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Special part 5

Place - Whadwa House

Sumit and Kumkum are sitting in their room, Sumit is looking at some work files, and Kumkum is looking at photos of Sharman and Dhruv when they were younger

Kumkum - acha hua ke Rach ne Sharman ki baat sun layi

Sumit (not realli listening) - hmmmm

Kumkum looks at Sumit and sees he is too busy with his work, she gets annoyed

Kumkum - soch rahi thi ke hum sab mumbai se new york move ho jaye

Sumit - hmm you are right

Kumkum - Sumit!!!

Sumit looks up from his work and sees Kumkum is upset

Sumit - kya hua, kya kiya maine?

Kumkum - baat nahin ke tumne kya kiya, baat yeh hai ke tumne kya nahin kiya!

Sumit thinks for a while

Sumit - kya nahin kiya

Kumkum - meri baat nahin suni, jao main ab tumse nahin baat karoon gi (irritated) jab jab dheko kahm par lage rehthe hai

Sumit - Kumkum, arre itna naraz kyun ho, lo maine kahm rak diya, ab muskarao

Kumkum - pehle tum office ka kahm ghar kyun leh aate ho? office ka kahm office mein rehne do

Sumit gets up and goes to Kumkum

Sumit - baap re, acha chalo mujhe maaf kardo (holds his ears)

Kumkum (laughs) - ok baba maaf karti hoon, bilkul pagal ho tum

Sumit - haan hoon (hugs Kumkum)

Dhruv and Siya have arrived from their honeymoon and see Sumit and Kumkum romancing

Dhruv - ahem

Kumkum - Dhruv! Siya, aao kaisa raha tumhara trip

Sumit - hey gimme a hug Dhruv

Siya - trip was very nice mama

Sumit and Dhruv go out, Siya sits next to Kumkum and looks at the photos with her

Siya - mama yeh kaun hai?

Kumkum - yeh Dhruv hai (laughs)

Siya - oh my god kitna cute lagta hai, arre let me guess yeh Sharman hai na

Kumkum - haan vohi hai

Siya - wow mama, aap aur papa bilkul nahin badale

Kumkum laughs

Siya - mama ek baat poochoon

Kumkum - haan poocho

Siya - aap aur papa kaise mile? i mean aap ke bade bete ki shaadi ho gayi, aur dosre ki hone vali hai, aur aap aur papa ab bhi romance karte hai, kitna pyar hai aap dono mein

Kumkum (smiles) - haan bohat pyar hai, acha batati hoon ke hum kaise mile

As Kumkum begins to tell Siya about how Sumit and her were like younger, Dhruv, Sharman and Sumit join them and listen to the story. As she is talking, a young handsome boy is shown running away from his friends


Guy 1 (laughs) - i knew you would fall for it, you cant catch me

Guy 2 - dhekloon ga tujhe, bas tujhe pakar loon main

The second guy grabs the first guy and trips him on the floor, the guy gets up and is still laughing, when he turns around we see its none other than a very young Sumit

Sumit (laughs) - yaar Rahul tumhari shakal dhekne layak thi

Sumit's friend Rahul (special guest appearance by Ajay Gehi) hits him

Rahul - tumhe main nahin chordoon ga

Sumit - ok ok ok, im sorry, chalo we have to go shopping and buy some clothes for the party

Sumit and Rahul leave, meanwhile in the Mumbai shopping mall, a young beautiful girl is seen shopping with her friends

Girl 1 - this looks beautiful na

Girl 2 - yea it does

While they are shopping, Sumit and Rahul reach the shopping mall, they are walking around when they bump into the two girls

Rahul - oh so sorry ladies

Girl 1 - its ok

Girl 2 - mere saare bags ghir gaye

Sumit feels bad, and decides to help her pick them up

Sumit - we're really sorry

Gil 2 - its ok

Girl 2 looks up and sees Sumit, we see that she is none other than Kumkum, Sumit and Kumkum keep staring at each other

Rahul - Sumit......arre kya hogaya tujhe

Tina (Kumkums friend) - Kumkum......oh m god

Sumit and Kumkum finally snap out of everything, and are embarrased, Kumkum gets her bags and signals Tina to go, Sumit is by Rahul, Rahul keeps laughing

Sumit - chup kar, stupid

Kumkum walks away, Sumit still looks at her, him and Rahul then start to walk away, slowly Kumkum turns around and looks at Sumit she then turns back, then Sumit turns around and looks at Kumkum and turns back around, finally they both turn around and look at each other at the same time, they smile and walk away

Tina - kyun Kumkum usse pasand karti ho

Kumkum - nahin, main tho usse janti bhi nahin

Tina (singing) - ek ladke ko dheka tho aisa laga.....(laughs)

Kumkum - oh shut up Tina!

