NewFF-Kya Yehi Pyar Hai....part 10-page 15 - Page 2

Originally posted by: Pearl29

Wow!!!!!!!!!!! another FF................how exciteing...........another way 2 be sooooo close 2 Sukk.........love the characters u've introduced............ Sukk ka saath RuSi bhi hai................what fun!!!!!!!!!!!!

I would say very good thinking...........2 put Sukk in such Streets..............I wish there was a street name Sukk & I would live in it.............But u have 2 update regularly..............not once in a soooooo many days...............continue sooooooooonnnnnn..............want 2 c what Sonam does 2 Sukk............

First of all thank you so much , Naz di, and afreen api, sahar, and priya for being so welcoming and encouraging. It's because of you guys I have decided to write the fan fiction but at any point you guys get sick of it or don't like it just tell me and I will stop. Here is the first part...I would love to hear from you guys so feel free to criticize I won't mind it

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Part 1- Welcome to SuKk life
in Delhi at 7:30 AM
Kumkum-family and house

Kumkum- Aaj mera college ka phela din hai, matarani meri help karna. Thank u ……………………

Kumkum- Maa…………maa……………….mera nashta ready hai.

Mama- Beta kumkum tum hara nashta ready hai tum jaldi se nashta karo aur college ke liye jao.

Kumkum- Maa main 2:30 tak ghar wapis ajaungi aur thoda late ho tu khabara na mat theek hai.

Kumkum- Bye maa.

Kumkum- Auto…….auto…….auto…….mar gay aaj college ka phela din hai aur aaj hi deer ho rahi hai aur koi auto bhi nahi mil raha. Main kiya karo……………………

Summit-family and house

Summit- Good morning, mom

Mama- good morning summit

Summit- Aaj breakfast main kiya hai mom.

Mama- Beta summit tumhay tu patha hai ke tumhare pap ko sirf prahate hi acchae lagte hain tu tum samajh gay ki aaj bhi prahate hi bane hai aur sabzi etc………………………..

Summit- mom I am going……………….

Mama- par beta kuch to kaha le

Summit- mom main college main kuch khaloinga aur u know I hate eating this pra……………..prahate and this sabzi…………..whatever.

Mama- par beta tu tost hi kaha le

Summit- mom no, I will eat in the canteen.

Summit- bey mom, aur hain aaj main ghar 12:00 baje aunga

Mama- ok beta bye

Kumkum- ohhh no aaj lagta hain mujhay padal he college jana parega. Aur waiyes bhi ma hamesha kathi hai ki padal chalna seath ke liye acchi baat hai.

Summit- driver car nikalo

Driver- yes sir

Kumkum- Bhel Puriki dukan, chalo aaj chaat puri raste bhar khati hoen jaati hoin main, bahi zara mujhya zara Bhel Puri

Summit gets a call...

Summit- hello, hi sonam

Sonam- summit kiya tum abhi bhi ghar par hi ho, jaldi aao warna hum logo ko college ke liye deer ho jaygi

Summit- sonam main bas 5 min main pauch raha hoon

Sonam- ok, summit……………………..

Summit- hi sonam, tum kasi ho

Sonam- hi summit, tum sacchi main 4min and 45 sec main agay.

Summit- well u know me

Sonam- accha summit yeh baato ki aaj kis tarha new student's ki ragging karna hai

Summit- sonam tumhey college jaa kar patha chal jaeygi

Sonam- nahi summit mujhay abhi tum baato………………

Summit- no way sonam, not now………………….

Sonam- summit zara gari slow chalow

Summit- sonam jab main hoo to tum hey darr ne koi zarorat nahi

Sonam- phir bhi, agar kuch aysa waysa ho gaya tu

Kumkum- chalo main ne to apna Bhel Puri le hi liya aab mujhay college chalna chaiya. Main already hi deer ho gayi hoon.

Sumit is busy talking to Sonam and he is driving the car very recklessly and fast...Kumkum is walking towards the college and Sumit passes her...Accidentally he splashes mud on Kumkum

Kumkum- Oh rookho yeh tum ne kya kiya... (She throws a stone at the car but it doesn't hit the car)

Originally posted by: Shafoo

wowowow coolll part i love it plzzzzz contuied soon

Really enjoyed reading the part............

Originally posted by: Pearl29

Really enjoyed reading the part............

1st day of College & Su kk par mud splash kar diya..............ab KK kya karagiSu ka saath................& really waiting 2 c what's with the timing specified by Sukk................I think they won't be able 2 reach home by that time.............anyways continue sooooonnnnnnn with a long part..............will be waiting 2 read ow Sukk become one & Sonam is out between them...............

Originally posted by: juhuti

wow!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
amazingggggggg part dear
totally loved it.....the story is really different and interesting
ye kia kk ka dress kharaab ho gaya
and woh stone bhi su ki car ko nahii laga
can't wait to read the next part
do cont soon

love afreen🤗

Originally posted by: NazNgs

Hee Mariam sweetie

finally read the first part yaar..

and OMG......

Loooooooooooooooooooovvvvvvvveee it

totally yaar its soooooo cute and

love ur SuKk characters..

ufff totally Sumit Rachaind aur Kumkum Mishra

yaad aagayi..the dialogues are Fabulous

and so like SuKk...arre yaar even their parents dialogues are fabulous..

Fantastic first part yaar....love the bindaas, chulbully Kumkum

and love how u wrote the parts shiftin from Su to Kk

and haila isi part mein Su ne dushmani mor li Kk..

that was a gr8 part also..i could really see Kk trowing the stone at Su car..

and yaar ek baat to pakka hain i HATE SONAM...

ufff i cant wait to read ur next part..

llokin forward to that yaara..

and sweetie thanks for adding RuSim in ur FF

they are my second fav couple.....

im blown away yaara that u thought of me

waiting to read ur next part..

Love u

Naz