NewFF-Kya Yehi Pyar Hai....part 10-page 15

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CrazzyBusy

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Posted: 16 years ago

#31

Originally posted by: marrukhkhan
zabardast really enjoyed it continue soon

maheen
thank u so much for ur comment
and also thank u for taking ur time for reading it
thanks a lot
love u mariam
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CrazzyBusy

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Posted: 16 years ago

#32

Originally posted by: Fan of Juhi
Woowwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww👏
Awesomeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee👏

Lovelyyyyyyyyyyyyy👏

Fatastic👏

Fantabuloussssss👏

Fabulousssssssss👏

Mind blwoing👏

Superbbbbbbb👏

Rockingggggg👏

Hats off to uuuuu👏

U rocked👏

Outstanding work👏

Yaar Mariam u r such a great writer👏

kamaal ker diyaaaaaaaa👏

Love ur ff👏

Shoo shweet story👏

Love ya Annie

hey annie
thank u so much for ur lovely comment
u and all of u made my day
i am gald that u liked my ff this much
annie thank u so much for taking ur time for reading it
thanks again
love u mariam
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CrazzyBusy

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Posted: 16 years ago

#33

Originally posted by: surakshita
OMG
Sukk fights that will get us all tensed hope it doesnt increase

lovely ff

waiting for the next part

hey dear
thank u so much
for ur comment
i know kusu fights
but don't worry in dono ka fight lamba nahi hain
so keep reading it
and thank agian for taking ur time and reading it
love u mariam
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noorya

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Posted: 16 years ago

#34

Hey Mariam😊

so here u have another fan of your ff😉...

vaise i know already 2 parts post kiya hai tumne

aur main ab comment de rahi hoon😕

sorry for that😳...but dont worry next part jab

post karogi naa tho main jaldi comment karungi😉
oh and btw mera ff ka naam bhi Kya Yehi Pyaar Hai hai😆
so first thought ke haila mere pages itne kam kyun ho gaaye😆
then i saw that its yours...aur haan naam ek hai
but stories are different...and i just love yours😃...

anyways tho main saare parts ke liye comment karungi...

soo the intro was great😛....love all the characters...

except for Sonam😆

i already hate that girl😆...but love the rest....

i dont know if im right or not lekin agar Pooja aur Rahul

ek ho gaaye tho sukk ki dosti ho jaayegi..

or maybe more than friendship😃😉...anyways lets see...😳

ohh and loved the vm for your ff😛....

very very sweet....aur vahan mera naam bhi hai😊 thanks😳....

vaise i dont know voh koi aur Noorya ho sakti hai😆😆

The first part was very nice....

really like the way kk was praying for her first day in college

uffff but dont like ke su Sonam ke saath ho🤢....

abhi tak iss ladki ne kuch kiya nahin hai but i just hate her😆......

yeh kk bhi naa college ke liye der ho rahi hai lekin voh Bhel puri khane gaayi😆

aur uske chakkar mein mud lag gaayi kapdon mein😕😆...

have to say nice meeting of sukk😉...

okk so ab 2nd part ki comment hai😆

tho main bhol rahi thi ke yaar kya first milan ki hai tumne sukk....

MINDBLOWING!

aur milte hi jagda...LOVED IT😛.....

aur kk police ko bula rahi hai iske liye😆😆..

itne saare galiyan ek hi mulakat mein🤣🤣🤣

and OMG voh su ki jo line hai naa when he said

"hey ladki, mind your language.

Main yeh chup chap tumhari bakwaas sun raha hoon

tho tum asman par hi urne lagi ho"

^{its sounds soooo much like Sumit😳...}

^{uff in that moment su ka chehra aur expression}

^{mere aankhon mein aaya😃....hats off yaar😉}

^{ufff and Sonam....middle class ladki!!!😡😡 how dare she!!....}

^{bhagvaan usse middle class se bhi middle banaaye😆}

^{omg second milan was also FABULOUS!...}

^{hehe and loved when both said "tum" 😆😆}

^{aur upar se voh dono ek hi class mein hai🤣🤣...}

^{ab mujhe bhi jaan na hai ke yeh dono kya karne}

^{vaale hain ek doosre ke saath😆😉...}

^{dono ne dhamki tho di hai ab dekhna hai ke hota hai kya😉...}

^{ab kk ne bahar kya dekh liya hai???😲😕}

^{i hope its nothing serious🤢.....lets see}

^{Hope to read the next part soon sweety ab cant wait😃}

^{just love your ff...u rock😉}

^{Love u🤗}

Edited by ...Noorya... - 16 years ago

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CrazzyBusy

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Posted: 16 years ago

#35

Originally posted by: ...Noorya...
Hey Mariam😊

so here u have another fan of your ff😉...