Kumkum walks away

Tina - Kumkum rokooo

The story then shows Sumit driving a car, he looks out the window and thinks about Kumkum, the song Pehla Nasha comes on the radio

Pehla nasha pehla khumar
Naya pyar hai naya intezar

Kar loon main kya apna haal
Aye dil-e-bekaraar
Mere dil-e-bekaraar
Tu hi bata

Sumit smiles, he then sees a car that has broken down, he decides to pull over and offer some help

Sumit - excuse me, can i help you

The person standing by the car turns around, Sumit sees its Kumkum, he smiles instantly

Sumit - arre tum!!!!

Kumkum - tum, yahan?

Sumit - maine tumhari gaadi dheki aur socha kuch madat karloon

Kumkum - thanx

Sumit - vaise im Sumit

Kumkum - Kumkum, nice to meet you

Sumit - you too, chalo main mechanic ko bulata hoon, tum mere saath chalo, ill drop you off

Kumkum hesitates but finally agrees

Kumkum - thanx again

Back in reality

Kumkum - bas Siya, bakhi main tumhe fhir kabhi bataoon gi

Siya - oh ok mama

wow achchi begining ki hai..............
i love it........... 😊 😊
marvellous............ 👏

very good rach.
i really loved it 😃

wahhhhhhhhh yaar so sweet i luv it and i am glad ur fanfic is up and runnin again

Luvs Ya

Luv Noori

awwww so sweeet preethi and lol noori me 2!!!!!

Hey guys back for another dosage!!! Lol first of all i wanna thank my loyal readers for coping with the amount of tym i tke 2 update 😛

Previously Shravan had come from Chandighar to live with his sister Rach in Mumbai, Sharman and Shravan get off to a bad start, Sharman and Rach make up now to continue

Part 11

Place - Whadwa House

Shravan has just seen his sister in Sharman's arms and has heard them telling each other how they feel, he is confused

Shravan - Di.....aap Sharman ke saath

Rach - Shravan voh, main.....

Shravan - bas Di, aap janti hai ki aap ki shaadi hone vali hai aur aap kisi aur ki bahon mein?

Rach - Shravan main Sharman ko.....

Shravan - no Di, mujhe kuch nahin sun na

Shravan walks out the room and makes his way to the car, Rach goes after him

Rach - Shravan rokooo

Sharman - Rach usse jaane do, voh gusseh mein hai

Rach - nahin, im going too

Shravan gets into the car, Rach also get in, she tries talking to him but he doesnt listen and makes his way back to Prem's house

Sharman - oh god ab kya hoga?

Kumkum - dont worry Sharman, sab kuch teek hoga

Sumit - haan Sharman, chalo, voh bhai behen apne aap mein sort out karlo ge

Shravan and Rach reach home, Shravan is very angry, he didnt say a word in the car, he goes to his room

Rach - Shravan meri baat suno

Shravan - kya sunoon Di? aap ki aur Sharman ki pyar ki kahani?

Rach - Shravan please

Shravan - Di, Prem ka kya hoga

Rach - main Prem se pyar nahin karti, main Sharman se....

Shravan - mat lo uska naam! bas Di maine faisala kar liya

Rach - kaun sa faisala

Shravan - main yahan sirf ek kahm ke liya aaya tha, aap ki aur Prem ki shaadi karvane........(angrily) aur voh main karva kar rahoon ga

Rach - lekin Shravan.....papa kabhi nahin mano ge

Shravan - agar maine dad se baat ki tho voh maan jao ge, aur aap kuch nahin kar sakti

Before Rach knows Shravan phones his dad and tells him to start getting ready for the wedding, Rach is very upset. Later she tells Sharman everything

Sharman - oh no, ab?

Rach - ab kya? jab papa aayenge tab tho baat pakhi hogi

Sharman - nahin Rach tum Prem se shaadi nahin kar sakti

Rach - ab main aur kya kar sakti

Shravan sees Rach on the phone with Sharman, he comes in and takes the phone off her and disconnects it

Rach - Shravan!

Shravan - nahin Di aap us Sharman se baat nahin karo ge

Rach - Shravan tum teek nahin kar rahe

Shravan - jo hona hai, dad aake karlo ge

For the next few days Shravan is sorting out all the wedding arrangements, he has made sure that Rach does not meet Sharman, Prem is very happy things are going his way without him doing anything

Prem - aahh Mohini im so happy

Mohini - janti hoon, tumhari shaadi jo ho rahi hai, im invited na?

