THE END PG59 :'( MUST READ!!!!!!!!!!!!!! - Page 17

aage likho naa...........plz continue........ 😛

sorry guys but ur gna have 2 wait 4 sukk engagement ceremony...

Previously the Whadwa family attend a party in the hotel, Sharman sees Rach. Anjali comes to the hotel looking for Prem but finds Sharman instead, her son Lakshya has had an accident, Prem has realised as well now to continue

Part 15

Anjali and Sharman are at the hospital awaiting news about Lakshya. Anjali is very upset

Sharman - hey dont worry Anjali, Lakshya teek ho jayega

Anjali - mujhe bohat daar lag raha hai, agar usse kuch hogaya

Sharman - aap bewaja fikar kar rahi hai, aapne apne husband ko bata diya?

Anjali - nahin...main usse phone karti hoon

Sharman - ok, vahan ek payphone hai, yeh lo change

Anjali dials in Prem's number but it is turned off

Anjali (thinks) - Prem ko kya hua, uska phone kyun bandh hai

The doctor comes out

Sharman - doctor, how is Lakshya

Doctor - due to injuries sustained to the ribs he has suffered blood loss, his blood group is AB negative, but.....

Anjali - but what?

Doctor - im sorry but we are out of that blood group in the hospital

Sharman - so what, test my blood.....

Sharman has his blood tested, it doesn't match, Anjali also has hers but hers doesn't match either

Sharman - doctor is there anything we can do?

Doctor - haan ek kahm hai, with every child, the blood group matches that of the parents, ab Mrs Anjali ka nahin mila tho aap apne husband ko bulaye....Lakshya ke pita ko, im sure uska blood zuroor match hoga

Anjali - maine usse phone karne ki koshish ki lekin.....

Sharman - fikar mat karo Anjali, main kuch karta hoon

Sharman leaves, Anjali sits on the bench and falls asleep, while she is asleep Prem comes, he sees Anjali and is upset.

Prem - nurse how is Lakshya?

Nurse - kaun Lakshya?

Prem - voh ladka jiska accident hua hai

Nurse - acha voh, usse khoon ki zuroorat hai, lekin uska blood group humhare hospital mein nahin hai

Prem - uski Ma ka blood group match nahin hua?

Nurse - no sir

Prem (thinks) - agar Anjali ka match nahin hua...tho kya mera?

Prem - wheres the doctor

Nurse - inside but....

Prem goes inside the cabin

Doctor - yeh how can i help you

Prem - voh Lakshya....aap mera blood test karo, Lakshya ko bachaye

Doctor - erm ok chalo

Prem's blood matches, the transfusion happens, Lakshya is saved

Doctor - Lakshya is ok now

Prem - erm excuse me, but can you leave us alone

The doctor and nurse leave

Prem (crying) - im sorry beta, main tumhare paas nahin tha, agar main hota tho shahid yeh sab nahin hota....

Prem is about to leave, he goes to see the doctor

Prem - please, aap kisi ko maat bataye ke main yahan aaya tha

Doctor - lekin agar unne pooch liya

Prem - tho kaho ke ek ajnabee aaya tha

Prem leaves, just as Sharman arrives, Anjali wakes up

Sharman - im sorry Anjali, main har hospital mein gaya tha lekin...

Anjali cries

Doctor - Mrs Anjali, aap ka beta teek hai,

Anjali - lekin kaise?

Sharman - aap ne kaha ke aap ke paas uska blood group...

Doctor - haan lekin (remembers what Prem said) ek ajnabee aaya tha, aur usne apna blood group donate kiya tha

Sharman - ajnabee? kaun tha?

Doctor - im sorry i dont know

Anjali (thinks) - zuroor Prem tha, jab unko pata lag gaya ke Lakshya ka accident hua hai aur usse khoon ki zuroorat hai tho voh yahan chale aaye lekin voh rooke kyun nahin

Sharman - acha Anjali main chalta hoon, aap Lakshya ke paas raho

Anjali - thanks a lot Sharman

Back at the hotel, Prem has just arrived, he sees Rach sleeping

Prem - im sorry Rach, agar tumhe pata lag gaya ke meri phele bhi shaadi hui thi, aur mera ek beta bhi hai, tho tum mujhse aur nafrat karne lage gi. But believe me, i love you not Anjali....voh meri majboori....

Rach wakes up

Rach - hey tum kahan the?

Prem - neeche, i needed some air, chalo lets sleep

Rach - Prem tum teek tho ho

Prem - haan of course

The next day Aman is in the lounge, Shravan comes and sits by her

Aman - tum? fhir aagaye

Shravan - dheko jab tak tum mujhse teek se baat nahin karo gi tab tak main tumhara peecha karta rahoon ga

Aman - oh please, baatein koi tumse seeken

Aman gets up and goes away, Shravan is left upset

Shravan - god yeh ladki!