vaise i know already 2 parts post kiya hai tumne

aur main ab comment de rahi hoon😕

sorry for that😳...but dont worry next part jab

post karogi naa tho main jaldi comment karungi😉
oh and btw mera ff ka naam bhi Kya Yehi Pyaar Hai hai😆
so first thought ke haila mere pages itne kam kyun ho gaaye😆
then i saw that its yours...aur haan naam ek hai
but stories are different...and i just love yours😃...

anyways tho main saare parts ke liye comment karungi...

soo the intro was great😛....love all the characters...

except for Sonam😆

i already hate that girl😆...but love the rest....

i dont know if im right or not lekin agar Pooja aur Rahul

ek ho gaaye tho sukk ki dosti ho jaayegi..

or maybe more than friendship😃😉...anyways lets see...😳

ohh and loved the vm for your ff😛....

very very sweet....aur vahan mera naam bhi hai😊 thanks😳....

vaise i dont know voh koi aur Noorya ho sakti hai😆😆

The first part was very nice....

really like the way kk was praying for her first day in college

uffff but dont like ke su Sonam ke saath ho🤢....

abhi tak iss ladki ne kuch kiya nahin hai but i just hate her😆......

yeh kk bhi naa college ke liye der ho rahi hai lekin voh Bhel puri khane gaayi😆

aur uske chakkar mein mud lag gaayi kapdon mein😕😆...

have to say nice meeting of sukk😉...

okk so ab 2nd part ki comment hai😆

tho main bhol rahi thi ke yaar kya first milan ki hai tumne sukk....

MINDBLOWING!

aur milte hi jagda...LOVED IT😛.....

aur kk police ko bula rahi hai iske liye😆😆..

itne saare galiyan ek hi mulakat mein🤣🤣🤣

and OMG voh su ki jo line hai naa when he said

"hey ladki, mind your language.

Main yeh chup chap tumhari bakwaas sun raha hoon

tho tum asman par hi urne lagi ho"

^{its sounds soooo much like Sumit😳...}

^{uff in that moment su ka chehra aur expression}

^{mere aankhon mein aaya😃....hats off yaar😉}

^{ufff and Sonam....middle class ladki!!!😡😡 how dare she!!....}

^{bhagvaan usse middle class se bhi middle banaaye😆}

^{omg second milan was also FABULOUS!...}

^{hehe and loved when both said "tum" 😆😆}

^{aur upar se voh dono ek hi class mein hai🤣🤣...}

^{ab mujhe bhi jaan na hai ke yeh dono kya karne}

^{vaale hain ek doosre ke saath😆😉...}

^{dono ne dhamki tho di hai ab dekhna hai ke hota hai kya😉...}

^{ab kk ne bahar kya dekh liya hai???😲😕}

^{i hope its nothing serious🤢.....lets see}

^{Hope to read the next part soon sweety ab cant wait😃}

^{just love your ff...u rock😉}

^{Love u🤗}

omg.............
noorya take some breath
god
itna lamba comment
well thank u so much for ur lamba comment
and also
thank u so much for reading the ff
i am glad that u enjoyed reading it
well ruhal hasn't enter the college and he has
also came this year so there is no chance of kusu for become frien by ruhal
well noory i am glad that u liked both of my parts so far
and i hope tht u will do it for the others one that i will post
thanks again for taking ur time and reading the ff
love u mariam
🤗

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CrazzyBusy

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Posted: 16 years ago

#36

^{hi guys well i back again with the next part of my ff}
^{i want to thank u all for commentin on teh previous part of the ff}
^{so thank u so much for reading and posting ur comment of teh previous part of the ff}

