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damsel111 thumbnail
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Posted: 19 years ago
#51
yeah shilpa the storyz goin well
hehe
keep goin jasminerahul 😊
jasminerahul thumbnail
Posted: 19 years ago
#52
Part-23.....Tho Sumeet was fully drunk,he was conscious.

S:I & kumkum got separated.kk became another man's
wife.that does'nt mean thT kk cheated me.

Kashish:then how did kk become another man's
wife?sumeet,u r too nice.
S:the fault is mine.only
mine.that's a TRAGIC STORY.u DON'T KNOW THAT.
Kashish
kept silent.She goes out.S & Kk look at each other.
Song:hum dil de chuke sanam….kk cries.
she holds his
hands:is it bcoz of me u r drinking ?why r u like
this?plz don't drink anymore.won't u obey me?
S:I
can't kk.no rescue from this.that's my fate.its not
bcoz of u.u shud'nt worry thinking about me.
K:plz don't
drink sumeet.i can't see u getting destroyed due 2
overdrinking.
S:I no that u & others r worried about
me.even kashish whom I scold everyday gets worried.but
I'm helpless.
K:plz cum with me sumeet.I'l giv u gud
treatment.
S:then what about ur husband?how wil he
react?
K:I'm not thinking about it.now in my mind only
this thot is there.
S:I'l cum kk.but not now.but I'l
cum b4 my death.
K:Sumeet!
S:now u go kk.i told u
noi'l cum 2 u.
K:but sumeet…S:don't tell anything.i can't
cum now.
K removes her bead necklace & puts it around
S's neck:this is 2 remind u 2 cum 2 me. K cries a lot
holding his hands.then she goes out.kashish was standing
there.
K:plz look after sumeet well.its my request.
Ka:yes.i respect him a lot.do u no why?bcoz eventho I
luv him a lot,kumkum is his breath.that stong his luv
is.he is even sacrificing his life 4 luv.i don't hav the
rite 2 hinder it.eventho I'm near him,he is seeing &
knowing only u.who can't luv such a nice luver?if I was
in kumkum's place I wud've thrown everything 2 reach
sumeet.i'm jealous of u kk.
K controls her tears .






-Silencia- thumbnail
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Posted: 19 years ago
#53
great going jasmine
i have read the whole story from the beginning
it is just awesome
but please don't give it a tragic end
i want to see kumkum and sumit meet at the end , and i think evrybody else will also agree with me
jasminerahul thumbnail
Posted: 19 years ago
#54
Part-24.....Kashish,sumeet,rahul
dance:chalak{Devdas}.
S faints vomiting blood. Kashish
brings a Dr.
Dr:I'm sorry,sumeet's condition is serious.
K
was upset.she looks after him well.
S:kashish,why r u
doing this?
K:why,u can't tolerate my presense?
S:ur
effort will b waste.that's why I'm upset.i no that I
won't liv long. K:sumeet!I no that u r talking like this
due 2 ur hatred 4 me.i'm bad no. S:I don't think u r
bad.
K was surprised:then?
S:I feel that u r nice.
K:ur hatred 4 me has gone?
S smiles:yes.
K:now what's
ur feelings 2wards me?
S:I feel a liking 2wards u.
K
was very happy.
S:if I did'nt no kumkum,I wud've luved
only u.but kumkum is my everything.so plz don't expect
anything from me kashish.
K cries. S thinks:the hearts
of both kumkum & kashish r paining due 2 me.
S
dreams both kumkum & kashish dancing 2 the song Dolare….

