FF Kumkum- Ek Pyari Si Prem Kahaani #1 - Page 53

gr8 write up verni 👏.......

Originally posted by: Henna042

Poor Rishi every1 blames everything on him 😆

...n then u wonder y he troubles Su so much 😆 😆

😆

gr8part....lovelyyyyyy

w8ting fr next dose 😳

Su takes kk home thinking of how he should ask rahul 😕 if kk can go with him 😳…kk sits back and relaxes thinking its not her problem…😆

They arrive at kk's house… Su hesitantly gets out the car and goes in with her 🤔…they see kk's mom and priya sitting there but no sign of Rahul…😉

Su: takes a deep breath plucking up the courage 😳

Kk: looks at him 😈…trying to hide her smile…

They greet Priya and Kk's mom…Priya is really happy to see them together 😃…

Su: erm..woh Rahul ghar peh hai? 😳

Kk's mom: nahi beta…woh to office mein hai naa 😊…abhi kahaan ghar peh hoga…😳

Su: looks at his watch and its only 1pm…he thinks he is so silly for dreading this now…thinks to himself…agar tu office nahi jaata is ka mutlub yeh nahi keh sari duniya office nahi jaati…phew!

Pr: kyun koi kaam tah? 😊

Su: (coming back to reality) hmm…nahi toh.. 😳 turns to kk's mom…kaam toh mujhe aap se tah 😃

Kk's mom: mujhse?....😕 (a lil surprised)…bolo beta kya kaam tah…😊

Su: dehkiye is ghar mein sub se bari authority toh aap hai na 😉

Kk's mom: 😳 (a little flattered)…haan…(waiting for him to carry on)

Su: to kisie bhi cheez ki permission aap seh hi pooch naa teek hoga na? 😃

Pr: oh toh tumhai permission chahiye? 😆

Kk: standing there smiling at all of this 😆

Su: nods shyly…😳

Kk's mom: sumit batao kya baat hai? 😊

Su: woh maine kk keh saath ek dost ki party mein jaana tah 😳…woh kya hai naa usne especially kk ko bhi invite kiya hai…ab akela jaata hua acha nahi lagoonga na 😳

Kk's mom: bus itni si baat….😆

Su: grins innocently 😳

Pr: (butting in happily) haan haan to of course jao naa…😃 (turning to kk's mom) kyun sahi kaha na maine? 😉

Kk's mom: (nods) haan 😊

Su happily 😃 goes up to her and takes her blessings then asks for their leave…kk walks Su upto the door…

Su: toh tayar rehna…I'll pick u up at 7…teek hai? 😃

Kk: ok

Su: turns to leave

Kk: ek minate 😳

Su: 😕 kya?

Kk: hugs him 🤗

Su: smiles 😊…ab jaon?

Kk: hmm 😳

He leaves and reaches Wadhwa house…as usually he sees Rishi is up to his silly games 🤡…he ignores him …he tells veena about the party and that he might be back quite late so not to worry…😉

Later on that evening Su is ready…looking dashing as ever…in a gorgeous Black suit 😃…he goes to pick up kk…

Kk has been waiting all day its taken her ages to get ready 😳…she goes running out as soon as she sees Su's car 😃…she shouts bye as she leaves…Priya and kk's mom laugh…😆

Kk is on her way out whilst Su is on his way in…in kk's hurry she bashes into him…😳 😳 😳 😳

Kk: (embarssed) erm… Hi 😳

Su: Hi…y choro itni jaaldi mein kahaan jah rahe thi? 😃 (he knows she was coming running to c him)

Kk: woh…main…😳 tumse…(blushing)

Su: mujse se pehle party mein ponchne kah irada tah kya? 😆 (laughing)

Kk: slaps his arm playfully…Tum bhi na 😳 😊

He gives her the flowers he brought her 😳…and she smiles uncontrollably 😃

Su: Chalien ab?

Kk: hmm 😊

He opens the door for her…he too get in….and their on their way….

hey i dunno wat pg this is gonna come up as on ur screens but its pg 56 on mine so thats wat im gonna write in the thread title...sorry if its different on urz...

