FF Kumkum- Ek Pyari Si Prem Kahaani #1 - Page 97

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Posted: 18 years ago
dunno worry..bachcha.log mera chance will come soon....... 😉 😳 😳
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Posted: 18 years ago
arre guys..now stop crying on that vidayee scene
wo khatam ho gaya hai..anku preethi verni.. chup ho jayo..it's over now
(mujhe aisa lag raha hai k shayad maine kuch zyada hi likh diya)
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Posted: 18 years ago
oh no dear

it was simply gr8

actly cmd strgt 4m d heart.... 😉

cheers

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Posted: 18 years ago

They arrive at Wadhwa house 😃…Rishi gets out the car and heads inside as do all the others…in preparations for kk's entry…Su-kk still sitting in the car…and still hugging….🤗 😳

Su: (gently) kk…aao…😳

Kk: still a little gloomy….😕

Su: ghar agaya hai…😳

Kk 😳 tries putting on a brave face but su 😕 see right through it….

Su:....🤔 ek min mujhe pata hai kya karna hai…😃

Kk: Sumit…😕

Before she can say nething Su gets out of the car…

Kk: (to herself) arre su kuch nahi karna…😕

Su goes around the car and opens kk's door 😊…she puts her hand out so that su can help her….but su…lift kk in his arms…❤️

Su: ab to chal rahi ho na? 😳

Kk: (laughing) 😆 sumit choro…😳

Su: (smiles) nahi…😈

He carries her towards the house…❤️

Kk: su plz choro mujhe sharum aah rahi hai 😳…sub kya kaheinge….😕

Su: kehne do jo unhe kehna hai… 😃

She continues pleading with him but he doesn't put her down 😆…Veena comes to the door with her thaali…she is surprised to her such noise outside 😲…then she sees su and kk 😳… she tries to hide her laughter 😆…they finally get to the door…😳

Ve: sumit yeh kya ho raha hai? 😕

Su: kuch nahi ma…😉

Ve: wo toh dikh hi raha hai…😃

Su: (carries on laughing) 😆

Kk: shyly looks away…😳

Ve: chal ab utar kk ko…😛

Su: (unwillingly he puts her down) 😳

Veena does their arti and kk takes her 1st step into Wadhwa house 😃…she makes her footprints and handprints 😳…su watches grinning crazily 😃… kul and veena look at each other immensely happy on kk's arrival…😊

Later on all the family is gathered around and they are playing the usual games…Veena drops the rings into the thaali 😊…su watches closely as to where the ring fell 😉…he cheekily smiles coz he knows where it fell…😈

Ve: ok…ab doondo…😃

Kk and su put their hands into the bowl…there is a load of noise…the girls shouting for kk 😆 and the boys for su 😆…excepts for one…😉

Ri: go bhabi…😃

Su looks to him…😳

Ri: go bhai…😆

Su: hmm…better…😊

Su pretends he doesn't no where the ring is 😆…everytime kk gets close to it her holds her hand…😳

Ve: su kya kar raha hai 😕…angutti doondne peh deyhaan deh…😆

Su: wohi to kar raha hoon ma…😈

Su holds the ring in his hand whilst kk continues looking for it 😊…he watches her amused 😃… kk makes a sad face 😕…kk looks up at veena…

Ve: mili kya kk…😲

Kk: nahi mil rahi mummyji...

Turns back towards Su 😛…and sure enough su is holding the ring up in front of her 😳…he laughs 😆 and puts it on her…😳