Krish - kya tum sach mein meri beti ko pasand karte ho?

Shravan - arre Krish uncle, of course...lekin voh mujhe khaas nahin dal thi

Krish - hmm. agar maine tumhe raasta bata diya meri beti ki dil ki taraf....

Shravan - tho aap jo kahegne main manloon ga

Krish - ok.....then listen

Shravan - wow, thanks a lot uncle

Shravan goes to the shopping mall and buys a diamond necklace, and some flowers. He finds Aman by the pool

Aman - of ho, tum fhir......?

Shravan - main tumhare liye kuch laya hoon

Aman - kya?

Shravan hands her the flowers

Aman - wow....very nice

Shravan - aur yeh bhi

He hands her the necklace

Aman - oh my god Shravan yeh.......

Shravan - kyun? tumhe pasand nahin?

Aman - of course pasand hai, lekin tumne itna mehnga kyun?

Shravan = pyaar mein mehnga saasta nahin dhikta

Shravan goes, Aman is left confused, but happy

Aman (thinks) - oh no, kya main bhi Shravan ko.....no never! main hone nahin dhoon gi

Meanwhile at the hospital, Lakshya wakes up

Anjali - beta tum teek ho

Lakshya - papa.....

Anjali - papa....

Lakshya - haan mama, papa aaye the

Anjali - tho voh aaye the...tumhe kaise pata

Lakshya - mujhe unki awaz sunayi di

Anjali - mera bachcha, fikar mat karo papa aate honge

Sharman - knock knock

Lakshya - uncle

Sharman - hi Lakshya how are you

Lakshya - im ok

Sharman - Anjali aap kaise?

Anjali - teek hoon, mujhe pata lag gaya ke Lakshya ko khoon kisne diya

Sharman - really, kisne/

Anjali (smiles) - iske papa ne, Lakshya khe raha tha ke voh yahan aaye the

Sharman - agar yeh baat hai tho fhir Doctor ne kyun kaha ek ke ajnabee aya tha

Anjali - yehi tho mere samaj nahin aata

Sharman sits with Lakshya, he is very happy

Lakshya (happy) - PAPA!

Sharman - papa.....tumne papa kyun kaha

Lakshya - mere papa vahan hai

Sharman - really, main bhi dhekoon

Sharman turns around slowly but he sees no one

Sharman - ok beta, im going now, main kal aaonga

He leaves, Prem comes out from the corner

Prem (thinks) - Sharman yahan kyun aaya tha....

Sharman goes back to the hotel he is surprised to see Mohini

Mohini - hi Sharman

Sharman - tum yahan?

Mohini - missed you a lot, tum mujhe vahan kyun chord ke aaye the

Sharman - oh please Mohini, yeh sab bandh karo, maine tumhe pehle bhi kaha tha, i dont like you

Mohini is angry, but she decides to entice Sharman and sings Main Hoon Tere Pyaar Mein from Hogi Pyaar Ki Jeet

Main hoon tere pyaar mein pagal jaane jaan
Main hoon tere pyaar mein pagal jaane jaan

dal tha jaye mera aanchal jaane jaan

i love you i love you

tujhse meri jaan hai roop mera bejaan hai
tere mere beech mein parde ki deewar hai
parde ki deewar hai

tujhse meri jaan hai roop mera bejaan hai
tere mere beech mein parde ki deewar hai
parde ki deewar hai

dal na jaye mujhse na pal jaane jaan
Main hoon tere pyaar mein pagal jaane jaan

tu bada bedard hai jaane kaisa mard hai
chalta hai saasein meri dhek mausam dard hai
dhek mausam dard hai

tu bada bedard hai jaane kaisa mard hai
chalta hai saasein meri dhek mausam dard hai
dhek mausam dard hai

behka jaye mera kajal jaane jaan
Main hoon tere pyaar mein pagal jaane jaan
Main hoon tere pyaar mein pagal jaane jaan

dal tha jaye mera aanchal jaane jaan

Main hoon tere pyaar mein pagal jaane jaan

Mohini has Sharman against the wall, someone turns her around and slaps her....

to be continued

Find out who slaps Mohini in part 16!

hey rach!! OMG i just noticed..4 da past couple timez u wrote the partz..im alwyz da furst one to comment😆 well..i guess dats good 4 me isnt it😆😛 nywayz...me falling in luv 😆😆 dats sourd-of makin me laf..but its k..go on with da story..its very exciting..keep it up...cant wait til next part.

