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well its been a few days so figured i shudd update now

Previously Siya had asked Kumkum how Sumit and her met, Kumkum began telling the story of how they met. Now to continue

Special Part 6

The family are in Goa, Sharman, Aman, Dhruv and Krish have gone out, Sumit and Kumkum are unpacking in their room

Sumit - vaah Goa kitna acha hai na

Kumkum - haan aur poori family saath aayi hai, bohat maza ayega

There is a knock on their door, its Siya

Kumkum - unpacking hogayi?

Siya - ji mama unpacking hogayi, aap busy tho nahin?

Kumkum - nahin kyun?

Siya - fhir aap story continue karo

Sumit - kaun si story

Siya - aap ki aur mama ki story

Kumkum - acha, bakhi log ko aane do fhir main tumhe bata thi hoon story

Siya - fhir tho bohat dher ho jayegi, aap abhi bata diye please

Kumkum - acha teek hai, baite yahan

Siya and Kumkum sit down, Sumit carries on unpacking. Kumkum carries on the story from where Sumit and Kumkum were in the car

Kumkum - bas mujhe yahin chordo

Sumit - ok, erm....ek baat kahoon

Kumkum - haan kaho

Sumit - mere dost ne ek party rakhi hai, at the Dragons Inn, tum vahan aajao apne doston ke saath

Kumkum - party, mujhe nahin lagta main aa pahoon gi

Sumit - please, mujhe bohat acha lage ga agar tum vahan aa jati tho

Kumkum (blushes) - teek hai main soch loon gi

Kumkum gets out, Sumit keeps looking at her until she goes inside her house.
Later that evening Kumkum is in her room she is thinkin about whether or not she should go to the party

Tina - haan chale jate hai, bohat maza aayega

Kumkum - i dont know, mujhe aaj Ankita se milna tha

Tina - tho kya hua, usse saath bulalo

Kumkum - teek hai main usse pooch thi hoon

on the phone

Ankita - hi Kumkum, how are you

Kumkum - main teek hoon, ek baat kahoon

Ankita - haan kaho

Kumkum - ek party hai, at the Dragons Inn, mujhe kisi ne bulaya hai vahan, tum chalo gi saath?

Ankita - of course, main tumhe vahan milti hoon

Kumkum - ok, 8 baje

Later at the party

Rahul - tu kiski intezaar kar raha hai, chalo masti karte hai, sab log aaye hai, Shilpa, Nidhi, Verni, Kimi, and the rest of the gang, chalo!!!

Sumit - aata hoon, main voh Kumkum ka wait kar raha hoon

Rahul - acha,

Shilpa - yeh Kumkum kaun hai?

Maria - arre Shilpa vahi ladki jise dhekte, Sumit hosh ko beta

Resham - haan Rahul bata raha tha ke voh kafi achi thi

Aditi - humhe bhi mila hai usse

Sumit laughs

Kimi - yeh kya milaye ga, jab voh yahan aaye tab hum sab usse miloon ge

Sumit - hey! koi nahin mile ga usse

Nidhi - kyun?

Sumit - bas abhi nahin ok, voh kya samje gi, mujhse milne aayi hai, aur tum sab uska burah haal kardo ge

Sona - acha acha jaisa tum kaho, chalo girls!

The girls go

Rahul - tumne aisa kyun kaha?

Sumit - arre main usse akele mein milna chahta hoon, tu bhi ja yahan se

After half an hour, Kumkum arrives with Tina, Ankita and her sisters Anum and Mehr, Kumkum sees Sumit, as soon as Sumit sees her he gets happy

Sumit - hi Kumkum, mujhe kushi hui ke tum aayi

Anum - yeh......

Mehr (whispers) - yeh vohi ladka hai jisne Kumkum ki madat ki remember, Ankita bata rahi thi, issi ne Kumkum ko bulaya yahan

Anum - oh i see

Ankita - tho tum Sumit ho.....interesting

Kumkum - ab tum log jao yahan se

They leave, Kumkum and Sumit are alone

Sumit - erm kya peeo gi?