Prem - of course!

At the Whadwa House, Aman is trying to talk Sharman into stopping the wedding

Sharman - main kuch nahin kar sakta

Aman - agar aisa kahte raho ge tho haan tum kuch nahin kar pao ge, Rach ki shaadi ho jayegi aur tum dhekte reh jaoge

Sharman - Aman please....just leave me alone

While they are talking Shravan arrives and hands the wedding card and invites the Whadwa family to the wedding, Aman is furious

Aman - Shravan tum jante ho ke tum apni behen ki zindagi kharab karne vale ho

Shravan - meri behen hai, tumhe kya takleef

Aman - takleef mujhe nahin, mere bhai ko hai, tum Prem ko nahin jante voh...

Shravan - main Prem ke baare mein kuch nahin sun na chahtha, shaadi mein zuroor aana

The next day Rach's dad Anurag (special guest appearance by Cezzane Khan)and Shravan's mom Komolika (special guest appearance by Urvashi) arrive

Shravan - mom, dad nice to see you

Komolika - nice ke baache, tumne bataya kyun nahin ke tum yahan aane vale ho

Shravan - bas aise hi

Anurag - Rach kahan hai

Shravan - oopar

Komolika and Anurag go upstairs to see Rach, she is crying but she wipes her tears so they dont notice

Rach - mama, papa

She hugs Anurag then hugs Komolika

Komolika - tho ab tum shaadi ke liye raazi ho gayi, jab maine ek acha sa ladka dhoonda tab kyun nahin kiya haan?

Anurag - Komolika, bas karo, ab tho iski shaadi hone vali hai na, ashirwad dhene ke bijayie tum daat rahi ho

Rach - its ok papa

Rach takes ashirwad from both of them

Anurag - im so happy, ke tum ab shaadi kar rahi ho, kitni badi ho gayi tum

Rach - papa aap se baat.....

Anurag - baatein hoti reh jao gi, Prem se milta hoon

Rach - lekin papa......

Anurag leaves

Komolika - kya baat hai

Rach (crying) - mama

Komolika - hey ro kyun rahi ho, baite yahan

Rach and Komolika sit down, Komolika puts her arm around Rach

Komolika - janti hoon, ke main tmhari sakhi ma nahin hai lekin tum mujhse apni dil ki baat share kar sakti ho

Rach - mama aap kya keh rahe hai, maine aap ko apni sothali ma kabhi nahin mana, maine hamesha aap ko sakhi ma jaisa pyar diya

Komolika - janti hoon, tho batao apni mama ko, kya baat hai

Rach - mama mujhe yeh shaadi nahin karni, main......

She tells everything to her mom

Komolika - oh no, dont worry main tumhara papa se baat karti hoon, bas tum ro mat

Komolika tries talking to Anurag all evening but either keeps getting interuppted or he is too busy. She is very tensed

A few days later, it is Rach's wedding day, everyone is happy except Rach and Komolika, who still keeps trying to talk to Anurag. Rach's friends have got her dressed, Komolika sees her

Komolika - dheko main ab bhi tumhare papa se baat karni ki koshish karti hoon, dont worry

Rach - mama jaldi please....

The Whadwa family arrive, much to Sharman's disappointment

Sharman - mama hum yahan kyun aaye

Kumkum - humhe invitation mile hai, ab hum na nahin kar sakte, ache nahin lagta, aur Rach ne kaha tha ke uski ma, uske papa se baat karo gi, shayid shaadi ho na

Sharman - agar ho gayi tho?

Kumkum - fikar mat karo

Komolika is anxiously running around trying to talk to Anurag but has no luck, finally it is time for the phere, she has to bring Rach out and has no choice but to go ahead with the wedding

Komolika - Im sorry beta, tumne mujh par kitna viswas kiya aur main kuch kar na payi

Rach - nahin mama aap ki galti nahin hai, jo meri kismet mein likha hai voh hoga

As Rach makes her way to the mandap, she sees Sharman and is very upset, Sharman sees the wedding is happening and is heart broken

Sharman - ma main nahin dhek sakta

Shravan - hey kahan ja rahe ho, rokoo, abhi tho shaadi shuru hone vali hai (smiles)

The wedding takes place, as the phere happen, Rach remembers Sharman and Sharman remembers her. As he is remembering her the song Aadat from Kalyug is playing


Judaa hoke bhi tu mujh mein kahin bakhi hai
palkhon mein banke aasoon tu chali aati hai
judaa hoke bhi

