FF Kumkum- Ek Pyari Si Prem Kahaani #1 - Page 43

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Posted: 18 years ago
awesome part 👏
n do cont.soon
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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: nature

hey bhagwaan.........meri harkatein 😲 😲

vaise madam aap bhi kuch kam nahi hain........uni mein baithkar IF pe loggd in rehti hain 😆 😆 😆.....

ssshhhh!!!!!....arre Nidz yaar ahista bol!!!! sub ko bata rahe hai... 😳 😆 😆 😆

eh isse chupe karow yaar 😆...nahi to sub khel katum kardeygi!

wassey bhi i be logged on only for u guys...to iss mein problem hi kya hai?!!! Right guys!!! 😉

n u know what 😈...isse baat per tumne pehle mujhe per shuk kiya tah 😆...kitni shuki ho...ab tuk shak kar rahe ho 😲....Unbelievable!!!

tauba tauba! 😆 😆 😆

Edited by Henna042 - 18 years ago
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Kk runs of to the kitchen…su is left thinking 😕 of a way to get her back…

Su sees rishi walk past and he yells his name

Su: RISHI…

Ri: stops outside the door and looks towards Su

Su: idhar aah na 😳

Ri: (smile appears on his face) kyun…meri zaroorat hai na ab 😃

Su: (getting annoyed) 😡 jitna keh raha hoon utnah kar mujhe tang mutt kar…pehle se mere tabiyat teek nahi hai

Ri: to kaise sahi hogee aap ki tabiyat 😛 (comes and sits down next to Su)

Su: mujhe yeh bata kk kahaan hai 😊

Ri: erm bhabi maa key saath kitchen mein hai…

Su: (about to get up to go there)

Ri: arre bhaiya kahaan jah rahein hai…😳

Su: kk key paas aur kahaan

Ri: per bhaiya…

Su: kya? 😕

Ri: maa neh dehk liya key up bed se uttey hain to woh aap ko choreingee nahi 😆…bhabi key samne beyizati ho jayegi 😆(laughs at Su)

Su: (sits back down) to phir kya karoon…😕

Ri: (rubbing it in even more) kuch socho bhaiya…nahi to kk bhabi wasie hi ghar chalee jaeinge…😆

Su: 😲 kyun ussne kuch kaha kya?…

Ri: jub woh aaein thi nah 😳....woh maa se keh rahi thi key usse doopayr tak ghar jaana hai…😳 ( 😆 )

Su: (looks at the clock its nearly 12:00) ab mein kya karoon…

Ri: (trying to stop himself from laughing) 😃 Bhaiya waise mere paas idea hai 😉

Su: (happily) kya? 😊...bata na jaldi

Ri: idea yeh hai key….nay actually mujhe lagta hai idea key liye kuch to milne chahiye 😃…kyun bhaiya? 😛…(putting his hand forward for some cash)

Su: tu nah tujhe to mein baad mein dekh loonga 😡…(grabs his wallet hastily and puts some rupees in rishi's hand forcefully)

Ri: Thanks bhaiya 😉…(he starts counting the money)

Su: (getting impatient) eh…bata naa 😡

Ri: oh haan…sorry….idhar aao bhaiya…

He whispers the plan in his ear 😲….Su smiles and congratulates him for his plan 😃….So according to the plan…

Ri goes to Su's door and watches whilst Su rings the house phone….ring…ring…😆

Su: (Shouts) MA PHONE!!!! 😉

Ri: (gives Su a thumbs up) 👍🏼woh jah rahein hai phone ki taraf…😆

Su: (gets happy) mutlab kk akeli hai kitchen mein….😃

Ri: ok bhaiya ab kat do…aur mein jah kar maa ko busy rakta hoon 😳

Su: (cuts the phone)

Rishi goes running to Veena…Su watches from the door 😃….He sees Rishi handling Veena so he dashes for the kitchen…kk is working in the kitchen and has her back to su…

Su goes up behind her and hugs 🤗 her gently…kk a little suprised 😲 turn round and smiles 😊

Kk: tum yahaan kyun aaye ho? 😲

Su: kyun 😊...tum nahi jaanti kya? 😉 (naughtily)

Kk: dekho Su tum teek nahi ho 🤔 tumhey to araam karna chahiye 😳

Su: tum yahaan ho 😊 to mein wahaan kaise araam karoon…😆

Kk: (moving away from him) Sumit tumhara yeh romance ❤️ khabi kam nahi hota kya…jis marzi halat mein tum ho 😔…

