jasminerahul thumbnail
Posted: 19 years ago
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IF u want 2 see Su-Kk in a gr8 legend like Devdas,i'l write a fanfic.i promise that the ensd won't b tragic as Devdas.

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damsel111 thumbnail
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Posted: 19 years ago
#2
uhh thats gona b fun
plz rite sumthing.. romantic 😉 😛 hehe as mr MP AB ave no such intentionz 🤢

will wait 😃
jasminerahul thumbnail
Posted: 19 years ago
#3
PART-1.....Sumeet is

returning 2 his native place
after 14yrs.after getting

used 2 the lifestyle in USA,he
did'nt feel like going

backbut its bcoz of his
parents' force,he's going

back.since a few months S
is in bombay.he was packing

everything 2 return.his only
friend Rahul cumes:why r u
in
hurry 2 go back? S
does'nt say anything. he helps


him 2 pack.Rahul gets a letter
from a book. R:whose

letter is this? S takes
it & looks:this is kumkum's

letter . R:who is kumkum?ur
kitten? S gets irritated:its

a
girl. R:o i see.u did'nt
tell that u've a gf in ur

place.so this is the reason
behind ur sudden return 2 ur

land. S:what rubbish!how many
glamorous girls r here

near me.i did'nt feel anykind
of attraction 2wards

them.then how can i feel that
2 this simple village

girl?i'vent seen kumkum since a
long period.she was my

childhood friend.1st & all we
used 2 send letters.later
it
was stopped. R:but i
realy feel that ur

relationship with Kk is not
sumthing that shud be

broken.i think the destiny is
2 bring u both

2gether.that may be the reason
u r 2 b back. S:u r

mad.by the way a bad smell is
coming from u.u've drunk?

R:ya. S:don't u feel shame 2
tell it openly? s:i don't

feel shame 2 tell the truth
like u.u feel shame 2 admit

that u liv Kk. S:u r
talking rubbish after

drinking. R smiles. S
cud'nt sleep thinking

about R's words. he takes &
reads the old letter

sent by Kk:sumeet,did'nt u
tease me when i said that a

flower is cuming the the
plant?tho its late,a yellow

flower has cum.when u cum
here,i'll giv 2 u. Sumeet

thinks:yellow...luv's color.
S was carried away by

nostalgia...the days spent
with kumkum.




zara29 thumbnail
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Posted: 19 years ago
#4
wow thats gr8 jasminerahul 👏 👏
waitng 4 the 2nd part! 😊
pleez dont make the end tragic.. 😳
hersha thumbnail
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Posted: 19 years ago
#5
guyz could u update more videos
jasminerahul thumbnail
Posted: 19 years ago
#6
Part-2....Sumeet remembers how naughty he was & how
sweet kumkum was.Kk was
brilliant in maths,but S
was just the opposite.he
remembers their painful
departure when he went away
from their place.Kk stood
near him when was going.they
both cried a lot.due 2
laziness S stopped
writing letters,but K
continued. S thinks that
mayb bcoz he was not
replying later she also
stopped sending letters. S
thinks:why am i thinking this
much about kk?she was
only a friend.i remember the
little kk clearly.how
does she look like now? he
becomes restles.Immediatly he
goes,paints kk with a
guess. S:wil kk look like
the same? S feels like
seeing kk like
anything.rahul's words r still
in his mind. kk was very
much trilled 2 no that S
is cuming back. she goes 2
the temple:God,sumeet is cuming
back after many
yrs.thanku so much god 4
bringing him back. she takes
vrith 4 sumeet.then dances with
lamps:silsila....S
comes back,gets grand welcome.
S goes 2 kk's
house.Kk's parents did'nt
recognise him. S:don't u
recognise me?i'm sumeet. they
were surprised. kk's
mom:Sumeet!wow! dad:i can't
believe ur change. they
chat. M:sumeet,don't u want 2
see kk? he wants 2 see
her very badly.but he does'nt
say that. M:she was always
enquiring whether u r back. S
becomes happy 2 hear
it. M:kumkum...cum here.see
who has cum. kk cumes.she
was really happy 2 see s.he
cud'nt believe his
eyes.bcoz K was exactly the
same person in his
painting. he thinks:without
seeing kk's present
look,i painted.it was
right.its a gud omen.but kk
looks more beautiful than in
my painting. M:kk,did u
recognise him? K:yes,sumeet.
sumeet-kk look at each
other. he cud'nt sleep
thinking about kk.he was
impressed by her beauty.he
sings dreaming about her:woh
chand jaisi ladki {Devdas}.
damsel111 thumbnail
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Posted: 19 years ago
#7
waw nice story 👏
keep goin
im luvin it 😉
Mc Donaldz 😆 😆 😆
n agree with zara plz v want a happy end 😃
shabzz123 thumbnail
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Posted: 19 years ago
#8
lovely story 😊 i really liked it 👏
jasminerahul thumbnail
Posted: 19 years ago
#9
Part-3....Sumeet-kumkum meet in the temple.they walk
2gether silently.losing
patience S decides 2 talk
1st:how did u recognise me?
K smiles:why did'nt u
cum here all these yrs? S:i
did'nt feel like cuming
here.did'nt want 2 see any1.
K wants 2 ask like
this:u did'nt want 2 see me?
K:now also u r not
interested in this place?
S:slightly interest started
cuming. K smiles. S:why
did;nt u send letters? S:i
did'nt feel like sending. K
becomes sad.she
thinks:how cool sumeet is.not
at all bothered about
anything. S:why did'nt u stop
sending letters? K:i thot
u 4got me.so i did'nt want 2
desturb u. S cud'nt
speak. K:u 4got me? S was
speechless. K:u did'nt
think about me even 4 once?
S:where is time 4 that?
K becomes sad,bcoz she
expected a positive answer
from him. K:but i can't count
how many times i used 2
think about u each day. it
touched sumeet's heart.
S:ok,how is ur studies? K:what
studies?it got stopped
early. S was shocked,bcoz
K was the brightest
student in the school who was
the pet of the teachers.
S:why?u lost interest in ur
studies?shocking.. K:no,i
was 1st.but its really
expensive 2 continue studies.we r
not so rich like u no.
K's eyes filled up with
tears. S smokes. K:u r smoking
b4 god?its a poison.
s throws away the
cigerrette. K smiles.






damsel111 thumbnail
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Posted: 19 years ago
#10
waw great goin 😃
su smokin 😛 ...

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