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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: verni

main soch rahi hoon.............ki writer ki jagah reader ban jaaon.............. 😉 😆 par mujhe pata hai if i do so....u all will kill me........ 😆

Kyun Verni.... itna mazza aaya perneh mein....😆 keh tum readers ki taraf hogaye....😆 😆 😆

...per soch lo 😆...tumhai hum agaye kah plot nahi baateinge...😈

phir tumhai bhi intazaar karna hoga...kyun Amrit? 😆 😆

On a serious note guys....I don't want ne1 to feel compelled to write or feel bad about not writing...sincerely speaking 😳

I only want every1 to enjoy the fanfic and take pride and pleasure in both reading in writing...😳

Aur Preethi tum kitne fans in 1 ho...😆

mujhe pata hai tum Verni ko readers kabhi join hi nahi karne dohgee 😆...ur support is just tremendous...😉

n Verni miss u yaar!... actually right now I dont kyun keh tumhari post parne keh baad tumhari yaad phir se aagaye! 😊 😆

Luv all u guyz loads!!! 🤗

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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: preethi

i am back with a bang 😆 😆 😆 .
act there was a problem with my pc but now it is fine.

Hey I was wondering where u had disappeared too...kyun meri punjabi tenu waapis kich liye naa! 😆

And theres no need to come back with a bang... coz the fanfic is full of them 😆

In case u havn't noticed Bechara Su always has the 'ouch' emoticon next to his name....like this

Su: (so see there is enough bang already) 😆

man...I-F really need to get new emoticons esp for me...i've overused all of them....😆

If i could ask for 1 i would ask for a 'mwah' one 😃 if u get what i mean 😆

(n don't ask y 😉...naughty readers ) 😆

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Posted: 18 years ago
yes yes..a mwuah emoticon is really needed.agreed with u henna 😆
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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: amrit23

yes yes..a mwuah emoticon is really needed.agreed with u henna 😆

hai na writing them type of scenes would jus become a whole lot easier! 😳

😆 😆 😆 😆

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Posted: 18 years ago
yes heena you punjabi mujha kheech liya ya par 😆 .
now u write 😭
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Posted: 18 years ago

Kk goes and informs Anjali's dad what he asked has been done…Su too comes out…hes getting bored …he remembers kul asked him to make some business calls 😕…which surprise surprise he still hasn't done 😆…he hurries over to tell kk and whispers in her ear…😳

The old ladies are watching this from a distance…🤓

Kk laughs at Su 😆…Su too smiles….😊

kk shakes her head thinking….kitna bhuddu hai ab yaad aaya isse…😆

Kk: (she whispers back in his ear) to jao phir apni calls karke aao…😳(gives him his phone)

Su: blow a kiss ❤️ at her and leaves 😃

Kk: blushing 😳 😳 😳…because Su did that in a room full of ppl

The old ladies have been watching this intensely 🤓 🤓 🤓

L1: dekhiya 😲…dehiya tu…(to her friends)

L3: haan…oh munda uss kumkum deh pichey par gaya hai 😡

L2: pata nahi kidhaan dey log ahder aay huey hain 😕 (shaking her head)

😆 😆 😆

Su takes ages...so kk goes outside to see where he has got to. Outside su is leaning on his car still busy in a conversation...kk taps him on his shoulder...😳

Su: (glances over at her...then looks the other way again) 😆

kk: standing there with her mouth open 😲 not believing that he just did that to her

su: smiling 😈 to himself continues talking on the fone

kk: Sumit...😡 (waiting for a response)

su: half turns around and gives a 'don't disturb me' 😳 look

kk: stands there with her hands on her hips...waiting...😡

su: takes no notice 😆

kk: (thinks) teek hai tum aise nahi maano gaye...😈

She hugs him from behind...

Su: (amused) turns keeping a straight face and motions....not now 😆

kk....😲 grabs the phone from behind and cuts it...

Su: (turns and faces her) kk yeh tumne kya kiya...😲

kk: kyun? 😈

su: mein bohut hi important baat kar raha tah client se aur tumne fone kat diya...😲

kk: acha toh ab yeh kaam zyaada important hogaya hai...😔

su: (shaking his head...smiles 😊 thinking) yeh kk bhi bilkul pagal hai...attention chahiye keh nahi isse khud bhi nahi pata 😳

kk: nay nay kaho...kya? 😡

su: kya...kya? 😊 kuch nahi kehna hai mujhe 😳

Kk: ok...forget it...ab tum jao 😊…jakhar araam karo…yeh function to raat baar chalta rahega 😳

Su: opens his car door…but turns to kk…he puts his hand out

Kk: puts her hand on his...

Su: kisses her hand gently ❤️…kal milenge…goodnight…turns to the car

Kk: holds his jacket collar to stop him...😳

Su: 😲 looks at her surprised 😊

Kk: hugs him tightly…🤗 😳

Su: hugs her back too 😃 🤗

They have a long passionate hug…❤️ ❤️ ❤️

Kk: rests her head on his shoulder…😳

Su: ab mujhe jaana chahiye…

Kk: kyun ab tumhara jaana zaroori hogaye…

Su: nahi aise baat nahi hai…tum kaho toh 😈...mein yahein rukh jaata hoon…

Kk: knows what he's implying 😳

Su: aur waise bhi mujhe toh kafi neend aah rahi hai…🥱

Kk: acha? 😈

Su:…yes…aur mujhe yeh bhi lagta hai keh kahin na kahin to... tumhai bhi neend aah rahe hai…😉

Kk: nahi aisa kuch nahi hai…😳

Su: oh…koi baat nahi neend aah jayagi 😃…(comes closer)

leans real close to her...kk leaning on his car...has nowhere to go..su puts his arms around kk's waist...and brings himself closer

Kk: puts her hand on his face to stop him 😛

Su: holds her hand 😊 and moves it out of the way 😃

Kk: Sumit!!! 😆 (laughing tryin to get away from him)

Su lets go of her trying to get a grip on himself...jus grins naughtily…😃

Su: ok ab mein jah raha hoon 😊…kyun keh mujhe wakhai mein bohut neend aah rahe hai 🥱

They say goodnight n Su leaves...kk goes back inside...

