hussain juhi ka ishq-fan fiction - Page 47

shazia u have written very well 😛 .
everbody have done a great job 😊 .
now i will write
huju sees hubr so they go from there.now it was hubr was the dener and everybody hu takes ju someplace where no body can watch them.
ju:ithni dhoor laana ki kya zroorath thi. what will anybody think.
hu:let them think i don't care 😊
hu tries to be naugty by coming close to ju
ju:what are u doing hu?
hu:just loving my wife 😉
ju:but not now.
hu:ju please and was about to kiss ju his mobile is ringing it his bro.
he lifts hub:hu where are you both.
hu:i am hiding i dont know about ju.
hub:i know u are lieing both of u come out then his dissc the phone.
hu:bh app bhi na ju laughing at all this.
hu:husso husso but i will kiss u
ju:hu thum bhi na so she gave hm the kiss.
hu tells ju to go first then he will come after 5 min so that nobedy will dout them
so ju goes then hu follows.
after hide-seeck they had lunch.
ju and bhabhi was sitting togther hu came near them and sat he was pressing ju hand by mistake he pressae his bha hand his bha hit softely
all where laughing at this 😆 .
later they planned to play cricket.

now anybody continue 😊
after a longtime i am writing it might not be romantic but please forgive me 😭 .now somebody write

Originally posted by: Shazia_haya

Well Anku...seriously.....was that a joke or you really meant it?

Ok everyone including Anku can you all rate me out of 10!! plz!! I hope no one minds doing that! At least can you rate my writing out of 10 till someone post the next scene!! I really wanna noe it how much you like it.....plz.....no matter you write or don't write rate me out of 10 and honestly....if you rate 0/10 I won't mind if that's what you think honestly....plz I request all of you to rate me!!Thz a dozen time more...no more than that-lolz!!

shaziya u wrote really well....just luvd it yaar

and abt rating i really dun noe...i can say abt 9 on 10😳

preeti it ws really sweet yaar.....continue writing every1

greatt story guyzz keep on goin' 😊 😊

Thx Anku di!! And preeti it was awesome!!

Here's a to everyone who participated in this fanfic till now!

Originally posted by: Shazia_haya

Thx Anku di!! And preeti it was awesome!!

Here's a to everyone who participated in this fanfic till now!

awww shaziya so sweet...now plzz write na😳

and ths s soooooo sweet...hey dearoo whts ur age

Me!! Okay I'm not telling you directly-my age is:

[(1+5+1)3]-[(12/6)(1.5*2)]=

That's what I'm gonna be on the 24th of SEPTEMBER 2006!!

I'm not an expert in Maths yet so I couldn't make a better equation than that....now solve it then you'd get the answer..............it's easy though!!

I'm writing again just because Anku di said so.......and I want readers to grade me out of 10....I won't mind if someone says 0/10 also but honestly!!

Ok so now they are playing cricket na.....

They all are playing cricket......and having lots of fun.......more fun then playing ANTAKSHRI and HIDE n' SEEK!!

Juhi and Bhabhi stopped playing.....they are tired now.....the rest are still playing........now they aren't following the rules.......the men just made up their own rules and Hussain's mom is still playing with the three men. juhi and Bhabhi are packing the picnic stuff and getting ready to leave after they finish cricket.