Ri: kya bhabi 😕…bhai jeet gaye…

Su: (whispers) mujhe pehle se hi pata tha angutti kahaan thi…😆

Kk: (makes a shocked face and whispers) 😲 cheater…😊

Su: (whispers) thank you 😆…per main bachpan se hi aisa hoon…😉

Both giggle…😆 😆

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Posted: 18 years ago
Really Good,can't wait for the next part.I started reading ur fanfic last week.And i loved it.Keep up the good work guys. 😊
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Posted: 18 years ago
cute part heena 😆 😆 😆 .ab rishi ko zarur mar padaga 😆 😆
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Posted: 18 years ago
oooooooooooooooooooooooooo......................... 😳 😳

wat a luvly part henna

i luvd d part wr su lifts kk 😉

n wen su puts d ring on kk finger n kk cals him cheater 😉

yummmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm

too gud

plz cont soooooooooooooonnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnn

kahi excitement ke mare pagal na ho jau
😆 😆 😆

cheers

resh
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Posted: 18 years ago

Its quite late now…kk is in her room sitting on the bed 😳…veena, rishi and a few other relatives are there also…all are talking about kk's arrival…😆 😆

Kul and su are outside saying bye to the remaining guest 😊..they soon leave 😃…kul and su walk back inside…kul rests his arm on su's shoulder…😊

Kul: am really proud of u Su 😃

Su: (smiles) 😊 per kyun papa…😳

Kul: kyunki aaj finally mere paas bhi ek beti 😳 hai aur wo teri wajah se munkin hua hai…😊

Su: oh papa 😆…aap bhi na 😳… bilkul ma ki tara emotional ho jaate hai… aap dono ko sahi bahu mili hai 😆…ek dum emotional type 😆…(he laughs)

Kul: sumit 😕…ek baat jaan leh wo iss ghar k beti hai ab…😊

Su: oops…sorry…😳

Kul: waise kal ko mujhe office jaana hai to main araam karloon…🥱

Su: teek hai papa…😉

Kul: aur haan veena ko bhej dehna…😳

Kul walks of to his room…n su runs to his 😆…he stops in the doorway…surprised to see everyone there…😲

Ri: hi bhai 😃

Su just looks at them all…😕

Ri: aao na bhai 😊…hum sub antakhsri khel rahe the 😃…(teasingly) aap kheleinge? 😈

Su: looks at them angrily 😡

Kk: laughs quietly coz she knows rishi is jus pulling su's leg…😆 😳

Su: nahi 😡…(looks to veena) ma…papa aap ko bula rahe hai…😳

Ve: acha mein aati hoon…😳


She says goodnight to all and leaves…

Su: (thinks) ab inn sub ko kaise nikaloon?...


He is about to step into the room when all the relatives gather round him forcing him back out…su looks at them baffled…😲

Su: waise yeh mera hi kamrah tah jis mein main ja raha tah…

Relative: ahem 😳….hume hamara neg chahiye…😊

Su:…kya? 😲...neg…😕


Rishi comes out there too and smiles 😈…su looks at him knowingly that its all his idea…😡

Su: (angrily) RISHI…😡

Ri: erm bhai mujhe bohut neend aarahi hai 🥱… kal baat kartein hai na…😛

Before su can say nething he runs of to his room 😆

Su: aarrgghh 😡 😡

Relative: Bhaiya do na hamara neg 😃…bhabi keh paas nahi jaana kya? 😳

Su looks at them 😡…then he has an idea…😈

Su: haan 😊…neg tub hi doonga na jub tum log mujhe mere kamreh se paise lehne dohge na…😊

They looks at one another and then finally agree…😉

Relative: acha teek hai…😊

They move out of his way…su smiles evilly 😈…he goes into his room and quickly shuts the door…😆

Su: (shouts) goodnight 😆

They angrily stamp there feet 😡…annoyed at su 😡…Rishi comes back out…😃

Ri: kya hua neg mila? 😃

Relative: nahi …bhaiya neh cheating ki…

Ri: 😕 koi baat nahi…iss baat ka badla leh leyeinge 😈…aur neg bhi…😉

…they all walk off after Rishi….😆

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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: bhattyhuda

Really Good,can't wait for the next part.I started reading ur fanfic last week.And i loved it.Keep up the good work guys. 😊



Great to hear...😃
n as of now ur officially welcome to our ff! 😉
keep reading!
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Posted: 18 years ago
so nice 👏 .
ma khushi sa hava ma uchal rahi hoo 😆 😆 .
aur thodha liko na heena,amrit,verni 😆

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