Su: (smiles) nahi khabi kam nahi hota…😃 😆

Kk looks at him then turns around and carries on with what she was doing

Su: kk 😕

Kk: hmm 😳

Su: naraz hogayi kya? 😲 (comes n front of her so that she stops working)

Kk: Sumit samne se hato 😒 (not looking at him)

Su: pehle idhar dehko 😕

Kk: doesn't look

Su: (holds her face and makes her look at him…softly says) naraz ho kya? 😊

Kk; nahi mein tumse naraz nahi hoon…

Su: to phir aesa chehra kyun…😳

Kk: kyun ki sumit tum araam nahi kartey 😕…tum kisse ki bhi baat nahi maantey 🤔…tum teek ho jao to phir tumhari marzi mein jo aaye tum karna…😕

Su: (sees that she is really upset for him) 😳 acha teek hai mein araam karney jaa raha hoon 😳…per kumkum plz tum istara udaas mutt ho…😳

Kk: acha teek hai nahi hoti…ab tum jao..😳

Su: (holds her hand) aese nahi 😊…ek baar muskarado phir jaonga 😊

Kk: tum jao…nahi to mummyji ajaeingi 😕…aur tumhe danteinge

Su: to dantney do 😃…main kisse se bhi nahi darta…😆

Kk: acha kisse se bhi nahi dartey 😊…(smiling)

Su: (smiles too) hmm 😃

Kk: to phir mummyji ko bhi zara yeh baat bata deyna 😆…

Su: (confused) 😕

Kk: turns him around so that he faces the doorway…

Veena is standing there watching him angrily…😡

Su: (surprised) Ma 😲…aap

Ve: tu yahaan kya kar raha hai 😡

Su: ma 😕…mein….mein..mm (panicking)

Kk: trying to stop herself laughing at him 😈

Su: gives her a stern look 😳

Ve: teri jurat kaise hui key to utth kar yahaan aaya 😈

Su: woh…😕

Kk: (can't help but laugh at his state) 😆 😆

Ve: kaha tha naa tujhe key wahaan se hilna mutt 😡

Su: getting embarrassed 😳 😳

Ve: kaha tah key nahi? 😳 (looking sharply at him)

Su: looks down silently like a little child getting told off 😳

Kk: (looks at him thinking he looks so sweet ❤️)

Ve: kuch pooch rahe hoon mein tumse Sumit 😡….maine kaha tah keh nahi? 😡

Su: haan maa kaha tah!

Ve: phir bhi tu uttah 😡…teyhar ja tere kabar lehtee hoon…chal mere saath 😡… (grabs him by the ear and takes him from there)

Su: looks back at kk

Kk: keeping a straight face…give him a 'I told u so' look 🤔

He goes and kk laughs at him uncontrollably….😆 😆 😆

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Posted: 18 years ago
what a part henna 😆 😆
sumit is really a mama's boy..hope kk infuses some courage in him 😆
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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: amrit23

what a part henna 😆 😆
sumit is really a mama's boy..hope kk infuses some courage in him 😆

oh no Amrit...Su does have Courage...alot of it...but only in front of Kk 😆

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Posted: 18 years ago

Hey Guys!!!

I've made some changes to the 1st page of this fanfic...

..do check it out n let me no what u think!!! 😉

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Posted: 18 years ago
awesum henna 👏 👏
specially that fanfic fanatic siggy is very nice..i'll use it too when i'll have sum space in my siggy box 😆
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Posted: 18 years ago
this is the 450th post in our fanfic 👏 👏
so i thought of having this pleasure myself...now there r so many things to celebrate 😃5000 views, completion of 50 pages n now 450th post n ofcourse many more to come😃 😉
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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: amrit23

this is the 450th post in our fanfic 👏 👏
so i thought of having this pleasure myself...now there r so many things to celebrate 😃5000 views, completion of 50 pages n now 450th post n ofcourse many more to come😃 😉

look at Amrit pagal hogaye hai...nething n everything she wants to celebrate... I guess thats what happens once exam stress is lifted...

...I toooo hope there are many more to come!!! 😆

(p.s this is my 400th post!!!!...yey......c Amrit fever is rubbing off on me) 😆

Edited by Henna042 - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
i think ur right in a certain way henna 😆
it actually feels very very very nice when exams r over 😆 😆

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