Su-kk in the gr8est legand - Page 4

👏 nice story
y rnt enough ppl reading 😕
its an awsum story
well dun jasminerahul
where do u get so many ideaz from 😛

Very nice story dear 😊 and very nice way of wrinting too 😊 keep it up 😊

Part-14......Rahul:Kashish is talented,she gained
everything including this palace like house thru her
hard work.
Sumeet:thats why... her relatives might've
tried 2 snatch money from her.since she is courageous
she mite've stood against them.that may b the reason why
others left her.r they her brothers & sisters?
R:they r
servants who r like her sibblings.
S:whats her job?
R hesiates 2 tell:that u'll understand when she gets
inside.her tough life brought her here.
S:how did u meet
kashish?
R:when i heard about her,i felt like making
friends with her.so i came here & met her.there is
sumthing which attracts others 2 her.even i fell into
that magical pull.
S:what?i can't understand anything.
Many pretty women invite them.they were richly dressed.
S:i'vent seen such fashionable servants. R:kashish
wants even her servants 2 hav a luxurious life.
S:she is
gr8. A beautiful lady cumes.Her dress was very
rich:dark blue with precious white stones.she has worn
dimond ornaments.very attractive smile.kajal of her eyes
were pretty.her face expressions were romantic.
R:this
is my only friend Sumeet. she smiles. She tries 2
attract S with her glamorous smile.her eyes were
glowing. S felt wierd.
R:this is kashish.
S was
surprised.

hey jasemine..ur story is going gr88888888
its simply amazing 👏 👏 !
& I agree with shabu..ur way of writng is nice too! 👏
yeh mehr...only few ppl r reading...or may be many ppl r reading but not appreciating jasemine's work 😕 😳

Part-15......Kashish invited sumeet-rahul inside.S
notices many young men there. He feels wierd,bcoz they
were drunk.
S:rahul,these men look like criminals.
R:cool down sumeet.
Many beautiful dancers cum.As their
leader kashish cumes & dances:Kaahe chhed
mohe...{DevdAS}. S:NOW I UNDERstand how shabby this
place is.
S becomes fed up & begins 2 go.R holds
his hand.but S goes away from rahul.
R:no wonder.i
expected this.
Kashish follows S.S compares
kashish with Kk.kk can luv only me.thats sure.but
kashish is trying 2 attract so many ppl.tHere is
innocence in kk's smile & eyes.but in kashish's eyes
& smile,only the feeling like how 2 attract men r
found.kk is a pure girl.her dance steps had
spirituality.but kashish's dance steps lack thAT.its
disgusting. Kashish calls S by touching him with
her hair.
S:how dare u?
Kashish smiles:why did u start
moving away?
S:bcoz i can't breath here peacefully.
K:my
dance...
S:u made that art dirty.Dance is spiritual.u
shud've used it 4 a dirty purpose.
Kashish gets
embarassed.
S:u've dressed carefully,but u look ugly.
Kashish was embarassed.but she did'nt want 2 fail.she
smiles 2 attract S:cum inside.i've seen such a lovely
face b4.2day i'l b my fav guest. S:by pleasing me if u
make me enter this dirty place,u'l gain money.right?
S takes out his purse from the pocket & throws it on
her face. Kashish was shocked.

heyy ur going so gud..
keep writing
this is the first tyme im luvly reading 😛
the only other thing i read is kumkum updates or articles abt hu! 😳

hey y do u mix up al the serialz.. 😳.. just askin😊

haha mehr tum bhi na 😆
Very good going dear 👏

Part-16..Sumeet:u can share this money with ur
co-workers.or else u greedy person...u can tAKE IT
FULLY.I'M HAPPY THAT I ESCAPED FROM this jail run by
stupid ladies.The money thats earned thru wrong way is
not eternal.it'll b destroyed.
Kashish was stunned.
S:u
got the money u needed.now lewt me go.u were doing this
drama 4 money no.
S begins 2 walk.suddenly he turns
back.he moves 2wards kashish. she becomes happy:the
person who gave a long lecture is coming back.thats
kashish's talent.
she smiles.
S:A woman is a
daughter,sister,wife,granddaughter,s isterinlaw & a
mother.r u sum1 among them?if not ask urself whether u r
a woman?
That touched kashish's heart.
S goes.she was
wondered.
K:1st time i'm seeing a man like this. she
smiles.
Rahul cumes.
K:ur friend sumeet is a saint.i can't
believe that there r men like this.
R:1st time u r
praising a man.did u like him that much?
K:yes.i am
fond of him now.i'd tried 2 attract many men.but 1st
time a man attracted me with his mind.
Rahul laughs.he
teases:r u loving sumeet?
K:if u feel so,i'm
disagreeing.
R:a woman like u in luv?
K:whatever..i'm
also a woman.even i've feelings & emotions.
R:ok.but
don't expect anything from him.bcoz he's already upset
with his luv failure.his beloved kumkum married sum1
else.
Kashish felt pity,later relief.
K:thats ok.i'm
there in the place of kumkum.
Rahul laughs.

gr88 going dear 😃 👏 👏
yup! mehr ..me too 1st tym reading any fanfic regularly 😉 😉
btw jasemine..y dont u answer our ques here??! 😕 😳