Aman😉😛

hey rach spl part kab likhogi yaar,....me so confusd abt d story 😕 😕

bt keep i up....

rachu yaar great kahhani!! 👏
abb yeh special part kabb hai?? 😊
vaise i think i m falling 4 ur hubby ... 😳

lol ankita......special part will b soon, i usually do 2 parts of the normal story b4 the special part......haila neela.....sach mein....mujhe chinta karne ki koi baat tho nahin 😆

Originally posted by: rachandeep

lol ankita......special part will b soon, i usually do 2 parts of the normal story b4 the special part......haila neela.....sach mein....mujhe chinta karne ki koi baat tho nahin 😆

rach plzzz do the spl part fast....

cant w8 fr it......coz i lost d track of d story😭

so can enjoy d spl parts only althu ur stry rocks

and congrats 200 posts 2 ur story....am d 201st👏

gr8 bachcha.................... 👏 really tumhe ek serail shuru kar hi lena chahiye.......... 😆 😛 😛

😆 😆 Verni jaan haan main Bag Films ko story likti hoon 😆 😆 and Ankita sweetie good things come 2 those who wait 😉

Previously Sharman and Anjali find out Lakshya needs blood, Prem gives his blood without them knowing. Lakshya is saved. Mohini arrives in Goa, tries to entice Sharman now to continue

Part 16

Mohini has Sharman up against the wall after singing for him, someone turns her around and slaps her, Mohini looks up and sees Rach

Mohini - tum?

Sharman - Rach, tum yahan?

Rach - haan main sohi hui thi, neend nahin aah rahi tho socha bahar thoda ghoom loon lekin yahan maine isse..

Mohini - tumne mujhe thapad kyun mara?

Rach - tumhari himat kaise hui Sharman se yeh kuch kehne ke liye?

Mohini - tuhe kya fark parta hai, tum tho shaadi shuda ho

Rach - tho kya hua, Sharman ab bhi mera dost hai, door raho isse

Sharman - Rach shant ho jao, Mohini jao yahan se

Mohini - lekin Sharman

Sharman - i said leave

Mohini leaves

Sharman - thank god tum aageyi varna iska peecha pata nahin kaise choot tha

Rach - tum bhi na, god yeh Mohini bhi pagal ladki hai

Sharman - erm shall we go for a walk

Rach - teek hai chalo

They go out side in the hotel garden

Sharman - Prem...

Rach - hes sleeping

Sharman - oh i see

Rach - aunty uncle kaise?

Sharman - sab teek hai

Rach - good

Sharman - tum Prem ke saath kush ho

Rach - pehle nahin thi, pata nahin....yahan aane se..

Sharman - haan Goa aisi jaaga hai

Rach - Sharman ek baat kahoon, bura nahin manoge

Sharman - haan kaho

Rach - meri Prem ke saath shaadi ho chuki hai, tum....tum mujhe bhula do, tumhare liye acha hoga

Sharman (laughs slightly) - tumhe kaise bhula sakta hoon, pehle pyar ko koi nahin bhula sakta

Rach - janti hoon, lekin kya tum aise apni zindagi kharab kardo ge

Sharman - nahin Rach, main tumhari baat samaj tha hoon lekin mujhe thoda sa waqt chahida hai

Rach - of course

Sharman and Rach carry on talking meanwhile upstairs Prem wakes up, he looks around and doesn't see Rach

Prem - Rach kahan gayi

He goes outside the room and goes downstairs to the main desk

Prem - excuse me

Assistant - yes sir

Prem - have you seen my wife?

Assistant - no sir sorry

Prem - no? thank you

Prem turns around and looks in the main lounge, he turns around and bumps into Mohini

Prem - Mohini, acha tho tum yahan aahi gayi

Mohini - mujhe tho aana hi tha, lekin tum, sohe nahin

Prem - soha tha lekin...

Mohini - lekin tumhari biwi tumhare kamre mein nahin hai right?

Prem - tumhe kaise pata

Mohini - kyunki voh baar garden mein hai (irritated) Sharman ke saath

Prem - Sharman! uski tho main

Prem moves Mohini out the way

Mohini - ab ayega mazaa

Prem goes outside and sees Rach and Sharman together

Prem - Rach

Rach - Prem tum ut gaye

Prem - haan, tum yahan?

Rach - neend nahin aah rahi thi

Prem - acha, tho tum yahan aah gayi, Sharman ke paas

Sharman - Prem tum....

Prem - please, im speaking to my wife, tum beech mein mat bolo

Rach - Prem main bas

Prem - tum kya? main soh kya gaya tho tum apne aashiq se milne aagayi

Rach - Prem please, hum upar jaake baat karte, yahan tamasha....

Prem - nahin hum baat yahein karenge, aur rahi baat tamashe ki tho voh tho tumne kiya hi hai, mera tamasha

Rach - Prem....tum yeh kya....