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Posted: 18 years ago
it was just superb heena 👏 👏 👏 .
dono ko dhaker muja bhi neend aah rahi haa 😆 😆
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Posted: 18 years ago
kk goes back inside n enjoys herself..su just bangs on his bed n sleeps..
the function is over at anjali's house..it's 2am..n kk is roaming around awaken 😆 coz alot of work is still needed to b done as the marriage is 2morrow

the next day..everything is just perfect 4 the wedding 😃..the decoration..the atmosphere..the buzz going around..everything is all set..
anjali is ready too in her red dress..kk too is looking gorgeous in her red outfit 😳

she is doing sum last minute preparations n is looking really nrevous 😆
after everything was done,she looks at the watch..it's 9 am n sumit hasn't reached yet
kk - uuff!!!sumit ab tak aaya kyun nahin 😡 abhi tak so raha hai kya time to dekh..baraat bhi aane wali hai aur sumit..abhi tak nahin aaya 😭 oh god!! sumit tum kahan ho...
just then sum1 calls her n she goes to listen
on the other hand..sumit has turned his room upside down 😆
su - ab meri sherwaani (a men's dress) kahan chali gayi 😡..he bhagwaan..kk hamesha kehti hai k mujhe apni cheezein sambhaal kar rakhni chahiye..lekin maine kabhi uski baat nahin suni..ab dekho..pachta raha hoon 😡

there kk is waiting 4 sumit n is getting restless...just then she remembers sumthing..
kk - are..kal jab sumit bye keh raha tha to galti se mobile uske paas hi reh gaya..main use phone kar sakti hoon 😃
kk calls sumit..
he hears the phone ringing but culdn't find where it was 😆 coz all the things were scattrd here n there n heaps of clothes were lying..

kk - sumit phone uthayo na!!!
su - are kahan hai phone...zaroor kk ka hoga...milega to hi uthayunga na 😕
he keeps on searching 4 it n then finally gets it 😆
su - thnk god..
kk - hello sumit..
su - haan kk...tumne phone kaise kiya..
kk - tum abhi tak aaye kyun nahin 😡
su - are meri sherwaani nahin mil rahi
kk - to bina pehne hi aa jayo 😆
su - kya???
kk - i mean..kuch aur pehan lo 😳 par jaldi aayo na..itni der ho gayi hai..baraat bhi aane waali hai
su - don't worry..main baraat k pehle pahunch jayunga..
kk - pakka
su - haan..now cheer up ok..main
kk - theek hai..par jaldi aana..i love u 😃
su - i luv u two..three..four 😆
kk - acha acha mujhe samajg aa gaya how much u love me..ab jaldi se taiyaar hokar aa jayo
su - ok..bye.
kk - bye..

after that sweet conversation he again tries to search his dress n finds it..at last.. 😆
he gets ready n when he reaches there..he sees the baraat coming its way..
su - are baap re..bhaag sumit..warna kk bahut dantegi..
he gets inside n his eyes were searching 4 kk..when baraat arrived, every1 got busy welcoming them..so sumit was having a golden oppurtunity of spending some time with kk alone..
he goes upstairs n sees kk...
sumit's eyes popped out on watching her..she was wearing a beautiful lehanga n sumit was just stunned to see her..
su - WOW!!! 😆
kk turns - sumit..tum aa gaye 😃
came running n hugged him tightly..
kk - itni der lagadi
su - to kya huya..ab aa gaya hoon na
still hugging..
su - u r looking GORGEOUS 😃
kk - thnk u 😳
su - waise main soch raha tha ki hum dono ko kahin bahar jaana chahiye..
moving closer to her
kk - kahan
alot closer..
su - kahin bhi..jahan hum akele hon...
(holds her tighly)kk can't move now
su - aur humein disturb karne waala koi na ho..
he is now about to kiss kk..
kk - sumit!!! 😳
su - sshh!!!abhi nahin..
kk can hear her heart beating 10 times faster than b4..he moves his hand thru kk's hair n gives her a big kiss 😃
after sumtime he let kk go...
kk - what is this sumit 😳 tum bhi na..
she blushes n just leaves that room..
sumit smiles happily coz he has got what he was aiming 4 since ages 😆
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Posted: 18 years ago
.......i cant resist now..............achcha amrit and henna..... 👏 for u................and amrit bachcha my pm is again not working so lemme tell u my xams are going fine............and henna i hope u read the messages in your messenger which i left........ 😃
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Posted: 18 years ago
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kk goes down and tries pacifying her heart ........she was busy with everyone else but kept looking at su who was constantly watching her........... 😳

just then those ladies come........

l1:kk putr.....ek gal dasoon....

kk:jee aunty.

l2:woh munda hai naa..............(pointing at su).......woh usse door hi rehna.........

kk:kyun?

l3:arey bada shaitaan hai.........pata shaadi shuda hokar bhi kudiyon ko phansaata rehta hai........

kk:kya?

l1:haan..........door rehna usse.....

then they go away........
kk goes to su ...........

kk:su kya hai yeh?

su:kya?

kk:tumne un aunty logon se kya kaha?

su:kaun? woh...........arey yaar woh to mere peeche pad gayi thi.........apni beti ka rishta lekar ....to mujhe yeh sab karna pada.......... 😉

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