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Posted: 18 years ago
Good luck with ur exams Verni

...itna kuch to likh diya hai...u deserve a well earnt break 😉

Don't worry me n Amrit will take care of it while ur away...I'm sure 😆

Right Amrit?
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Posted: 18 years ago
yes..
good luck 4 ur exams verni..do well..
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Posted: 18 years ago
gud luck 4 ur xams verni 👍🏼...
& gr8 write up as usual 👏 👏....
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Posted: 18 years ago

I've had enuff of revising....😡 😡 😡

so to take my mind of it i think i should write da fanfic....👍🏼

lets do something I enjoy for a change...😃

ok so lets get thinkin..........errmm 😕.........eeerrrrrmmm 😕

hold on guys im still thinking 😆

actually u know what i'll get back to u guys in a bit! 😉 Dont worry won't be long now...n guys seriously I want proper comments now!

Its an order! 😆

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Posted: 18 years ago

Su upset sits on the bed ….thinking…🤔

Rahul and kk are in the car…kk is extremely quite 😒 …kk thinks to herself about what Su said …She gives it a lot of thought but then mentally comes to the agreement that Su didn't mean ne of it 😳…

Kk thinks: arre pura din toh mere aas paas rehne keh chukar mein rehta hai…😆 aur agar main khud hi usse door jaane ki baat karoongi to tori takleef to hogi naa usse …bilkul bhuddu hai 😆…koi gussa karna tum seh seekhe Sumit 😊…aise baikar mein khud ko dukhi karte ho 😔…😳

She smiles to herself…Rahul looks towards her

Ra: yeh tum kis baat per akele khush ho rahe ho…😊

Kk: nahi kuch nahi bhaiya…bus wasie hi…😳

Ra: jus smiles too 😊

They arrive at anjali's house…Rahul drops kk off but meets and greets everybody before he leaves…excitedly Anjali hugs kk 🤗…they go inside…

Kk meets everyone…Anjali's mom, dad, lil sis and her dadaji…all greet her open heartedly 😊 and she is extremely happy 😃…jus then a little sadness overcomes her 😕…she thinks of Su n knows that he won't have gone to sleep…

Kk: Anjali kya mein ghar phone kar sakti hoon? 😳...woh kya hai naa mein shayad apna mobile ghar peh bhool aaye hoon …toh maa aur priya fikhar kar rahe honge naa 😳 😳

An: arre iss mein poochne wali konsi baat hai 😊…tu jah aur mere kamreh se phone kar leh 😃…aur plz yaar aise baatein mutt kar apna hi ghar samaj 😆

Kk smiles 😊 and hurryingly walks of to anjali's room..she shuts the door

Kk picks up the fone but then a thought comes to her mind…😕

Kk: shayad su abhi tak naraaz hoga …to mein kya kahoongi usse 😕

She puts the phone down again

Kk: per woh abhi tak mere phone ka intazaar kar raha hoga 😳…mujhe pata hai 😊

She picks up the phone and dials coz she knows neither herself or Su can go to sleep without talking to each other 😳 ( ah these crazy ppl )

Phone rings…Su looks at it sadly 😒 and picks up

Su: Hello…

Kk: (can tell from his voice that he is upset..she too become sad 😔) Sumit…

Su: (immediately recognizes her voice) 😲

Kk: main jaanti hoon keh tum mujhe se abhi bohut naraaz ho

Su: (about to say no 😲 but she carries on )

Kk: aur shayad tum mujhe se baat nahi karna chahte…😭

Su: (Shaking his head...about to speak)

Kk: per its ok I understand 😳…mutt karo baat agar tumare dil nahi maan tah 🤔

Su: (trying his best to tell her he is sorry 😵…but she doesn't give him a chance)

Kk: lehkin mein achi tarah se jaanti hoon keh tum abhi tak soyeh nahi ho 😳 kyun tu mere phone kah intazaar kar rahe the 😒

Su: (finally) kk…mein 😵…(kk cuts him off again and continues)

Kk: its ok Sumit ab tum so jao ….goodnight…

She puts the phone down sadly 😭 and trys not to think too much about it…she goes back downstairs and joins the others….

