story
contiue soon
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Sumit aur Kumkum so gaye magar main ab kahaani aage badhhaana chahti hoon isliye shayad do no ko uthna padega..................................................

Subah hoti hai aur har roz ki tarah Kumkum uthti hai aur nahakar apne kamre me taiyaar ho rahi hoti hai, taiyaar hone ke baad uska dhyan Sumit ki or jaata hai, woh Sumit ko dekhkar muskurati hai aur apne maan me kehti hai,

Kumkum:(Apne maan me)Sumit, aaj tumko main nahi uthaoongi vaise bhi aaj chhutti hai aur kal raat tum der se ghar aaye the. Tum kitne pyare lag rahe ho, bas samay yahaan hi theher jaaye yahi khwahish hoti hai tumhe yun sukun se sote huve dekh. Magar Sumit naa jaane tumse door hone ka maan hi nahi karta bas tumhe dekhne ko, tumhare sath baat karne ko jee karta hai. Mere harek khayal me tum ho aur meri harek baat ki shuruaat bhi tum ho aur ant bhi tum. Mere khwabo me tum, meri saanso me bhi tum, mera dil bhi tumhare liye hi dhadkta hai aur har jagah sirf tum hi tum nazar aate ho, naa jaane muje kya ho raha hai. Sabke sath hoti hoon to akele rehne ka maan karta hai aur jab akeli hoti hoon to sabke sath rehne ki khwahish hoti hai. Kya muje bhi tumse pyar ho gaya hai?

Usi waqt Sumit karvat badlta hai aur usse aise dekh Kumkum vapis apne khayalo me se bahar aati hai.

Kumkum:chalo, Kumkum Sumit ko sone do aur trum kaam me lag jaao.

Kumkum ghar ka kaam karti hai aur lunch ki taiyaari karti hai magar Sumit abhi tak utha nahi hota, Kumkum ke saare kaam khatm ho gaye hote hai aur woh apne kamre me jaati hai.

Kumkum:Are, Sumit to abhi tak so raha hai, usse uthoon ya nahi. Nahi nahi woh thak gaya hoga usse sone deti hoon aur uske project ki file to yahaan hai hi to uska kaam khatm kar deti hoon.

Kumkum Sumit ki files lekar uska saara kaam khatm kar deti hai aur files cupbord me rakhne jaati hai aur rakh to deti hai magar tab Kumkum ka hath payal ka box wahaan rakkha hota hai us par padta hai aur woh payal gir jaati hai, uski awaz se Sumit jaag jaata hai aur uska dhyan Kumkum ki or jaata hai.

Kumkum:Sumit, kuch nahi woh payal gir hayi.

Sumit:koi baat nahi, main thik hoon, magar kitne baje?

Kumkum:Sade baara.

Sumit:Kya?Itni der ho gayi aur tumne muje uthaya nahi?
Aur kamre me to lagta hi nahi ki itne baje hai.

Kumkum:Woh kya hai ki agar main khidki khol deti to sunlight tumpe padti aur tumjaag jaate isliye maine khidki nahi kholi aur tum vaise bhi thak gaye the to main socha ki tumhe rest karne doon.

Sumit:magar aaj to muje tumhe bahar le jaana tha aur office ki kuch files par kaam karna tha to....

Kumkum:Tum fikr mat karo hum sham ko chale jaayenge aur.

Sumit:Aur abhi main fresh hokar kaam khatm kar leta hoon.

Sumit chala jaata hai aur Kumkum usse bataati nahi ki usne uska kaam khatm kar diya hai, Sumit fresh hokar apni files apni bag me dhhoondhhta hai magar woh wahaan nahi hoti hai aur usse dekh

Kumkum:Tumhari woh files almari me hai, ruko main tumhe deti hoon.

Kumkum Sumit ko files nikalkar dene jaati hai tab almari me rakkhi gayi Kumkum ki tasveer gir jaati hai aur Sumit khada hokar uss tasveer ko leta hai.

Sumit:Kumkum, ye to apshagun hai.

Kumkum:Don't worry.

Sumit:Kumkum mera maan gabra raha hai.

Kumkum:Jab tak tum mere sath ho muje kuch ho hi nahi sakta, ab tum ye files lelo.

Kumkum Sumit ko files deti hai aur Sumit files dekhkar

Sumit:Ye sab kaam to ho chuka hai, ye tumne kiya?

Kumkum:Haan, maine socha aaj tumhe totaly chhutti milni chahiye isliye kar diya zaraa dekhlo thik hai ki nahi?

Sumit:(dekhkar) Excellent. Kumkum tum genius ho, I love you Kumkum.

Kumkum sharma jaati hai.

Kumkum:Chalo ab lunch karle?

Sumit:Haan, phir ghoomne chalenge.

Do no lunch kar lete hai. Baad me woh do no taiyaar hokar ghoomne jaate hai.

Sumit:Chaliye aaj hum apko ghoomane le jaa rahe hai to aap kahaan jaana pasand karegi?

Kumkum:Mandir chale.

Sumit:Are, shadi ke baad hum pehli baar kahin jaa rahe hai aur tum mandir jaane ko keh rahi ho. Kyon? muj par bharosa nahi hai kya?

