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@juhi_hussain

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Posted: 18 years ago

#141

Originally posted by: preethi
great going 😛 .
waiting 4 next part.sukk on same bike looks so good 😃

thanx a lot 4 ur commets😊

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@juhi_hussain

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Posted: 18 years ago

#142

Originally posted by: Rajeev_gr8
👏 👏 GR8 part

thnax a lot 4 commets ^ keep reading

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@juhi_hussain

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Posted: 18 years ago

#143

Originally posted by: scxygurl<<
keep it up yar it gr8<<
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sirjana(^**^) 😉

thanx a lot 4 reading

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@verni

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Posted: 18 years ago

#144

ay hello thanks kyun bolti ho???????????

i'll be angry......... 😡

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@juhimerijaan

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Posted: 18 years ago

#145

gr8 part 👏su kk or bick sound Gr8 & ya agree with verni y ur say thanx to us 😡

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@juhi_hussain

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Posted: 18 years ago

#146

Originally posted by: verni
ay hello thanks kyun bolti ho???????????

i'll be angry......... 😡

oppss aap tu bura maan rahe hoo mere thanx ka

thanx is liye kahite hai hum ek to aap mere story read karte hoo us reading k dooran jo time west hoota hai is liye hum thanx kahite hai plllzz dnt be angry dear 😊

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@juhi_hussain

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Posted: 18 years ago

#147

Originally posted by: juhi_hussain_lo

gr8 part 👏su kk or bick sound Gr8 & ya agree with verni y ur say thanx to us 😡

1st thanx a lot 4 ur lovelyyyyyyy comments

mere jawab wahi hai jo maine verni di ko deeya hai

k aap mere story jab bhi reda read karte ho us waqt jo time aap ka west hoota hai ise liey thanx karte hai & thanx is liye k aap mere stry read karte hai 😊

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@juhi_hussain

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Posted: 18 years ago

#148

HI
Tabhi sumit say some thing kk ……..
su- aap kyu na kar rahe hai
su- aaieye main chor deeta hoo aap ko agar mere saath koie prb hai ti sameer chor k aaie aap ko
kk - kaha na aap fiqer na kare kuch kuch der main aap mere car theek karde main khud hi chali jaio
sam - aap plzzz jaie sumit k saath car theek hoone main 2 gante or lagege
kk - ok

kk sit on bick
& put hand on sumits sholder
sumit fell uncomfortable
kk fell shy

kk see sumit
& smile
(song in bak ground)

jee ye chahe ye lamhe bas yahe pe ruk jaie
saamne tum rahoo or hum tumhe deekhe jaie
dil main hoone lage hai ek mithe se halchal
tum rahoo saath meer jese aankhoo ka kajalll
saath din raat rahe hai
pyar ki baat rahe or rahe kuch na baiq
thoda sa pyarr hooia hai thoda hia baqi
hum to chahege tumhe jab talak saaas hai baqi

suddnly bick stop & kk come out frm dreams world

S - aap ka ghar aagaya
kk = thanx 4 ur lift
sumit smile

sumit leave & kk o in side

iN VH

M - aare ye humari beti kaha hai
T - who kushi k yaha hai
M - kushi us ka to phone aaya tha pari k liye main kaha abhi who ghar per nhi hai
T - kya pata nhi kaha hooge
pari enter

sangita - loo humari kk agaie come we talk 4 u now u aagaie here veryyy long umer have tum ko
sangita chup hoogaie
S - ooo kk kya hooia mere itni ache english sun kar heran hoogaie or tum muskira kyu rahe hoo?
p - booia kuch nhi bas ,,,,,,,,,,,..........
t - kaha thi
p - mumma mere car beech main karab hoogai the ise liye
T - ok ab ja fresh hoo k aa tere papa ko tum ne baat karni hai
Pair mihir k pass jati hai
P - papa aap ne bulaya ?
M - ha per phele tum fresh hoo k aaio pher baat karte hai
P- papa abhi
M - kaha na jaio fresh hoo k aaiooo
P= ok papa
pari go in room

after few mints
kk in room suddnly she see sumit in room

kk see sumit & smile

(dnt very yar its only think of kk itni asani se nhi milaioge in ko or jab milaioge to pherrrr............................... )

thoda saa pyar hooia hai
thoda sa pyar hooia hia hia thoda hai baqi
thoda sa pyar hooia hia hia thoda hai baqi
hum to dil dee hi chuke bas tere haa hia baqii
thoda sa pyar hooia hia hia thoda hai baqi
(think abt engagement when sumit kk ko ring pahina ta hai )
hmmmmm hmmm hmmmmmmmmmmmm
AAj ye kya hooia hai dil nhi mera bas main
is liyee sochiti hoo tordoo sari rasmee
umer bher k liye to aa mera saath dee dee
tere hoo jaioge main haath main haath jo rahe
hathoo main haath sahi tum mere saath sahiii
phere bhi tere haa hai baqii

thodaaaaaaaa pyarrrrrrrrrrrrrrrr hooia hai thoda hia
BAAQiiii

T call kk
T = kk
K = aaie maa

K to her self
Kk = main bhi na ....
KK- sumit in veryy lucky k mere pass tum jisa humsafer hai
kk smile
leave room
go to mihir & tulsi room

M - pari betaaa tulsi main nhi bool sakooga tum hi bataio
t come near to pari
T - beta main ye kahina chiti hoo k .......................
END OF THIS PART

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@juhi_hussain

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Posted: 18 years ago

#149

😊 if i done any mistake in splling soo soory 4 that b/c i write this part now b/c i have no time to cont forward to my ff but i will try my best to cont soon as posibl thanx a lot 4 redaing 😊 dnt 4get to give comments i really need & wana read u al ppl comments 😊 😃