Originally posted by: ankuhujulover

w8ting fr next dose 😳

Anku ur a good patient hamesha dawa (medicine) time per lehte ho...😆

n still be ready for the next dosage....😆 😆 😆

kahin Overdose nah hojaye!!! 😆 😆 😆

(Sorry been revising alot today...i think medicine is getting to me...ok i'll stop the Doctor jokes now) 😳

Originally posted by: Henna042

Anku ur a good patient hamesha dawa (medicine) time per lehte ho...😆

n still be ready for the next dosage....😆 😆 😆

kahin Overdose nah hojaye!!! 😆 😆 😆

(Sorry been revising alot today...i think medicine is getting to me...ok i'll stop the Doctor jokes now) 😳

😆😆😆gudluck henna

and the part ws awesummmmm👏

awwwws part henna 👏 👏 👏 .
henna ab do do kam kur rahi ho ek docter our ek writter 😆 😆 .
we are ready for overdose 😆 if anything happenes u are ready to take care na 😆 😳

su-kk in the car..su is extremely happy😃

kk - sumit waise party hai kis khushi mein..

su - uski company ko ek bahut bada contract mila hai..is liye

kk - sumit tum kab office join karoge..

su - shaadi ke baad..

kk (mokingly) - shaadi k baad jab humein saath rehna chahiye to tum office jayoge...not fair..phir tu mere waqt kaise nikaloge

su - jaan tum fiqr kyun karti ho..mere paas tumhare liye waqt hi waqt hai..or hoga..so don't worry..waise bhi agar main tumhare paas aata hoon to tum kehti ho door raho😆

kk smiles - meethi meethi batein karna to koi tumse seekhe😆

su - are..main to hoon hi sugar coted😆koi shak hai tumhe..

kk - nahin baba..bas tum chup chap car chalayo..

after sumtime they reach the hotel..

sumit gets out of the car n graciously opens the door 4 kk😉

kk - thnk u!!!

they went inside..the hall is beautifully decorated with a soft music playing in the background..

his friend meets him..

su - congratulations akhil..

ak - thnx yaar..mujhe yakeen tha tu zaroor ayega..

su - are aata kaise nahin..tumne jo bulaya tha..oh..yeh hai kk...meri..

ak interupts - meri bhabhi😆

all laugh n kk hands over him the bouquet they bought 4 him...

ak - plz enjoy ur selves..

sumit introduces kk to all his college friends..

they r happy to meet kk n vice versa..

then every1 insists kk-su to dance on the floor..

ak - sumit chalo..kk bhabhi ko saath lekar dance k liye jayo..

su - are..lekin..

ak - are ka kya matlab hai...tum dance ko kaise mana kar sakte ho..u r such a talented dancer..

su - woh pehle ki baatein thi..ab..to..

ak - mujhe kuch nahin sunna..bhabhi aap hi isse kahiye..

kk - main kya kahoon..

ak - sumit..mere liye..

he agrees n takes kk to the dance floor..

the song plays n they both dance...but just 4 a short time...

it was getting too late so su-kk asks 4 leave..

ak - milte rehna..

su - sure!!!

both hug n he says bye to kk

they start walking 4 thier car..

kk - waise party achi thi na..

su - haan..main aur akhil bahut purane dost hain..

kk - he is a nice guy😆

su - but i'm the niceiest😆😆

kk - uff...ab chalo bhi..

they sit in the car n leaves..

there rahul has been waiting 4 kk to come..priya aska him to go n take rest..she'll inform him when kk will come..

great part amrit 👏 👏 👏 .
su coated with sugar so i can taste him 😆 😆 😆 .
i am sure he must be tasting great 😆 😳 .
waiting 4 more 😛 .

Originally posted by: preethi

great part amrit 👏 👏 👏 .
su coated with sugar so i can taste him 😆 😆 😆 .
i am sure he must be tasting great 😆 😳 .
waiting 4 more 😛 .

yes he will b😆i guess every1 here would want to taste a bit😆😆

Sorry Guys but...zyada sugar khana mana hai... 😆

dats what the doc always say to the patients innit..but nobody said the docs r not allowed 😈

n seeing as none of u are Doc's iska mutlub hai keh his all mine 😉 😆

am jus kiddin ur all welcome to him... 😉

god wat are ppl gonna say....the readers where that crazy that they ate one of the main characters in the fanfic... 😆 😆 😆