Kumkum:Tum par to bahot bharosa hai magar apni kismat par nahi hai aur vaise bhi tumhare jaisa pati, sabse pyara dost, jeevansathi aur pyara humdum muje yahin nahi agle har janam ke liye chahiye isliye jaane ko keh rahi hoon.

Sumit:Thik hai jaise tumhari iccha.

Kumkum:Magar tum bhagvaan se kya maangoge.

Sumit:Jo tumne maanga, kyonki Kumkum Sumit ki ardhangini hai aur Sumit wahin chahega jo uski pyari si jaan chahegi.

Dono mandir jaate hai aur darshan ke baad gadi me bethte hai.

Sumit:Mandir to jaa chuke magar ab kahaan chalenge.

Kumkum:Pehli pasand meri thi to doosri pasand apki hogi.

Sumit:To thk hai, pehle chaupati jaate hai, phir candle light dinner ho jaaye.

Kumkum:Apke sath to hum jahaan kahenge wahaan chalne ko taiyaar hai kyonki Aap hamari dhadkan hai.

Sumit:Aur aap hamari jaan hai, kyonki jaan aur dhadkan ek doosre se hamari tarah hi joode hote hai.

Kumkum aur Sumit poori sham ghoomte hai aur baad me dinner karke ghar vapis aate hai aur Kumkum baad me chhat par jaati hai aur Sumit usse dhhoondhhta huva chhat par aa pahonchta hai aur Kumkum tab gana gaa rahi hoti hai woh sunta hai.

Kumkum:Kiska chehra ab me dekhoon
Tera chehra dekhkar
meri aankho ne chuna hai tujko duniya dekhkar.
Rang bhi dekha, Roop bhi dekha
Rasta, manzil, sagar, mehfil koi aur nahi aisa,
Ho tera sath hai jisa, meri aankho ne chuna he tujko duniya dekhkar.......................................

Tab Sumit pichhe se kehta hai.

Sumit: Pani se pyas na buji to maikhane ki or chal diye socha shikayat karoonga teri khuda se magar khuda bhi tera aashiq nikla.

Kumkum:Aisi kya khata humne ki ki aap hamari shikayat khudase karne wale the, magar ab to aap hamare khayalo me rehte hai yahi hum khuda ko batane aaye the.

Sumit:Apki baat sunkar aj hume ye zaroor kehna hoga ki, Har nazar ko ek nazar ki talash hoti hai, har dil me chhupa ek ehsas hota hai. Aap se pyar yuhin nahi kiya humne, kya kare hamari pasand hi kuch khas hai.

Tabhi barish hone lagati hai aur

Sumit:Are, dekh lijiye woh khuda bhi is baat ko maan gaye.

Kumkum Sumit ko dekhti hai aur Sumit barish me bhigkar gaana gaata hai.

Sumit: Ho gum hai kisike pyar me dil subah sham par tumhe likh nahi paaoon main uska naam haye raam, haye raa.
Socha hai ek din main usse milke
Keh daloon ye sab haal dilke
Phir faisla kardoon uske hawale
Chahe chhod deya apna banaale
Main to uska huva diwana
Ab to jaisa bhi ho mera ho anjaam

Sumit:E baadal bujaadi tune pyas dharti ki,E savan bujadi tune pyas tadpte chatak ki.Pyase to hum bhi hai isliye bataa hume bhi ki kab pyas bujegi aur hum pe bhi barsegi bochhar hamare yaar ke pyar ki.

Kumkum:Pyar hai naam intezaar ka aur har khwahish poori karne ke liye aap ka yaar bi hai bekaraar kyonki jo pyar ki shama aap jalaye baithe hai woh aag bankar tadap rahi hai aapke yaar ke sine me.

Kumkum Sumit ko bhigne se rokti hai aur usse apne kamre me le jaati hai aur Sumit change karke so jaane ki koshish karta hai tab

Kumkum:Sumit, tumne change to kar diya magar tumhara sir gila hai, saaf karlo varna zukam ho jaayega.

Sumit:Kumkum main thak gaya hoon.

Kumkum:thik hai to tum baith jaao main saaf kar deti hoon.

Ye sunkar Sumit utavla haota hai.

Kumkum:Kyon, Mr.Wadhwa, Ab thakan kahaan gayi?

Sumit:Kumkum, agar tum kar rahi ho to thik hai varna main so raha hoon.

Kumkum:Thik hai muje to karna hi padega kyonki tumhe kuch bhi ho muje accha nahi lagta.

Kumkum Sumit ka sir saaf karti hai tab usse khidki me koi padchhai nazar aati hai aur uske hath me woh gun dekhti hai aur tab usme se Sumit ki taraf goli chalti hai aur Kumkum Sumit ko dhkka de deti hai aur Sumit to bach jaata hai magar goli Kumkum ko lag jaati hai.

To be continued..................................... &n bsp;
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Wow, this stort has emotions, romance,thriller etc. Keep writing as many like me eagerly wait for the next part.
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Posted: 18 years ago
#88
whoo tried to kill sumeet
i think it is renuka
hope kumkum is fine
continue soon
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Posted: 18 years ago
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thanx very nice part.plz update the next part soon to find out who tried to kill su and why? 👏 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
#90
who tried kiling su 😕
exc part with rom,emotin,thriller cont soon 👏 👏 👏

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