Juhi: Bhabhi, app or _________(the name of Hussain's brother) bhaiya ek du-j se bahut pyaar karte hai na.
Bhabhi: Haan bahut.
Juhi: Lekin app dono ne kabhi....I mean mujhe bolna nahi araha lekin mein kehna na charahi hoon ke app dono ne kabhi dekhaya nahi itna......I'm sorry bhabhi lekin mujhe kehna nahi araha...
Bhabhi: Juhi mein samajh gaye hoon. Haan yeh sach hai ke hum dono ne pyaar itna dekhaya nahi hai duniya ko....(laughs) jistara tum or Hussain dekha te hoon...(Juhi is blushing for this particular moment)..tum dono chahe kitna bhi chupalo hum saab ko pata hai or tum dono is ghar ke abhi tak to saab se chote hi ho na. Lekin sach mein in-ke(indicating her husband) or mere beech mein shuru sehi bahut pyaar hai, ek du-j mein bahut wish waas hai. Agar hum dono mein se kisi ko chot lag bhi ja-ye or hum dono paas mein bhi na ho to bhi pata lag jata hai ke dosre ko chot ponchi hai.
Juhi: Wa-ke-hi bhabhi app ke or _________(Hussain's brother's name) bhaiya mein bahut pyaar hai.....ek sacha pyaar, ek aisa bandhan jisko kabhi bhi kuch nahi ho sakta, ek aisi dorr jo kabhi bhi na toot sake.
Bhabhi: lekin tumhare or Hussain mein bhi to aisi dorr hai, aisa rishta hai.
Juhi: Haan bhabhi lekin app or ________(name of Hussain's brother) bhaiya mein jo rishta hai woh alag sa hai.
Bhabhi: Juhi....woh tumhe aisa is liye lagta hai kyun ke mere or in-ki(indicating her husband) shaadi bahut der pehle hoi thi, tumhari or hussain ki shaadi se bhi do teen saal pehle. or is waqt mein hum dono itne karib agay ki hum ek hai......hum do kahi se bhi nahi hai. Mein arrange marriage ko zaada mann ti thi. kyun ke jo Shaadi ke baad jo pyaar ek shohar(husband-pati) or ek biwi ek beech baar tha hai woh bahut gehra hota hai......us mein bahut feelings bhi hoti hai or woh pyaar thora alag sa hota hai kyun ke woh pyaar shaadi ke baad hota hai. Shaadi se pehle jo pehla pyaar hota hai aghar use shaadi ho ja-ye to us mein bhi ek gehra rishta baan ta hai.
Juhi: Bhabhi sach mein ap dono mein to bahut pyaar hai. Lekin phir bhi ap dono ...
Bhabhi: haan hum isi liye nahi itna dekha te kyun ke hum dono to ba-re hai na. in-ko (indicating her husband) to office mein bahut kaam hota tha lekin ab thora kaam ho gaya hai kyun ke ab Hussain bhi office ke ba-re pehle se zaada jaan ta hai or mann se kaam karta hai. or mujhe ghar ko bhi samal na parta tha.....lekin ab tum bhi ho to phir woh bhi thora haka hogaya hai.
Juhi: Bhabhi apne kaha tha ke apki arrange marriage hoi hai lekin jab mein pehle is ghar mein ai thi tab aisa lagta tha ke ap dono ki love and arrange marriage hoi thi.
Juhi and Bhabhi laugh.
All four of them have finished playing cricket and her coming back.
Juhi and bhabhi start standing up when all of a sudden bhabhi starts feeling dizzy.
Juhi screams: BHABHI!!
All four of them get worried and are running now. Hussain's brother and hussain reach there first. Juhi is holding bhabhi and Hussain brother comes and he's also holding his wife.
Hussain's brother: Kya hua__________(bhabhi's name) ko?
Juhi: Bhaiya who hum baate kar rahe the tab saab kuch thik tha lekin jab hum kare ho rahe the bhabhi ko chakar ane lage.
Hussain's dad and mom reach there.
Hussain's mom: kya hua_______________(bhabhi's name) ko?
Hussain's brother: Maa woh ____________(bhabhi's name) ko chakar arahe hai.
Hussain's dad: Chalo jaldi hospital ki taraf.
Hussain's brother holds bhabhi in his arms and runs towards the car. Hussain's dad and mom also run towards the car with the cricket equipments. Hussain and Juhi also run towards the cars holding the rest of the picnic stuff and Hussain is holding some cricket bats too.

Hussain's dad open the door for Hussain's brother to lie bhabhi down in the back seat.

Hussain's dad: Hussain, tum gari ko chalao or Juhi tum Hussain ke saath front seat mein behto.___________(hussain's brother's name), tum _______________(bhabhi's name) ke saath behto back seat mein. Or mein or ___________(hussain's mom's name) hum Hussain ki gari mein ate hai. Hussain jabi do.

Hussain gives the keys fast.

And they are all set and Hussain drives to the hospital fast and reach there after an hour and his mom and dad arrive there after 30 minutes. But bhabhi is already with the doctors and all are waiting outside now.

Hey I tried my best to make it good……I don't know how is it if I don't know your comments. And by the way my main goal from the beginning was that "Bhabhi is now pregnant" …….so if you don't mind can you continue like this. If you want to change then…………ok up to you if you are happy like that!!

And plz can some one tell me what is bhabhi's name, and her husband's name and mom and dad's name. coz I always have to write something like this _________(bhabhi's name) or Hussain's dad, etc……..you must have noticed that. I only know Hussain and Juhi.Lolz!! So can someone help me. Thx!! And I hope you like the story……itw as like BHABHI and JUHI scene. Coz most of the time they were talking……and those aren't filmy dialoges huh……they are well mine!! I don't know how they sound!! I like love and arrange marriage-love first and the parents from both side agree without any problems. Than arrange marriage-the kind where you get married in an arrange way and then you and your husband start to love each other. I don't mean where the wife rules the husband or the saas annoying the bahu type. then love marriage.

You know the whole thing got deleted-I don't know how but I wrote it again.

I tried my very best!! Hope you like the story and don't forget to rate me out of 10!!

And Anku di, have you solved the equation yet!!
😉

Wow- I checked in the Microsoft word it's like 1121 words long!! I can never right short na? 😉 😆

GR8 👍🏼 WRITE keep it up gr8 work
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how can I keep up....when no one rates me!! Is it worse the n 0 also!! 😭