Vaise zinda hoon ey zindagi bin tere main
dard hi dard bakhi raha hai seene mein
saas lehna baar hi yahan jeena nahin hai
ab tho aadat si hai mujhko aise jeene mein

Judaa hoke bhi tu mujh mein kahin bakhi hai
palkhon mein banke aasoon tu chali aati hai

Saath mere hai tu har pal shabh ke andhere mein
paas mere hai tu har dum ujale saveeree
dil se dhadkham bula dena aasan nahin hai
ab tho aadat si hai mujhko aise jeene mein

Judaa hoke bhi tu mujh mein kahin bakhi hai
palkhon mein banke aasoon tu chali aati hai

ab tho aadat si hai mujhko aise jeene mein
Yeh jo yaadein hai, yeh jo yaadein hai
sabhi katein hai, sabhi katein hai
katado inhe, katado inhe

ab tho aadat si hai mujhko


The wedding is over, the guests have left and Rach is in her room

Rach - yeh kya hogaya hai? sab itna galat kyun? mujhe yahan nahin, Whadwa House mein hona chayida, jab Prem aayega, tab kya hoga? soch kar dar lagta hai

Elsewhere Prem is drinking and basking in his victory, he begins talking to himself

Prem (laughs) - dheka Mr Sharman Whadwa.....main jeet gaya, bas main jeet gaya, Rach meri hai ab tumhari kabhi nahin ho sakte aur ye sab kisne karvaya? Rach ke stupid se bhai Shravan ne, kitna bhola hai, janta nahin ke ab uski behen ki zindagi nark mein badal jayegi (laughs again) oh Shravan thank you so much, ab Mr Whadwa tum dhekte raho ke main tumhari Rach no no i mean meri Rach ko ab zindagi bar kaise tang karta hoon jo voh mujhe tumhare liye chordke jaane vali thi...kaha tha bohat pashtaoge tum dono ab nah tum kush reh paoge nah voh (laughs maniacily)

Prem staggers out the room towards the kitchen, little does he know Shravan has heard everything he has said, he so upset and angry at himself for what he has done, he goes to his sister's room, he sees she is sitting in the chair, Rach thinks its Prem but relaxes when she sees its Shravan. Shravan goes towards and falls on his knees to her feet in front of her

Rach - Shravan kya kar rahe ho, othoo vahan se

Rach sees he is crying

Rach - hey Shravan kya hua?

Shravan - im sorry Di

Rach - kya? kya hua??

Shravan - mujhse bohat badi galti hogayi, mujhe aap ki baat maan ni chaiydi thi lekin maine?

Rach - saaf saaf batao kya hua

Shravan - mujhe Prem ke baare mein sab kuch pata lag gaya, im sorry Di, mujhe maaf kardo, maine aap ki zindagi nark mein badal di

Rach - nahin Shravan ye tumhari....

Shravan gets Rach's hands and tries to make her hit him

Shravan - maro mujhe Di, main issi ke layak hoon

Rach - bas karo Shravan, yahan aao

Shravan gets up, Rach and him sit on the bed

Rach - yeh tumhari galti nahin, bas jo hona tha voh hogaya

Shravan - lekin main sab kuch jaante hue?

Rach - dheko ab is baat ko chordo ab kuch nahin kar sakte

Shravan - Di aap mere saath chalo, agar voh Prem ne aap ko

Rach - nahin Shravan tum jao, main apne aap ko samal loon gi tum jao

Shravan - lekin Di

Rach - lekin vekin kuch nahin tum jao

Shravan - im sorry Di

Rach - bas....ab jao

Shravan goes, Rach sits on the bed, before she knows it Prem comes, he is very drunk, Rach gets scared

Prem - hello my beautiful wife

Prem almost falls but saves himself, he goes towards Rach, she is scared and closes her eyes but lucky for her Prem falls on the bed and is fast asleep, Rach gets up and sits on the chair and falls asleep

To Be Continued....

Ab kya hoga??? Is this the start of a life full of turmoil for Rach? what will happen now that Shravan knows the truth? what will happen to Sharman? Find out in Part 12!!!!

hey rach! ma exams r ova:P:D nd the furst thing i did after the exams was ova was....guess....yes!i read ur fanfic! lol...so good soo far..atleast shravan found out bout the real prem! omg hrry nd write the next part cant wait 😛 ttyl byeeee 😊

with lotz of luv
Aman 😉

hey aman thank god your xams are over and u r bk.........
rach...............
yeh kya kiya rach and prem..............
kyunnnnnnnnnnnnnn ab kya hoga. 😭 😭
yaar rach and sharman ko kab mila rahi ho.............???????????????? 😭 😭