FF Kumkum- Ek Pyari Si Prem Kahaani #1 - Page 41

Originally posted by: Henna042

yeh thats tru...but nobody said kk can't come visit...😈 or did they? 😉

neways thanks Raji...was thinkin even yesterday how comes u havn't been to the fanfic ...but i guess u catched up 2day! 😆

As long as u guys keep reading...i'll keep on writting...k! 😉

😆 can't wait to see Sumit's (or is it gonna be kk's this time😉)pranks now!!!
yeah...sorry about yest!! was sorta busy...anyways...can't stay away from here for long with you wonderful people giving us so much action!! 😳😳 waiting for the next part!!

fab part 👏
plz cont. soon
cant predictanythg 4 2day sorry

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Verni, Amrit & Me (Henna)

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Originally posted by: janu_2006

fab part 👏
plz cont. soon
cant predictanythg 4 2day sorry

Thanks for taking the time to comment! Ur Fab 2! 😉

Originally posted by: raji05

😆 can't wait to see Sumit's (or is it gonna be kk's this time😉)pranks now!!!
yeah...sorry about yest!! was sorta busy...anyways...can't stay away from here for long with you wonderful people giving us so much action!! 😳😳 waiting for the next part!!

Hey Raji plz don't be sorry....😳 😳 😳 (<--- oh no i'm changing colour) 😆...

so here i m..............

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su is sleeping.....veena comes and sits beside her.....runs her hand through his hair....then su's phone rings.......she picks it up it was kk's....

kk:hello.
ve:hello beta.
kk:mummy jee aap......
ve:haan woh su so raha hai.
kk:kya hua? aap ki awaaz itni low sound kar rahi hai.....koi problem to nahi hai naa..
ve:beta tum to jaanti ho ki su ka abhi abhi operation hua hai ........aur usne bilkul aaram bhi nahi kiya jab se hosh aaya hai....iswaqt use bohut tez bukhaar hai...dr. ne use sirf aaraam karne ko kaha hai....
kk (also gets upset):aap chinta mat kariye woh theek ho jaayega..
ve:hmm...
kk:achcha main phone rakhti hoon.
ve:theek hai beta......tum bhi apna khayaal rakhna.
kk:jee...

after disconnecting.......kk too gets upset for su....

kk (to herself) :yeh su bhi naa........bilkul apna khayaal nahi rakhta....
waise dekha jaaye to galti meri bhi hai....mujhse zyaada badi problem use thi........aur maine uska theek se dhyaan bhi nahi diya.......wohi mujhe sambhalta raha...

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sometime passes........in the after noon.......when kk cant bear......to be away from su.....she gets up somehow.......manages to change her clothes....and goes down.....

ra:arey kk kahaan jaa rahi ho?
pr:kk abhi to tum poori tarah se theek bhi nahi hui....aur
kk:bhaiya bhabhi su ki tabiyat bohut kharaab hai.....main usse milne jaa rahi hoon.
ra:magar kk.....
pr:ra jaane do ise.......
ra:theek hai chalo main tumhe drop kar deta hoon.....main usi taraf jaa raha tha.....

they go........on reaching the house.......ra leaves for his work....and kk goes inside the house.......

ve:arey kk tum yahaan.....

kk touches her feet...

kk:mummy jee woh aapne bataya tha ki su .......woh kahaan hai.
ve:haan woh apne room mein aaram kar raha hai...jao mil lo..

kk goes towards his room.........

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she sees su is sleeping........she goes near him and puts her hand on his head....it was still hot.......her eyes are watered.......then su wakes up.....

su:arey kk tum yahaan.

kk trying to hide her tears........

kk:haan tumse milne ka man kiya to aa gayi.
su:tum ro rahi ho?
kk:nahi main kyun rone lagi.....

su tries getting up

kk:kya kar rahe ho? chup chap lete raho.....

su still gets up.....he sits.....

su:idhar dekho.....(kk looks at him).....mujhse jhoot mat bolo.....batao kya hua?
kk:maine tumse baat nahi karni....tumhari itni tabiyat kharaab thi..itni tez bukhaar tha........aur tumne mujhe bataya nahi.......
su:kk main woh.....
kk:nahi isme tumhari bhi koi galti nahi hai.......maine bhi to tumhara khayaal nahi rakha.......

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now i m tired write plzzzzzzzzz 😊

they both were talking when rahul called kk n asks her to come back..
kk - abhi mujhe jaana hoga..
su - mat jayo na 😳
kk - main kal aayoongi...
she hugs sumit n leaves..

the next day
so sumit sitting im his bed day dreaming..no need to say about whom 😆 😆 he is feeling fine now
veena comes, keeps flowers in the vass n starts giving him lecture - tum yahan se uthkar dikhoyo zara..main bhi dekhti hoon kaise uthte to..apna khayal hi nahin rakhna..
su - to mera khayal rakhne waali ko bulado 😳 😆
ve - nahin..use bhi to aaram karne do..wo yahan aayegi to aur pareshan ho jayegi tumhare nakhre dekhkar 😆
su - maa main nakhre nahin karta..use bula lo..warna main khud use phone karta hoon.
ve - sumit...
he is angry...
ve - main khud fone kar doongi..
su happily - oh..thank u maa..i luv u..
ve - acha pehle promise kar kk ke aane par zyada naatak nahin karega
su hesitantly in a low voice - theek hai..

she goes n call priya n asks her if kk is fine n also to send her WH
priya agrees..
rahul asks - kiska fone tha
priya told her n says that kk shuld go..as she is going to live there 4 the rest of her life so she must start visiting them n mix up with them
rahul agrees..

