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Posted: 19 years ago
thanx anku that u wrote..........others also write.....

bha:chalo let's play antakshari.
hu:okay.
ju thinks ki hu itni jaldi kaise maan gaya........
they all sit down.......hu sits next to ju.
hi:jiju yeh antakshari girls vs boys hai...to plz aap zara didi ke paas se hatenge....
hu:no way ...........i mean ........dekho girls 4 hain aur boys 2 ...............to ek ladki to idhar aa sakti hai naa.........to ju will be with me........
mom:no need main tum logon ke saath hoon....ju girls ke side rahegi...kyun ju?
ju:of course girls are better than boys........aur in ladkon ko haraa ke rahenge........
hu looks irrtatingly at juhi..........
plz cont......... 😊
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Posted: 19 years ago
....koi nahi likhta............. 😡 why?????????
plz write........ 😊
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Posted: 19 years ago
ok i m back!!!!!!!!!...sorry yaar main skool ko le kar ttttttttttttttt busy hoon 😡 😡 ......& verni g8 job..nice anku di .....
I will write later ......plzzzzzzzz guys ...cont.........

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Posted: 19 years ago
All are sitting in a circle on the grass. one side-semi circle- are the guys the sitting on the other semi circle side are girls. Only Hu's dad, Hu's mom, Bhabhi, bhabhi's husband and ju and hu will be playing.....I'm not sure if dada and dadi are at the picnic but I won't have them in, if they are there then just say that they are gone for a long walk in the park, if they are not there then just leave it the way the story goes-sorry about the mistakes and plz comment-itz my first time and i'm making a mistake already you know what mistake, this one: i don't know if dadji n dadi is there or not………so...ok then.....I'm sorry for my mistakes and I'm sorry if I did something wrong but thx too..

Their sitting position: &nb sp; &nb sp; Hu's dad &nb sp; &nb sp; Hu's mom


Hussein  ;   ;   ;   ;   ;   ;   ; Juhi


Bhabhi's husband   ;   ; Bhabh i

They are sitting freely there's lot of free place around them so they aren't all sitting like a crowd.

Hu's dad-ok to phir kaun shuru karega?
Bhabhi-Papa, bhare aap hai to phir pehle aap.
Hu's dad to Hu's mom-are tum is bore waqt mein apni pati ki madat nahi karogi.
Hu's mom says freely-nahi….to? Yeh game hai isme koi bhi kisi ka kuch nahi hai na mein apki patni na ap mere pati.
Hu's dad-o ho……itna guroor……HUM AAPKE HAI KAUN acha.

Meanwhile

Hussein signals to Juhi "I love you"
Juhi smiles and pretends to ignore.
When she notice Hussein is still starring at her she signs "What happen?"
Hussein signs "You didn't say anything yet"
Juhi signs confusedly "What?" then she remembers and signs "No!!"

Hussein forgets to signal-Since he's lovingly frustrated-he takes a deep breathe while opening he's mouth wide to say something and at the same time looking at Juhi……it was a big action….it was so obvious that Bhabhi noticed him the looked at Juhi who was looking at Hussein and Bhabhi looked back at Hussein and pretend to clear her throat and Juhi knew they were doomed. She started looking else where. And at that moment Hussein noticed what happened and he said-Bhabhi mein who….meh voh kehne laga tha…..kehne laga….laga tha ke hum ab mera matlab dadu I mean dadaji ……………..haan mein voh kehraha tha kea b dadaji shuru bhi karle na….itna waqt zaya kyun kar rahe hai.

Bhabhi-acha waise agar janab day-yan (concentrate) hum saab ko den-ge to phir pata chale ga na ke ab papa nahi lekan janab ke bhai gaige.
Hussein-Bhabhi who mein….maine suna tha lekn mein test kar raha tha ke apne suna ke nahi.
While Juhi is laughing-smiling quietly and while talking to Bhabhi, Hussein was stealing glances at Juhi.

Bhabhi's husband-acha to ab bas bhi karo…….suno abhi mein gata hoon.



Hey guys now you all continue and tell me my good and bad stuff about the post ok……plz tell me what stuff you liked and what didn't……and tell me if I'm capable of writing another scene or not……or shall I write again or not..
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Posted: 19 years ago
hey I don't know what happened to the stitting postion thing....when I was typing it was alright and now they have these semi colons/ ';' and things like these '&nb sp;'
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Posted: 19 years ago
hey shaziya gr888888888 write up dear....plzzz do continue.....

lovely wrk 👏 👏 👏
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Posted: 19 years ago
thx....i wasn't sure how all of ur views will be......i was scared i didn't want to ruin the story.........thx for ur comment...hey i'm looking for others' comments too plz give some even our silent readers plz give some comments on my post and tell me if u like or not! THX!!
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Posted: 19 years ago
hey shazia........lovely write-up........and abt the people...............in the picnic only hu's bhaiya,bhabhi,mom and ju's di and of course huju have come.........

to anku a new member to our write-up......... 😊 😛

chalo now everone start writing warna main sabse naaaraz ho jaaongi......... 😊
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Posted: 19 years ago

Originally posted by: verni

hey shazia........lovely write-up........and abt the people...............in the picnic only hu's bhaiya,bhabhi,mom and ju's di and of course huju have come.........

to anku a new member to our write-up......... 😊 😛

chalo now everone start writing warna main sabse naaaraz ho jaaongi......... 😊

Hey I wana be sure......in the picnic, only Hussain, Juhi, Hu's brother and bhabhi, Hu's mom and Ju's di has come..............what abt Hu's dad?

If Hu's dad is not there then I made a BIG mistake in the story.......sorry for that.

Edited by Shazia_haya - 19 years ago
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Posted: 19 years ago
....okkkk me
hope all know that hu's bhaiya mom and hu are one side.......and ju , hi, and bhabhi otherrrr

hu's bhaiya sings for bhabhi-tumko dekha to yeh khayaal aaya.........zindagi dhoop tum ghana saaya.......
bhabhi (blushing) and ju looks at hu.
bh:bas ab nahi.
hu:wow bhaiya.....terrific...........ab ladkiyon ki chance....
ju:agar bhaiya ne shuruwat ki hai to agla gaana bhabhi gaayengi.....
bha:nahi ju main nahi.
ju:bhabhi plz hume jeetna hai....
hu:hooooooooooo kyun dar gayi.......
ju:bilkul nahi bhabhi gaayengi.........cmon bhabhi.......
bha:yeh galiyan yeh chaubaara yahaan aana na dobara ...........ab hum to bhaiye pardesi ke tera yahaan koiiiiii nahiiiiiii ke tera yahaan koi nahi.......
they hoot........
ju:ab jawaab do........
hu:mom chaliye yr chance.........
mom:theek hai.....
mom(remembering hu's papa):hum tere pyaar mein saara aalam kno baithe...........bas.
hu:chalo ur turn........

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