S:kashish,I want 2 go 2 kk.
K:no
sumeet.now it's the time 2 rest.
G:why shud I
rest?whats the use?bcoz my death is near.
K:plz don't
tell like that.
S:but that's the truth.let me go.i
promised her.if I don't keep my word,again I'l b a
cheater 4 her.
K weeps. S gives a letter 2 her:giv
this 2 rahul.
S goes. Rahul cumes 2 kashish's
house.
R:call sumeet.i've brought liqour 4 him.
K:sumeet
is too weak 2 hav even a drop.if he drink again,he'l
die.do u want 2 see his horrible death?
R was
speechless.
K:sumeet went away.
She gives that letter.R
reads it.
K:whats written?
R:that he's going 2 see
kk.he has written that its kk's bead necklace
that's giving him the strength 2 liv.i'm getting tensed
thinking about him.i only destroyed sumeet by giving
poison.
He breaks the glass bottle of liqour & wounds
his hand.
K:r u mad?sumeet wil become sad if he cumes 2 no
that u did this.
K puts medicine on his wound.
S
looks at the bead necklace given by kk.the beads fall
down.s takes all the beads 2gether & puts it in the
pocket.   ;
zara29 thumbnail
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Posted: 19 years ago
#55
gr88 going jasmine 👏
keep it up! 😊
damsel111 thumbnail
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Posted: 19 years ago
#56
👏 gud goin...
really luv readin it 😊
kumkum_001 thumbnail
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Posted: 19 years ago
#57
i just started reading and i couldn't stop soo plz keep goin 😉 goooood job 😃
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Posted: 19 years ago
#58
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you surely deserve these applauses coz u have done a gr8 job jasmine
jasminerahul thumbnail
Posted: 19 years ago
#59
Part-25....Sumeet was really tired.he gets tensed:oh
god,wil I b able 2 reach kumkum?
He reached near
kk's house .he faints. Jatin;s mom cums 2
kk & jatin:1 guy has fallen b4 our house.he's almost
dead I feel.he was drunk. K was shocked.she thinks:wil
he b Sumeet?
K:who is he?whats his name?
M:no idea.

K:had he worn a bead necklace?
M:no.had worn a small
gold chain & a ring.i think he's rich.
K thinks:if he
has'nt worn the bead necklace,then he won't b sumeet.
She
was relieved.
M:but ppl found sum beads from his
pocket.
K was shattered.tears cum from her eyes:that's
given by me.he's sumeet.
Jatin was shocked.
1 servant
cums:that person is not dead.we made sure.he is
breathing.
K was relieved:let me go & see him.
M:why
?no need.
K:Jatin,plz let me go.sumeet is my life.
Mom was shocked. Mom becomes angry:no u can't go 2 see
ur lover.
K:plz mummiji..
M:u r married.but still u want
2 b with ur lover?
K:plz…its 4 me sumeet traveled such a
long distance eventho he's sick.
M:no u can't go.
K
was determined:no,I've 2 go.
K runs.
M:jatin,catch
ur wife.she is mad.
J did'nt move.
M:what kind of
husband u r?
mom tells the servant:catch
kk.don't allow her 2 go. J:no,don't b an
obstacle.let kk go.otherwise she'l die.
M was
stunned.
Sumeet moves his lips:kk…K reaches near
S.she weeps:Sumeet!
Kk keeps his head on her
lap:sumeet…
S:kk,I came 4 u.i've 2go soon. K
cries:don't go sumeet. Song:kabhi alvida na kehna…….
K's
tears fall on his face. Jatin cumes & snatches kk's
mangalsuthra.K was shocked. Jwipes her sindoor.K was
stunned.
J:these were the obstackles of ur luv.that r
detached from u.u r needed most 4 garv.not 4 my
son.kk...sumeet is like this bcoz of me.bcoz of my
relationship with u.now that's over.go with Sumeet.
K
was surprised:Jatin! J:yes.i'll help u 2 giv him
the best treatment.i'm sure that sumeet wil cum back 2
life.bcoz u both r made 4 each other.
K:thanks a lot
jatin.i'vent seen such a gr8 person in my life.u used
2 call me Parvathi Devi.but the real God is urself.
J
smiles:funny.
K:I promise that tho our relationship is
over,I'l b ur subham's mom's 4ver.
J smiles:thanku
kk.but our relationship is not over.i'l remain as ur
best friend.
K smiles.
After sum months:Kk in the
pooja room is praying:kabhi khushi kabhi gham…..Sindoor
is seen on her 4head.Sumeet comes near her with a smiling
face & prays.K puts the prasad into his mouth. The bell
rang.K goes & opens the door.they were surprised 2 see
kashish there. K:kashish! S:what a gr8 surprise!
Kashish smiles:I came 2 see u both.u both rock 2gether.
S-kk smile.
Ka:it's a gr8 pleasure that God made u
both 1.
K:cum,hav prasad.
They giv Kashish a gud
treat.
B4 going kashish:Best wishes 4 ur happy married
life.
S:thanks a lot kashish.
K:u've 2 cum again. Ka
smiles & goes.
Su-kk look at each other & smile.
S:I want 2 liv seeing u always.
K smiles:finally god
heard our prayers.
S smiles & hugs kk.
THE END


kumkum_001 thumbnail
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Posted: 19 years ago
#60
WOW WOW WOW WOW 👏 THAT WAS AMAZING

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