Kumkum - ek orange juice please

Sumit gets Kumkum her drink, they are both silent while with each other, Sumit steals looks at Kumkum

Sumit (thinks) - Kumkum tum kitni khoobsurat lag rahi ho

Kumkum - kuch kaha tumne?

Sumit - nahin tho, kyun kuch suno tumne

Kumkum - nahin.....

Sumits friends are spying on Kumkum and him, Nidhi whispers something in Shilpa's ear, Shilpa has a cheeky grin on her face

Shilpa - wow great idea Nidhi, tum log yahin rukho

Kumkum and Sumit start talking and laughing with each other

Kumkum (thinks) - mujhe Sumit acha lag tha hai, handsome hai, batein bhi ache karta hai, aur kitni pyari muskan hai

Sumit - kuch kaha?

Kumkum - nahin....voh Sumit main soch rahi thi....

Shilpa - oh Sumit darling!

Sumit is confused

Sumit (thinks) - yeh kaun aagaya mujhe darling kehte hue

He turns around and sees Shilpa, he looks at Kumkum who looks a bit upset

Shilpa - tumne mujhe vahan akele kyun chordo....darling

Kumkum - darling....?

Shilpa (links arms with Sumit) - haan Sumit mera darling hai...aur main iski......sweetie

Kumkum (angry) - sweetie.....

Sumit (through gritted teeth) - Shilpa, kya kar rahi ho tum?

Kumkum - tumne mujhe yahan isliye bulaya, tumhari girlfriend se milane?

Sumit - nahin yeh meri girlriend nahin?

Kumkum - oh yeh , girlfriend nahin....tumhari sweetie!

Sumit - nahin, tum galat samaj rahi ho

Kumkum - bas, main ja rahi hoon

Kumkum leaves, Sumit looks angrily at Shilpa

Shilpa - kya hua...darling

Shilpa laughs, the other guys come and start laughing as well

Sumit - tum na!!! tumse main baat mein nipat loon ga, Kumkum....

Sumit goes outside and sees Kumkum walking away

Sumit - Kumkum rokoooo, meri baat suno

Sumit grabs Kumkum by the arm and turns her around

Kumkum - kya baat sunoon

Sumit - Shilpa...sirf meri dost hai

Kumkum - tum tho aisa hi kaho ge

Sumit makes Kumkum look him in the eyes

Sumit - voh.....sirf...meri...dost..hai

Kumkum - tho usne aisa kyun kiya

Sumit - yeh dhek ne ke liye ke tum naraz hoti ke nahin, aur tum naraz hui, iska matlab.....

Kumkum - kya matlab

Sumit - ke tum mujhe pasand karti ho.....aur main tumhe pasand karta hoon

Kumkum smiles, it starts to rain

Kumkum - wow i love the rain

Sumit - me too

Sumit and Kumkum hug, after a while they start dancing in the rain, the song Barsaat Ke Din Aaye from Barsaat plays in the background

barsaat ke din aaye mulaqat ke din aaye
betaabiyon ke sharaare beetche hain
yeh saawan ki rimjhim jhadi hain
kadam bekhudi mein behakne lage hain
yeh madhoshiyon ki ghadi hain
barsaat ke din aaye. mulaqat ke din aaye
hum soch mein the jinke us raat ke din aaye
barsaat ke din aaye barsaat ke din aaye
jalte rahe hum khayalo ke lau se, sahi humne barso judaai
cham cham barasti suhani ghata ne, ajab si agan hain lagai
barsaat ke din aaye. mulaqat ke din aaye
hum soch mein the jinke, us raat ke din aaye
barsaat ke din aaye, barsaat ke din aaye

na tum hosh mein ho na hum hosh mein hain
behak jaaye na tum sambhalo hamein
gujarish yahi hain tamannao ki
sanam baajuo mein tha lo humein
jasbaat ke din aaye mulaqat ke din aaye
hum soch mein the jinke us raat ke din aaye
barsaat ke din aaye barsaat ke din aaye

chorus:
deewani deewani jawani mastani
garm saanson emin toofan hain
deewana deewana sama hain deewana
jara si chahat bhi beimaan hain

dhua sa uthe hain kahi jism se
kaho baadlo se baraste rahe
saha jaaye na yeh judaai ka gum
bhala kab talak hum taraste rahey
baraat ke din aaye mulaqat ke din aaye
hum soch mein the jinke us raat ke din aaye
barsaat ke din aaye barsaat ke din aaye
barsaat ke din aaye

hey hey ......