^{Part 3 - KuSu fights in the College}^{Kumkum-Maa..............tum iss ke saath kiya kar rahi ho.
Mama- beta yeah meri friennnnn..........
Kumkum- maa tum andar jao............mujhay iss se kuch baat karna hain
Mama- par beta kumkum
Kumkum- maa tu jao, aur tum......... tum meri maa ke saath kiya kar rahay ho
Summit- tu tumhara naam kumkum hai.
Kumkum- dekho tum sirf mere sawal ka jawab do tum meri maa ke saath kiya kar rahe they?
Summit- tumhari maa mere ghar par thi aur jab main college se ghar gaya to unnko dekha. I mean she is my mom's friend.
Kumkum- never mind, just leave from here.
Summit- OK, just cool down.
Kumkum- maa................. maa.............
Veera - beta kumkum main apne room main hoon.
Kumkum- maa tum uss ladke ke saath kiya kar rahi thi.
Veera - beta who ladka meri best friend ka beta hain.
Kumkum- maa aaj ke baad tum un ke ghar nahi jaaogi aur agar aap ki friend ko agar aap se milna hoga tu aap un ko yeheen bola lena.
Veera - beta tu mujhay yeah bata ki kiya tu uss ko janti hain.
Kumkum.maa, tumhey iss se koi matlab nahi hona chahiye par main tumhey yeah abhi kah de ti hoon ki tum aab se waha nahi jaungi.
Veera - accha theek hain, par tu jaldi se fresh ho ja aur main jaldi se kahana nikal ti hoon.
Kumkum- theek hain maa, aur hain maa Soni aab kaise hain, uss ka taabeat aab phaley se theek hain ne.
Veera - hain beta woh aab theek hain aur bhar thoda shopping kar ne gai hain kal ke college ke liye.
Kumkum- thank god, ke who theek ho gai, kamse kam aab main college main bore tu nahi hongi, accha maa main aab jaldi se mounh aur haath dho kar aati hoon tab tak aap jaldi se kahana nikal de.
Pooja - chachi (kk maa)............... chachi aap kaha hain, dekh ye main k aap ke liye aur kumkum ke liye kiya le kar ayi hoin.
Veera (kk maa) - beta Pooja zara deheere se kumkum college se aagi hain
Pooja - woh aagi hain, acha howa aur waise bhi uss ke liye main ayk gift le kar ayie hoin.
Veera (kk maa) - acha hain Pooja iss se uss ka mood bhi badal jaeygi
8:30.......kk college ke liye ready ho gai hai aur Pooja bhi
Kumkum- maa main aaj Pooja ke saath hi nikal jaungi college ke liye.
Pooja - kumkum tu ready hai, mujhay deer ho rahi hai.
Kumkum ....... Pooja main ready hoon bas 2 min main arahi hoon.
Veera (kk ma) - Pooja ayk min ruk ja,
Pooja - kiya hain chachi
Veera - beta tu ne apna Tiffin le na hi bhol gai.
Pooja - ohhhhhhhhhh thank u chachi.
Kumkum- Pooja .... dono college pauchungi aur summit sonam ke saath hai.
Summit- aagi museebat.
Sonam- summit who iss se phaley yahan aye hum dono class mein chalte hain.
Summit- yeah lets go, baykar main fight hoga.
Kumkum- Pooja main tumhey lunch time per canteen main mliungi.
Pooja - theek hai.
Kumkum- I hope ki aaj main uss stupid se na milna pauon.
Summit- arre hai sonam main tu tum ko ayk baat bata na tu bhol hi gai.
Sonam- woh kiya summit janno
Summit- woh yeah hai ki iss ka naam kumkum hai aur iss ki maa meri maa ki friend hai aur woh bhi best friend
Sonam- e-oooooooooooo, I mean tum itna rich aur tumhari mom ki friend. I mean I hope summit tum samajh gaye na main kiya kahne chathi hoon.
Summit- of-course sonam main janta hoin.
Kumkum- tum log apna...........nahi main tum logo se mounh nahi lagungi balke main............. main abhi bata ti hoin............}

^{to be continued}
^{i hope that u all will enjoy this part of teh ff to as u did for the other 2 part}
^{so here is it its all ur
love u mariam
🤗}

Edited by Fan of divya - 16 years ago