priya goes to kk's room..
she is already getting ready..
pr - are kk kahin jaa rahi ho
kk - haan..
pr - kahan..
kk - he..he...hm..hm..sumit k ghar..
priya gives her a stern look just to do a lil leg pulling 😆
kk - jayoon plz 😳 😳
pr - acha chal ja..
kk - oh thank u bhabhi...i'm going ok
she rushes n didn't even listend what priya had to say..
pr - yeh bhi poori paagal hai..

kk sits in her car n drove..
on reaching WH house..she feels a little reluctant while stepping in the house..

veena comes n sees kk..
ve - are..tum itni jaldi aa gayi..abhi to maine pr ko fone kiya hi tha..
kk - acha..wo main bas..jaldi thi aane ki
ve smiles - haan..main samajh gayee 😆
kk blushes..
ve - chalo jao..sumit intzaar kar raha hoga..

in the room..rishi is troubling sumit alot..
ri - acha bhai yeh khale..
su angrily - nahin..
ri - to phir yeh...
he shows sumit a lot of eatables but he is just refusing..
rishi too knows that hez waiting 4 kk..that's why he is making him annoyed
every1 just troubles kk-su 😆 😆
ri - to phir yeh magazine padh lo..
su really angry now...
su - nahin..nahin..nahin..tum jayo yahan se..
just then kk enters..
kk - what did u say??
su - kk...tum..are main tumhe nahin..is gadhe ko keh raha tha..idiot..jaata hi nahin hai
ri - haan haan..aapko to privacy ki bahut sakht zaroorat hai 😆
su throws a pillow at him..he goes behind kk..she shielded him..
ri - dekha bhabhi..yeh saara din aese mujhe tang karta hai..aur agar maa ise dannti hai to unke saamne sharif ban jaata hai..
kk - acha
she makes a surprised face..
su - kk tum iski baat maan rahi ho...
ri - to tumhe jealous kyun ho rahi hai 😆 😆
su - what..jealousy..aur mujhe..no way
ri - oh really...
su - oh yes..
ri - bhabhi aap iski baat mat suno..
su - rishi..
ri - bhai..
su in a louder tone - RISHI
ri - dekho tum ab aese..
kk interrupts - stop it guys..bachon ki tarah lad rahe ho..rishi tum bahar jao..main sumit ko dekhti hoon..
she is leterally pushing him out of the door
ri - acha bhabhi..wo bed pe fruits pade hain..bhai ko khila dena..
kk - khila doongi..
pushing is still continuing 😆
ri - aur kisi cheez ki zaroorat ho to..
kk - acha baba..samajh gayee..ab tum jaa rahe ho ya nahin 😡
ri - ok..ok..i'm going..
he goes n kk shuts the door..
kk sighs - uf yeh ladka...

sumit is sitting on the bed not responding to kk..she took sum steps n sits along with sumit..
kk - hm..to mr.sumit wadhwa..aapka kya haal hai???
su - bahut bura hai..aur tumhe kya..
kk - are..ab kya hua..maine rishi ki side leli usse bhi tumhe problem hai..
su - haan..tum mere siwa aur kisi ki bhi side nahin logi
he holds kk's hand
kk - sumit...
she leans forward n keeps her head on su's shoulder
su 😃 - darwaaza band hai na
kk smiling - haan..
on hearing this..he gives kk a big hug...
su - i missd u lot..
kk - aww 😳 i missed u too..
he tries to kiss kk but she pushes him n gives him the plate of fruits..
kk - yeh khayo pehle..
sumit - tum bhi na..
kk - tum bhi na 😆 slightly pats him n again hugs him...
sumit has a plan..
su - tumhara fav colour red hai???
kk - haan..
su - tumhe beaches pasand hain???
kk - haan..
su - tumhe lotus pasand hai???
kk - haan..
she is just saying 'haan' w/o even listening to his questions 😆
sumit knows this..
su - mera fav. colour blue hai???
kk - haan..
su - u miss me???
kk - haan..
su - can i kiss u??
kk - haan..
sumit was about to pounce on her 😆 see how intelligent he is😆
but she realizes n says no..no..
su - yeh kya baat huyee??? tumne pehle haan kaha..
kk - maine tumhara question dhyaan se nahin suna
su - to wo meri galti thode hi hai
kk - nahin..nahin..sumit mujhpar se utho..ok..u can't do this..
su - but just a moment ago u agreed 😡
kk - that was because i didn't listen to ur Question
su - mujhe pata hai tumhe english aati hai 😆 😆 aur main hindi samajhta hoon 😡 😆
sumit leaves her unwillingly n moves away..
kk - pata nahin..hamari shaadi k baad ek doosre se bane gee ya nahin..aese to tum har 2 minute baad gussa ho jayoge..aur main..
su - tum mujhe manayogee..
kk - acha ji..to tum jhooth mooth main hi gussa hote ho..
su nods 😊 n makes a sweet face..
kk kisses him on cheeks n runs from there..
su - hey..yeh artificial thi 😆
kk - tumhara gussa bhi to artificial tha 😆
she goes outside to help veena in kitchen..
su - kaash tum hamesha mere paas rehti..par chalo koi baat nahin..shaadi k baad bach k kahan jayogee 😉

Originally posted by: Henna042

i'm only letting u off until 2mo amrit then u gotta join me again...its not fun wrtting without u...😒

c i'm not usually even a sad person...look at wats happening! 😆

😆i've watchd what's happening...

n don't worry..i'll b 10 times active now on IF 😉