*Present*

Kumkum - bas, dheko Sharman aur bakhi ke log aaye ke nahin

Siya - wow mama that was so sweet, mujhe aur batao

Sumit - fhir kabhi

To be continued
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Posted: 19 years ago
wow!! thats sooo sweet 😛 i wish somethin liek this happens to me in real life 😆😆 mai bhi na 😆
keep pu da good work..cant wait till next part 😛
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Posted: 19 years ago
oh wao rachu jee.....so sweet

main aa gayi fir se......ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh

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Posted: 19 years ago
😆 😆 😆 acha hua ke tumhe pasand aaya.....vaise if i forgot neone then plzzzzz dnt b gussah i had so many ppl 2 keep track of...bhool gayi
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Posted: 19 years ago
rach it really nice 😆 .
just i am imagining the scene just looks superb 😛 .
cotinue.
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Posted: 19 years ago
hey rachu u r fabulous.....par mere dialogues hi nahi the...............
just kidding...............the story....flash back everything is just superb. 👏
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Posted: 19 years ago
rach main bataon ki woh woman kaun hogi jo sharman se mili hai...........anjali prem's 1st wife.......
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Posted: 19 years ago
good wrk rach, it's really gr8, keep it goin. 😆
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Posted: 19 years ago
thanx guys.....Verni.....next part mein pata lag jayega
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Posted: 19 years ago
Aaaj mein bohat kush hoon...Italy won semi finals!!! isliye maine socha ke kyun na update jaldi karloon

Previously Rach's friend Noori suggests a divorce, Rach disagrees, Shravan goes to WH to apologise to everyone, Mohini wants Prem's help to get Sharman, the Whadwa family go to Goa now to continue

Part 13

Place - Goa, Ice Cream Parlour

Sharman has just met a woman and her son Lakshya, he takes them to have some ice cream, he had just asked the woman her name

woman - ji mera naam........Anjali(played by Rakshanda Khan) hai

Sharman - nice name Anjali

They have ice cream

Anjali - chalo Lakshya hum ghar chalte hai

Sharman - aao main aap ko ghar chorta hoon

Anjali - iski koi zuroorat nahin

Sharman = please i insist

Anjali - erm ok then aao

While Sharman is taking Anjali and Lakshya home, in Mumbai, Rach is trying to get in contact with Aman

Rach - tum phone kyun nahin utathi

She tries the Whadwa House

Rach - hello, kaun bol raha hai

Methi Chacha - ji Methi Chacha

Rach - oh, Methi Chacha, main Rach, voh Aman?

Methi Chacha - sorry beta lekin yahan koi nahin hai, sab Goa gaye hue hai

Rach - Goa...ok thank you

Prem - kisko phone kar rahi ho?

Rach - voh...ek dost ko

Prem - oh i see

Prem sits by Rach and puts his arm around her

Prem - janti ho, ke humhari shaadi ko ab do hafte ho chuke

Rach - i know

Prem - tho mera kayal hai....ke humhe honeymoon ke liye chale jana hai

Rach (worries) - honeymoon lekin kyun, i mean yahan hum saath hai.....honeymoon kyun

Prem - tum tho aisa khe rahi ho jaise tum jana nahin chahti

Rach - nahin aisi baat nahin

Prem - tho pakha...hum honeymoon ke liye jaynge...voh bhi Goa

Rach - Goa....nahin, aur kahin chalte hai (thinks) agar hum Goa gaye, aur Prem ne Sharman ko dhek liya tab tho musibat aajayegi