Su…looks at the phone with tears filling his eyes 😭….he desperately wanted to tell kk 😵 that he was wrong....but he never got the chance…...he feels bad for upsetting kk...💔

Su: kaise so jaon 😭…mujhe sirf tum chahiye 😭

He feels even more angry about the way he reacted now 😡 😡 😡…he lies awake thinking of a way to put everything right 😳…its only been a few hours and he misses kk like crazy 😭…he thinks…

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Posted: 18 years ago
so su thinking what he shuld do to correct all things..he had a sleepless night..was just thinking of kk n finding a way to cheer her up n apologize 4 his behaviour 😳
he decides to join kk at anjali's house..

the next morning......
he goes to kk's house n asks anjali's address from priya..she teases him...
pr - kyun sumit...ek din bhi kk k bina raha nahin jata kya 😆
su - jeee woh..main to aisa hi hoon 😳 kya karoon..aadat nahin hai uske bina rehne ki..
pr - main jaanti hoon..
sumit n priya both smiles
pr - acha ruko..main abhi address likh k laati hoon..
sumit waited patiently...
pr - yeh lo...waise tum kab jaa rahe ho..shaam ko??
su - nahin..nahin..abhi 😆
pr - theek hai..kk koek baar phone kar lena..
su - number??? 😆
pr - likha to hai sumit..dhyaan se padho..
sumit is embarrased coz he was dreaming about kk..
su - theek hai..to main ab chalta hoon...

he goes straight to his house to pack his bags..
he is in a big hurry...rishi sees him hurrying so asks
ri - are bhai..kahin jaa rahe ho???
su - haan...kk k paas..
ri - oooooohhhhhhh!!!!!!!
su - itna bada 'oh' karne ki koi zaroorat nahin thi...
ri - are main to bas...aise hi...main maa ko bata k aata hoon..
he goes...beleiving that she will b on his side 😆
rishi comes with veena...
ri - dekho maa...bhaiya bhabhi k paas jaa rahe hain..itni door...aur bhai ki tabiyat bhi to theek nahin hai..
ve stares at sumit..
then comes close to him n says - jaa...par apna khyaal rakhna..aur kk ka bhi 😊
sumit hugs veena n makes a funny face to rishi 😆
ri - maa yeh kya..aap bhi bhai ki side le rahi ho 😡
su - to tu kyun jal raha hai 😆
ri - main jal nahin raha..
they were again off to a fight when veena controlled the situation
ve - sumit ladna band karo...dekho tumhe der ho jayegi..
su - haan..waise bhi main apna time waste hi kar raha hoon ise samjhane mein..
ri - chalo jayo..jayo..mujhe akela chod do..i need peace 😆
veena goes from there..
su - jab tumhe kisi se pyaar hoga na..tab tumhe samajh ayega...
ri - jab hoga tab dekha jayega...tab tak mere hisse ka pyaar bhi tum hi karlo 😆 theek hai..
sumit nods in favour
su picks his suitcase n headed 4 his destination...
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Posted: 18 years ago
while driving...he remembers that he was supposed to call kk..
su thinks - ek phone kar hi doon kk ko..kahin mujhe wahan dekh kar wo behosh hi naa ho jaye 😆

at the wedding house..
the celebrations r going on n alot of noise...kk was sitting with anjali n talking but both of them culd hardly hear anything..
su calls at the house...the phone kept on ringing..no1 pickd due to 'shor sharaba'
accidentally kk went to have water n heard the phone ringing...she picks it up..
sumit keep it down 😆
su - koi phone utha kyun nahin raha 😡
kk - are..cut gaya
he rings again n this time kk manages to pick it up 😆
kk - hello...
su culdn't hear anything..
su - kya main kk se baat kar sakta hoon...
kk - kis se??
su - kk se...
kk little surpised on who culd call her there - jee bol rahi hoon..
su - thank god..it's u kk 😃 main sumit bol raha hoon..
kk - sumit 😕 tumne yahan phone kyun kiya..
su - wo mujhe tumhe kehna tha ki main wahan thodi der mein aa raha hoon...
kk - kya????
su - oh god!!!!!! main tumhare paas aa raha hoon..thodi der mein pahunch jayoonga..
he was shouting..
kk - sumit mujhe kuch sunaayee nahin diya...i'll call u back after sum time ok!!
su - yeh lo..
kk - ok bye...luv u
su - luv u too...

she hangs the phone n didn't knew sumit was on his way to her..
on the other hand...
su - itna shor 😆 my god..kk wahan kaise reh rahi hogi..
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Posted: 18 years ago
👏

chalo my absence will be recovered.......

but miss me.....i'll keep coming to read. 😊
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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: verni

but miss me.....i'll keep coming to read. 😊

arre yeh koi kehne wali baat hai...ofcourse we will miss u! 😳 U can count on it! 😉

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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: verni

👏

chalo my absence will be recovered.......

but miss me.....i'll keep coming to read. 😊

verni tum bhi kabhi kabhi bachon jaisi baatein karti ho..don't u know, yeh mera kaam hai😆

ofcourse we'll miss u

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