Prem - haan, sahi khe raha hoon, agar koi aurat raat ko, apne pati ko chord kar koi gher mard ke paas jati hai tho yeh kya hai, apne pati ka tamasha nahin tho aur kya

Rach (tears in eyes) - Prem tum kya bole ja rahe ho, hum upar chalte hai...

Prem - bas karo apna natak. tum saaf saaf kyun nahin khethi, tum pehle Sharman ko paana chahti thi lekin jab voh nahin mila tho apne pati ke peet peeche usse milne jaati ho.....aur pata nahin aur kya karti ho...

Suddenly Rach slaps Prem, he looks at her and sees she is crying, she runs inside, Sharman feels bad and wants to go after her but Prem stops him and holds him from his collar

Prem - agar tum Rach ki balayi chahte ho, tho door raho usse, understand

Sharman - tumhara dhimak....

Prem - i aid understand

Sharman doesnt answer, Prem lets him go and goes upstairs, Rach is lying in bed crying

Prem - ab rone ka kya faida, chup chap sonjao aur us Sharman se tum na milo tho issi mein tumhari balayi hai ok? goodnight

Rach (thinks) - yeh kya hogaya Prem ko, kya kuch nahin kaha isne, Sharman ki koi galti nahin aur Prem jo chaha bol diya. Main yeh nahin seh sakti ab, kal Noori se baat karoon gi, aur us vakil ka number leh loon gi

The next day Shravan finds out from Aman what happened last night

Shravan - kya? oh my god, main Di ke paas jaata hoon

Aman - Shravan suno

Shravan - haan bolo

Aman - erm..kya tum...hum..i mean

Shravan - bolo na Aman

Aman - hum raat ko dinner.....

Shravan (smiles) - of course, pehle Di ko dhekta hoon

Aman - ok

Upstairs, Rach has been avoiding both Prem and Sharman, Shravan comes

Shravan - Di are you ok, Aman ne mujhe bata diya ke kal raat ko kya hua

Rach - hmm

Shravan - Di aap.....

Rach - im going Shravan

Shravan - kahan?

Rach - back to Mumbai, agar tumhe aana hai tho apna saman pack kar lo, aaj ki flight hai

Shravan - aur Prem

Rach - i dont care

Shravan (smiles) - Di ek baat kahoon

Rach - kya?

Shravan - acha hua ke aapne Prem ko thapad mar diya

Rach - acha tho jaldi karo

Shravan - ok Di (realises he had made plans with Aman) oh no Di main abhi aaya

He finds Aman and tells her hes leaving, she is sad.

Shravan - dont worry jab tum Mumbai aaogi then we will have dinner

Later Rach and Shravan have left for the airport, Aman has informed the Whadwa family that they have left

Sharman - chale gaye?

Kumkum - acha hai lekin shahid yeh karne se Prem ko aur gussah aajeyga

Sumit - haan yeh baat sahi hai hum bhi chalte hai Mumbai, yahan aaye the kis baat ke liye....

Kumkum - fikar maat karo chalo

Prem comes back to the hotel after seeing Lakshya, he goes to his room and finds it empty, he goes to the main desk

Prem - sorry to bother you again but my wife...?

Assistant - Sir she checked out the hotel, her and her brother had booked two flights back to Mumbai, they have gone

Prem - what? Mumbai? oh no (angry) - uski himat kaise hui?

Meanwhile at the airport Rach phones Noori

Noori - hi Rach kaho kya baat hai?

Rach - maine soch liya aur tumhari baat maan li, us vakil kya number do gi?

Noori - erm voh Kavya ke paas hai yeh lo usse baat karo

Kavya (special guest appearance by Eijaz Khan) - hi Rach

Rach - hi jiju....voh vakil

Kavya - haan uska naam Anjali hai....aur uska number.....

Rach - thanks a lot jiju

Kavya - its ok vaise tum Goa mein hoon right?

Rach - haan lekin main aur Shravan flight pakar ne vale hai, Mumbai jaane ke liye

Kavya - arre aisa maat karo, tumhari vakil Goa mein rehti hai

Rach - Goa mein?

Kavya - haan likho uska address

Rach - teek hai jiju, erm Shravan cancel my ticket tum Mumbai jao main kuch dino ke liye yahan rukti hoon

Shravan - Di main aap ke paas rahoon ga

Rach - ok, ok jiju, tell Noori ill speak to her soon

Kavya - ok Rach agar koi kahm hai tho mujhe bata dhe na

Rach - hmm Anjali....

To be continued

Find out what happens next in Part 17

wowyy!! this is gettin even more exciting everytime u write...seriously..nywayz..hahaha...i asked someone out..i thought it was supose to be the other way ruond..but hu cares..it doesnt matter nyway😆so ill guess we'll have to wait nd watch..keep it up 😃 😛