Prem - nahin hum Goa hi jayenge

Prem leaves, Rach is confused, meanwhile Sharman, Anjali and Lakshya have arrived to Anjali's house

Anjali - aao, kya kahenge

Sharman - ji kuch nahin

Lakshya - mama main khelne ja raha hoon

Anjali - ok beta

Anjali takes Sharman in to the living room, on the shelf there is a photo of Anjali and Prem in their wedding clothes, Sharman looks around him

Sharman - khafi acha ghar hai aapka

Anjali - thanks, baito

Anjali's phone rings

Anjali - hello, haan aap, nahin bas koi aaya hai, aap ah rahe hai? thats great news, teek hai, aapko tab milti hoon

Sharman - kaun tha?

Anjali (smiling) - mere pati

Sharman sits down, while looking around, he turns his face towards the shelf, where the photo is, but as luck would have it, just as he is about to see it, Anjali stands in front of the shelf

Sharman - aap ki pati ki koi tasveer nahin dis rahi hi

Anjali - tasveer ki koi zuroorat nahin

Sharmans phone rings

Sharman - hello mama.....teek hai main aata hoon (to Anjali) sorry i have to go

Anjali - its ok, ab tho aap ko ghar ka pata hai tho jab tak aap Goa mein hai, aate jaate rahi ka

Sharman - of course

Just as Sharman gets up, Anjali moves away from the shelf, the photo is in clear range of Sharman but he doesn't see it

Sharman - ok bye

Sharman leaves, Anjali is excited that Prem is coming home, she decides to do lots or preperations, meanwhile in Mumbai...

Prem - maine tickets ka intezam kar liya, tum bas packing karlo

Rach - erm ok then

Prem gets a text message

Prem - mujhe kahin jana hai, mere aate packing katam honi chahiye ok?

Rach - ok baba

Prem leaves, he goes to see Mohini

Prem - kaho, kyun balaya yahan?

Mohini - main Sharman ke ghar gayi thi,

Prem - tho?

Mohini - tho vahan koi nahin hai, sab Goa gaye hai

Prem - Goa....?

Mohini - bole ho? haan Goa

Prem (thinks) - isliye Rach Goa nahin jana chahti thi, vahan Sharman hai, aur voh usse milna nahin chahti, but i have to go Goa...vahan Anjali.....ill sort something out

Mohini - tho kya karein?

Prem - main sur Rach honeymoon ke liye Goa ja rahe hai, tum bhi vahan aao, kuch na kuch chakar chala tha hoon main, ok?

Mohini - ok

Prem's House

Shravan - Goa???

Rach - haan....honeymoon ke liye

Shravan - tho main bhi saath chalta hoon

Rach - nahin tum yahan raho ge, please

Shravan - Di main aap ke saath hi aaonga

Prem - agar aana chahta hai, tho aane do

Rach - lekin...

Prem - agar Shravan saath hai tho mazaa aur aayega

Rach - teek hai

A few days later they arrive in Goa, coincidently they are staying at the same hotel as the Whadwas, Prem and Rach go to their room, Shravan decides to look around, while he is looking he bumps into Aman

Aman - tum, yahan?

Shravan - hi Aman, voh, Di aur Prem honeymoon ke liye aaye the, main unne akela nahin chorna chahta isliye main saath aagaya

Aman - oh i see

Shravan - tum ab bhi naraz ho?

Aman - aur umeed kya kar sakthe ho tum, tumne kya kuch nahin bigada

Shravan - Aman mera yakeen mano, agar mujhe Prem ke baare mein pehle pata hota tab main Di ki shaadi usse kabhi nahin hone dheta

Aman - whatever

Aman walks past Shravan, but he grabs her arm

Aman - kya kar rahe ho?

Shravan - tumhe mujhpar yakeen karna parega Aman, main nahin chahta ke tum mere saath itna naraz ho

Aman - kyun?

Shravan - because i like you Aman

Aman - kya? i dont care let me go

He lets her go, she walks away, Shravan keeps looking at her

To be continued

What will happen in Goa?? find out in Part 14

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